?邀請信
1．假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生朋友peter想通過了解中國傳統(tǒng)的娛樂活動(dòng)學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封邀請信，邀請 Peter一起逛廟會(huì)，同時(shí)了解中國文化。內(nèi)容包括:
(1)逛廟會(huì)的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)；
(2)介紹廟會(huì)的傳統(tǒng)文化形式。
注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右；
(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:廟會(huì) temple fair；泥塑 clay figurines。
Dear Peter,
In your letter, you mentioned that you wanted to learn Chinese by learning Chinese traditional entertainment activities.??________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Linda很喜歡中國絲綢。正巧你市于4月20日至26日舉行“中國絲綢文化節(jié)”，你想邀請她同去，請你給她寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
(1)寫信目的；
(2)介紹文化節(jié)（主題、展覽品、意義等）；
(3)約定見面時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)。
注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；
(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Linda,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李華，假期在英國旅游時(shí)得到導(dǎo)游Peter的幫助，回來后給他寫一封郵件表達(dá)謝意。
主要內(nèi)容：1．回憶旅行中的難忘經(jīng)歷；
2．表示感謝并邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李華，為了資助學(xué)校的貧困學(xué)生，你校將舉行一次愛心義賣活動(dòng)（charity sale）,請你給外教Mr.Smith寫一封電子郵件，邀請他參加，內(nèi)容包括：
1、義賣的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)
2、義賣內(nèi)容（捐贈(zèng)物品或者購買物品）
3、期待回復(fù)
注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li hua
5．假定你是李華，學(xué)生會(huì)主席。你校和英國某中學(xué)是友好學(xué)校。對方學(xué)校將舉辦“中國文化周”，邀請你校派學(xué)生參加。請你給負(fù)責(zé)該項(xiàng)目的老師Jason寫一封電子郵件表示感謝邀請并詢問相關(guān)事宜。內(nèi)容如下：
1. 活動(dòng)開始時(shí)間；
2. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；
3. 學(xué)生住宿安排。
注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Jason,
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6．假定你是李華，你校上周剛舉辦了“漢服節(jié)”（the Hanfu Festival）活動(dòng)，你的外國朋友Peter對此非常感興趣，請你給他寫封信。信的內(nèi)容包括：
1. 活動(dòng)的目的：了解漢服，傳承傳統(tǒng)文化；
2. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容安排：主題講座，漢服舞蹈表演等；
3. 活動(dòng)在同學(xué)中引起的反響。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Peter.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Alex要到你家鄉(xiāng)的城市來玩耍，你先要寫封郵件向他介紹你家鄉(xiāng)的城市。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
① 邀請并歡迎Alex到你家鄉(xiāng)的城市來；
② 這個(gè)城市的地理位置，面積，人口， 歷史， 名勝， 名小吃， 風(fēng)土人情；
③ 希望他早日到來并祝愿旅途愉快。
3. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Alex,
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Yours
Li Hua
8．假定你是中華中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校將于6月28日在和諧湖舉行龍舟賽，請給友好學(xué)校復(fù)興中學(xué) (Fuxing High School) 寫一封邀請信。
信的內(nèi)容包括：（1）寫信目的；（2）活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和意義；（3）回復(fù)時(shí)間：2021年6月25日前。
注意：（1）詞數(shù)120字左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李華，你市圖書館將播放關(guān)于中國茶文化的紀(jì)錄片。你的外教Mr．Smith是中國茶文化的愛好者，請給他寫一封郵件，邀請他一起觀看。內(nèi)容包括：
1．播放時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；
2．紀(jì)錄片的主要內(nèi)容。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：紀(jì)錄片documentary
Dear Mr．Smith，
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Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
10．假定你是李華，你校即將舉辦"我和我的祖國"英語演講比賽。請給你校外籍教師James 寫一封電子郵件，告知他演講比賽的有關(guān)內(nèi)容，并邀請他當(dāng)評委。要點(diǎn)包括：
1.比賽的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；
2.舉辦此活動(dòng)的目的和意義；
3.誠摯邀請他擔(dān)任評委。
注意： 1.詞數(shù) 100 左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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1．Dear Peter,
In your letter, you mentioned that you wanted to learn Chinese by learning Chinese traditional entertainment activities. I take great pleasure in recommending you to visit the Chinese temple fair. I invite you to go with me to temple fair in Shanghai next Saturday.
