新高考英語復習：06 讀后續(xù)寫：人與動物類（故事構造“三大套路”）-高考英語讀后續(xù)寫技巧與訓練（新高考專用）新高考英語復習：-試卷下載-教習網

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\l "_Tc14024" 套路二：兇猛型動物故事情節(jié) PAGEREF _Tc14024 \h 6
\l "_Tc25254" 套路三、主題升華句 PAGEREF _Tc25254 \h 8
\l "_Tc32331" Part3：人與動物場景素材積累 PAGEREF _Tc32331 \h 8
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\l "_Tc28003" 例1：人與麻雀 PAGEREF _Tc28003 \h 11
\l "_Tc15740" Part5：高考真題再現 PAGEREF _Tc15740 \h 13
\l "_Tc29971" 真題1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】 PAGEREF _Tc29971 \h 13
\l "_Tc796" 真題2：拍照北極熊遇險【2020年7月浙江卷】 PAGEREF _Tc796 \h 16
從歷年高考的讀后續(xù)寫話題中可以看出人和動物的話題備受命題者青睞。試題文本一般從兩個角度展開，一個就是人和動物和諧相處, 要么是人類幫助動物解決問題，要么是動物幫助人類解決問題；另外一個就是，人類與動物產生沖突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的動物，遇到危險，首先沉著冷靜與動物周旋，后來向別人求助，之后成功脫險的故事。例如：人狼大戰(zhàn)：騎車旅途遭遇狼wlf追趕，脫險經歷（2017年6月浙江高考）；人熊大戰(zhàn)：北極探險者給北極熊拍照，遭遇plar bear追趕的驚險經歷（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和諧：父母決定給Pppy買一條小狗作伴，幫助Pppy擺脫孤獨和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）；人貓和諧：作者的丈夫從討厭貓到向貓求助，趕走土撥鼠的故事（2021年3月臨沂市一模）。
Part1：經典例文（小狗救人）
Just as many families d at a pint, Catherine chse t add a new family member by adpting a pet. Shrtly after her daughter Kate’s birth, Catherine decided she wanted a clse bnd with a dg fr Kate. Thus, Catherine called the dg shelter clse by t inquire abut adptin. After hearing abut the available animals, she chse a Dberman Pinscher. Once they signed adptin papers, they named the dg Khan.
Catherine was hpeful this wuld prvide valuable lessns fr her baby, such as sharing, learning t lve and respnsibility t care fr animals. She was lking frward t having the dg jin the family.
Hearing f Khan’s rugh backgrund, Catherine immediately lved the dg. She was verjyed t bring this special dg back t her family. Of curse, she realized there were risks invlved. Well, the bvius risks frm bringing a large, ptentially dangerus animal t her yung baby, Catherine pushed them aside. If she had nt adpted Khan, he wuld have been killed just a week later. S, this was his new life and secnd chance, and the family was hping fr the best.
Everything began smthly. They trained Khan during the first few days. Hwever, everything changed n that furth day when the dg acted cmpletely ut f character.
The fateful day began with the usual playtime in the yard. Althugh baby Kate had her parents watching frm a distance, they did nt ntice anything ut f the rdinary. Kate and the new dg had been making a habit f playing ut back like this. Hwever, things were different this day.
S what was actually happening ut there? The tw were nt being lud r crazy. They began running thrugh the backyard grass tgether. Again, Catherine watched the tw clsely. Surprisingly, things had changed within an instant!
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Khan began acting wildly all f a sudden,
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Obviusly, it was Khan wh saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell dwn with dying eyes.
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One pssible versin:
Khan began acting wildly all f a sudden. With her muth wide pen, Catherine watched Khan dragging her child, hping he wuld stp. Just as she was wndering hw he culd suddenly becme this way, Khan put dwn Kate utside the yard. Catherine rushed t Kate and carried her t safety while Khan barked twards the yard wildly. Catherine returned, nly t find a pisnus snake crawling in the yard and she drve it away.
