建議信1．假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter計(jì)劃來(lái)中國(guó)旅行，希望你為他推薦一座城市。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦這座城市的理由（至少包含兩點(diǎn)）；2.注意事項(xiàng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)給你的外國(guó)朋友 Tom 寫(xiě)一封信，給他提一些漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面的好建議并陳述理由。 要點(diǎn)如下：1. 培養(yǎng)興趣 2. 多閱讀 3. 看中文電影注意：1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，并不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Tom,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假如你是Jack，從報(bào)紙上獲悉，2014年10月，西雙版納地區(qū)一頭大象被獵殺取牙。對(duì)此你非常憤怒，請(qǐng)你就此事用英語(yǔ)給《English Weekly》報(bào)社寫(xiě)封信，呼吁人們保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1. 簡(jiǎn)述報(bào)道內(nèi)容并發(fā)表看法。2. 保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的必要性(至少二條)。3. 提出建議（至少二條）。參考詞匯：象牙tusk   西雙版納Xishuangbanna　　　保護(hù)protect　　　野生的wild注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80；2. 開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；4. 在答題卡上作答。Dear Editor，My name is Jack, a senior middle school student. The other day I happened to read a shocking piece of news. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________To live in a better future, let’s work together to help wildlife.Yours,Jack4．假定你是高一新生李華，在高中學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的過(guò)程中遇到了困難，請(qǐng)你給“21st Century”報(bào)寫(xiě)一封信求助。內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.遇到的困難；3.希望得到對(duì)方的建議。注意：詞數(shù)100字左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。Dear Editor,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,Li Hua5．假定你是高二學(xué)生李華。緊張的高三生活即將來(lái)臨，你的父母對(duì)你最后一年的學(xué)習(xí)充滿(mǎn)著期望。請(qǐng)你給你的父母寫(xiě)一封信。內(nèi)容包括：1. 表達(dá)你努力學(xué)習(xí)的決心，對(duì)他們的關(guān)心表示感謝2. 向他們提出2-3個(gè)建議，以更好地支持你高三拼搏。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear mom and dad，___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best regards,Your loveLi Hua6．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Steve給你發(fā)郵件說(shuō)他將在寒假期間來(lái)中國(guó)旅游。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給Steve回—封郵件。1. 歡迎Steve來(lái)華，邀請(qǐng)他到家做客;2. 如果需要，可以陪同他—起旅行;3. 給他提出來(lái)中國(guó)旅游的建議。注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右，郵件開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Steve,I’m glad to know that you will come to visit China in the coming winter holiday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假如你是李華，學(xué)校最近要組織一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽，主題為“垃圾分類(lèi)益處多”。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)此話題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。要點(diǎn)如下:1.你的觀點(diǎn)；2.你的建議。參考詞匯:垃圾分類(lèi)garbage classification注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是李華。你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Eric打算寒假期間到中國(guó)來(lái)旅游。最近，他來(lái)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)來(lái)中國(guó)旅游時(shí)的注意事項(xiàng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1. 交通工具的選擇；2. 購(gòu)物付款方式；3. 天氣、飲食和住宿。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假如你是李華。你的筆友Kenton寫(xiě)信告訴你，他自從上了高中之后成績(jī)不理想，每次考試總是犯很多錯(cuò)誤，他很焦慮。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回信，給他提一些建議。要點(diǎn)提示: 1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建議；3. 給予鼓勵(lì)。參考詞匯:分?jǐn)?shù)score 壓力 pressure注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Kenton,I’ve received your letter.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua10．假設(shè)你應(yīng)邀參加學(xué)校組織的“英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)師生座談會(huì)”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對(duì)學(xué)校今后的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)提出建議。自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況 1.英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的目的2.英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的方法3.課外自學(xué)的途徑……….對(duì)學(xué)校英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的建議（請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點(diǎn)建議）。    注意： 1.對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。 2.詞數(shù)120左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 3.文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my  experience of learning English with you.        Thank you for listening.       1．Dear Peter,I am so glad to hear from you．Learning that you are going to visit China，I strongly recommend you have a trip to Beijing.As the captain of China，Beijing is famous for it's beautiful scene and cultural inheritance such as the Great Wall, and the Summer Palace. There is a famous saying, " He who cannot surmount the Great Wall is not a true man", the Summer Palace is a wonderful place all the time,which has its special characteristics in every season. You should keep in mind when traveling in Beijing. Firstly, buy a map, and get familiar with the city and streets. Secondly. call the police in emergency.Wish you a nice trip!Yours Sincerely,LiHua【分析】本文為建議信。