初中英語2024屆中考熱點話題寫作名校模考真題練習(xí)0518（共12篇，附寫作指導(dǎo)和參考范文）

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1．（2024·廣東深圳·一模）隨著5G、大數(shù)據(jù)、物聯(lián)網(wǎng)、人工智能等的廣泛運用，我們的生活將發(fā)生翻天覆地的改變。假設(shè)你是陽光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你校英語報正在舉辦主題為“Our life in 20 years”的征文比賽 ，請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇征文，要點包括：
1.高科技的廣泛運用將使我們的未來生活越來越智能化；
2.暢想未來生活在以下方面的變化：①出行方式；②智能家居；③……
3.中學(xué)生應(yīng)努力學(xué)習(xí)，更好地迎接未來的智慧生活。
寫作要求：
1.80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù))。
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱。
3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使語句通順，條理清晰、意思連貫。
參考詞匯：
家用電器 electrical appliance 自動化 autmatically(adv.) 無人駕駛交通工具 self-driving vehicle
Our life in 20 years
What will ur life be like in 20 years? Withut dubt, ur life will ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2024·河南洛陽·一模）人生之路上我們會遇到很多的艱難險阻，但我們最大的敵人不是來自外部的困難，而是我們自己。只有勇于戰(zhàn)勝自我，超越自我，我們才能最終獲得成功！請以“I nce beat myself”為題，寫一篇文章。
要點：
（1）是什么事情讓你戰(zhàn)勝了自己；
（2）你是如何戰(zhàn)勝自己的；
（3）你的感想如何。
要求：
（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
（2）100詞左右。
I nce beat myself
As we all knw, ur biggest enemy is nt smene else but urselves.Have yu ever beaten yurself? I have.Let me share my stry with yu.__________________________________________________________________
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3．（2024·黑龍江哈爾濱·一模）假如你是楊鵬，在春節(jié)期間去北京旅行。你給在美國的朋友Judy寫一封電子郵件，告訴他此次旅行的情況，并希望他有機會也能來北京玩。
寫作要點：
1.春節(jié)時和父母在北京游玩，過得很開心也很有意義（meaningful)。
2.在北京旅行的情況：
（1）參觀了故宮博物院和鳥巢；
（2）在天安門廣場看國旗升旗儀式（the natinal flag-raising ceremny)；
（3）攀登長城（the Great Wall)，人非常多；
3、說一說假期旅行有什么好處。
寫作要求；
1.不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名
2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。
3.字跡工整、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。
4.至少80詞。
Dear Judy,
I'm writing t tell yu smething abut my trip
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Best wishes!
Yurs,
Yang Peng
4．（2024·江蘇揚州·一模）最近你校英語報社正舉行以“我為父母做件事”為題的演講活動。假設(shè)你是李華，請你根據(jù)下列提示，圍繞這一話題，寫一篇英文演講稿，談?wù)勀銥楦改缸鲞@件事的過程和感受，內(nèi)容包括以下要點：
1.What thing did yu d fr yur parents?
2.Why did yu d it? (at least tw pints)
3.Hw did yu d it? (First, then, ...)
4.Hw did yu feel after ding it?
要求：
1.表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2.必須包括所有要點內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.詞數(shù)在 100 詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
4.不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。
Hell, everybdy!
I am Li Hua.Last weekend, __________________________________________________________________
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5．（2024·四川成都·一模）一批來自某英語國家的交換生即將到來，你負(fù)責(zé)向他們介紹成都。請根據(jù)以下圖文信息，撰寫你的發(fā)言稿。
注意：
1.請先在答題卡上填寫圖示中空格（一空一詞）；
2.須全面反映圖文信息；
3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；
4.詞數(shù)80左右。
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6．（2024·四川內(nèi)江·一模）勞動創(chuàng)造美好生活，勞動實踐從我做起。作為一名中學(xué)生，請你根據(jù)下表要點，以“Labr is Glrius(勞動光榮)”為題，向校報“英語園地”欄日投稿。
注意:
1.詞數(shù) 100左右(標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù));
2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫;
3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學(xué)校等信息。
Labr is Glrius
It’s well knwn that labr is glrius.