可汗突然開始瘋狂地表演起來。凱瑟琳張開嘴，看著汗拖著她的孩子，希望他能停下來。就在她想知道他怎么會突然變成這樣的時候，汗把凱特放在院子外面。凱瑟琳沖到凱特身邊，把她抱到安全的地方，而汗則瘋狂地向院子走去。凱瑟琳回來了，結果發(fā)現一條毒蛇在院子里爬行，她把它開走了。
Obviusly, it was Khan wh saved her baby but he barked weakly and then cllapsed with dying eyes. Khan prtected Kate frm the pisnus creature and was attacked. Althugh living with the family fr merely fur days, he became the prtectr as Catherine had hped. Catherine rushed Khan t the vet. “May Gd bless yu”, Catherine murmured. The vet tried his best t save him. Eventually, he made it and Catherine shed a tear f relief.
顯然，是汗救了她的孩子，但他的吠聲很微弱，然后癱倒了，眼睛垂死了?？珊贡Ｗo凱特不受有毒生物的傷害，并遭到了襲擊。雖然他只和家人一起生活了四天，但他還是像凱瑟琳所希望的那樣成為了保護者。凱瑟琳沖著可汗去看獸醫(yī)。“愿上帝保佑你?！眲P瑟琳喃喃地說。獸醫(yī)盡力去救了它。最后，他成功了，凱瑟琳如釋了一口氣。
Part2：人與動物故事構造兩大故事套路
套路一：可愛型動物故事情節(jié)
可愛型動物，如狗，鳥等，主要構思陪伴、忠誠，或者人救助動物生命，動物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情節(jié)。
1、外貌
1. a pair f large watery eyes 一雙水汪汪的大眼睛
2. tw big rund eyes 兩只圓溜溜的大眼睛
3. beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes 小珠般圓亮的/亮晶晶的/閃閃發(fā)亮的眼睛
4. a nse like a small black gem 一顆黑寶石般的鼻子
5. lng/muscular/skinny/spindly legs 長的/肌肉發(fā)達的/皮包骨的/干瘦的腿
6. fur is as white as snw 皮毛像雪一樣潔白
7. a lng little tail 一條長長的小尾巴
2、動作
wag the tail 搖尾巴
smell/sniff 嗅
bark/yap/yelp 狗吠
lick 舔
put the ears up 把耳朵豎起來
shake the whle bdy 抖動全身
bite the crner f the cat 咬住衣角
rub their necks and backs with their paws 用爪子摩擦它們的脖子和背部
hld it tightly with the paws 用爪子緊緊按住
fall n its back 摔得四腳朝天
run arund me 圍著我跑
keep scratching yu with his frnt paws 用前爪不停撓你
raise its whle bdy n its hind legs 用后腿支起全身
leap t its feet 跳起來
rest the nse in its paws 把鼻子擱在爪子里
keep its fre legs dubled up 保持前腿彎曲
3、高興
They were glad t see Pppy cming back t her usual self（他們很高興看到Pppy又回到以前的自己）, guiding the little dg n daily walks and even intrducing t it her favrite tys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
Smiling ever s bright（笑得更加燦爛。）, he called ut t his parents, wh tugged him in fr a lng hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
Her parents watched them playing arund and smiled with relief（輕松地笑了）–Pppy was back t her ld cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3、常見動物
鹿：
1. A mther deer with a huge pair f deer hrns （有一對大的鹿角）appeared in frnt f him, with a baby fawn(幼鹿) lying n the dry grund. （202103寧波十校）
2. The pr creature, apparently in desperate need f water, licked it up quickly with its shell-pink tngue（很快用它貝殼粉的舌頭舔乾凈）.（202103寧波十校）
3. The mther deer lwered her head and licked my by’s cheek gently, as if expressing gratitude（低下頭舔我的男孩的臉頰，好像在表達感激）. （202103寧波十校）
馬：
1. At the pen, Gina saw the hrse. It was f medium size. It had a fine, sft blackcat and ne white ft（它的毛細膩柔軟,油黑油黑的,有一只腳是白色的）. There was a wide white patch (斑紋)that ran dwn the center f its face. Gina fell in lve with it at first sight.“Ww! What a hrse.” （英語周報高三第十期 2020.9.4）
2. The hrse seemed t feel her kindness, sniffing her（聞了聞她）. （英語周報高三第十期 2020.9.4）
狗：
1.They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self（不像往常那么快樂）. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
2. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging（她的尾巴開始擺動）ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. Pppy apprached with cautin, trying nt t scare the puppy. Sure enugh, it was nly mments later that the ball f fur lifted its head ut f the bx（把它的頭伸出盒子） t peek at its new hme and its new friend. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
4. Hearing his bags unladed n the driveway, Pppy’s ears pricked up（豎起耳朵） and suddenly she was n all furs（四腳著地）. The by was greeted with a cheerful high-pitched bark. Then the frnt dr ppped pen and Pppy darted t his embrace, fllwed by the little ne wh licked his fingers fndly. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
套路二：兇猛型動物故事情節(jié)
