?專題13 書(shū)面表達(dá)

1．（2022秋·江蘇連云港·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）你校英語(yǔ)廣播站組織七年級(jí)學(xué)生進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作比賽，主題為“我的房間”。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文投稿，談?wù)勀惴块g內(nèi)的物品及其位置，以及你用它們做什么。
提示句型：I have…in my room.
It’s in/on/behind…
I play/do…with it/them.
This is my room. It’s not very big.
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I like my room very much.

2．（2022秋·江蘇徐州·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）假如你是李華，你的同學(xué)Alice隨父母來(lái)徐州，兩個(gè)月來(lái)你們已經(jīng)成為好友。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格中的信息用英文寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于Alice的介紹。
Name
Alice
Nationality (國(guó)籍)
英國(guó)
Age
12
Looks
高且苗條，……
School
Woodland School, London, ……
Favourite subject
美術(shù)和數(shù)學(xué)
Hobby
各種運(yùn)動(dòng)，……
Feeling
同學(xué)老師對(duì)她很好
Hope
……
要求：
1.詞數(shù)80 詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2涵蓋表格中所有要點(diǎn)，省略號(hào)處請(qǐng)?jiān)黾蛹?xì)節(jié)信息；
3文中不得提及真實(shí)校名、人名等信息。
Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my new friend to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3．（2021秋·江蘇鹽城·七年級(jí)?？计谥校┘偃缒憬蠱ike, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格中的信息進(jìn)行自我介紹。
Name
Mike
Age
12
Looks
tall and strong, big eyes, short hair
Be good at
English—speak English well
Hobbies
reading—read a lot of interesting books
football—play football twice a week
要求：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。????
2. 意思連貫，語(yǔ)言通順。
3. 注意分段和書(shū)寫(xiě)。4. 字?jǐn)?shù)：60詞左右。
This is me
Hello, my name is Mike. ____________________________________________________________________
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4．（2021秋·江蘇鎮(zhèn)江·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）升入初中已經(jīng)半學(xué)期了，假如你是Daniel，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，向你的筆友Andy介紹你的新朋友和你的學(xué)校生活。
新朋友
姓名
Simon
外貌
13歲，戴眼鏡，短發(fā)；
愛(ài)好
熱愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)，是校足球俱樂(lè)部的成員；
學(xué)校情況
1.校園很美麗，不大，但很干凈；
2.每天八節(jié)課；所有科目都很有趣，最喜愛(ài)的是英語(yǔ)；
3.同學(xué)友好，課后經(jīng)常一起……；
感受
在學(xué)?？偸呛荛_(kāi)心；愿望……；
要求：
1. 文章內(nèi)容包含表中所有要點(diǎn)，省略部分適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 詞數(shù)86詞左右，文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3. 語(yǔ)義通順，意思連貫，條理清晰，字跡工整。
4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名，校名及地名。
Dear Andy,
I’d like to tell you something about my school life. _______________________________________________
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????All the best,
Daniel

5．（2022秋·江蘇泰州·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）根據(jù)下面所給的信息提示，以“My Friend Millie”為題寫(xiě)一篇90 詞左右的文章介紹你的朋友Millie。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示：1.個(gè)人基本情況。
2.學(xué)習(xí)及交友情況。
3.愛(ài)好及特長(zhǎng)。
4.夢(mèng)想。
要求：
1.內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，已給出的詞，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。
My Friend Millie
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6．（2021秋·江蘇揚(yáng)州·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）根據(jù)下列表格中的信息，以“My good friend”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。
要求：
1、表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2、必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3、不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、地名等；
4、80詞左右。
姓名
??Linda
年齡
13
外貌特征
又高又苗條，留長(zhǎng)發(fā)，戴眼鏡
學(xué)校情況
學(xué)校小但漂亮；住得離學(xué)校遠(yuǎn)，每天乘車去學(xué)校。
特長(zhǎng)和愛(ài)好
喜歡所有功課，數(shù)學(xué)最好；喜歡看書(shū)，喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，擅長(zhǎng)打排球。
理想
……
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7．（2022秋·江蘇鹽城·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）你的好朋友Lucy是一名來(lái)自英國(guó)的交換生，請(qǐng)你以下表中的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿向大家介紹一下Lucy。
Name
Lucy
Age
13
School
Woodland School,??good at all subjects
Looks
pretty, tall and slim, long hair, glasses
Hobbies
love sports, volleyball, ...