For Chinese, attending a temple fair comes second only to the family reunion dinner when it comes to Chinese New Year observances. On the temple fair, you can get to know paper-cuts and clay figurines. What's more, folk performances including lion dances, crosstalk and kung fu performances, and so on, may be performed. You can enjoy yourself as well as learn Chinese.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封邀請信，邀請 Peter一起逛廟會(huì)，同時(shí)了解中國文化。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。
要求：
1. 逛廟會(huì)的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)；
2. 介紹廟會(huì)的傳統(tǒng)文化形式。
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
take great pleasure; recommend; reunion dinner; observance; paper-cut; clay figurine; enjoy oneself;??look forward to
第三步：連詞成句
1. I take great pleasure in recommending you to visit the Chinese temple fair.
2. attending a temple fair comes second only to the family reunion dinner when it comes to Chinese New Year observances
3. On the temple fair, you can get to know paper-cuts and clay figurines.
4.What's more, folk performances including lion dances, crosstalk and kung fu performances, and so on, may be performed.
5.You can enjoy yourself as well as learn Chinese.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more,??including
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供參考）
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] . I take great pleasure in recommending you to visit the Chinese temple fair. . 我很高興推薦你參觀中國廟會(huì)。（運(yùn)用動(dòng)名詞作賓語）
[高分句型2]For Chinese, attending a temple fair comes second only to the family reunion dinner when it comes to Chinese New Year observances. 對中國人來說，在春節(jié)慶祝活動(dòng)中，參加廟會(huì)僅次于吃團(tuán)圓飯。（運(yùn)用動(dòng)名詞短語作主語和固定句式when it comes to）
2．Dear Linda,
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.
Its theme is "China surprises the world with splendid silk". At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.Not only can we broaden our horizons at the festival but also we are more likely to make a quantity of friends from diverse backgrounds.
Would it be convenient for you to come if we meet at 9 a.m. on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall? I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國朋友Linda寫封郵件，因她喜歡中國絲綢，邀請她同去參觀市里于4月20日至26日舉辦的 “中國絲綢文化節(jié)”。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí),少量現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)。
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：
1. 寫信目的；
2. 介紹文化節(jié)；
1）主題
2）展覽品
3）意義
3. 約定見面時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)。
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
be interested in Chinese silk; a Chinese Silk Culture Festival; from April 20th to 26th; its theme; "China surprises the world with splendid silk"; the knowledge of silk history; various delicate silk products; some elegant silk dresses; broaden our horizons; make a quantity of friends; meet at 9 a.m. on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall
第三步：連詞成句
1. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.
2. Its theme is "China surprises the world with splendid silk".
3. At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.
4. Not only can we broaden our horizons at the festival but also we are more likely to make a quantity of friends from diverse backgrounds.
5. Would it be convenient for you to come if we meet at 9 a.m. on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall?
6. I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）（供參考）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)
[高分句型2] At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.（介詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）
[高分句型3] Not only can we broaden our horizons at the festival but also we are more likely to make a quantity of friends from diverse backgrounds.（半倒裝句）
3．Dear Peter,
???I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was travelling in England during my vacation.
???It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British culture and have a wonderful time there. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice in choosing gifts for my family.
???Thanks again for all your efforts! I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給導(dǎo)游Peter寫封郵件，表達(dá)對于在英國旅游期間Peter給與幫助的謝意，并邀請他來家鄉(xiāng)。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，少量使用一般將來時(shí)。
結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段表達(dá)感謝；第二段描述旅途回憶；第三段提出邀請。
要求：
1. 表達(dá)感謝；
2. 回憶旅行中的難忘經(jīng)歷；
3. 表示感謝并邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)。
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
express my heartfelt gratitude; during summer vacation; enable sb. to do; have a deeper insight into; have a wonderful time; be deeply impressed by; catch a cold; let sb. do; show sb. around
第三步：連詞成句
1. I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was traveling in England during summer vacation.
2. It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British culture and have a wonderful time there.
3. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice in choosing gifts for my family.
4. I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more; Besides; Moreover; Furthermore; In addition; As well as; not only…but (also); including(供參考)
2.表因果關(guān)系：Because; As; So; Thus; Therefore; As a result (供參考)
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was traveling in England during my vacation.(我寫這封信是為了表達(dá)我衷心的感謝，感謝你在我暑假在英國旅游時(shí)對我的幫助。)
這句中使用了“while”引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句“while I was traveling in England during my vacation”。
[高分句型2]
It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British culture and have a wonderful time there.(正是你細(xì)致幽默的介紹，讓我對英國文化有了更深入的了解，并在英國度過了一段美好的時(shí)光。)
這句中使用了“it is +被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+其他”強(qiáng)調(diào)句式，本句強(qiáng)調(diào)主語“your detailed and humorous introduction”。
[高分句型3]
I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown.( 我非常希望有一天你能來中國，讓我?guī)銋⒂^我的家鄉(xiāng)。)
這句中“someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my hometown”為省略that的賓語從句，且使用“do”強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語“hope”。
4．Dear Paul
How are things going? I am writing to invite you to take part in a charity activity.
