每篇作文不僅是一個(gè)范文,還是寫作技巧的展示,幫助學(xué)生理解如何構(gòu)建清晰、連貫的句子,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯,并合理安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)。通過背誦和模仿這些范文,學(xué)生可以在期末考試中更好地應(yīng)對作文部分,提升自己的寫作水平。
此文檔適用于課堂復(fù)習(xí)與課外自主學(xué)習(xí),幫助學(xué)生系統(tǒng)地掌握各個(gè)單元的寫作要點(diǎn),并通過反復(fù)練習(xí)提升語言表達(dá)能力。每篇作文后還附有簡要的寫作技巧分析,幫助學(xué)生更好地理解寫作過程中的關(guān)鍵要素,進(jìn)而提高寫作自信。
一、書面表達(dá)
1.同學(xué)們進(jìn)入初中快一個(gè)月了,相信大家初中的學(xué)校生活一定豐富多彩。假如你是李華,你的美國筆友Lily來信詢問你在學(xué)校第一周的生活情況。請根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖,給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件。
要求:
1. 70詞左右,已給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2. 注意分段及行文邏輯;
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)信息。
優(yōu)秀范文:
Dear Lily,
Hw d yu d? I knew yu are interested in my new schl life. Let me tell yu sme details. My teachers are friendly but strict with us in ur studies. I am interested in all subjects, especially English. There are lts f activities in my schl. I take part in a drawing cmpetitin. But I’m facing sme prblems right nw. Fr example, there is mre hmewrk than befre. I need t manage my time better.
All in all, well begun is half dne. I’m sure I will have a wnderful time in junir high schl!
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
2.假如你是剛升入七年級的新生李華,你的美國筆友Jack想了解你的初中生活。請你用英語給他回一封郵件,簡單介紹你的學(xué)校生活。內(nèi)容包括:
1. 校園生活(上下學(xué)時(shí)間、課程……);
2. 課余生活(周末生活、愛好……);
3. 表達(dá)感受。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)為70左右;
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱;
4. 開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
優(yōu)秀范文:
Dear Jack,
Tday is my third day in junir high. I am very busy every day. My lessns start at 8:30 am, and end at 5:00 pm. I like gegraphy very much because I am interested in different places in the wrld. I als make many friends in my class and we ften talk with each ther.
After schl, I like playing ftball with my classmates and I ften read bks n weekends.
I’m happy t be a junir high schl student. My life is busy but full and clurful. I like my life nw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
3.吉林市作為霧凇之都,滑雪天堂廣迎天下客。第三十屆吉林市國際霧凇冰雪節(jié)拉開了序幕,其中“吉林市霧凇形象大使”評選是本活動(dòng)的重要組成部分。假如你是李華,想?yún)⒓咏衲甑撵F凇形象大使選拔,請按照以下要求,用英語寫一封信向評委Mr Lee介紹自己,助力家鄉(xiāng)冰雪 事業(yè)的蓬勃發(fā)展。
要點(diǎn)提示:
1. 個(gè)人信息及興趣愛好;
2. 生活習(xí)慣及擅長學(xué)科;
3. 個(gè)人能力及參加社團(tuán)。
寫作要求:
1. 文中必須包含所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2. 語言通順,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名;
4. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:intrduce (v.)介紹
優(yōu)秀范文:
Dear Mr Lee,
I’m really excited that Jilin City Internatinal Rime Ice and Snw Festival is cming.
My name is Li Hua, a 16-year-ld student frm Jilin City. I lve skiing and phtgraphy, which allw me t appreciate the beauty f ur city. I maintain a healthy lifestyle by exercising regularly and eating balanced meals. My favrite subjects are English and Gegraphy, because they help me cmmunicate and understand places better. I am a cnfident speaker and team player, actively participating in the schl English club and rganizing events.
That’s all. I hpe mre and mre peple will visit Jilin City in winter. I’m sure that they’ll have a great time here.
Yurs,
Li Hua
4.假設(shè)你是湯姆,你作為交流生來到中國某中學(xué)。請根據(jù)提示給你家鄉(xiāng)的朋友琳達(dá)寫一封郵件,向她介紹你現(xiàn)在的學(xué)校生活。
提示:1. 你最喜歡的學(xué)科是歷史,因?yàn)樗苡腥ひ埠苡杏茫?br>2. 你最喜歡星期一,因?yàn)檫@一天有歷史課;
3. 你參加了音樂社團(tuán),在社團(tuán)里交了很多朋友;
4. 你有一位新朋友叫林輝,你們經(jīng)常一起打籃球;
5. 你對初中校園生活的感受。
要求:1) 詞數(shù)70左右。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2) 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括要點(diǎn)中所提供的信息,并可作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮;
3) 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。
優(yōu)秀范文:
Dear Linda,
I’d like t tell yu smething abut my new schl life.