Dream
...
要求：1.包含全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名及姓名；
3.開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；??
4.詞數(shù)控制在80詞左右。
My good friend
Hello, everyone! Today I will introduce my good friend Lucy to you. ________________________________
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8．（2021秋·江蘇淮安·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）假設(shè)你是Ann，你的美國(guó)筆友Alice將作為交流生在你們班學(xué)習(xí)一段時(shí)間。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿介紹Alice，讓你的同學(xué)更好地了解她。演講稿需包含以下要點(diǎn)：
1、Alice今年13歲，高而苗條，長(zhǎng)頭發(fā)，戴眼鏡；
2、最喜歡的學(xué)科是英語(yǔ)和歷史；沒(méi)有太多的家庭作業(yè)，放學(xué)后有時(shí)間進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)；
3、熱愛(ài)排球，郎平(Lang Ping)是她的偶像，想成為校排球俱樂(lè)部的一員；希望她夢(mèng)想成真。
要求:??1、內(nèi)容完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2、80詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hello, everyone! I would like to tell you something about my pen friend Alice.
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9．（2022秋·江蘇鹽城·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）假如你是Millie，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的信息，寫(xiě)一封信告訴你的筆友Tommy有關(guān)你的一些情況。
個(gè)人情況
13歲，高且苗條，喜歡排球，經(jīng)?！?br /> 學(xué)校設(shè)施
陽(yáng)光中學(xué)，不大，三棟教學(xué)樓……
校園生活
老師……，同學(xué)……，喜歡……，不喜歡……
其他
……
要求：
1. 表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2. 必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 90詞左右（開(kāi)頭巳給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），不得使用真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校和地名等。
Dear Tommy,
I’m Millie._______________________________________________________________________________
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All the best,
Millie

10．（2022秋·江蘇淮安·七年級(jí)洪澤外國(guó)語(yǔ)中學(xué)校聯(lián)考期中）假如你是一個(gè)叫李明的中學(xué)生，最近新交了一位叫 Paul的美國(guó)筆友。為了彼此更好地了解，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)信告訴他有關(guān)你的情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫(xiě)一篇不少于70詞的短文。
提示：
1.我叫李明。我14歲，來(lái)自7年級(jí)1班。我最喜歡的學(xué)科……因?yàn)椤?br /> 2.我來(lái)自淮安。我家離學(xué)校不遠(yuǎn)，我每天走路上學(xué)。
3.我在籃球俱樂(lè)部。放學(xué)后，我經(jīng)常和同學(xué)練習(xí)打籃球。我還有其他一些興趣愛(ài)好如……
4.我很友好，因此我有許多朋友。我希望我們也能成為朋友。
Dear Paul,
I’m very glad to have a pen pal like you. Now let me introduce myself.
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Yours,
Li Ming

11．（2021秋·江蘇南京·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）假如你是來(lái)自英國(guó)的Jenny，今年來(lái)到南京新華中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。你在美國(guó)的朋友Mary 給你寫(xiě)了一封信，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容給她寫(xiě)一封回信。
要求：
????（1）詞數(shù)70詞左右；
????（2）回答Mary的所有問(wèn)題并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
????（3）文中不得提及真實(shí)校名、人名等信息。
Dear Jenny,
Long time no see. Can you tell me something about your life in Nanjing?
Who is your best friend in your class? What is he/she like?
What is your favourite subject and why?
Please write to me soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mary
Dear Mary,
Thanks for your letter.