The Students Union of our school is going to hold a used book sale on the afternoon of October 6 on the school playground which is aimed to collect money to buy books for children in poor areas. Anyone who is interested is welcome to donate some used books. If you would like to come, please bring several used books to donate and sell books with us. It is a very meaningful activity. We are really expecting your participation.
Looking forward to your early reply.
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours,
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Li Hua.
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給外教Mr. Smith寫一封電子郵件，邀請他參加愛心義賣活動(dòng)。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和少量一般將來時(shí)。
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：
1、義賣的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)
2、義賣內(nèi)容（捐贈(zèng)物品或者購買物品）
3、期待回復(fù)
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
be writing to invite you；take part in；hold a used book sale；aiming to collect money; in poor areas; welcome to donate some used books; If you would like to come; a meaningful activity; expecting your participation; looking forward to
第三步：連詞成句
1. I am writing to invite you to take part in a charity activity.
2. The Students Union of our school is going to hold a used book sale on the afternoon of October 6 on the school playground which is aimed to collect money to buy books for children in poor areas. 3. Anyone who is interested is welcome to donate some used books.
4. If you would like to come, please bring several used books to donate and sell books with us.
5. It is a very meaningful activity.
6. We are really expecting your participation.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供參考）
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including（供參考）
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… （供參考）
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供參考）
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]The Students Union of our school is going to hold a used book sale on the afternoon of October 6 on the school playground which is aimed to collect money to buy books for children in poor areas.運(yùn)用了由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾a used book sale，說明了活動(dòng)舉行的目的，表達(dá)形式高級。
[高分句型2] Anyone who is interested is welcome to donate some used books.運(yùn)用一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句修飾Anyone，意為“任何感興趣的人”，表達(dá)高級。
[高分句型3] If you would like to come, please bring several used books to donate and sell books with us.運(yùn)用If引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，would like to do短語，禮貌地提出請求，表達(dá)高級。
5．One possible verion:
Dear Jason,
I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Students' Union. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided? If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.
Thanks again for your kind invitation. It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給負(fù)責(zé)“中國文化周”項(xiàng)目的老師Jason寫一封電子郵件表示感謝邀請并詢問相關(guān)事宜。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí),少量一般將來時(shí)。
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：
1.對邀請表示感謝；
2.詢問活動(dòng)開始時(shí)間；
3.詢問活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；
4.詢問學(xué)生住宿安排。
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
On behalf of; express our heartfelt gratitude for; make some inquiries; is scheduled to start; apply for visas and book air tickets in advance; the specific activities; what type of accommodation(s)
第三步：連詞成句
1. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week.
2. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
3. Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.
4. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation.
5. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided?
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstly/First, Lastly
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.（so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）
[高分句型2].If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.（which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）
[高分句型3].It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.（it作形式主語）
6．Dear Peter:
How are you these days? Last week, the Hanfu Festival was held in our school successfully. Aware that you are interested in it, I’d like to share with you a brief introduction.
To enrich us students’ knowledge of the traditional Hanfu style costumes and promote traditional Chinese culture, several activities were conducted. We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu. In addition, and exhibition of fantastic Hanfu from different dynasties amazed us as a feast for the eyes.
The festival has won good comments. Moved by the beauty of Hanfu, we take pride in our ancestors’ intelligence and the charm of traditional Chinese culture. I am certain you will be struck by it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給外教Jim寫封郵件，邀請他下周為大家做一次關(guān)于如何加強(qiáng)英語聽說的專題講座。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)和少量現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：
1. 活動(dòng)的目的：了解漢服，傳承傳統(tǒng)文化；
2. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容安排：主題講座，漢服舞蹈表演等；
3. 活動(dòng)在同學(xué)中引起的反響。
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
the Hanfu Festival，be interested in，share with，enrich sb’s knowledge，promote，conduct，attend lecture，in addition，a feast for the eye，good comment，take pride in，intelligence，be struck by等等。
第三步：連詞成句
1.????Last week, the Hanfu Festival was held in our school successfully.
2.????Aware that you are interested in it, I’d like to share with you a brief introduction.
3.????To enrich us students’ knowledge of the traditional Hanfu style costumes and promote traditional Chinese culture, several activities were conducted.