兇猛的動物，如狼、熊等，一般會給人造成生命威脅，所以主要是以遇險、脫險的故事情節(jié)為主。
1、害怕
Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
Seeing the apprach f the plar bear, I frze with terrr, t scared t mve an inch（被恐懼嚇呆，害怕到動也不能動）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
My wife Elli grasped my clthes and trembled, swallwing hard（抓住我的衣服，顫抖著，使勁吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
A numbing chill gripped me（一種麻木的寒戰(zhàn)擢緊了我）.（2020.11金華十校）
Thinking f the wlf’s bldy muth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（幾乎給嚇死）（2017年6月高考浙江卷）
I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr（被一種強烈的恐懼感所控制）, my palms sweating.（山東省青島市2020年4月高三?？迹?br>2、求助與獲救
1. At the sight f it, Elli waved her hands wildly（瘋狂地揮手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t spt （驚奇地發(fā)現）that the bear had finally trn dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
3. Having pulled the massive bdy ut f the stump, Brian cleaned the wunds （清潔傷口）and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt dwn and tended t the wlf（蹲下來照顧狼）tgether with Brian. （2020.11金華十校）
4. I went near the inncent ne and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗） till he had becme dry. （山東模擬）
5. Using a rck as the supprting pint, I unlcked the chain and set the wlf free（放走這只狼）. （山東省青島市2020年4月高三?？迹?br>3、熊：
1. As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread（嗅著，聞著我們的大蒜面包）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs（用他的后腿站起來） and pushed at the wden fence psts.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
3. The bear reared up ,attacked the fence and even desired t tear dwn us（想要撕裂我們） with flames blazing in its eyes（怒火在他的眼里燃燒）wing t the dreadful spray. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
4. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag（撕開他的帳篷袋）.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）
5. One f Mac’s friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf. Satisfied with what he gt（對他得到的很滿意）, the wlf ran int the wds. （2017年6月高考浙江卷）
4、狼：
1. Pale-yellw eyes narrwed. Black lips tightened. Duble sets f tw-inch sharp teeth were expsed（露出它那兩排兩英寸寬的利牙）. Suddenly the wlf trembled. Its teeth clacked, and a painful cry rse frm its thrat（它的牙齒咔嚓響，從它的喉嚨里發(fā)出一聲痛苦的喊叫）.（2020.11金華十校）
2. The wlf’s head sank t the grund, sad yellw eyes lking at us（黃色的眼睛悲傷地看著我們）. （2020.11金華十校）
3. S angry was the wlf that it kept raring（那只狼的太生氣了，一直咆哮） and smacking the windw vilently.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
套路三：主題升華設計
可愛型動物主題：陪伴、珍愛生命、自然和諧、忠誠等。
兇猛型動物主題：難忘的經歷、獲得教訓、感謝他人救助等。
1. Elli and I learned ur lessn（學到一個教訓）: Be aware f a bear with a tthache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. Despite the chill autumn wind, their hme was filled with the warmth f lve and reunin（充滿愛和團聚的溫暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一場奇跡）, saving ur farm, just like my by saved a life.（202103寧波十校）
4. Appearing t be feeling better, the wlf slwly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss t Becky’s hand as if t express thanks（好像在表達感謝）. What a warm scene! （2020.11金華十校）
Part3：人與動物場景素材積累
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Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran frm the pnd. “Wait fr me! It wn’t be lng,” he exclaimed t me. Desperate and hpeless, I clsed my eyes, praying this was all a dream. And even wrse, the water was s cld it felt like millins f needles were stabbing me. Hw I wished that I culd fly ut f the icy water like a bird! After what seemed t be ages, Harry returned t the pnd, with a lng ak branch in his hand. As I grabbed hld f ne end f the branch, my brther started t drag the ther with every last unce f his strength. Thank gdness, I was able t climb ut f the ice hle and then we gallped hme.