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Best wishes,
Jenny

12．（2022秋·江蘇鹽城·七年級(jí)校聯(lián)考期中）假如你叫林濤，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，向你的筆友西蒙介紹自己的情況。字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右，不必逐句翻譯，郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
姓名
林濤
年齡：13歲
學(xué)校：陽(yáng)光中學(xué)
班級(jí)：七年級(jí)一班
外貌
短發(fā)、高個(gè)、看起來(lái)強(qiáng)壯。
學(xué)校
學(xué)校很現(xiàn)代。老師們友好，學(xué)科有趣。每天放學(xué)后做課外活動(dòng)。經(jīng)常和同學(xué)們一起打籃球和互相聊天。
我住得離學(xué)校遠(yuǎn)，每天花半小時(shí)騎自行車上學(xué)。
愛(ài)好
空余時(shí)間聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，音樂(lè)使我開(kāi)心。
我最喜歡中秋節(jié)，因?yàn)槲铱梢猿栽嘛灪唾p滿月。
我籃球打得好，是?；@球隊(duì)的一名成員。我在學(xué)校很開(kāi)心。
夢(mèng)想
想成為一名籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員，希望夢(mèng)想能成真。
Dear Simon,
Now I’d like to tell you something about myself. _________________________________________________
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Best wishes,
Lin Tao

13．（2021秋·江蘇宿遷·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）新學(xué)期，全國(guó)中小學(xué)迎來(lái)了“雙減”政策。假如你是李華。你的外國(guó)筆友Anne想通過(guò)郵件了解你在學(xué)校的新生活。請(qǐng)根據(jù)他郵件中提出的問(wèn)題回復(fù)郵件。Anne 郵件中的問(wèn)題：
When does your school start and finish?
What subjects do you study at school? What’s your favorite subject and why?
How long do you often spend on your homework every day?
Are there any after-school activities and clubs in your school? What are they?
...
要求：
1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 涵蓋所有問(wèn)題，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)信息；省略號(hào)部分需自由發(fā)揮；
3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)校名、人名等信息。
Dear Anne,
I am happy to hear from you. There is a “double-reduction policy in our country. So there are many changes in our school life. I’d like to tell you something about my new school life. __________________________________
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What is your life like? I’d like to know more about you. Please write back.
Yours,
Li Hua

14．（2021秋·江蘇揚(yáng)州·七年級(jí)校聯(lián)考期中）假如你是Simon，新交了一個(gè)英國(guó)的網(wǎng)友Daniel，他給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想詢問(wèn)你的一些情況。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)郵件中的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)。
Dear Simon,
I’m so happy to have you as my friend. I really want to know something about you. What do you look like? What is your school like? Do you like your teachers or classmates? What is your favourite subject? What do you usually do after school? What is your hobby? Oh, I can’t wait to hear from you. Please tell me everything about you.
All the best!
Daniel
Simon的個(gè)人信息：
1. 陽(yáng)光中學(xué)(Sunshine Middle School)初一學(xué)生，個(gè)子高且強(qiáng)壯，戴眼鏡；
2. 擅長(zhǎng)……，放學(xué)后每天打半小時(shí)籃球；
3. 愛(ài)好……，因?yàn)椤?br /> 注意事項(xiàng)：
1. 英文郵件必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，其余部分可根據(jù)自身情況合理自由發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右，郵件的首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
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15．（2021秋·江蘇鹽城·七年級(jí)校聯(lián)考期中）進(jìn)入初中生活和學(xué)習(xí)已兩個(gè)多月了，假如你是Millie，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖表，給你的網(wǎng)友Sandy寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀愕膶W(xué)習(xí)及生活情況。
1.????語(yǔ)句通順，省略號(hào)部分適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.????不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和姓名。
3.????開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾均已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），詞數(shù)80左右。

自身情況
喜歡各門(mén)學(xué)科
擅長(zhǎng)數(shù)學(xué)和籃球
學(xué)校籃球隊(duì)一員
學(xué)校生活
朋友多，師生友好
經(jīng)常從圖書(shū)館借書(shū)，因?yàn)橄胍私狻?br /> 每天在操場(chǎng)做早操，幫我們做好一天的準(zhǔn)備
課后做游戲、聊天
自身感受
學(xué)校生活很……
Dear Sandy,
How are you?