4.????We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu.
5.????In addition, and exhibition of fantastic Hanfu from different dynasties amazed us as a feast for the eyes.
6.????Moved by the beauty of Hanfu, we take pride in our ancestors’ intelligence and the charm of traditional Chinese culture.
7.????I am certain you will be struck by it.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：In addition
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]
To enrich us students’ knowledge of the traditional Hanfu style costumes and promote traditional Chinese culture, several activities were conducted.使用了不定式作目的狀語；
[高分句型2]
We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu.使用了which引導(dǎo)非限制定語從句；
[高分句型3]
Moved by the beauty of Hanfu, we take pride in our ancestors’ intelligence and the charm of traditional Chinese culture.使用了形容詞短語作伴隨狀語。
7．Dear Alex,
I'm glad to learn that you are coming to my hometown Chongqing. I would like to introduce it to you .
The city of Chongqing is located by the Yangtze River with a long history of about 3000 years. It has a population of 30 million, covering an area of 82,400 ㎞2. It is also a mountainous city. There are many scenic spots in my home town, such as Jiefangbei, a symbol building in Chongqing , and??WulongTiankeng. You will be amazed at their special scenery. In Chongqing, you are sure to have a good taste of Chongqing hotpot. Just as the spicy dishes in Chongqing , people here are also warm-hearted and friendly.
Looking forward to your coming! I will be your guide to travel around. Wish you a safe journey!
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文，要求寫一封郵件。
【詳解】第一步：
審題：郵件???向美國朋友Alex介紹你家鄉(xiāng)的城市重慶
人稱：第三人稱
時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分說明寫信的目的，第二部分介紹重慶的具體情況，
第三部分希望Alex早日來重慶，并祝旅途愉快。
要點(diǎn)：
1. 說明寫信的目的：向Alex介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)重慶
2．介紹重慶的具體情況
①位于長江之濱，有3000年歷史，3千萬人口，面積8，2400平方公里，多山城市
②旅游景點(diǎn)很多，如解放碑、武隆天坑
③美食：重慶火鍋
④風(fēng)土人情：人們熱情、友好
3．希望Alex早日到來并祝愿旅途愉快。
第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語）
introduce sth. to sb.；be located by；have a long history of；have a population of；cover an area of；scenic spot；be amazed at；have a good taste of；warm-hearted；friendly；a safe journey
第三步：連詞成句
(1)I'm glad to learn that you are coming to my hometown Chongqing.
(2)I would like to introduce it to you.
(3)The city of Chongqing is located by the Yangtze River .
(4) It has a long history of about 3000 years.
(5)It has a population of 30 million.
(6) It covers an area of 82,400 ㎞2.
(7) It is also a mountainous city.
(8)There are many scenic spots in my home town.
(9)You will be amazed at their special scenery.
(10)You are sure to have a good taste of Chongqing hotpot.
(11) People here are also warm-hearted and friendly.
(12) I will be your guide to travel around.
(13)Wish you a safe journey!
根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句，適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問題。
第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點(diǎn)詞匯)
將第二個(gè)句子改寫，用短語with a history of表達(dá)，連接下面兩個(gè)句子
(3)The city of Chongqing is located by the Yangtze River.
(4) It has a long history of about 3000 years.
→The city of Chongqing is located by the Yangtze River with a long history of about 3000 years.
將第二個(gè)句子用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，連接下面兩個(gè)句子
(5)It has a population of 30 million.
(6) It covers an area of 82,400 ㎞2.
→It has a population of 30 million, covering an area of 82,400 ㎞2.??
適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用高級詞匯、復(fù)雜句式提升文章的檔次，增加文章的可讀性。
【點(diǎn)睛】
范文要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，上下文連貫，在表達(dá)時(shí)用到了很多高級詞匯，如 introduce sth. to sb.；be located by；have a long history of；have a population of；cover an area of；scenic spot；be amazed at；have a good taste of等；復(fù)雜句式的運(yùn)用提升了文章層次，如
現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語的運(yùn)用It has a population of 30 million, covering an area of 82,400 ㎞2；there be 句型的運(yùn)用There are many historical spots in my home town,；祈使句的運(yùn)用，使句子簡潔Welcome to Chongqing ! … Wish you a safe journey!等。
8．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. On behalf of our school, I'm sincerely inviting your school to take part in the upcoming Dragon Boat Race to be held on the Huangshan Lake on June 30th.