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7．（2024·湖南株洲·一模）假如你是李華，你最好的朋友王磊最近很煩惱，他的父母逼著他去學(xué)鋼琴，但他自己想去學(xué)籃球，雙方各執(zhí)己見，難以達(dá)成一致而導(dǎo)致關(guān)系緊張。請寫一封電子郵件給王磊出出主意。內(nèi)容包括：
(1)勸王磊跟父母好好聊一聊；
(2)列舉分析學(xué)鋼琴和學(xué)籃球各自有何利弊；
(3)不回避問題，不過于擔(dān)憂，積極尋求解決的辦法。
要求：
(1)不少于80詞；
(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)個人信息；
(3)必須包含以上提示信息，可在此基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。
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8．（2024·山東濟(jì)南·一模）教育部提出勞動教育是義務(wù)教育的重要組成部分。勞動有助于我們提升生活技能，創(chuàng)造美好生活，也有助于培養(yǎng)我們的精神品質(zhì)。你校將開展以“勞動最光榮”為主題的英文征文活動，請你寫一篇文章投稿，談?wù)勀銓趧拥目捶?，平時參與了哪些勞動，有什么收獲。
內(nèi)容包括：
1.What d yu think f labr?
2.What kind f labr d yu ften d?
3.What have yu learned frm ding s?
參考詞匯：labr 勞動；glrius 光榮的
寫作要求：
1.文中須包含以上提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等信息;
3.表意清晰、流暢，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范;
4.詞數(shù)100左右;
5.文章開頭第一句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Labr is a very imprtant part f ur life.
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9．（2024·黑龍江哈爾濱·一模）假如你是英語校報Just Ask欄目的編輯王凱。近期收到學(xué)生李雷的來信，因為他的父母不同意他在業(yè)余時間里從事他的愛好，所以向你述說他的苦惱。請根據(jù)以下信息給他寫一封回信，并告訴他如何與父母進(jìn)行溝通。
寫作要點：
1.告訴李雷不要苦惱；
2.發(fā)表你對此事的看法：
(1)理解父母的做法
(2)積極與父母溝通
3.告訴他如何與父母進(jìn)行溝通。
寫作要求：
1.不得使用真實姓名、地名和學(xué)校名。
2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。
3.字跡工整、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。
4.至少80詞。
Dear Li Lei,
I am glad t hear frm yu._________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Wang Kai
10．（2024·山東濟(jì)南·一模）勇敢是一種可貴的品質(zhì)。每個人都應(yīng)該勇敢地面對困難、挑戰(zhàn)新事物。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以 “勇往直前”為主題的征文活動。請你以 Braveness Makes a Difference 為題目， 用英文寫一篇短文投稿。
內(nèi)容包括：1.談?wù)勀阍?jīng)做過的一件勇敢的事；
2.談一下這件事情對你產(chǎn)生的影響。
注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學(xué)校等信息；
2.100 詞左右，標(biāo)題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Braveness Makes a Difference
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11．（2024·湖南懷化·一模）（A）話題作文：學(xué)校英語俱樂部將組織題為“One Thing I will D fr ________ ”的征文比賽。請根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇短文參賽，分享你將為朋友、家人、學(xué)?；蛏鐣龅囊患?。
提示：（1）What will yu d?
（2）Hw will yu d it?
（3）Why d yu chse t d it?
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12．（2024·湖南株洲·一模）我們正處于一個飛速發(fā)展的時代，我們的生活無時無刻不受到科技的影響。哪個科技的產(chǎn)物對你的生活影響最大？請根據(jù)下面的要點和要求寫一篇短文。
要點：
1.是什么影響了你的生活；
2.它是如何影響你的生活的；
3.你對此有哪些感受。
要求：
1.參考要點內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
3.詞數(shù)：80~100詞。
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附：寫作指導(dǎo)和參考范文
1．例文
Our life in 20 years
What will ur life be like in 20 years? Withut dubt, ur life will becme mre and mre intelligent with the rapid develpment and wide applicatin f high technlgy.
