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步驟一：審題
審題注意八個方面：一審主題（寫什么），二審體裁（記敘、說明、議論、夾敘夾議），三審時態(tài)，四審人稱（別犯低級錯誤），五審內(nèi)容要點（一定要在試卷中畫出，免得寫的時候忘記，導(dǎo)致跑題），六審長難要點（找出主干或者分解成若干個簡單句或者用自己熟練的詞匯或習(xí)慣用語替換難點），七審作文開頭，如果開頭給出了半句話，應(yīng)該思考如何把這句話簡單明了地續(xù)寫完整。
步驟二：打草稿：列出要用的主要時態(tài)，短語，句型和詞匯等（不要在答題紙上涂涂改改，不要用修正帶，修正液等）
步驟三：正文寫作
做到兩點，一要凝練，二要變化。文章80—100字為宜，一定要注意使用過渡詞、從句、句型和詞組搭配。穿插使用簡單句和復(fù)合句。
步驟四：檢查：
1 內(nèi)容要點：缺少一個內(nèi)容要點，文章直接降到第三檔
2 語法錯誤：名詞查單復(fù)數(shù)和冠詞問題，動詞查時態(tài)語態(tài)和三單問題。
3 變換句式：過于簡單的結(jié)構(gòu)要試著變化
4單詞拼寫：低級的單詞拼寫錯誤
5標(biāo)點符號：英文和漢語標(biāo)點符號有差別
6作文內(nèi)容：不要出現(xiàn)自己的真實身份姓名等信息。
二、選擇好自己喜歡或者常用的邏輯過渡詞，默寫和背誦它們直到爛熟于心并且運用到作文中。
1.開始： first f all, at first, first and fremst, in the beginning , t start with, t begin with
2.另外/然后：what’s mre, and then, next, at the same time, in additin, besides, mrever, furthermre (在寫作時，每篇作文，不超過三個)
3.一方面，另一方面：n ne hand, n the ther hand; fr ne thing, fr anther (thing); in the first place , in the secnd place. (同時使用)
4.最后，總之：in the end, in shrt, in all, all in all, in a wrd, last but nt least, in cnclusin，at last, Generally speaking, in general
5.在我看來：I think/believe, as fr me, frm my part, in my pinin, in my view, as far as I’m cncerned, as far as I knw, as a student.
6.表轉(zhuǎn)折:but, yet, hwever, instead f, instead， nevertheless，ppsitely(相反地)，what’s wrse(更糟糕地), even wrse.
7.表原因：because f, because，hence, thanks t/due t(因為，由于，幸虧，歸功于),
8.表結(jié)果：s, thus, as a result, therefre.( 因此，所以，結(jié)果)
9.表目的：in rder t , in rder that, s that, （為了）
三、常見褒義詞：fantastic, wnderful, meaningful(有意義的), , great, excellent, super，
四、常見開頭句型
1. Let me tell yu smething mre abut…
2. Everybdy knws that… （眾所周知）
3. It can be easily seen that…（顯而易見）
4. It is true that… （…確實是如此）
5. I am happy t tell yu that…
6. Hell, everyne! Tday I'd like t share my ideas abut…
7. Hw are yu? I’d like t share a stry with yu.
8. Hw are yu? I have a mving(感人的) stry t tell yu.
9.寫信旅行話題開頭：I’m writing t tell yu smething abut…
Starter
初中是你人生的一個新起點。假如你是李華，你的同班同學(xué)和老師想了解你的情況，請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇自我介紹。
基本情況：姓名、年齡、所在班級；
愛好和性格；
今年暑假所做的趣事；
4.希望：想在新學(xué)校交到新朋友。
要求：1.適當(dāng)拓展，行文連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)80左右。
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【寫作指導(dǎo)】
1.人稱：第一人稱。
2.時態(tài):介紹自己的情況應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時;描述過去的活動應(yīng)用一般過去時;介紹未來的打算應(yīng)用一般將來時。
3.構(gòu)思:
開篇介紹自己的基本情況:My name is...
l am..
I like.
My hbby is/are...
中間介紹假期活動:I went
I visited/bught…
結(jié)尾介紹未來的打算:I'm ging hpe..
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Hell everyne! My name is Li Hua. Let me intrduce myself.
I am 13 years ld this year. I am frm Class One, Grade Seven. My hbby is ding sprts. Basketball is my favrite. I am a helpful student, s I ften help peple d lts f things. This summer hliday, I went t Hainan with my parents. It was ht but beautiful. I swam and tk many phts there. I was very happy. Here in this schl, I am ging t make sme new friends. D yu want t be my friend?