I’m now studying at Sunshine Middle School. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
????What about your school life? Please e-mail me soon!
Yours,
Millie

參考答案：
1．例文
This is my room. It’s not very big. But it’s tidy. I have a computer in my room. It’s on the desk. I usually use it to look up some information. Sometimes, I use it to play computer games. I have a football in my room. It’s under my chair. I like playing football best. I usually play it with my friends on weekends. I have a shelf in my room. There are some books on the shelf. I like reading. I think reading can make me feel relaxed. I like my room very much.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，概括房間的情況；
第二步，分別介紹房間的物品擺放位置以及用它干什么；
第三步，表達(dá)對(duì)自己房間的喜歡。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①look up查詢
②use sth to do sth用某物做某事
③on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①There are some books on the shelf.（there be句型）
②I think reading can make me feel relaxed.（賓語(yǔ)從句，動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)）
2．
例文：
Hello, everyone! I’d like to introduce my new friend to you. She is Alice. She is a twelve-year-old girl who comes from England. She is tall and slim. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. She once studied at Woodland School in London. It is a beautiful school. Her favorite subjects are math and art, because she thinks they are useful and interesting. As for her hobby, she enjoys doing different kinds of sports. She is especially good at playing volleyball. Now she comes to Xuzhou with her parents, teachers and students here are kind to her. She hopes to learn Chinese well so that she can communicate with her classmates fluently.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；
③ 提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生要注意表格中的省略號(hào)處，需要學(xué)生自行發(fā)揮出細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹Alice的基本情況，如姓名、籍貫、年齡和外貌等；
第二步，介紹Alice喜歡的科目和愛(ài)好；
第三步，介紹Alice當(dāng)前的感受和她的愿望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① come from 來(lái)自
② useful 有用的
③ interesting 有趣的
④ be good at 擅長(zhǎng)……
⑤ be kind to 對(duì)……友好
[高分句型]
① She is a twelve-year-old girl who comes from England.（定語(yǔ)從句）
② Her favorite subjects are math and art, because she thinks they are useful and interesting.（原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
③ She hopes to learn Chinese well so that she can communicate with her classmates fluently.（目的狀語(yǔ)從句）
3．例文：
This is me
Hello, my name is Mike. I am 12 years old. I’m tall and strong. I have two big eyes and short hair.
I am in Class 3, Grade 4. My favorite subject is English, because I like singing English songs. I am good at English. I can speak English well.
I have many hobbies. I like reading best, because reading makes me happy. I often read a lot of interesting books on weekends. I like playing football. I play football with my friends twice a week. Exercise makes us strong.
This is me. Do you like me?
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為自我介紹；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：根據(jù)所給表格信息介紹自己。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，分段進(jìn)行介紹。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己的姓名，年齡和外貌；
第二步，介紹自己的班級(jí)，喜歡和擅長(zhǎng)的學(xué)科；
第三步，介紹自己的愛(ài)好。
第四步，寫(xiě)結(jié)束語(yǔ)，這就是我。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① be good at擅長(zhǎng)????
② my favorite subject我最喜歡的學(xué)科????
③ twice a week一周兩次
[高分句型]
① I like reading best, because reading makes me happy.（“because”引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
② I like playing football.（動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）
4．[例文]
Dear Andy,
I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
First, I want to introduce my new friend to you. His name is Simon and he is thirteen years old. He has short black hair and wears glasses. He loves sports and he is in the school soccer club now. He is outgoing and hard-working. Do you want to make friends with him? We can play together.
As for my school, I really like it. It isn’t big but it is beautiful and clean. We have eight classes every day. I like all the subjects because they are all interesting. Of course, my favorite subject is English. My classmates are friendly and we often play games together after class. So I am always happy in the school. I want to be a teacher when I grow up to keep my happiness.