Paragraph 2: The mment I crashed thrugh the kitchen dr, sbbing, mum rushed ver. “Oh, my Gd! Where have yu been?” she said in surprise. “Yu're cmpletely wet.” “It’s Harry’s fault!” I cmplained t her thrugh my chattering teeth. When I tld her what had happened t me, her eyes were wide with hrrr. All f a sudden, she tk my arm, pulled me int the bathrm and then gave me a warm bath. After that, mum dressed me in a warm cat, wrapped me in a blanket and pured me a cup f ht milk. She sat next t me, smiling, relieved that I was all right. Sure enugh, my brther was criticized by mum fr his lack f safety awareness.
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Paragraph 1：Sam arrived very early the next mrning. He rang the drbell and plitely waited fr Mrs. Prudft t answer. Then he culd hear Rland barking and whining inside, frantic t get ut. Sam std by the dr, debating with himself whether t walk the unfriendly dg t help his best friend. After a while, the dr flung pen and Mrs. Prudft came ut, greeting him with a beaming smile. Surprisingly, the lazy dg grinned up at him and wagged his tail, eager t g ut with him. Mrs. Prudft put a leash n the dg, strked his glssy head and said, “Have a gd time, dear!” Withut saying gdbye, Sam and the dg danced arund and then dashed ut f the huse.
Paragraph 2：A mnth later, Mrs. Prudft was delighted t find Rland fit and energetic. Obviusly, Sam’s effrts paid ff—Rland was healthy and active. But what pleased her mst was that Sam, tgether with the ther kids, wuld stay with her n weekends, chatting and laughing. Besides, they wuld help her clean up the yard. Frm then n, laughter filled her huse and she n lnger felt lnely. Then came the mment Sam had been lking frward t—the day he was paid fr his wrk. What a big surprise! Tears f gratitude welled up in Barry’s eyes as he knew what Sam had dne fr him. Sam just std there, smiling, glad that he culd whleheartedly supprt his friend when he was in truble.
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Paragraph 1: All f a sudden, Betty felt smething tuching the bttm f her ft. What was that? She wndered. A sea fish? Befre she culd get n the surfbard, it bumped her in the ft nce again. She suddenly had the feeling that an enrmus fish, bigger than her, was circling arund her. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thught f the jke Uncle Mark played n her. And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up thrugh the water, heading right fr her. It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming arund, nt far away frm her. Fr a split secnd, her heart practically skipped a beat.
Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in hrrr. Hearing the terrible scream fr help, Uncle Mark instantly realized that smething bad was happening. Withut thinking, he swam as quickly as he culd twards Betty and yelled, “Get ut! ...” But Betty seemed stuck, t scared t mve. At the very mment, the shark’s jaws pened wide, shwing rws f razr-sharp teeth. With all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the muth with his surfbard, scaring the mnster away. And then he grabbed hld f Betty’s arm and dragged her t the beach. All this tk nly a few minutes, but Betty wuld never frget the frightening experience.
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Paragraph 1: He was sentenced t be trn by a lin in the public arena (競技場). The terrifying day finally arrived. All the peple in the city went there t see the brutal fight between the pr slave and a bldthirsty beast. When Andrcles appeared in the arena, they began t cheer and ht. All eyes were n him, and time seemed t stp. Overcme by a stab f fear, he almst cllapsed t the grund, his heart punding and his knees shaking. And then came a furius rar and the great lin charged at him with its flaming eyes and gaping jaws. Desperate and hpeless, the slave clsed his eyes and drpped his swrd, thinking that he was dne fr.
Paragraph 2: Hwever, the lin didn’t act as mst had imagined. Much t their surprise, the savage beast stpped shrt , knelt dwn and then lickedthe slave’s hands and feet. He behaved like a pet dg. And then he let ut a lw rar, as if whispering t his friend, “Didn’t yu recgnize me?” Indeed, it was the very lin the slave had helped in the frest. Sighing with relief, the slave strked his neck gently, tears f gratitude welling up in his eyes. S mved were peple by the stry that they begged the master t set free the slave and the lin. One gd turn deserves anther, and in the end, Andrcles, the slave, became a free man.
