
?專題25 書面表達(dá)
1. (2022秋·廣東深圳·八年級深圳市南山外國語學(xué)校(集團(tuán))高新中學(xué)校聯(lián)考期中)
假如你是李華,收到了筆友Josh 的電子郵件。請根據(jù)來信,給他回一封電子郵件。先說你的看法,再給出建議。
To: Lihua@help.com
Subject: Ask for your help
Dear Li Hua,
I have some problems and I need your help. My parents are strict with me and they want to control everything I do! I am not allowed to go outside with my friends at night. And I can’t enjoy playing basketball. They ask me to spend all my spare time on my study instead. Also I feel lonely because they are busy going on business. What should I do?
Yours,
Josh
要求:1.詞數(shù)80左右?;貜?fù)信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.回復(fù)中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them. We are growing up, but often, it’s hard for our parents to see this. To them, we are still children and they want to protect us.
Sometimes, it’s hard for you to talk to your parents. Here’s an idea: Write your mother and father a letter. In the letter, tell your parents what you are thinking about. Then maybe they will understand you better. After your parents read the letter, try to talk to them. In your free time, you’d better do something you can to help your parents. For example, you can help your parents with some housework. What’s more, you can describe your friends to your parents and tell them more about you and your life. I hope this helps!
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,為電子郵件;
時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中給Josh的建議的介紹要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖,借用“簡單介紹給Josh的建議”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容;
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容:對于Josh父母行為的看法和給Josh的建議;
第三步,書寫結(jié)語,表達(dá)“希望建議有用的”的愿望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①grow up長大
②talk to交流
③think about考慮
[高分句型]
Sometimes, it’s hard for you to talk to your parents.(“it’s+形容詞+for sb. to do”句型)
2. (2022秋·湖北武漢·八年級校聯(lián)考期中)
假設(shè)你叫李俊,你的美國朋友David想要在中國結(jié)交更多的朋友。你通過電子郵件,把你的同學(xué)王明介紹給他。王明情況見下表:
性別
男
年齡
14
外貌
方臉,大眼睛,短發(fā),高個子;
個性
誠實(shí),幽默,替朋友保守秘密,從不說他人壞話;
愛好
癡迷于DIY,經(jīng)常在周末自己動手制作、修理物品;
理想
當(dāng)一名校長(headmaster),讓學(xué)生有更多的時間玩耍;
春節(jié)計(jì)劃
……(補(bǔ)充不少于兩點(diǎn)。)
要求:
1. 注意文章條理,語句通順;
2. 詞數(shù)80左右,郵件的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear David,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.
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【答案】范文
Dear David,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.
He is a boy of 14. He is tall with a square face, big eyes and short hair. Everyone likes his humor and honesty. He gets along well with his friends because he always keeps secrets for them. Besides, he never says anything bad about others. Because he doesn’t think it is right to do so.
Guess what his hobby is? He is crazy about DIY, he often spends most of the time on weekends in hand making or mending something by himself. He thinks it’s very cool. Although he is young, he has a dream of being a headmaster, he plans to make some changes of school rules for students. For example, he will let students have more time to play instead of studying. With the Sping Festival coming, he will plan to pay a visit to Beijing with his two classmates and go back to his hometown to visit his grandparents.
With these informatin about him, how do you like him? I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jun
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇電子郵件;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③要點(diǎn):寫作時應(yīng)從外形、性格、興趣愛好等方面來介紹,注意不要遺漏信息,語句應(yīng)通順連貫有邏輯。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,問好。給對方介紹新朋友;
第二步,從這位新朋友的年齡、外形、性格、興趣愛好和夢想等方面來介紹這位新朋友;
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。介紹后詢問對方的看法,并期待對方的回復(fù)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①get along well with sb. 與……友好相處
②be crazy about sth. 對……癡迷
③spend some time in doing sth. 花……時間做某事
[高分句型]
①He gets along well with his friends because he always keeps secrets for them.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)
②Although he is young, he has a dream of being a headmaster, he plans to make some changes of school rules for students.(although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句)
3. (2022秋·浙江杭州·八年級??计谥校?br />
假如你是李華,收到了英國的筆友Jason的郵件。請你閱讀后回復(fù)。要求:不少于 80 詞,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dear Li Hua,
I know you have more free time because of the “Double Reduction” Policy(雙減政策). How do you spend your free time? What do you and your friends want to do most in your free time? And why do you like to do that? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Jason
Dear Jason,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Jason,
????It is important to make full use of our free time. Here are things my friends and I want to do most in our free time.
????He Lei likes to play soccer with his friends. Soccer is his favorite sport. He thinks it’s fun and relaxing. What’s more, it helps him keep healthy. Xiao Ke loves to practice playing the guitar most. She is expecting to take part in the school’s Talent Show. She wishes to be successful. As for me, I hope to read books in the library most. I think reading is the happiest thing for me. Reading can not only open up our eyes but also make us cleverer and happier. And I’m expecting to be a writer in the future.