All the best, I hope you are happy like me every day.
Daniel
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中省略號(hào)部分，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山提出要向?qū)Ψ浇榻B學(xué)校生活；
第二步，首先向?qū)Ψ浇榻B新朋友的具體情況；
第三步，具體介紹自己的學(xué)校生活，及感受和愿望；
第四步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，提出祝福。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① introduce...to sb.向某人介紹……
② short black hair短的黑頭發(fā)
③ in the school soccer club在學(xué)校足球俱樂(lè)部
④ as for至于
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi) like all the subjects because they are all interesting. (含有原因狀語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句)
② I want to be a teacher when I grow up to keep my happiness. (動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ))
5．例文：
My friend Millie is 13 years old. She is tall and slim and her hair is long. Everyone thinks she is pretty. Millie studies at Sunshine Middle School. She walks to school every day.??
Millie is a good student at school. She likes all her lessons and works hard. She is good at all the subjects. Millie is very kind. She has a lot of friends. After class, they often chat with each other or play in the playground. Millie is happy at school.
Millie loves playing volleyball very much. She practices playing volleyball after school every day. Millie also loves drawing and she really does well in it. She can draw very beautiful pictures.
Millie wants to be an artist when she grows up. I hope her dream comes true.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹朋友的個(gè)人基本信息；
第二步，介紹朋友的學(xué)習(xí)及交友情況；
第三步，介紹朋友的愛(ài)好及特長(zhǎng)；
第四步，介紹朋友的夢(mèng)想。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① walk to school步行上學(xué)
② be good at擅長(zhǎng)于
③ practice doing sth練習(xí)做某事
[高分句型]
① Everyone thinks she is pretty.（賓語(yǔ)從句）
② Millie wants to be an artist when she grows up.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）
6．例文：
My good friend
Linda is my good friend. She is a kind and friendly girl. She is thirteen years old. She is tall and thin. Her hair is long and she wears glasses.
Her school is small but beautiful. She lives far from school, so she goes to school by bus every day.
She likes all the subjects, and math is the best. She likes reading and she likes doing sports. She is good at playing volleyball. She has a lot of friends. All of us like her.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)“表格內(nèi)容”介紹我最好的朋友Linda。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，開(kāi)篇先介紹自己最好的朋友是Linda，并描述她的外貌特征；
第二步，介紹Linda的學(xué)校情況；
第三步，描述Linda的特長(zhǎng)和愛(ài)好，并收尾。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①wear glasses戴眼鏡
②far from遠(yuǎn)離
③go to school去學(xué)校
④be good at擅長(zhǎng)
[高分句型]
She lives far from school, so she goes to school by bus every day.（ 含so的并列復(fù)合句）
7．例文
My good friend
Hello, everyone! Today I will introduce my good friend Lucy to you. She is 13 years old. She is a student at Woodland School and good at all the subjects. She looks pretty. She is tall and slim. She has long hair and wears a pair of glasses.
She has many hobbies. She love sports. Her favourite sport is volleyball. She often practises it with her friends at weekends. Playing sports is fun and makes her feel happy.
She has a dream. She wants to be a good volleyball player in the future. I hope her dream can come true.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；
③提示：根據(jù)題干中的提示信息介紹自己的朋友，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹朋友的名字、年齡、學(xué)校以及相貌；
第二步，介紹朋友的愛(ài)好；
第三步 ，介紹朋友的夢(mèng)想。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be good at擅長(zhǎng)
②at weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①Playing sports is fun and makes her feel happy.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))
②I hope her dream can come true.(賓語(yǔ)從句)
8．范文
Hello, everyone! I would like to tell you something about my pen friend Alice.