Unit1
小學(xué)生活精彩紛呈。回首過去，你是否感到充實和快樂? 展望未來，你是否對初中生活充滿期待? 請以“A new start”為題，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕母形?。\
( 1 ) What did yu get in primary schl?
(2)What d yu feel srry abut in primary schl?
( 3 ) What did yu think f the schl life befre yu start junir high?
( 4 ) Hw did yu feel when yu were in junir high?
( 5 ) What's yur plan fr yur future life in junir high?
(1)詞數(shù):80左右。
(2)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
A new start

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Primary schl was a time f jy and learning. I gt knwledge, made friends, and had fun. Hwever, I regret nt wrking harder fr my exams. Lking back, I really like thse times but I thught I culd d better.
Befre junir high, I thught it wuld be harder. Yet, when I gt here, I fund it is really fun. The teachers are kind, and I really like them.
Fr my future in junir high, I plan t wrk hard n my studies, jin sme clubs and make new friends. I'm excited fr this next part f my life and hpe t grw even mre.
Unit2
假設(shè)你是李華, 是光明中學(xué)七年級一班的一名學(xué)生。請根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一篇題為“My Hbby”的短文。
內(nèi)容包括:(1)你的愛好是什么? 列舉你喜歡這個愛好的原因(至少兩個)。
(2)你的愛好對你學(xué)習(xí)、生活的影響。
注意: (1)詞數(shù) 70 左右(文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出, 不計人總詞數(shù))。
(2) 內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點, 但不要逐條翻譯。
(3)在所提示的要點之外, 要求有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 使短文連貫、通順。
My Hbby
Hell, everyne

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Hell, everyne, my name is Li Hua. I have many hbbies.
Of all my hbbies, I like playing basketball best. Why d I like playing basketball? First f all, playing basketball makes me relaxed and happy. What’s mre, I can make a lt f friends when playing basketball with ther peple. And then, I can keep healthy by playing basketball. I think playing basketball can bring happiness t me, and I can study better after I play it. My life will be meaningless withut hbbies.
I hpe everyne can have a gd hbby and keep lving it fr their whle life.
Unit3
(一)假設(shè)你是李林,根據(jù)爸爸和你一起放風(fēng)箏的一張照片。請你以“Father's Lve”為題,根據(jù)提示介紹一下這張照片以及你從這張照片中感受到的父愛。
(1)簡單介紹一下父親的情況: 父親是一名醫(yī)生，工作很忙, 但會盡量抽時間陪我。
(2)描繪一下照片的內(nèi)容和感想: 上周日爸爸陪我放風(fēng)箏時拍的照片, 他教會了我如何放風(fēng)箏。
(3)表達(dá)一下你從照片中感受到的父愛: 父親的愛是深沉的, 像山一樣。
要求:(1)不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱和考生的真實姓名。
(2)語句連貫, 70 詞左右。
Father’s Lve

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Father's Lve
My father is a dctr and he wrks in a hspital. He is very busy. But he tries his best t spend sme time with me every week.
Last Sunday, we went t the seaside t fly a kite. Mther tk the pht f us. In the pht, my father was teaching me hw t fly a kite. It was a very warm mment. I like spending time with my father, because he can always teach me smething new and we always play happily.
I lve my father. I think the father's lve is strng, like a muntain.
(二),你們家每年都給爺爺奶奶舉辦生日聚會嗎? 根據(jù)提示寫一篇英語短文，要求語句通順，要點齊全，詞數(shù) 80左右。
提示:
(1)我奶奶70歲了。每年家里人都會給她舉辦生日聚會;
(2)家人們總是帶禮物和生日蛋糕給我奶奶;
(3)我媽媽和伯母們經(jīng)常做一頓大餐;
(4)飯后，孩子們通常開心地唱歌、跳舞;
(5)對我奶奶來說，這是一個特殊的(special)日子。那天她總是很開心。
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My grandma is seventy years ld. Every year my family have a birthday party fr her. All f my family always bring sme presents and a birthday cake t my grandma. My mther and my aunts ften ck a big dinner. After dinner, children usually sing and dance happily. It's a special day fr my grandma and she is always very happy n that day.
Unit4
（一）假如你是李華,你的英國筆友Mike非常想了解春節(jié),請你根據(jù)以下提示詞語和提示問題,給他寫一封不少于60詞的電子郵件介紹春節(jié)。郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞語: clean the huse, have a big dinner, visit, imprtant
提示問題:
●What d yu usually d during the Spring Festival?
●What d yu like t d? Why?
●What d yu think f the Spring Festival?
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging?
The Spring Festival is ne f the mst imprtant traditinal festivals in China.

Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
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Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging?
The Spring Festival is ne f the mst imprtant traditinal festivals in China. It ften cmes in January r February. Befre the festival, we always clean the huse t sweep away bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, all the family members cme tgether t have a big dinner. The mst traditinal fd is dumplings. They are delicius. After dinner, we usually watch a special prgramme n TV.
I like t visit relatives and friends because I can get sme presents. I think the Spring Festival is very imprtant t us.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
（二）母親節(jié)是一個感恩母親的節(jié)日，假如你是劉丹，今年你給媽媽過了一個特別的母親節(jié)，請你和同學(xué)們分享一下，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?br> (1) 我為媽媽準(zhǔn)備了很多。
(2) 母親節(jié)當(dāng)天媽媽仍然在工作。她是一名護(hù)士，很多病人需要她照顧。
(3)我決定給她打電話，并用快遞寄給她一些花。
(4)我告訴媽媽我們愛她，感謝她，媽媽很感動。
(5)我認(rèn)為…
參考詞匯: 感動的tuched 用快遞 by express delivery
要求: (1)詞數(shù):80左右 (2)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Mther's Day is cming. I prepared

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Mther's Day is cming. I prepared a lt t celebrate it fr my mther. But she is still at wrk. My mther is a nurse and needs t take care f the patients. I decided t give her an unusual festival. I called her and sent her sme flwers by express delivery. I tld my mther hw much I lved her and thanked her. She was very tuched and happy.
In my pinin, even thugh my mther culdn't be with us tgether, ur lve crssed the distance.
Unit5
(一)根據(jù)所給提示用英文寫一篇文章, 簡要介紹一下中國的國寶(natinal treasure )----大熊貓(panda)。不少于 70 詞。
主要棲息地: 四川、陜西、甘肅等省份
體貌特征: 黑白相間, 黑眼睛, 圓耳朵; 身體雖胖但動作敏捷 (mve nimbly); 非常惹人喜愛
生活習(xí)性: 最愛吃竹子;會爬樹
呼吁:應(yīng)得到保護(hù)
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【參考范文】
Pandas are China's natinal treasure. They live in Sichuan, Shaanxi, Gansu and s n. They are black and white. They have black eyes and rund ears. They are fat, but they can mve nimbly. They are very cute and many peple lve them. They like eating bamb best. Each panda needs t eat a lt f bamb every day. They can climb trees. We must try ur best t prtect them.
（二）假如你是李華，請你在筆記本記下此刻正在發(fā)生的事情。
(1)今年，超過 70種候鳥在天津北大港濕地找到了它們的新家。
(2)你和杰克、亨利、米婭正在游覽天津北大港濕地。
(3)亨利對東方白鸛有著濃厚的興趣，他甚至在圖書館里做了深入的研究。杰克和亨利正在觀察東方白鸛。他正用知識來幫助自己理解鳥類的行為。
(4)米婭正在喂鳥，所以很多鳥都飛向她，她很開心。
參考詞匯:
北大港濕地Beidagang Wetland 東方白鸛: Oriental White Strks
候鳥 migratry birds 對……有興趣be interested in
行為behavir
(1)詞數(shù):80左右。
(2)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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【參考范文】
Nw, we are visiting the Beidagang Wetland in Tianjin. Over 70 kinds f migratry birds fund their new hme here. My friends Jack, Henry, Mia and I are excited t be here. Henry, with his great interest in Oriental strks, is especially excited. He did sme research n them in the library, and nw he is sharing his knwledge with us. He is using his knwledge t knw the behavirs f the birds. Jack is right there with him and watching the birds. Meanwhile, Mia is feeding the birds, and they're flying t her. She is really happy.
This trip is mre than just a walk in the wetlands. Nw we knw animals are beautiful and imprtant t the natural wrld. What a great day!
Unit6
(一)植物，是人類必不可少的伙伴。那芳草連天、山泉汨汨、鳥語花香和林海的陣陣音濤樂浪，對于我們來說，都是一種美的享受。請根據(jù)要點提示，以“The imprtance f plants”為題寫一篇短文。
要點：1. 植物在自然界中的重要性；2. 植物對人類日常生活的幫助；3. 保護(hù)植被的主要措施。
注意：1. 不少于80詞(開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；2. 可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
The imprtance f plants
Plants are imprtant in the natural wrld. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s take actin nw and prtect ur lvely plants tgether.
【參考范文】
The imprtance f plants
Plants are imprtant in the natural wrld. They prvide animals with hme and enugh fd. Mre imprtantly, plants can help keep the balance f nature as well as stp earth mving away with water.
Fr humans, plants have a lt f uses and make ur lives cnvenient. Plants can prvide us with many things， such as fruit， medicine and wd. Plants can als prduce xygen fr us t breathe， keep air cl and clean.
As a nature lver， I think we shuld nt nly stp cutting dwn t many trees but als plant mre trees and ther green plants.
Let’s take actin nw and prtect ur lvely plants tgether.
(二).假如你是李華，請描述你和朋友們在茶館里的一次難忘經(jīng)歷。
(1)我們今天下午參觀了一個茶館，那里有很多香氣撲鼻的茶。
(2)Jack 和 Henry 對制茶過程感興趣，并向茶藝師學(xué)習(xí)了很多。
(3)服務(wù)員微笑著給客人們上茶和點心，讓茶館氣氛更加溫馨。
(4)老茶師教孩子們泡茶，幫助一個小男孩成功泡出好茶。
(5)你認(rèn)為……
參考詞匯: 泡茶pur the tea
要求:
(1)詞數(shù):80左右。
(2)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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【參考范文】
Tday, I went t an ld teahuse with my friends. There were s many kinds f tea, and each smelled wnderful!
Jack and Henry lved learning hw tea is made. They asked the tea master lts f questins and listened carefully.
A friendly waiter made everyne happy with her big smile. She served ht tea and tasty snacks, making the teahuse feel like a czy hme.
A kind ld tea master taught kids t make tea. A little by had a hard time at first, but the tea master helped him. Sn, the by culd pur the tea well and felt very prud.
We had a great time and learned abut the friendly culture f tea. It was a day full f smiles and gd feelings!
期末綜合
(一)假如你是李華，請你給你的朋友 David寫一封信，講述你在新學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)戲劇的經(jīng)歷和收獲。
(1)開學(xué)第一堂課我上了戲劇課，我很感興趣。
(2)我們學(xué)校有個戲劇俱樂部，我誠邀你參加。
(3)每周五下午三點，我們聚到學(xué)校小劇場學(xué)習(xí)和表演戲劇。
(4)這張照片展現(xiàn)的是我們表演戲劇的開心時刻。
(5)戲劇提高了我的英語，同時……
參考詞匯: 戲劇drama 邀請invite劇場 theatre 表演perfrm
要求: (1)詞數(shù): 80~100，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。
(2)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dear David,
Lng time n see.
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Lking frward t seeing yu sn!
Yurs,
Hua