????What would you like to do most in your free time?
Yours.
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,為電子郵件;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③提示:針對Jason提出的疑問進(jìn)行回復(fù),注意不要遺漏,合理作答。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖。借“充分利用空閑時間的重要性”引出重點(diǎn)介紹內(nèi)容。
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從身邊朋友到自己,充分介紹如何利用好空閑時間。
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。禮尚往來,對Jason的空閑時間如何利用表示關(guān)心。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①make full use of充分利用
②take part in參加
③Talent Show才藝表演
[高分句型]
① It is important to make full use of our free time.(“It is+形容詞+to do sth”表示做某事是……的)
② Reading can not only open up our eyes but also make us cleverer and happier.(“not only…but also…”句型)
4.(2022秋·廣東深圳·八年級校聯(lián)考期中)
假設(shè)你是鵬城中學(xué)的李華,你校學(xué)生會最近在組織“關(guān)愛老人”的活動。你們計(jì)劃在假期組織志愿者到社區(qū)幫助老年人學(xué)習(xí)如何使用智能手機(jī)和上網(wǎng),請你代表學(xué)生會用英語給校英文報寫一封倡議書。
要點(diǎn):
1. 老人們遇到的困難;
2. 能提供的幫助和活動的意義;
3. 報名參與項(xiàng)目的方式:到辦公室報名或發(fā)郵件報名。
要求:
1. 須包含以上所給要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2. 條理清楚,語句通順,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范;
3. 80詞左右,文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品(digital products),提高生活質(zhì)量(raise their life quality),報名(sign up)
Dear fellow students,
On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to call on everyone to take part in our summer programme named Care for the Aged.
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The Students’ Union
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to call on everyone to take part in our summer programme named Care for the Aged.
The modern society is developing rapidly, leaving aged people behind. They have little knowledge of the Internet and digital products. To help them enjoy the modern technological conveniences, in the coming summer holidays, we will organize volunteers to visit communities to teach them how to use smartphones and surf the Internet. It surely will raise their life quality and make a difference to the whole society.
We need your help. Please sign up at the office of the Students’ Union or write an email to StudentsUnion@abc.com. Your participation will be highly appreciated.
The Students’ Union
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材:本文是一篇書信作文;
② 時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”、“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時”和“一般將來時”;
③ 提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,學(xué)生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”中老人們遇到的困難、能提供的幫助和活動的意義和報名參與項(xiàng)目的方式的介紹。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,開門見山,呼吁人們參與“關(guān)愛老人”的活動;
第二步,介紹老人們遇到的困難,闡述能提供的幫助和活動的意義;
第三步,介紹報名參與項(xiàng)目的方式:到辦公室報名或發(fā)郵件報名。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have little knowledge of對……知之甚少
②enjoy the modern technological conveniences享受現(xiàn)代科技的便利
③raise their life quality提高他們的生活質(zhì)量
④make a difference to對……產(chǎn)生影響
[高分句型]
①The modern society is developing rapidly, leaving aged people behind.(現(xiàn)在分詞表伴隨)
②To help them enjoy the modern technological conveniences, in the coming summer holidays, we will organize volunteers to visit communities to teach them how to use smartphones and surf the Internet. (不定式表目的)
③Your participation will be highly appreciated.(被動語態(tài))
5.(2022秋·浙江杭州·八年級??计谥校?br />
假如你是李明,你在美國的筆友Mike下學(xué)期要到你校做交換生。Mike非常喜歡吃中國的面條。請你根據(jù)如下提示給Mike寫一封信,向他介紹你學(xué)校附近的三家面館,并告訴他你常去的一家面館并附上理由。
Miss Liu’s Noodle House
Yummy Noodles
Mr. Tang’s House of Noodles
You
Distance
2 kilometers
1 kilometer
500 meters
Food
★★★
★★★
★★★
Service
★★★★★
★★★
★★★★
要求:
1、表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;
2、不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等;
3、詞數(shù)80左右(開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)
Dear Mike,
I am very happy to know that you are coming to be an exchange student in our school.
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Best wishes!
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I am very happy to know that you are coming to be an exchange student in our school. I also know you like Chinese noodles very much. Let me introduce three noodle restaurants near my school to you.
The first is Miss Liu’s Noodle House. It is 2 kilometers away from my school. The second is Yummy Noodles. It is 1 kilometer away from my school. The last one is Mr. Tang’s House of Noodles. It is 500 meters from my school. The noodles in these three noodle restaurants are delicious. In addition, Miss Liu’s Noodle House has the best service. That’s why I go to this place so often. Yummy Noodles has the worst service. The service at Mr. Tang’s House of Noodles is in the middle.
Best wishes!