Alice is a 14-year-old girl. She is tall and slim. She has long hair and wears glasses. Her favorite subjects are English and geography. She doesn’t have much homework to do, so she has a lot of time to play sports after school. Of all the sports, she likes volleyball best, and Lang Ping is her idol. She wants to be a member of the school volleyball club. I hope her dream will come true.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為演講稿；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：文章的開(kāi)頭及寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，請(qǐng)按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，包括Alice的基本信息，喜歡的科目、喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)、偶像和夢(mèng)想；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，是文章內(nèi)容完整。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，開(kāi)頭引出話題；
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，介紹Alice的個(gè)人信息、外貌、喜歡的科目、運(yùn)動(dòng)和偶像以及Alice的夢(mèng)想；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，祝愿Alice夢(mèng)想成真。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①a 14-year-old girl一個(gè)14歲的女孩
②come true實(shí)現(xiàn)，成為現(xiàn)實(shí)
[高分句型]
①She doesn’t have much homework to do, so she has a lot of time to play sports after school.（并列連詞so連接兩個(gè)句子）
9．例文
Dear Tommy,
I’m Millie. Let me tell you something about me.
I’m 13 years old. I am tall and slim. I like playing volleyball and I often practice playing it with my friends on Wednesday afternoon. I study at Sunshine Middle School now. It is not big. We have three classroom buildings. There is also a bright and modern library in my school. I can borrow all kinds of books from it. Our teachers and classmates are all kind to me. The subjects are interesting. I can learn a lot about the world from them. We sometimes have too much homework. I don’t like it. I live near the school. It takes me about ten minutes to walk to school every day.
That’s my life. What do you think?
All the best,
Millie
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“我的個(gè)人情況，學(xué)校情況以及學(xué)校生活的介紹”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“我是米莉。”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“我的個(gè)人信息，我學(xué)校的情況以及我的學(xué)校生活”重點(diǎn)介紹我的具體情況；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“你覺(jué)得怎么樣？”
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① all kinds of 各種各樣的
② too much太多
[高分句型]
① There is also a bright and modern library in my school.（there be句型）
② It takes me about ten minutes to walk to school every day.（it的固定句式“It takes sb some time to do sth.”表示“做某事花費(fèi)某人一些時(shí)間”）
10．例文
Dear Paul,
I’m very glad to have a pen pal like you. Now let me introduce myself.
My name is Li Ming. I’m from Huai’an. I’m fourteen years old. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. My favorite subject is English because I think it is very interesting. My home is not far from school so I walk to school every day. I’m in the basketball club. After school, I often practice playing basketball with my classmates. I have some other hobbies, such as drawing and swimming.
I am friendly, so I have many friends. And I hope we can be friends, too.
Yours,
Li Ming
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書(shū)信作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]

第一步，介紹自己的基本情況；
第二步，介紹自己的上學(xué)方式和愛(ài)好；
第三步，表達(dá)想和對(duì)方成為朋友的希望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be from來(lái)自
②far from遠(yuǎn)離
③practice doing sth練習(xí)做某事
[高分句型]
①M(fèi)y favorite subject is English because I think it is very interesting.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
②And I hope we can be friends, too.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）
11．例文
Dear Mary,
?????Thanks for your letter. I live in a family in Nanjing. They are very kind to me. They often cook delicious food for me. My best friend is Xiao Hui. She has long hair and big eyes. She often helps me learn Chinese. Chinese is my favorite subject. Because I think it’s very interesting and helpful. Sometimes I go to the park with my classmates. I am very happy with them.
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Best wishes
Jenny
【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文，根據(jù)Mary寫(xiě)信的內(nèi)容給她回一封信。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱以第一人稱為主。寫(xiě)作時(shí)根據(jù)信里Mary的問(wèn)題一一作答，保證語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
12．例文
Dear Simon,
Now I’d like to tell you something about myself. My name is Lin Tao. I am 13 years old. I am in Class 1, Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School. I am tall and I have short hair. I look strong.
My school is very modern. The teachers are all nice to us. All the subjects are interesting. We have many after-school activities. I often play basketball with my classmates and chat with each other. I live far away from my school. It takes me about half an hour to go to school every day.
I have many hobbies. I enjoy listening to music in my free time. It makes me happy. My favourite festival is Mid-Autumn Festival. I can have a big dinner and enjoy the full moon. I am good at playing basketball. I am a member of the school basketball team.