The event is scheduled to start at 2:00 p.m. and last for about three hours. To begin with, we will watch a short documentary of the ancient poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption. Knowing that Cambridge High School has an outstanding boating team, I'm sure we won't miss the wonderful Dragon Boat Race. It is a fantastic opportunity for our schools to develop close ties and to promote cultural exchange.
We'd appreciate hearing from your reply before June 27th.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。假定你是中華中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校將于6月28日在和諧湖舉行龍舟賽，請給友好學(xué)校復(fù)興中學(xué) (Fuxing High School) 寫一封邀請信。
【詳解】第一步：審題。
體裁：應(yīng)用文。
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。
要點(diǎn)：信的內(nèi)容包括：
（1）寫信目的；
（2）活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和意義；
（3）回復(fù)時(shí)間：2021年6月25日前。
第二步：列重點(diǎn)詞語，詞組（注意好詞的使用）
如on behalf of；take part in；be begin with；be accused of；hear from等等。
第三步：連詞成句（注意好句型的使用，如非謂語動(dòng)詞，復(fù)合句，注意拼寫和時(shí)態(tài)問題）
第四步：連句成篇（注意銜接詞的使用）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);
3.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡。
第五步：潤色修改。
【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，語言規(guī)范，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，段落分布合理。作者在文中較多使用主從復(fù)合句，如On behalf of our school, I'm sincerely inviting your school to take part in the upcoming Dragon Boat Race to be held on the Huangshan Lake on June 30th.使用了不定式的被動(dòng)式；To begin with, we will watch a short documentary of the ancient poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself after being falsely accused of corruption.使用了定語從句。主從復(fù)合句的使用，使得文章的句式靈活多變，為文章增加了色彩。
9．I'm writing to invite you to watch a documentary about Chinese tea culture, which will be shown in the City Library from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. this Sunday.
It's said that this documentary is in Chinese, with English subtitles. Moreover, the history of tea as a drink in China will be talked about in the documentary, as well as the important role tea plays in foreign trade as a commercial product. I'm sure this documentary will contribute a lot to your understanding of Chinese tea culture.
Looking forward to your reply.
【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生給外教Mr. Smith寫信，邀請他來你市圖書館觀看中國茶文化的紀(jì)錄片。
【詳解】體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主
結(jié)構(gòu)：分總
要求：
1. 播放時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；
2．紀(jì)錄片的主要內(nèi)容。
第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）
invite sb. to do sth./ be interested in/ talk about/ theme/ be focused on/ contribute to/ look forward to/ play a role in/ have a better understanding of
第三步：連詞成句
1. I'm writing to invite you to watch a documentary about Chinese tea culture, which will be shown in the City Library from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. this Sunday.
2. It's said that this documentary is in Chinese, with English subtitles.
3.Moreover, the history of tea as a drink in China will be talked about in the documentary, as well as the important role tea plays in foreign trade as a commercial product.
4. I'm sure this documentary will make you have a better understanding of Chinese tea culture.
5. Looking forward to your reply.
第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）
表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…
狀語從句連詞：because/ if/ though/ although…
定語從句連詞：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改潤色（加入高級詞匯或短語）
【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，例如：I'm writing to invite you to watch a documentary about Chinese tea culture, which will be shown in the City Library from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. this Sunday.中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。
10．Dear Mr. James,
I'm writing to tell you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall on September 30 and we would like to invite you to be one of the judges of the contest.
The speech contest with the theme "My Motherland and Me" is intended to arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm. Inspired by the activity, contestants will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.
Hopefully, you will accept the invitation and make necessary comments for the contest.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，告知外籍教師 James 演講比賽的有關(guān)內(nèi)容，并邀請他當(dāng)評委。。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。
要求：
1．告知比賽時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)
2．舉辦活動(dòng)的目的和意義
3．邀請他擔(dān)任評委
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
hold; invite; judge; be intended to; arouse; enthusiasm; inspire; be motivated to; express; determination; make contribution to; invitation; comment; look forward to
第三步：連詞成句
1. I'm writing to tell you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall on September 30.
2. We would like to invite you to be one of the judges of the contest.
3. The speech contest with the theme "My Motherland and Me" is intended to arouse students’ patriotic enthusiasm.
4. Inspired by the activity, contestants will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.
5. Hopefully, you will accept the invitation and make necessary comments for the contest.
6. Looking forward to your reply.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, Not only…but (also)…, Including
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, But, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some…,while others…,As for, So…that…
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，
第五步：潤色修改
【點(diǎn)睛】
范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些地道的表達(dá)，如：arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm， make contributions to the motherland。還使用了分詞結(jié)構(gòu)如 Inspired by the activity, contestants will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。

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