Li Ming
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,為書信作文;
② 時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③ 提示:根據(jù)所給表格提示寫一篇作文,介紹你學(xué)校附近的三家面館。
第一步,介紹三家面館到學(xué)校的距離;
第二步,介紹三家面館的食物和服務(wù);
第三步,介紹你常去的一家面館并附上理由。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①away from遠(yuǎn)離
②in addition此外
[高分句型]
That’s why I go to this place so often.(why引導(dǎo)的表語從句)
6.(2022秋·廣東深圳·八年級??计谥校?br />
假設(shè)你是李華,你的外國朋友Peter一家剛來中國定居,最近他家想買車,想和你了解一下中國新能源汽車(new energy car)的情況,請你根據(jù)以下信息給他回信。
1)新能源汽車在中國銷售的情況。
Year
2020
2021
2022(Jan.— Sept. )
Sales
1, 367 million
3, 521 million
4, 567 million
2)新能源汽車特征
外形:與傳統(tǒng)汽車一樣。
供能:有些用電,有些油電混合(可以用電,也可以用汽油)。
優(yōu)點(diǎn):至少說出兩條。
3)你的看法。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to tell you something about new energy car in China.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’d like to tell you something about the new energy car in China. The new energy car is becoming more and more popular in China. In 2020, the total number of sales of new energy cars was about 1,367 million. In 2021, about 3,521 million new energy cars were sold. In 2022, just from January to September, the number was about 4,567 million. The new energy car looks just like traditional cars. Some of them use electricity and some can run on either electricity or gasoline. The new energy car has many advantages. New energy cars don't pollute the environment. Besides, it can help people save a lot of money. I think a new energy car will take the place of the traditional car in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,為書信作文;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中中國新能源汽車的介紹要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖。承接信件的開頭介紹新能源的銷售情況以及新能源汽車的特征;
第二步,發(fā)表自己的看法;
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①look like看起來像
②either...or...要么……要么……
③help sb do sth幫助某人做某事
④take the place of 取代……
[高分句型]
①New energy car is becoming more and more popular in China.(比較級+and+比較級句型)
②I think new energy car will take the place of??the traditional car in the future.(think后是省略that的賓語從句)
7.(2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級廣州市第十六中學(xué)??计谥校?br />
隨著科學(xué)技術(shù)的進(jìn)步,新的發(fā)明不斷涌現(xiàn),它們大大地改變了人們的生活,綜合以下表格寫一篇短文。談?wù)劯黜?xiàng)發(fā)明的作用,然后說出你的感受。
發(fā)明
作用
空調(diào)(air-conditioner)
調(diào)節(jié)溫度(temperature),讓人們能在舒適的環(huán)境下生活
高鐵(high-speed railway)
讓出行更快捷方便
電腦
提高人們的計(jì)算速度和準(zhǔn)確性;幫助人們做許多重要的事
補(bǔ)充一個例子
……
要求:
1.詞數(shù):80詞左右;開頭部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫,通順。
3.不得透露學(xué)校,姓名等任何個人信息,否則不予評分。
With the development of science and technology, people have created more and more inventions, which bring great changes to our lives. Here are some of the inventions.
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【答案】例文
?????With the development of science and technology, people have created more and more inventions, which bring great changes to our lives. Here are some of the inventions.
?????Air-conditioner is a great invention. It can regulate the temperature so that people can live in a comfortable environment, especially in the hot summer. The emergence of high-speed railway makes people travel more convenient and fast. The computer is a trans-century invention. It can improve people’s computing speed and accuracy. At the same time, it can help people do many important things. In addition, mobile phone is a wonderful invention. With mobile phones, people don’t need to write letters anymore.
?????How useful these inventions are!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇說明文,為材料作文;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③提示:根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作,不能遺漏信息,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,根據(jù)表格提示介紹各項(xiàng)發(fā)明的作用;
第二步;自己再補(bǔ)充一個例子;
第三步,最后表達(dá)自己的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①make sb do使某人做
②help sb do幫助某人做
③in addition此外
[高分句型]
It can regulate the temperature so that people can live in a comfortable environment, especially in the hot summer. (so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句)
8.(2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級廣州市天河中學(xué)??计谥校?br />
我們學(xué)校下個月將舉行科技節(jié),一些美國學(xué)生也會來參觀交流。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文,介紹你們小組的參展作品——機(jī)器人ICAN。
名字
ICAN
外觀
圓腦袋、藍(lán)眼睛
長腿長臂
功能
做家務(wù)
幫助孩子學(xué)習(xí)
……(補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))
特點(diǎn)
聲音好聽
……(補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))
注意:詞數(shù)在80詞左右,可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hello, everyone, here is our robot, ICAN!
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone, here is our robot, ICAN!
ICAN has a round head and blue eyes, with long legs and arms. It can do housework, like cleaning and cooking. It can also help kids with their studies. In addition,it can answer various questions and play with children. ICAN has a nice voice and can sing songs and tell stories.
We believe ICAN will be a great attraction at our Science and Technology Festival.