I get up at 6:30 in the mrning and then I walk t schl. I study 7 subjects at schl. My favrite subject is histry because it’s interesting and useful. I like Mnday best because we have histry n Mnday. I like music s I jin the music club. I make quiet a few friends in the club. I have a new friend. His name is Lin Hui. After schl, we ften play basketball.
I lve my schl life. I am very busy every day but I am very happy.
I like my new schl.
Yurs,
Tm
5.假如你是李華,你校將開展以“My Daily Life”為題的征文活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)以下提示,用英語寫一篇短文參加此次活動(dòng)。
提示:
1.時(shí)間安排:六點(diǎn)起床;六點(diǎn)半吃早飯;八點(diǎn)上課;
2.主要活動(dòng):上午4節(jié)課,下午3節(jié)課;幫助同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí);打籃球;晚上……
3.你的感受:……
參考詞匯: get up, breakfast, lessn, help, play basketball, d my hmewrk, …
要求:
1.可選擇使用參考詞匯,亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.詞數(shù):不少于50詞(開頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
優(yōu)秀范文:
My Daily Life
I’m Li Hua. I want t tell yu abut my daily life. I usually get up at 6:00 in the mrning. After that, I have breakfast at 6:30. I g t schl at 7:00. Classes start at 8:00. We have fur classes in the mrning and three classes in the afternn. I ften help my classmates with their study. I like playing basketball, s I ften play it with my friends after schl. In the evening, I d my hmewrk at hme. I g t bed at 9:30. I am living a happy life at schl. I enjy my schl life.
6.漫漫人生路,只要有父母陪伴,不管走到哪里,都是一場溫暖的旅程。父母是我們最熟悉的親人,請根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示,并以“Be Thankful t Our Parents”為題寫一篇英文短文。
優(yōu)秀范文:
Be Thankful t Our Parents
Our parents lve us mre than anybdy else in the wrld. They try t take gd care f us in ur daily life and help us with ur lessns. They cmmunicate with us and cheer us up when we are upset. They encurage us when we fail in the exam. When we meet difficulties, they are the first t cme up and stand with us t slve the prblems.
Thanks t them, we grw up healthily and happily. Learning t care fr ur parents is what we shuld d. First, we can help d mre husewrk. Secnd, we shuld respect them and get n well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we are suppsed t study hard and try nt t make them wrry abut us.
All in all, we shuld always be grateful t ur parents and d what we can t thank them.
7.假如你是李明,你遠(yuǎn)在英國的筆友Mike下個(gè)月要來成都交流學(xué)習(xí)并住在你家。請寫一封e-mail,介紹一些自己的情況。
提示:
1.介紹一下你的個(gè)人情況 (包含名字、年齡、愛好等);
2.簡單介紹一下家庭成員 (包含外貌、性格);至少兩個(gè)成員
3.介紹一下你的房間 (包含物品的位置,用上There be結(jié)構(gòu)),至少兩個(gè)物品。
要求:
1.語言流暢,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范。
2.內(nèi)容根據(jù)所給的信息可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息,否則不予評分。
4.不少于60詞。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
優(yōu)秀范文:
Dear Mike,
I’m happy that yu’ll live with us sn. Nw let me tell yu smething abut myself and my family first.
My name is Li Ming. Li is my last name and Ming is my first name. I am 13 years ld. There are five peple in my family. They are my parents, my sister, my brther and me.
This is my rm. There is a bed and a desk in it. My family pht is n the wall. My clck and my bks are n the desk. My schlbag is n the bed. Yu can see a ball under the desk. I lve my rm very much.
Please write t me sn and tell me abut yu.
Yurs,
Li Ming
8.節(jié)日是世界文化的重要組成部分,不同國家有著不一樣的節(jié)日文化。假如你是李華,你參加了學(xué)校正在開展的“向世界展示中華傳統(tǒng)文化”主題活動(dòng),你打算向你的英國筆友Tm介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——元宵節(jié)。請根據(jù)以下的提示內(nèi)容,給Tm寫一封電子郵件。
參考詞匯:light 點(diǎn)亮,riddle 謎語,lunar 農(nóng)歷
要求:
1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上所有要點(diǎn),須按照要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)。
2. 語句通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,字跡工整。
3. 不少于100詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、地點(diǎn)或校名。
優(yōu)秀范文:
Dear Tm,
I’m glad t tell yu smething abut ne f ur traditinal festival—The Lantern Festival. The Lantern Festival is ne f imprtant festivals in China. It is always in February. At this time f year, family members get tgether and celebrate it happily in many ways.