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Paragraph 1: I entered the shp, and ne f the salesmen came t me. I culdn't believe my eyes. Surely, it was my lng-lst friend, Arthur, always wearing a warm smile. What a cincidence that Arthur wuld appear in frnt f me when I had truble! I thught. Fr a secnd, I stared at him in disbelief, my muth hanging pen. In the meanwhile Tm instantly recgnized me and he gave me a huge hug. “What brings yu here?” he asked with a puzzled expressin n his face. S I tld him that my car gt a flat tire and that cnsidering the pr rad cnditin, it might brke dwnn my way back hme. Knwing what had happened t me, he said that he wuld be glad t give me a hand again.
Paragraph 2: After a while, they quickly drve a pick-up truck t my car and started it. After listening t the sund f the engine, Arthur tld me that there was nthing wrng with it. And then they started t fix the tire and we chatted happily. Arthur tld me that the thank-yu nte frm me inspired him t live a meaningful life by helping thers. Sn afterwards, he gt the tire fixed. He gt up, wiped the sweat frm his face and wished me a pleasant jurney. I culdn’t thank him enugh. Many years have passed, but I will never frget the lessn Arthur taught me: Life is meaningful when yu can give a hand t thse in truble.
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Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. He expsed his sharp teeth, snarling at us, as he ran frward. And again the furius creature std n his back legs and began t snap at the fence like a demn. It seemed that his muth was dripping with bld and his eyes were red with rage. At the sight f it, I culd feel a flicker f fear flding ver me, and Ellis was stunned, her muth hanging pen. It was nly then that my mind began t race. Once again, I plucked my curage t blast him with pepper spray, but withut success. Then all f a sudden, came a crash f the fence falling dwn.
Paragraph 2: At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. It landed in a clearing, nt far frm ur camp, and the lud nises frm the rescue helicpter scared the bear. Fr an instant, he frze, but after a while, he started t charge at us again. "Ellis!" I shrieked, "Lk ut!" We immediately stepped aside, spun rund and gallped twards the helicpter. The mment we were int the helicpter, we cllapsed, gasping with relief. As it tk ff, we culd see the bear was hungrily eating the bread we had made. What a hungry bear! After we returned hme safe and sund, we realized that smething shuld be dne fr bears.
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Paragraph 1: Lking ver my shulder, I stared int the flashing lights f a truck. A familiar figure leaped ut, rushed twards me and waded int the water. Thank gdness, it was Je wh came t my rescue. Hwever, the water was running s rapidly that he had t g back. Frightened and a little angry, I culd hardly help shedding tears. Hw I wished that my husband were like a superman wh culd save me frm disaster. But, after a while, it turned ut that Je returned with ne end f a rpe in his hand and the ther end tied t the truck. He struggled t thrw the rpe t me and shuted, "Catch! Open the dr!"
Paragraph 2: I screamed that I culdn't make it. At that mment, the sund f the raging water utside grew luder, and the car rcked mre vilently. Wrse still, the water came up t Je’s waist and he almst lst his fting in the water. After several vain attempts, Je realized that there was n chance t make it. He put every unce f strength int getting clse t me and said sthingly, "Dn't panic, hney! I'm here." With Je's help, I burst the dr pen, and Je immediately tied the rpe arund my waist. The mment we pulled urselves ut f the water, the car was washed away. What a narrw escape! I hugged Je tightly, happiness and lve welling up inside me.
Part4：靈活應用
例1：人與麻雀
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
It's getting ht. It's time t put n lighter clthes and pen up the windws. I can't wait t d s. Yesterday, an unfreseen visit t the kitchen happened during the brief time we were ut. Tw daring sparrws (麻雀) had risked landing n ur territry t enjy the freshness in ur sink and sme ther breadcrumbs (面包屑) n ur kitchen cunter.
Actually, sparrws are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brwn birds are fund n every cntinent except Antarctica, flying r jumping arund cities, picking up leftver fd n side-walks, and smetimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted t living alngside humans- similar t pet dgs.
When yu cme acrss such sudden callers, yu are likely t sense it as an unwanted visitr int yur cmfrt zne, r yu might receive it as a lvely angel f life. I chse the secnd ptin, with n hesitatin while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, I've never cme t stp t feel the relatinship with sparrws.