Thank you for listening!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),并且突出寫作的要點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,介紹機(jī)器人的外觀;
第二步,具體闡述外星人的功能和特點(diǎn);
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①In addition除此以外
②various各種各樣的
③Science and Technology Festival科技節(jié)
[高分句型]
①ICAN has a round head and blue eyes, with long legs and arms.(with作伴隨狀語)
②We believe ICAN will be a great attraction at our Science and Technology Festival.(賓語從句)
9.(2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級廣州大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)??计谥校?br />
現(xiàn)代科技使得生活更加便捷,也讓我們的身邊有了很多的發(fā)明物。請以“The most important invention”為題,寫一篇短文。
要點(diǎn):
1. 介紹你認(rèn)為最重要的發(fā)明;
2. 指出其用途和你喜歡的原因;
3. 它對你有什么作用和影響。
提示詞:convenient便利,have an influence on…對……產(chǎn)生影響
要求:
1. 80個詞左右。標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi);
2. 必須包括以上全部要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名;
4.條理清楚,語句通順,意義連貫,書寫規(guī)范。
The most important invention
In our daily life, there are many inventions around us. But I think the most important invention is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
The most important invention
In our daily life, there are many inventions around us. But I think the most important invention is the Internet. Here are my reasons:
Firstly, the Internet has made our communication more convenient and efficient. We can communicate at anytime and anywhere through WeChat or QQ. Secondly, people can easily search for knowledge and information through the Internet. In addition, the Internet has a huge influence on our daily learning and work so that our work will be more effective.
For me, I often search for information about my study online. In my spare time, I will listen to music online to relax. The Internet is indeed one of the most important inventions.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時及一般將來時”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生注意不要遺漏,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),表述完整。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖,直入主題表述我認(rèn)為最重要的發(fā)明是什么;
第二步,表述這種發(fā)明的優(yōu)點(diǎn);
第三步,表述這種發(fā)明給我?guī)淼挠绊懀?br />
第四步,書寫結(jié)語,對文章做出總結(jié)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①search for搜索
②In addition此外
③have a huge influence on對……有巨大影響
[高分句型]
①But I think the most important invention is the Internet.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)
②In addition, the Internet has a huge influence on our daily learning and work so that our work will be more effective.(so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)
10.(2022秋·湖北武漢·八年級統(tǒng)考期中)
假設(shè)你是李芳,Alice是你最好的朋友。你想向大家介紹一下她。請你根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 比你小一歲,比你高;
2. 擅長寫作,想當(dāng)一個名記者;
3. 注重健康飲食,每周鍛煉三次;
4. 性格外向,學(xué)習(xí)努力,喜歡電影;
5. 請補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)相關(guān)內(nèi)容。
寫作要求:書寫整潔、整齊、清晰;表達(dá)通順流暢,不得逐字翻譯;篇幅80詞左右。
提示詞匯:exercise v. 鍛煉;reporter n. 記者;outgoing adj. 外向的
My name is Li Fang. Now let me introduce my best friend to you.
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I like to be friends with her.
【答案】例文
My name is Li Fang. Now let me introduce my best friend to you.
Her name is Alice. She is one year younger than me. And she is taller than me. She is very lovely. She is good at writing. When she grows up, she wants to be a reporter. She has a healthy eating habit. She likes eating vegetables and fruit because she thinks they are very healthy. She does sports three times a week. She is outgoing and always studies hard. She likes watching movies. She is helpful and always helps me with English study.
I like to be friends with her.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇記敘文,為材料作文;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,引出本文主題,介紹自己的最好朋友;
第二步,介紹朋友的情況,包括她的個人信息,愛好以及對她的評價。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be good at doing sth擅長做某事
②grow up長大
③do sports做運(yùn)動
[高分句型]
①Now let me introduce my best friend to you.(祈使句)
②She is one year younger than me.(形容詞比較級)
③When she grows up, she wants to be a reporter.(when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)
11.(2022秋·廣東深圳·八年級校考期中)
電腦已經(jīng)成為我們?nèi)粘I钪蟹浅V匾囊徊糠?,很多學(xué)生最近卻有所煩惱。假如你是學(xué)生會主席,你將在學(xué)校做演講,請寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
包含以下要點(diǎn):
1. 電腦的兩個用途。
2. 越來越多同學(xué)長時間玩電腦游戲,很累,頭疼,學(xué)習(xí)退步。
3. 你的建議:
① 用完電腦后要休息
② 可以做眼操,早點(diǎn)睡覺
③ ……(自行補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))
要求:
1. 內(nèi)容包含所提供的信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 提示詞:頭痛:have a headache;做眼操:do eye exercises;退步:fall behind
3. 80詞左右。
Good morning dear teachers and students,
Computers are very important in our daily lives.
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Thank you for listening.