I want to be a basketball player in the future. I hope my dream can come true.
Best wishes,
Lin Tao
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：根據(jù)題干中的提示內(nèi)容介紹自己的情況，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，引出話題；
第二步，介紹自己的基本信息、外貌、學(xué)校情況、愛(ài)好等；
第三步，介紹自己的夢(mèng)想。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①far away from離……遠(yuǎn)
②in my free time在我空閑時(shí)間
③be good at擅長(zhǎng)
④come true實(shí)現(xiàn)
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi)t takes me about half an hour to go to school every day.(it固定句型)
②I hope my dream can come true.(賓語(yǔ)從句)
13．例文
Dear Anne,
I am happy to hear from you. There is a “double-reduction” policy in our country. So there are many changes in our school life. I’d like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at 8 a.m. and finishes at 5 p.m. We don’t have to go to school too early. We have Chinese, Math, English, Geography and so on. My favourtie subject is Geography because I can learn about the world. I’m also good at it.
Now we don’t have too much homework to do. We only spend about one hour on it every day and we don’t have lessons on weekends. So we have lots of time for our hobbies. There are different kinds of clubs and after-school activities in our school. We can play badminton, basketball, or volleyball with our classmates in our free time. We can also go to our Reading Club, Swimming club and Art Club after school.
I think my school life is interesting and meaningful. I enjoy it now.
What is your school life like? I’d like to know more about it. Please write back.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：根據(jù)Anne郵件中提出的問(wèn)題給她回復(fù)郵件，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹你的學(xué)校開(kāi)始和結(jié)束時(shí)間；
第二步，介紹你在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)的科目以及你最喜歡的科目及其理由；
第三步，介紹你每天花費(fèi)在作業(yè)上的時(shí)間以及你學(xué)校的課后活動(dòng)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①learn about了解
②different kinds of各種各樣的
③be good at擅長(zhǎng)
[高分句型]
①M(fèi)y favourtie subject is Geography because I can learn about the world.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
②We only spend about one hour on it every day and we don’t have lessons on weekends.（and連接兩個(gè)并列結(jié)構(gòu)）
14．范文
Dear Daniel,
I’m very glad to hear from you. And I’m happy to tell you everything about me.
I am thirteen years old. I am in Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School. I’m tall and strong and I wear glasses. My school is big and beautiful and all my classmates and teachers are kind. I like them very much. My favorite subject is English. I have many good friends at school, so I play basketball for half an hour with them after school every day. My hobby is reading books because I am interested in different cultures. I often borrow books about culture from the school library.
This is me. How about you? Can you tell me something about you? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Simon
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏，根據(jù)所給的Simon的個(gè)人信息來(lái)回答題干表格中Daniel提出的問(wèn)題。可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，點(diǎn)明“介紹自己”的寫(xiě)作主題；
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，依據(jù)所給的Simon的個(gè)人信息來(lái)回答題干表格中Daniel提出的問(wèn)題，包括樣貌、學(xué)校、學(xué)習(xí)、興趣和愛(ài)好等；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，希望Daniel介紹自己的個(gè)人信息。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①hear from收到……的來(lái)信
②be interested in對(duì)……感興趣
[高分句型]
①M(fèi)y hobby is reading books because I am interested in different cultures.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
15．例文：
Dear Sandy,
How are you?
I’m now studying at Sunshine Middle School. I like all my lessons. I’m good at maths and basketball. I’m a member of the school basketball team. I have many friends at school. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I often borrow books from the school library because I want to learn a lot about the world. We do morning exercises in the playground every day. They help us get ready for the day. I often play games and chat with my friends after class.
I think my school life is interesting. I always have a good time at school.
What about your school life? Please e-mail me soon!
Yours,
Millie
【詳解】1. 題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)及生活情況，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。
2. 寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要與已給出的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾融合起來(lái)，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱、第三人稱來(lái)介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。




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