There will be lts f dramatic changes in ur life.Firstly, travelling arund will be much easier.We can g anywhere by self-driving vehicle.Subsequently, ur hme will be mre cmfrtable.Rbts and smart electrical appliances can wrk autmatically and prvide persnalized services fr the wners.Mrever, schls will have a high-tech makever.With smart schl system and technlgies such as VR glasses, learning will becme a fun experience.
The remarkable changes in 20 years are nt just the abve.As students, we shuld study hard fr the future smart life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般將來時”為主；
③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，注意無單詞及語法錯誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹未來的生活將是什么樣的；
第二步，具體介紹未來生活的變化；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)中學(xué)生應(yīng)努力學(xué)習(xí)，迎接未來的智慧生活。
[亮點詞匯]
①mre and mre越來越……
②subsequently其次
③prvide sth fr sb提供某人某物
[高分句型]
①Firstly, travelling arund will be much easier.(動名詞作主語)
②With smart schl system and technlgies such as VR glasses, learning will becme a fun experience.(with表伴隨)
2．例文
I nce beat myself
As we all knw, ur biggest enemy is nt smene else but urselves.Have yu ever beaten yurself? I have.Let me share my stry with yu.
Tw years ag, I seldm answered any questins in English class because f my pr spken English.Every English class was like a bad dream.Then ne day, I heard that there wuld be an English speech cntest.I made a difficult decisin t take part in it.Everyne in my class was surprised.I tried my best t prepare fr it.I practiced my spken English really hard.When the big day came, I was very nervus at first, but I vercame it at last.I finished my speech bravely.T my surprise, I gt the secnd prize! Thanks t my curage t challenge myself, I defeated myself and imprved my spken English.
I’ll remember this experience frever, because it has made me a better persn.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：主要是“一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使上下文連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點題（開頭已給出）；
第二步，具體闡述內(nèi)容。具體介紹自己遇到的困難以及自己是如何解決這個困難的；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。介紹自己的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①because f因為
②take part in參加
③nervus緊張的
④t ne’s surprise使某人驚訝的是
⑤thanks t多虧，由于
[高分句型]
①Then ne day, I heard that there wuld be an English speech cntest.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）
②When the big day came, I was very nervus at first, but I vercame it at last.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）
3．例文
Dear Judy,
I’m writing t tell yu smething abut my trip.
My parents and I had a great and meaningful time when we visited Beijing.We visited the Palace Museum and the Bird’s Nest.In additin, we enjyed the natinal flag-raising ceremny at Tiananmen Square.Finally, we climbed the Great Wall.As the saying ges, “He wh des nt reach the Great Wallis nt a true man.”
I think that there are many benefits t taking a trip during ur vacatin.First, it can enrich ur life.The mre experiences we have, the mre knwledge we’ll gain.Secnd, we can relax urselves.
I hpe that yu will visit Beijing during yur vacatin and enjy yur stay there.Waiting fr yur reply!
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Yang Peng
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時；
③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹自己去北京旅行的情況，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己在北京的旅行情況；
第二步，介紹在假期旅行的好處；
第三步，希望他有機會也來北京玩。
[亮點詞匯]
①in additin而且
②natinal flag-raising ceremny升國旗儀式
③wait fr等待
[高分句型]
①My parents and I had a great and meaningful time when we visited Beijing.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)
②He wh des nt reach the Great Wallis nt a true man.(wh引導(dǎo)的定語從句)
③I hpe that yu will visit Beijing during yur vacatin and enjy yur stay there.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)
4．參考范文
Hell, everybdy!