Student Union
【答案】例文
Good morning dear teachers and students,
?????Computers are very important in our daily lives. We can now shop on home computers and study online. But computers also
bring some problems. More and more students play computer games for a long time. They are very tired, have a headache and
fall behind. I suggest we have a rest after using the computer. At the same time, you can do eye exercises every hour and go to
bed early. Try not to play games on the computer.
?????Thank you for listening.
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Student Union
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材:本文是一篇演講稿;
② 時態(tài):時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時;
③ 提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意要用第一人稱敘述,不要遺漏“提示信息”中電腦的用途和使用電腦的建議,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖。借用“計(jì)算機(jī)在我們今天的日常生活中是非常重要的?!眮硪鲋攸c(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容;
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“電腦的用途;長時間使用電腦給同學(xué)帶來的壞處;使用電腦的建議”幾方面重點(diǎn)介紹電腦的好處及壞處和如何正確使用電腦的具體情況;
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“希望大家能停止玩兒電腦游戲”的強(qiáng)烈愿望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①??in our daily lives在我們的日常生活中
②??study online在線學(xué)習(xí)
③??more and more越來越……
[高分句型]
①??I suggest we have a rest after using the computer. (賓語從句)
②??At the same time,you can do eye exercises every hour and go to bed early.(at the same time表示“同時”)
12.(2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級校聯(lián)考期中)
隨著電話手表( telephone watch)越來越流行,同學(xué)們對是否應(yīng)該使用電話手表進(jìn)行了討論。假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校英語社針對這一話題展開了問卷調(diào)查。請你寫一篇英語短文,簡要介紹此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果。需要包含以下要點(diǎn)。
調(diào)查結(jié)果
理由
37% 的學(xué)生喜歡電話手表
1、隨時隨地和父母、朋友聯(lián)系
2、為了我們的安全,父母可以知道我們的位置
63% 的學(xué)生不喜歡電話手表
1、可以玩游戲,浪費(fèi)時間
2、(請補(bǔ)充)
你的觀點(diǎn)
......(請補(bǔ)充 1~2 點(diǎn)理由)
要求:詞數(shù) 80 詞左右(短文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Recently, our school has done a survey about telephone watches.
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【答案】
例文
?????Recently, our school has done a survey about telephone watches. According to the survey, students hold different views towards telephone watches. Thirty-seven percent of the students like the watches because they think they can communicate with their parents and friends at any time with the watches. Also, they believe the watches make them safer as their parents can know their location with the help of the watches. However, sixty-three percent of the students dislike the watches. They argue that many students use the watches to play games, which waste much time. What's more, they think the watches are too expensive for students.As far as I am concerned, I like telephone watches because we just need to wear them around the wrist. It is very convenient and unlikely to get lost easily.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 時態(tài):時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時;
③ 提示:寫作內(nèi)容提示已給出,考生要注意不要遺漏內(nèi)容提示中的信息,并且要在內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,文章內(nèi)容更加豐滿。
[寫作步驟]
第一步:陳述很多學(xué)生對于電話手表持不同觀點(diǎn)。
第二步:陳述37%的學(xué)生喜歡電話手表及63%的學(xué)生不喜歡電話手表,并根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示,各自說明原因。尤其注意,在陳述不喜歡電話手表的原因時,要自己補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)。
第三步:闡述自己對于電話手表的觀點(diǎn),并說明自己持這種觀點(diǎn)的原因。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①According to...根據(jù)……
② hold different views towards...對……持不同觀點(diǎn)
③ communicate with...與……交流
④be unlikely to do sth.不可能做某事
[高分句型]
① Thirty-seven percent of the students like the watches because they think they can communicate with their parents and friends at any time with the watches. (because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)
② They argue that many students use the watches to play games, which waste much time.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
13.(2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級校考期中)
假如你是李華,周末你在最新一期的Future Tech電視欄目看到由空中客車(Air Bus)和意大利設(shè)計(jì)公司 Italdesign在全球首次共同推出的未來全自動概念車 Pop Up。請根據(jù)圖片和表格內(nèi)容,寫一篇文章介紹 Pop Up這款未來空中巴士,并說說你的看法。
Name
Pop up
What does it look like?
four wheels, three wings, a cabin(座艙)
What is special?
fly...the sky, run…the road; 補(bǔ)充一種功能
How does it work?
solar power
Your opinion
……
注意:
1.詞數(shù):100 詞左右(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必須包含上圖所提供的所有信息,可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
4.請?jiān)诖鹁硪?guī)定范圍內(nèi)寫作,超出范圍的內(nèi)容無效。
Recently, I watched a TV program—Future Tech and now I would like to introduce a new car.??
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【答案】范文:
Recently, I watched a TV program—Future Tech and now I would like to introduce a new car. Its name is Pop up, which has four wheels, three swings and a cabin. It is very special. It can not only fly in the sky but also run on the road. Besides, it can be used to take photos and people can talk with it. As a special bus, it is fast, and it is environmentally-friendly because it is driven by solar power. If it is used in our life, I will have two improvements. I will suggest the engineer use light irons of high quality to make the frame. I believe it will be very popular in the future.