I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat rf viewed frm ur kitchen windw. Every day my mm and I wuld g ut t feed the sparrws. She taught me hw t call them with a clicking sund she made with her tngue. I have lved sparrws ever since. S every day in my spare time, I can't stp bserving and celebrating their dance frm ur windw. I stuffed them with the leftvers n ur tableclth after every meal. And I have prvided them with every kind f bases and stands f ur huse.
Undubtedly, they feel at ease in ur backyard. And that has led them t gather up curage and slide int ur kitchen, bedrm r even reading rm. Perhaps because they have the feeling that we dn' t cnsider them truble makers, but friendly neighbrs. But I am slightly wrried abut their drppings (糞便).
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右;
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
One day, they left sme drppings in my husband's reading rm.
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Abut tw weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my Gd!”
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【答案】One day, they left sme drppings in my husband 's reading rm. They happened t dirty his imprtant wrk reprts n the desk. He was s angry that he asked me t clse the windws. I immediately did a thrugh cleaning and prmised that the drs and windws f the reading rm will be clsed tightly, and the sparrws can't break in again. My husband kept silent, and at last he calmed dwn. I knw he is a caring persn, wh always lves animals.
Abut tw weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my Gd !” Thinking smething similar happened again, I ran ver t have a lk. He was lking ut f the windw and said excitedly, “Lk! What a surprise! There are three eggs in the sparrw's nest! They 're ging t have babies f their wn!” He was happy, like a child and uncnsciusly pened the clsed windw. After that, there are always breadcrumbs n the windw platfrm f the reading rm.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇書面表達是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，在作者生活之處有許多麻雀，作者歡迎它們的到來，在后院為它們準備了食物和落腳處，作者將它們當成了友好的鄰居，只是有點擔心它們的糞便。
【詳解】續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：有一天，它們在我丈夫的書房里留下了一些糞便，所以應該寫糞便落在書桌上給丈夫帶來的尷尬和懊惱，要詳細描述丈夫的動作和心理，與作者的反應及應對措施等。第二段開頭是：大約兩周后，我聽到我丈夫說:“哦，天哪!”本段應該寫丈夫的感嘆、作者的好奇，并描述事情的原委，以及丈夫對于麻雀態(tài)度的轉變等等。要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數應為150左右，按要求完成寫作任務。
【點睛】本文描寫詳略得當，使用了高級詞匯和高級句子。如：d a thrugh cleaning，break in，run ver，have a lk等高級詞匯；結果狀語從句，如He was s angry that he asked me t clse the windws；賓語從句，如I immediately did a thrugh cleaning and prmised that the drs and windws f the reading rm will be clsed tightly, and the sparrws can't break in again；定語從句，如I knw he is a caring persn, wh always lves animals等高級句式。
Part5：高考真題再現
真題1：:小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】
閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。
“I’m ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins (情緒) get the better f him.
His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by’s mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit, Pppy didn’t.
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried, “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let’s get a little dg fr Pppy.”
It didn’t take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy
welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n
it. Her tail began wagging (擺動) ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意：
所續(xù)寫短文的詞數應為150左右；
至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；
續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。
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I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【參考答案1】
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. Pppy jumped with jy at the sight f the little dg. She lwered her head t watch it curiusly. Then she became s excited that she accidentally kncked ver the bx in an attempt t get clser. With the bx tipping ver, ut came the little ne, wh was nt shy and instantly gt familiar with Pppy. It didn’t take lng befre the tw played arund the huse, cheerfully running after each ther.
爸爸打開盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現了。波比一看到這只小狗就高興地跳了起來。她低下頭，好奇地看著它。然后她變得非常興奮，她不小心撞倒了盒子，試圖靠近。盒子翻了過來，小家伙走了出來，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。沒過多久，兩人就在房子里玩耍，高高興興地互相跑著。
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university. He had been missing his parents and the dg since it was the first time that he had been away frm hme fr such a lng time. When the by caught sight f Pppy, he went rushing tward the dg and bent dwn t give her a big hug. Suddenly, the by nticed the little dg. “Oh my gd, wh is this?” His parents laughed at the lk f surprise n his face. “It’s Pppy’s new cmpanin.” said Mm. (155)
幾周后，這個男孩從大學走回家了。自從他第一次離家這么長時間以來，他就一直在想念父母和狗。當男孩看到波比時，他沖向狗，彎下腰給她一個大大的擁抱。突然，那男孩注意到了那只小狗。“哦，天哪，這是誰？”他的父母嘲笑他臉上驚訝的表情?！斑@是波比的新伴侶?！薄眿寢屨f。
【參考答案2】
Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.It was hiding in ne crner f the bx, with a curius lk in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried t climb ut f the bx, but it fell dwn n its back, unable t stand up. Upn seeing this, his parents culd nt help laughing. Gently, Mm picked it up frm the bx and put it n the flr. "Pppy, isn′t it a sweet dg? It's fr yu!" Mm said in a sft vice."It's yur cmpanin." Cheerful and yet a little nervus, Pppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much t the relief f his parents, they were like peas and carrts sn afterwards, and it seemed as if Rpp had frgtten her ld friend.