I am Li Hua.Last weekend, I made a fruit salad fr my parents.They were happy.My parents wrked s hard that they had n time t have fruit, and I wanted them t relax.What’s mre, I wanted t d smething fr them because I wanted t tell them I culd d smething by myself and I culd lk after them well.
It was interesting t make a fruit salad.First, I washed the fruit carefully.Then, I cut them int small pieces.Next, I mixed them with salad cream.Finally, I put sme sugar in it.It lked clurful.
I felt prud and happy when I saw them smile.I think I can d mre things fr my parents in the future.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)根據(jù)提示的要點進(jìn)行闡述，不要遺漏任何要點，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，點明為父母做了什么事及其原因；
第二步，具體闡述為父母做的這件事的過程；
第三步，抒發(fā)做完此事的感受并書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點詞匯]
①cut sth int small pieces把某物切成小塊
②mix…with…把……和……混合起來
[高分句型]
①My parents wrked s hard that they had n time t have fruit, and I wanted them t relax.（s…that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）
②What’s mre, I wanted t d smething fr them because I wanted t tell them I culd d smething by myself and I culd lk after them well.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句）
③It was interesting t make a fruit salad.（it作形式主語，動詞不定式作真正的主語）
④I felt prud and happy when I saw them smile.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）
5．例文
Dear Friends,
Welcme t Chengdu! We are s excited t share the beauty f ur city.
Chengdu is famus fr its delicius fd.Gngba Chicken is nice chicken with sme peanuts.Dandan Ndles is tasty.Zhng’s Dumplings is famus fr its excellent fillings.Yu’ll lve them!
Here are wnderful activities fr yu.Yu can visit the Panda Base t see the cute animals.Sichuan Opera helps yu t learn mre abut the culture.Walking thrugh the ld streets is the way t experience lcal peple’s relaxatin.
We hpe yu have an amazing time in Chengdu.Welcme again!
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材: 本文是一篇發(fā)言稿；
② 時態(tài): 時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③ 提示: 寫作內(nèi)容已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏所給內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，對交換生的到來表示歡迎；
第二步，介紹成都，從成都的美食和地方特色等方面具體闡述；
第三步，希望交換生在成都能玩得開心，并再次表示歡迎。
[亮點詞匯]
① be famus fr 因……而聞名
② experience 經(jīng)歷，體驗
③ relaxatin 休閑活動，娛樂活動
[高分句型]
① Walking thrugh the ld streets is the way t experience lcal peple’s relaxatin.（動名詞作主語）
② We hpe yu have an amazing time in Chengdu.（賓語從句）
6．例文：
Labr is Glrius
It’s well knwn that labr is glrius.As middle schl students, we shuld d labr in ur daily life.Fr example, we can clean ur classrm and playgrund tgether with classmates in the schl, which can make ur schl much cleaner and mre beautiful.What’s mre, we shuld help ur parents d sme husewrk, such as washing clthes and making the bed.It will make hw jyful they are.Mrever, we culd wrk as vlunteers t help the ld and the disabled in the cmmunity.We can d the dishes fr them and sing t them.It’s pretty meaningful.
I have t say labr can bring us a number f benefits.We are able t learn sme basic life skills.We can take gd care f urselves and becme independent.Besides, we nt nly can develp gd life habits but als grw up healthily.
All in all, we shuld d mre labr in ur spare time.At the same time, we can bring gd things fr ur sciety.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中所說的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。開篇引出話題：勞動最光榮；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。作者通過“在社區(qū)、在學(xué)校、在家里”三個方面來闡述“勞動實踐”以及勞動之后的收獲；
第三步，書寫總結(jié)。作者發(fā)出倡議：我們應(yīng)該更多地勞動，為社會做貢獻(xiàn)。
[亮點詞匯]
①what’s mre另外
②mrever再者
③take gd care f愛護(hù)
④independent獨立的
[高分句型]
①Fr example, we can clean ur classrm and playgrund tgether with classmates in the schl, which can make ur schl much cleaner and mre beautiful.（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）
②Mrever, we culd wrk as vlunteers t help the ld and the disabled in the cmmunity.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）
③We can take gd care f urselves and becme independent.（and表并列）
7．例文
Dear Wang Lei,
I am srry t hear that yu have prblems recently.I will give yu sme advice.