【詳解】[整體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇說明文;
②時態(tài):采用一般現(xiàn)在時;
③提示:要求包含所有內(nèi)容,并談?wù)撟约旱目捶ā?br />
[寫作步驟]
第一步:介紹空中巴士的名字、外形、特別之處以及工作原理;
第二步:介紹自己的觀點(diǎn)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be used to被用來
②not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①Its name is Pop up, which has four wheels, three swings and a cabin.(非限制定語從句)
②I believe it will be very popular in the future.(賓語從句)
③If it is used in our life, I will have two improvements.(if條件句)
14. (2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級校考期中)
你校將新建新圖書館,學(xué)校英文報以“My Smart School Library”為題向?qū)W生征稿。請根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇短文投稿,介紹你所設(shè)計(jì)(design)的智能圖書館。
注意: 1. 可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息
2. 詞數(shù)70詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
My Smart School Library
I want to design a smart school library...
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【答案】例文
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????My Smart School Library
?????I want to design a smart school library. It is green. It is built entirely from renewable resources. It is round and very big. When you sit inside, you will feel very warm. It is composed of waste paper and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun. You can read all kinds of books in it. You can also listen to music in it. If you are tired, you can also rest inside.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材:本文是一篇記敘文,為材料作文;
② 時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③ 提示:根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇作文,介紹你所設(shè)計(jì)的智能圖書館。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,介紹智能圖書館的樣子;
第二步,具體闡述它是如何工作的;
第三步,最后介紹我們可以在那里做什么。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be composed of由……組成
②come from來自
③all kind of各種各樣的
[高分句型]
①When you sit inside, you will feel very warm.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)
②If you are tired, you can also rest inside.(if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)
15. (2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級??计谥校?br />
在當(dāng)今社會,智能手機(jī) (Smart phones) 被廣泛地運(yùn)用。對青少年來說,智能手機(jī)既有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn)。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文。
提示:
優(yōu)點(diǎn)
1. 比電腦小,攜帶方便 (convenient);
2. 可以用來打電話、聽音樂、看視頻 (videos)、玩游戲等;
3.(請你補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))
缺點(diǎn)
1. 長時間使用對眼睛有害;
2.(請你補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))
你的看法
發(fā)表你對“如何更好地使用智能手機(jī)”的看法;
1. 查字典,學(xué)習(xí)英語單詞;
2. 閱讀新聞;
3.(請你補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))
注意:
(1) 短文應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn);
(2) 詞數(shù) 100 個左右。短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
(3) 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息,否則不予評分。
Smarts phones are widely used in modern society. For teenagers, smart phones have advantages and disadvantages. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Smart phones are widely used in modern society. For teenagers, smart phones have advantages and disadvantages.
The advantages of smart phones are as follows. A smart phone is smaller than a computer, so it is more convenient to carry. And we can use smart phones to make phone calls, listen to music, watch videos and play games, which can relax ourselves. What’s more, smart phones have a lot of functions, such as taking photos, surfing the internet and so on. But they also have disadvantages, using smart phones for a long time is harmful to our eyes. And if we are addicted to games, our lives will be affected.
As far as I am concerned, we should make good use of smart phones. We can look up the dictionary and learn English words with them. In addition, we can read news on smart phones. Smart phones can be also used to wake us up on time. All in all, we should use smart phones properly.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 時態(tài):時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主;
③ 提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)中關(guān)于智能手機(jī)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)及自己個人對于“如何更好地使用智能手機(jī)”的看法;
[寫作步驟]
第一步,直接表明作文的主旨大意。以“現(xiàn)今智能手機(jī)被廣泛使用,智能手機(jī)有優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)”來引出作文的重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容;
第二步,具體闡述智能手機(jī)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。從“智能手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)——攜帶方便,可用來打電話、聽音樂、看視頻和玩游戲等,可拍照和上網(wǎng);缺點(diǎn)——長時間使用智能手機(jī)會傷眼,沉迷游戲”這兩方面來講述智能手機(jī)的好與不好;
第三步,表達(dá)自己個人對于如何更好地使用智能手機(jī)的看法。從“充分利用智能手機(jī)”來引出具體的建議——利用智能手機(jī)查字典、學(xué)英語單詞和閱讀新聞,把智能手機(jī)當(dāng)鬧鐘來使用。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① as follows如下
② make phone calls打電話
③ What’s more而且
④ surf the internet上網(wǎng)
⑤ be addicted to沉迷于
⑥ as far as I am concerned就我而言
⑦ look up查閱
⑧ in addition此外
⑨ wake sb. up叫醒某人
[高分句型]
① A smart phone is smaller than a computer, so it is more convenient to carry.(“it is+形容詞+to do sth.” 句型)
② But they also have disadvantages, using smart phones for a long time is harmful to our eyes.(動名詞作主語)
③ And if we are addicted to games, our lives will be affected.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)
④ As far as I am concerned, we should make good use of smart phones.(“make good use of sth.” 句型)
⑤ Smart phones can be also used to wake us up on time.(“sth. be used to do sth.” 句型)
16.(2022秋·河北石家莊·八年級石家莊外國語學(xué)校??计谥校?br />
親愛的同學(xué)們,升入八年級的你跟之前相比一定有了不少的變化,請根據(jù)以下表格的內(nèi)容和提示,介紹自己各方面的變化、現(xiàn)在的周末活動以及你的交友觀。
Aspects(方面)
Content (內(nèi)容)
Appearance and Personality
外表和性格
比以前更高;
更加外向;
……
Weekend activities
周末活動
認(rèn)真完成作業(yè);
鍛煉身體;
……
Opinions on making friends
交友觀
……
要求:
1.須包含所有內(nèi)容,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名;
3.詞數(shù)80詞左右。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My Change
After getting into Grade 8, I’ve changed a lot.