At the Lantern Festival, peple eat tangyuan, this kind f fd lks like a rice ball with smething sweet inside. Children with their parents always light different lanterns at night t make the festival clrful. In sme places, peple like t watch lin dances, they hpe this activity can bring them gd luck fr the whle year. Anther interesting game is guessing riddles n the lanterns. Althugh sme riddles are difficult, the game is great fun. All the family have a gd time n that day.
I hpe yu can cme t China and have a happy Lantern Festival with us.
Lve,
Li Hua
9.傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日是我們中華民族悠久歷史文化的重要組成部分。假如你是李華,你的美國筆友Betty對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣,請你給她寫一封信,分享你曾經(jīng)度過的一個(gè)難忘的中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。
要點(diǎn):
1. 簡單介紹這個(gè)節(jié)日;
2. 讓你難忘的經(jīng)歷;
3. 你的感悟。
要求:
1. 文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名;
2. 語句連貫,詞數(shù)70左右,已給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
優(yōu)秀范文:
The Mid-Autumn Festival is ne f the mst imprtant traditinal festivals in China. On this day, families get tgether t enjy the full mn and eat mn cakes
Last year’s Mid-Autumn Festival was special fr me. My family prepared a big dinner. There were lts f delicius dishes n the table. Hwever, my elder brther culdn’t enjy them with us. He was a dctr and at that time he was busy at the hspital. Althugh we missed him, we fully understd his decisin. This festival made me understand the meaning f respnsibility.
10.學(xué)校正在開展“動(dòng)物保護(hù)月”系列活動(dòng),你校英語俱樂部以“My Favurite Animal”為題向同學(xué)們征稿。請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括:
1. 它的外貌特點(diǎn)(體形大小、皮毛顏色、眼睛……);
2. 你喜愛它的原因(它可以幫助尋找東西、保護(hù)主人、陪伴……);
3. 你對人和動(dòng)物的關(guān)系的看法。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)為70左右;
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱;
4. 標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:pinted(adj. 尖的),care fr(照顧),lyal(adj. 忠誠的)
優(yōu)秀范文:
My Favurite Animal
My favurite animal is dgs. I have a dg named Max. He is strng with brwn fur, pinted ears and a small tail.
I lve dgs because they are lyal. Max is always there fr me. He sleeps in my rm, plays with me, and prtects me frm danger. He can ften help us find the things we want. With the help f my dg, everything in my family is fine.
Animals are ur friends. We shuld care fr them.
11.為了鼓勵(lì)青少年親近大自然、走進(jìn)大自然,某青少年英文網(wǎng)站舉辦了主題為“Nature”的征文比賽。假如你是李明,請你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示寫一篇英文短文投稿。
優(yōu)秀范文:
Nature is ur hme. It’s a part f ur life. I still remember the time when I went hiking with my family. We gt up early t see the sunrise. At first, I walked withut difficulties. Later, I felt tired and wanted t give up but my dad kept encuraging me. Finally, I reached the tp and saw the sun shining in the sky. I was amazed by the beauty f nature.
Getting clse t nature is gd fr us students. It helps us learn mre abut plants and animals. We can als relax after a week’s study.
Let’s get clse t nature tgether!
12.眾所周知,樹木對人類的生產(chǎn)和生活起著至關(guān)重要的作用,請你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示,以“The imprtance f trees”為題,用英語寫一篇短文,說明樹木對人類的重要性。
注意:
(1) 可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息。
(2) 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
(3) 語句連貫,詞數(shù)60左右。作文的標(biāo)題已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
優(yōu)秀范文:
The imprtance f trees
Trees play a crucial rle in ur lives and are essential fr the health f ur planet.
First, they are vital fr envirnmental prtectin. Trees absrb carbn dixide and release xygen, which is necessary fr life. They als help t reduce air pllutin by trapping dust and ther pllutants. Secnd, trees have numerus ther uses. They prvide us with wd, which is used fr building hmes, making furniture, and creating paper. Third, trees are a surce f fd and shelter fr many animals, keeping the balance f ur ecsystem.
Let’s prtect trees and make ur earth mre beautiful.

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