Yu shuld have a talk with yur parents s that they can understand yu better.Yur parents may think playing the pian can prepare yurself fr yur future.But if yur parents frce yu t learn it, yu may feel unhappy.Playing ftball can make yu feel relaxed, but it may take yu a lng time and it may get in the way f yur study.What’s mre, yu shuldn’t avid the prblem, but yu shuld’t be t wrried.Yu shuld lk fr sme slutins.
Hpe yu can slve yur prblem sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；
③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容給王磊一些建議，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出話題；
第二步，根據(jù)他的問題詳細(xì)介紹給王磊的一些建議；
第三步，表達(dá)希望。
[亮點詞匯]
①have a talk with和某人聊一聊
②get in the way f阻礙
③lk fr尋找
[高分句型]
①Yu shuld have a talk with yur parents s that they can understand yu better.(s that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句)
②But if yur parents frce yu t learn it, yu may feel unhappy.(if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)
8．例文
Labr is a very imprtant part f ur life.I think it is very glrius fr everyne t take part in labr.At hme I ften d sme chres, such as cleaning the flr, washing the dishes, making the bed, cking meals and s n.At schl, I ften help teachers r ther classmates d sme cleaning.Besides these, I still take an active part in sme garbage srting activities in the cmmunity.By ding s, I can nt nly keep my bdy strng but als get a lt f new knwledge.The mst imprtant thing is that I imprve my life skills fr my future.Labr makes me feel very happy.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作開頭以及要點已給出，考生注意不用遺漏寫作要點中的信息，并適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容，使文章語句通順。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出話題，談?wù)勛约簩趧拥目捶ǎ?br>第二步，具體介紹自己經(jīng)常做的勞動；
第三步，書寫結(jié)尾，介紹自己在勞動中的收獲。
[亮點詞匯]
①take part in參加
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①The mst imprtant thing is that I imprve my life skills fr my future.（表語從句）
②I think it is very glrius fr everyne t take part in labr.（賓語從句）
9．例文：
Dear Li Lei,
I am glad t hear frm yu.I can understand hw yu feel.It’s nrmal fr parents and their children t disagree n smething, s dn’t be upset.
As a student, study is the mst imprtant thing.We shuld listen t ur parents and place the study ahead f anything else.In additin, we als need t relax prperly.Yu can g running, read r draw.They will help yu relax and be happy.What’s mre, I think yu shuld have a talk with yur parents.It’s imprtant t get n well with parents.We’d better discuss ur prblems with them.
I hpe these suggestins will help yu.
Best wishes!
Wang Kai
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態(tài)：以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏任何要點，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，完善作文內(nèi)容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，告訴李雷不要苦惱；
第二步，向李雷說明學(xué)習(xí)的重要性，父母的反對并不是沒有道理，但學(xué)習(xí)的同時也要適當(dāng)放松；要和父母好好溝通；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)“希望自己提的這些建議能幫助到他”。
[亮點詞匯]
①ahead f 在……之前
②what’s mre 而且
③get n well with 和……相處得好
[高分句型]
① What’s mre, I think yu shuld have a talk with yur parents.(賓語從句)
② It’s nrmal fr parents and their children t disagree n smething, s dn’t be upset.(“it’s adj.fr sb.t d sth.”句型 )
10．例文
Braveness Makes a Difference
Braveness is a valuable quality that can help us vercme many challenges and difficulties in life.It is the curage t face ur fears, the determinatin t push thrugh bstacles.I wuld like t share ne f my experiences.
