本課結(jié)束時(shí)，你將能夠:1. 正確審題理清寫作思路；2. 運(yùn)用豐富的詞匯和句型豐富書面表達(dá)。
中考書面表達(dá)是一種應(yīng)試作文，要求學(xué)生在給定時(shí)間內(nèi)根據(jù)提示或所給要點(diǎn)寫出要點(diǎn)齊全、表達(dá)清楚、語言準(zhǔn)確、行文連貫的文章。 不僅要求學(xué)生熟練掌握詞匯、句型語法知識，而且還應(yīng)具備一定的審題能力、想象能力與表達(dá)能力。
審清主題, 人稱時(shí)態(tài), 要點(diǎn)信息。
服務(wù)主題, 去粗取精, 詳略得當(dāng)。
緊扣主題, 結(jié)構(gòu)清楚, 銜接順暢。
一鼓作氣, 內(nèi)容完整, 要點(diǎn)齊全。
主旨突出，內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，語言準(zhǔn)確。
(2020 北京 題目2) “不積跬步, 無以至千里?！?積累, 有助于我們達(dá)成目標(biāo), 實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“積累”為主題的征文活動, 假如你是李華, 請用英語寫一篇短文投稿, 談?wù)勀阍诜e累知識方面做過什么, 有什么收獲。提示詞語：accumulate (積累), read, keep, make prgress提示問題：What did yu d t accumulate knwledge? What have yu learned frm ding s?
主題：積累知識人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：過去時(shí)為主, 穿插使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)或完成時(shí)。要點(diǎn)信息：做過什么, 有何收獲。
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything.
本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。
1. 積累知識 accumulate knwledge2. 重要 imprtant, f great imprtance, play an imprtant rle …3. 有助于 help, be gd fr, cntribute t …
4. 從基礎(chǔ)做起 start frm ding basic things5. 養(yǎng)成習(xí)慣 frm the habit f, develp the habit f …6. 努力 try ne’s best, make great effrts …
7. 提高書面表達(dá)能力 increase writing ability, imprve writing skills…8. 開闊視野 braden my hrizns, get a wider perspective f…9. 實(shí)現(xiàn)理想 realize my dream, make my dream cme true…10. 使人受益 beneficial, benefit smebdy…
緊扣主題, 結(jié)構(gòu)清楚, 銜接順暢。1. 承接首句，進(jìn)一步點(diǎn)明積累知識的重要性2. 做了什么：通過學(xué)習(xí)、讀書、實(shí)踐等積累知識3. 收獲如何：知識增加、能力提高、眼界開闊4. 有何感想：受益、有收獲
1. 承接首句，進(jìn)一步點(diǎn)名積累知識的重要性Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge is f great imprtance.Accumulating knwledge plays an imprtant rle.It helps us realize ur dreams.It helps us achieve ur gals.It can imprve ur abilities.It can braden ur hrizns.
2. 做了什么：通過學(xué)習(xí)、讀書、實(shí)踐等積累知識I try my best t accumulate knwledge.I make great effrts t accumulate knwledge.I listen t the teacher and take ntes carefully .I develp the habit f practicing what I have learnt. I start frm ding basic things, such as reading and writing.I read a lt f English magazines.I listen t English radi every day.
3. 收獲如何：知識增加、能力提高、眼界開闊Reading bradens ur hrizns.Practice imprves ur abilities.Listening t English radi helps us learn English well.Accumulating knwledge helps us understand the wrld better.Accumulating knwledge is a useful way t realize ur dreams.
4. 有何感想：受益、有收獲Accumulating is beneficial t us.Accumulating benefits us greatly.I think it’s necessary t accumulate knwledge every day.I gain a lt by accumulating knwledge day by day.I becme mre self-cnfident as I accumulate knwledge.
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge is f great imprtance. It helps us realize ur dreams. I tried my best t accumulate knwledge.I started frm ding basic things, such as reading and writing.Reading bradens my hrizns. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I had learnt. It increased my writing ability. Accumulating knwledge benefits me a lt.
1. 中心不切題2. 結(jié)構(gòu)不合理3. 主次不分明4. 語言不準(zhǔn)確5. 銜接不順暢6. 無好詞好句
注重語言積累, 提高應(yīng)用能力。
語法正確, 用詞得當(dāng), 語言地道, 表達(dá)豐富。1. 檢查語法是否準(zhǔn)確；2. 使用高級詞匯和高效句型等；3. 添加必要的相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)信息；4. 梳理邏輯；5. 添加主題句。
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge are f great imprtance.It help us realize ur dreams. I tried ur best t accumulate knwledge.I start frm ding basic things, such as read and write.
主謂不一致。應(yīng)改為is。
主謂不一致。應(yīng)改為helps或helped。
代詞混淆。應(yīng)改為my。
動詞形式錯(cuò)誤。應(yīng)改為動名詞reading和writing。
Reading bradens my hrizn. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I have learnt. Which increased my writing ability. I benefited accumulating knwledge a lt.
結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤。應(yīng)改為Accumulating knwledge benefited me a lt.
名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤。Hrizn表示“眼界”時(shí)為hrizns。
時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。應(yīng)改為had learnt。
連接詞誤用。應(yīng)改為It。
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge is f great imprtance. It helps us realize ur dreams. I tried my best t accumulate knwledge.I started frm ding basic things, such as reading and writing.Reading bradened my hrizns. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I had learnt. It increased my writing ability. Accumulating knwledge benefited me a lt.
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge is f great imprtance. It helps us realize ur dreams.Accumulating knwledge plays an imprtant rle in helping us realize ur dreams.
I tried my best t accumulate knwledge. I started frm ding basic things, such as reading and writing. Reading bradened my hrizns. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I had learnt. It increased my writing ability. In rder t accumulate knwledge, I tried my best t develp habits f reading and writing.
增減細(xì)節(jié), 提高表達(dá)效率
Reading bradened my hrizns. I develped the habit f writing dwn and practicing what I had learnt. It increased my writing ability. Accumulating knwledge benefited me a lt. I made great effrts t write dwn and practice what I had learnt, which benefited me a lt. Reading a lt bradened my hrizns, while practicing writing imprved my writing ability.
調(diào)整語序或使用連接詞突出邏輯關(guān)系
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge plays an imprtant rle in helping us realize ur dreams. In rder t accumulate knwledge, I tried my best t develp habits f reading and writing. I made great effrts t write dwn and practice what I had learnt, which benefited me a lt. Reading a lt bradened my hrizns, while practicing writing imprved my writing ability.
Withut accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knwledge plays an imprtant rle in helping us realize ur dreams, which nt nly bradened my hrizns, but als imprved my abilities.
增加主題句，引起下文中的做法和收獲。
In rder t accumulate knwledge, I tried my best t develp habits f reading and writing. I made great effrts t write dwn and practice what I had learnt, which benefited me a lt. Reading a lt bradened my hrizns, while practicing writing imprved my writing ability. I became mre self-cnfident as I accumulated knwledge.
增加主題句，首尾呼應(yīng)突出主題。

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