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【答案】例文:
My Change
After getting into Grade 8, I’ve changed a lot.
I am taller than before. I used to be shy and was afraid to talk to others. But now I am more outgoing and always ready to make new friends. I used to play computer games. But I am used to taking exercise and doing my homework carefully at weekends. They are good for my health and study. In the past, I wanted everyone to like me. But now I realize that not everyone can be friends. I would like to make friends with those who are positive and helpful.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇記敘文,為材料作文;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)綜合使用“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”;
③提示:要求以“My Change”為題,結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖,介紹自己跟之前相比有變化;
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容,從“外表和性格、周末活動和交友觀”幾個方面重點(diǎn)介紹。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①used to be過去曾經(jīng)是
②be afraid to do sth害怕做某事
③at weekends在周末
④make friends with和……交朋友
[高分句型]
①I used to be shy and was afraid to talk to others. (and連接并列結(jié)構(gòu))
②But now I realize that not everyone can be friends.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)
③I would like to make friends with those who are positive and helpful.(who引導(dǎo)的定語從句)
17.(2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級廣州市真光中學(xué)??计谥校?br />
假如你的發(fā)明——為老人設(shè)計(jì)的智能手表(a smart watch),獲得了成功,得到了很多人的好評,被推薦參加一個國際青少年科技展覽。
請用英語介紹你的發(fā)明,內(nèi)容包括下圖中的所有要點(diǎn)(參考詞匯在圖中已標(biāo)出),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
要求:1. 詞數(shù)不少于80詞(文章的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù))。
??2. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何信息,否則不予評分。
My invention
外觀
screen
用途
1. 定位
2. 請至少補(bǔ)充一個
價格
¥499
評價
★★★★★5.0 review 6899 buyers
你的感受
……
My invention is a smart watch for old people.
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【答案】例文:
My invention is a smart watch for old people. It’s simple and useful, and it is easy to control.
The watch is black and has a screen. In most cases, it shows the time and the weather condition as well.
The smart watch has many uses. First of all, it can accurately locate and display the detailed information of the location on the screen. Besides, it can quickly make emergency calls or contact family members when the elderly are in an emergency. What’s more, this smart watch can give out an alarm when it detects signs of high heart rate of the old people.
The price of this watch is only ¥499. It has received perfect 5.0 star review and 6899 buyers have posted favorable comments so far.
This watch is really helpful for the old people.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇說明文,屬于材料作文寫作;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③提示:文章開頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出,按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述,不要遺漏提示中的“你的感受”這一要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,承接短文開頭,簡要說明手表的特點(diǎn);
第二步,按照圖文提示,逐一說明智能手表的外觀,至少兩個用法,可列舉具體的使用場景,再介紹其價格及收到的評價;
第三步,表達(dá)自己對于這個產(chǎn)品的感受并書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①the detailed information of the location位置的詳細(xì)信息
②signs of sth……的跡象
③be helpful for對……來說有幫助
[高分句型]
①Besides, it can quickly make emergency calls or contact family members when the elderly are in an emergency.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)
18.(2022秋·江蘇南京·八年級??计谥校?br />
假設(shè)你是Moonlight Middle School的一名八年級的學(xué)生,學(xué)校正在舉行“暢想未來”的英語征文活動,請根據(jù)提示,以My ideal school life為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。
要求:
1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括提示中所有的信息,并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2. 開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。
My ideal school life
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【答案】例文:
My ideal school life
I’m a Grade 8 student. I have too much homework every day. I don’t have time for after-school activities. I think my school life is terrible.
I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful. During the rest of the time, I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful. There are many organizations and clubs in our school. I would like to join the organizations which I am interested in. Learning online is part of my school life, but the work is not much, and very easy. We often use emails to send our homework to the teacher. Our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind. Students will get along well with each other and help each other. Our school will have a school trip at least once a month. In this way, we will know more about the world. During my holidays, I want to be a volunteer to help others in need.
