讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)評(píng)分原則（grading principle）
總分25分：按5檔給分；評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)所給短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定所屬檔次，然后以該檔次要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分；詞數(shù)少于 130詞，總分扣除2分；主要從以下 4個(gè)方面考慮：與所給短文及段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)的街接（融洽）程度內(nèi)容豐富性（情節(jié)內(nèi)容多少）語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)及詞匯的生富性和準(zhǔn)確性上下文連貫性。（語(yǔ)句間連接成分）拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)準(zhǔn)確性也是評(píng)分的一個(gè)重要方面；若書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，分?jǐn)?shù)降低一檔
cherence 與原文的一致性
theme 符合原文的主題
S what des the authr want t tell us？
Life is full f ups and dwns, including ups and dwns f career,emtin and study. When my mther tld me this, I always didn't believe it made any sense t me because I always thught my life wuld be smth all the time.But when I lk back n my life,I find that everything I have gt thrugh is just s-s. I wuld like t share smething I experienced last year with yu.I have been dreaming abut earning a master's degree and I have been always wrking hard s as t realize the dream.Thrugh cntinuus effrts,I eventually succeeded in passing the Natinal Pstgraduate Entrance Examinatin. The time I gt the gd news that I was admitted t my dream schl, I culdn't be happier and I even thught I was the mst frtunate persn in this wrld.And during the whle fllwing summer hliday, I was immersed in imaging my clrful graduate life. In rder t test my independence, I made up my mind t g t the city where my schl was lcated n my wn ne day ahead f schedule.
Read fr the theme
I arrived at the htel I had bked in advance alne the day befre the new term began.But unluckily I had caught a bad cld several days befre the jurney and it gt even wrse after riding thrughut the day.I fund that I had a fever and then I tk sme pills t reduce the fever.But the temperature rse very high,and all that night I had great difficulty in falling asleep.I felt very lnely and helpless, unable t d anything but shed tears, and cnsidered it as the mst difficult challenge that 1 had ever faced.Hwever,when I thught f my parents' experiences f difficulties,I cnstantly tld myself "tmrrw is anther day' and then I gt the curage t vercme the difficulty and finally I gt up and tk the taxi t see a dctr at 2: 00 am.Paragraph 1: In the hspital I was examined carefullyParagraph 2: When my parents saw me, they rushed t me right away.
Ups and dwns d exist in life but there's n challenge that can't be vercme as lng as we have a lving family
Hw t plish yur language？
Language f the text
advanced wrds and phrasesabundant sentence patterns
prper cnjunctins
Ways t plish language
abundant sentence patterns
advanced wrds and phrases
1. Advanced wrds and phrases
1)I thught he nly liked music and tennis
was fnd f/ went in fr / was crazy abut...
2) I always thught my life wuld be gd
Tip1：高級(jí)詞匯的選擇遵循短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則,具體性原則
Tip2： 避免重復(fù)使用同一詞語(yǔ)
I made up my mind t g t the city where my schl was lcated n my wn ne day ahead f arrived at the htel I had bked in advance alne
Plish the wrds
He is such a(n) gd dctr that many peple cme t see him
The by realized the danger and began t run
aware f...
brilliant/ utstanding/ kind-hearted
翻譯：穿著白色裙子，這個(gè)女孩兒看起來(lái)非常漂亮。(1) The girl wears a white skirt, and she lks beautiful.(2) Wearing a white skirt, the girl lks pretty beautiful.(3) Wearing a white skirt, the girl lks abslutely breath-taking (美得讓人窒息）, making me fall in lve with her.
1.強(qiáng)調(diào)句It was at the railway statin that I met Li Ming yesterday.2.倒裝句→Never have I seen such a beautiful picture.3.感嘆句→What a pleasant surprise my dad gave me!4.省略句If it is pssible, I wuld like t g there tmrrw.→If pssible, I wuld like t g there tmrrw.
2. Abundant sentence patterns
5. with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)With the spring appraching，the weather becmes warmer and warmer6. 被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)The wrk was finished 3 days ag7.虛擬語(yǔ)氣If I were yu, I wuld d I had taken his advice, I wuldn't have failed in the exam.If I were t/shuld meet her, I wuld tell her abut it.8.從句（定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句、狀語(yǔ)從句）
Plish the sentences
1. After a while， the dctr tld me that I had t be in hspital.→ After a while，I was tld “ Listen t my advice, and yu will feel better sn”→ “ If yu shuld listen t my advice, yu wuld feel better sn”
3. Prper cnjunctins
1.表因果：because ，since as ，nw that，therefre，thus，s，as a result (f)，because f=n accunt f ，due t …, wing t, thanks t ，fr this reasn，if s，if nt 2.表轉(zhuǎn)折（然而）：yet, and yet, but , while, n the cntrary, n the ther hand, hwever, at the same time 3.表解釋說(shuō)明：that is, that is t say, in ther wrds, such as, fr instance等。4.表遞進(jìn)強(qiáng)調(diào)：nt nly…but (als), what's mre, in additin, wrse still, mrever, abve all，in fact/ as a matter f fact，in ther wrds，in that case ， particularly 5.表總結(jié)：n the whle，it is quite clear that 很顯然there is n dubt that 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)
It's yur turn-----Plish the drafts
Appreciate gd wrks

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