爸爸打開盒子，一只可愛的小狗出現了。它藏在盒子的一個角落里，眼睛里有一種奇怪的神情。它搖著尾巴，試圖爬出盒子，但背部倒了下來，站不起來。一看到這一點，他的父母就忍不住笑了起來。媽媽輕輕地把它從盒子里拿起來，放在地板上?！斑@不是一只可愛的狗嗎？”這是給你準備的！”媽媽用一種溫柔的聲音說。“這是你的同伴?！辈ū群芨吲d，但又有點緊張，不停地跑著新家庭成員吠叫。但讓他的父母松了一口氣的是，不久之后它們就像豌豆和胡蘿卜一樣，羅普似乎已經忘記了她的老朋友。
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. Pppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiusly. It tk the by fr a lng time t ntice that there was a cute puppy beside Pppy,grwling and sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent dwn,strked its head and asked,"What an adrable puppy! Whse is it?" His parents smiled and replied,"We gt it fr Puppy because.." Knwing what had happened t Pppy when he was at the university, the by was s mved that he tk the ld girl in his arms.Tears burred his visin as he murmured,"Pppy,I miss yu, t." And quietly, Pppy raised her head and watched the yung teenager like xWaby in his arms.
幾周后，男孩從大學回家。波比撲向他，興奮地舔著他的手和臉，她的眼睛閃閃發(fā)光，她的尾巴劇烈地擺動。男孩花了很長時間才注意到波比旁邊有一只可愛的小狗，在他的腳邊咆哮和嗅。他立刻彎下腰，撫摸它的頭，問：“多么可愛的小狗啊！是誰的？” 他的父母笑了笑，回答說：“我們給波比買的，因為”他知道波比在大學時發(fā)生了什么很感動，把那個老女孩抱在懷里。他喃喃地說：“波比，我也想你?！?然后靜靜地，波比抬起頭，看著那年輕的少年在他懷里。
真題2：拍照北極熊遇險【2020年7月浙江卷】
第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）
閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “ the plar bear capital f the wrld ” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada.
Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread.
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter (相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar (吼叫), the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
注意：
1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數應為150左右；
2. 至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；
3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. ___________________
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Para 2:
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. _____________________________
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One pssible versin:
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. Then we realized that the spray had nly angered him even mre, fr he seemed much fiercer this time and vilently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d. At this critical mment, Elli grabbed several pieces f garlic bread and threw them ver the fence. It wrked! The bear stpped the attack and ran t the bread. But it wasn’t lng befre he ate up all the bread and came back again.
Para 2:
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. “Thank gdness we are saved!” Elli cried ut. Once the helicpter landed, we gt nt it in n time, excited and relieved. When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t spt that the bear had finally trn dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind. I quickly tk ut the camera and phtgraphed the rare scene — we were rbbed by a plar bear!
幾分鐘后，這只熊回到了我們的營地。然后我們意識到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因為這次他似乎更兇狠了，而且像瘋了一樣猛烈地推了推籬笆。我的心狂狂，不知道該怎么辦。在這個關鍵時刻，埃利抓起幾塊蒜蓉面包，扔過了柵欄。它已經成功了！熊阻止了進攻，跑到面包邊。但沒過多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回來了。
第2部分：
就在那一刻，直升機來了?！爸x天謝地，我們得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升機一降落，我們很快就上了飛機，興奮而松了一口氣。當我們安全地坐在直升機上時，我驚訝地發(fā)現這只熊終于撕掉了柵欄，向我們留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相機，拍攝了這個罕見的場景，我們被一只北極熊搶劫了！

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