This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true someday.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇記敘文,為材料作文;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③提示:根據(jù)所給的思維導(dǎo)圖介紹“我理想的學(xué)校生活”,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,介紹自己并簡單評價自己現(xiàn)在的學(xué)校生活;
第二步,從“師生、學(xué)習(xí)方法、課后活動”來詳細(xì)介紹理想中的學(xué)校生活;
第三步,總結(jié)全文,表達(dá)期望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①too much太多
②would like to想要
③be interested in對……感興趣
④get along well with與……相處融洽
⑤at least至少
[高分句型]
①I think my school life is terrible.(省略that的賓語從句)
②I would like to join the organizations which I am interested in. Learning online is part of my school life(which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)
19.(2022秋·廣東深圳·八年級統(tǒng)考期中)
最近出現(xiàn)了許多手機(jī)買菜應(yīng)用軟件(application)。對于許多人來說,去超市買菜,備菜是一件耗時耗力的事,而手機(jī)買菜app給我們帶來了許多便利。假如你是李華,請你以“Online grocery apps”為題,寫一篇英語短文,介紹手機(jī)買菜app帶來的便利,讓外國人民了解我們生活中的這個新變化。
要點(diǎn)提示:
買菜app的特點(diǎn)
1. 菜品豐富;
2. 可以洗凈配好;
3. 預(yù)約送菜上門;
4.??(補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))。
對生活的影響
1.比起傳統(tǒng)購物,更節(jié)省時間;
2.(補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))
要求:
1. 必須包含以上所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,條理清楚,語意連貫;
2. 80 詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。
參考詞匯:order 訂購; pack 包裝 打包;convenience 便利
Online grocery apps
Online grocery apps are popular these days.
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【答案】例文
Online grocery apps
Online grocery apps are popular these days. For people who are busy at work, preparing meals is tiring because they may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, online grocery apps are here to help.
Online grocery apps bring us convenience. They provide us with meat, fish and vegetables, almost everything we need for a meal. Also, we can order whenever we like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If we like, vegetables and meat can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Besides, some online grocery apps can even teach us cooking skills, which makes cooking easier.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, online grocery apps save our time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, we can enjoy a more relaxing life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,注意不要遺漏“表格”中需自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,承接開頭,介紹人們買菜的現(xiàn)狀,引入主題;
第二步,具體介紹買菜應(yīng)用的特點(diǎn);
第三步,說明買菜應(yīng)用的好處和對生活的影響。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①provide sb with sth為某人提供某物
②get sth ready準(zhǔn)備好某物
③Compared with...與……相比
[高分句型]
①For people who are busy at work, preparing meals is tiring because they may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking.(who引導(dǎo)的定語從句,動名詞作主語,because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)
② If we like, vegetables and meat can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish.(if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句,含情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài))
20.(2022秋·廣東廣州·八年級西關(guān)外國語學(xué)校校考期中)
你校下周將舉行英語周活動。假如你是Li Hua,被推薦作為活動的發(fā)言人,請你根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇英語演講,向同學(xué)介紹一項(xiàng)重大發(fā)明——電腦。
要點(diǎn):
總體介紹
最偉大的發(fā)明之一、作用重要;
優(yōu)勢
網(wǎng)上購物;……(至少補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn));
不足
對健康的影響……
對學(xué)習(xí)的影響……
你的看法
……
注意:
1、文中不可出現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)姓名與學(xué)校名稱;
2、詞數(shù)80—100詞,文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3、內(nèi)容需包含全部要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to introduce an important invention to you.
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【答案】例文:
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to introduce an important invention to you.
The computer is one of the greatest inventions in the world. They have changed the world and played an important role in our daily life. People can shop online if they don’t want to go out. What’s more, they can help solve problems and make students learn more. Students can watch English videos and learn spoken English.
But there are some disadvantages. On one hand, using computer for a long time is bad for eyes. On the other hand, bad information on the Internet can affect students’ study easily.
In my opinion, it is important for us to use computers properly. Parents can manage students’ online time and content more.
That’s all! Thank you for your listening!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,為演講稿;
②時態(tài):時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中給出的關(guān)鍵信息,寫演講稿介紹一項(xiàng)偉大的發(fā)明——電腦。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,問候大家并引出演講的主題;
第二步,總體介紹電腦并介紹電腦的優(yōu)勢;
第三步,介紹電腦的不足;
第四步,發(fā)表自己的看法;
第五步,感謝大家的聆聽。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①play an important role 扮演著重要角色
②on one hand...on the other hand... 一方面……,另一方面……
③in one’s opinion 在某人看來
[高分句型]
①The computer is one of the greatest inventions in the world.(one of the+形容詞最高級+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù))
②People can shop online if they don’t want to go out.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)
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