It was a cld winter mrning, and I was standing at the tp f a muntain, lking dwn at the treacherus descent ahead f me.I had cme t hike this muntain with my friends, and while they had all made their way dwn safely, I had frzen in place.Then, I remembered what my grandfather had tld me abut braveness.He said that braveness wasn’t abut being fearless, but abut facing ur fears and mving frward despite them.S, I tk a deep breath, squared my shulders, and began t carefully pick my way dwn the muntain.I fcused n each step, ne by ne, and I didn’t lk dwn r ahead, nly at the grund in frnt f me.I kept ging, and eventually, I made it dwn the muntain.
I still feel prud that I finish the trip.Facing bravely makes me want t d everything better.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不用遺漏寫作要點中的信息，并適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容，使文章語句通順。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，引出“勇敢”這一話題；
第二步，具體介紹自己經(jīng)歷；
第三步，書寫結(jié)尾，介紹自己在這次經(jīng)歷中的收獲。
[亮點詞匯]
①lk dwn向下看
②fcus n專注于
[高分句型]
①Braveness is a valuable quality that can help us vercme many challenges and difficulties in life.（定語從句）
②Then, I remembered what my grandfather had tld me abut braveness.（賓語從句）
11．例文：
One Thing I will D fr My Parents
I have made great prgress in the past three years.Nw I want t d ne thing fr my parents.
I want t make a delicius breakfast fr my parents.I’m ging t the supermarket n Saturday afternn t buy what I need fr breakfast.Then, the next mrning I will get up early and quietly s as nt t wake my parents up.I will make my mther’s favrite sandwiches and cffee.My father likes t eat beef and tmat ndles fr breakfast.I will learn hw t ck nline.I will make sure they can have a delicius breakfast after getting up.
I have had this idea in my heart fr many years, but I never get the chance t d it.In the past, my parents always gt up early t prepare breakfast fr me.It is their lve and supprt that make me better, s I want t return them with the same lve.I lve them.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；
②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般將來時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③提示：寫作題目需自行補充完整，材料所給內(nèi)容不得遺漏。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點題說明“自己想為父母做一件事”；
第二步，詳細(xì)闡述事情的執(zhí)行過程；
第三步，寫出選擇做這件事的原因。
[亮點詞匯]
①make great prgress取得巨大進(jìn)步
②s as nt t以免
③in the past在過去
④prepare fr準(zhǔn)備
[高分句型]
①I’m ging t the supermarket n Saturday afternn t buy what I need fr breakfast.（what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）
②It is their lve and supprt that make me better, s I want t return them with the same lve.（強調(diào)句）
12．例文：
The Internet has influenced my life Many inventins have changed ur life.As far as I am cncerned, the Internet is a useful inventin and it influences my life mst.
Every day I surf the Internet and get infrmatin frm it.I can keep in tuch with my friends and family.Besides, I can buy gds frm all ver the wrld.Mre imprtantly, I can knw mre thrugh the Internet, and it pens up my eyes.It can nt nly help me with my study, but als help me relax.
All in all, thanks t the Internet, my life becmes mre cnvenient than ever.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。首先提出互聯(lián)網(wǎng)對自己的影響很大；
第二步，具體闡述互聯(lián)網(wǎng)怎樣影響自己的生活；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)自己的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①as far as I am cncerned就我個人而言
②keep in tuch with保持聯(lián)系
③all ver the wrld世界各地
④all in all總之
[高分句型]
①As far as I am cncerned, the Internet is a useful inventin and it influences my life mst.(and連接并列句)
②It can nt nly help me with my study, but als help me relax.(nt nly…but als結(jié)構(gòu))
勞動實踐
在學(xué)校，和同學(xué)一起打掃教室和操場;
在家里，幫助父母洗衣服和整理房間;
在社區(qū)，做志愿者，幫助老人和殘疾人。
勞動收獲
學(xué)到一些基本生活技能，學(xué)會照顧自己;
培養(yǎng)良好的生活習(xí)慣，健康成長。
發(fā)出倡議
……