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Dear David,
Lng time n see. I wanted t share with yu my exciting experience in my new schl's drama class. The first lessn was really interesting and I was excited abut it.
Our schl als has a drama club, and I wuld like t invite yu t jin us. Every Friday afternn at 3 'clck, we meet at the small theatre f ur schl t learn and perfrm dramas. It's a fantastic time t explre this art and imprve ur skills. The pht shws ne f ur happy mments while perfrming a drama. It was an unfrgettable experience. Drama imprves my English and builds my cnfidence. Lking frward t seeing yu sn!
Yurs,
Hua
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（二）假如你是李華，請你給美國筆友 David寫一封信，講述你周日一天的生活，并談?wù)劯惺堋?br>(1)周日早上，在公園聞花香，喂動物，聽到了孩子們笑，救助了一只小貓。
(2)回到家后，認(rèn)真完成作業(yè)。
(3)和朋友策劃了一個生日派對，派對上歡聲笑語。
(4)人們過來幫忙。
(5)你覺得…
要求:
(1)詞數(shù):80左右。
(2) 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。
(3)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I'd like t share a stry with yu.
On a sunny Sunday mrning,
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Yurs,
Hua
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Dear David,
Hw are yu? I'd like t share a stry with yu.
On a sunny Sunday mrning, I tk a break and went t the park. I smelled smething different, a mix f flwers. I enjyed feeding the animals and heard children laughing. We fund a lst kitten and helped it.
I wrked hard n my schl hmewrk. It was imprtant. After that, my friends and I planned a birthday party. We wanted t celebrate and relax tgether. At the party, we played and laughed a lt. The day was full f fun. I felt grateful fr the day and the friends with me. It was a day I will always remember.
Yurs,
Hua

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