你的美國(guó)朋友Peter計(jì)劃來(lái)中國(guó)旅行。請(qǐng)給你的朋友Peter寫(xiě)一封信，向他推薦一座城市，內(nèi)容包括：推薦這座城市的理由（至少包含兩點(diǎn)）；和注意事項(xiàng)。【詳解】本題為提綱式作文。根據(jù)要求可知，第一部分從總體上敘述推薦這座城市的理由。第二部分具體描述注意事項(xiàng)。最后一部分祝福你的朋友中國(guó)之行愉快。【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。文中的句式相對(duì)靈活多變，簡(jiǎn)單句與復(fù)合句相結(jié)合。復(fù)合句有賓語(yǔ)從句Learning that you are going to visit China，I strongly recommend you have a trip to Beijing.，其中使用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞和虛擬語(yǔ)氣；由which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句The Summer Palace is a wonderful place all the time, which has its special characteristics in every season.等。2．Dear Tom,As for the good ways to learn Chinese well, my suggestions are as follows.First and foremost, be interested in what you are learning. As we all know, interest is the best teacher. If you have an interest in something, it’s easier for you to pay attention to it for a long time. In addition, it’s also a good idea to read more Chinese books. This is because you can learn many new words while reading. Last but not least, you can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies as well, which will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills.I hope you can take my advice into consideration.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇上面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文——建議信的寫(xiě)作。要求考生寫(xiě)一封信，給外國(guó)朋友 Tom提一些漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面的好建議并陳述理由。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文——建議信時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)：第二人稱(chēng)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。先總說(shuō)自己有建議，再分說(shuō)具體的建議。最后提出期望。要求：1.學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)有很多方法，表達(dá)自己的建議。      2.分說(shuō)具體建議      1）培養(yǎng)興趣（develop an interest）      2）多閱讀（reading more about Chinese）      3) 看中文電影（watch Chinese movies）      3.期待能考慮我的建議。（hope to take these suggestions into consideration）第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）as follows, be interested in, develop an interest in, read more Chinese books, gain much knowledge, improve Chinese, watch Chinese movies, improve listening and speaking skills第三步：連詞成句My suggestions are as follows.It’s a good idea to read more Chinese books.You can learn many new words while reading.You can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies.It will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills.第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First and foremost, in addition, last but not least2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了多個(gè)短語(yǔ)如：as for, as follows, first and foremost, in addition, last but not least等表達(dá),句式變化多樣，用到了it作為形式主語(yǔ)的句式，表語(yǔ)從句，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。3．Dear Editor,My name is Li Hua, a senior middle school student. The other day I happened to read a shocking piece of news. In October, 2014, a wild Asian elephant was killed without mercy in Xishuangbanna, with its tusks taken away. I feel terribly sorry and ashamed of what people did to the animal.In my opinion, we should attach great importance to wildlife protection. The number of wildlife is decreasing every year and some endangered species have even died out. Protecting wild animals, our friends, means protecting ourselves. It helps keep the balance of nature. So something must be done for lovely wildlife. Anyone who hunts or kills wildlife should be fined and punished severely. The animal trade is never allowed as well, for when the buying stops, the killing can too. At the same time, every single one of us should shoulder our responsibility to protect the environment. To live in a better future, let’s work together to help wildlife.Yours,Jack【分析】本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，同時(shí)也屬于應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成Jack，用英語(yǔ)給《English Weekly》報(bào)社寫(xiě)封信，呼吁人們保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物。本文要求考生自行組織要點(diǎn)，總體難度較大。【詳解】第1步：審題。根據(jù)文字提示可知本文是一封書(shū)信，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成Jack，因?yàn)槲麟p版納地區(qū)一頭大象被獵殺取牙，就此事用給《English Weekly》報(bào)社寫(xiě)封信，呼吁人們保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一和第三人稱(chēng)為主。第2步：組織要點(diǎn)。1. 簡(jiǎn)述報(bào)道內(nèi)容并發(fā)表看法：2014年10月，西雙版納地區(qū)一頭大象被獵殺取牙。他感到很憤怒，為人們的做法羞愧。2. 保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的必要性：應(yīng)該高度重視野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)；要積極保護(hù)生態(tài)平衡。3. 提出建議：對(duì)獵殺野生動(dòng)物的人進(jìn)行嚴(yán)厲地處罰；禁止動(dòng)物產(chǎn)品貿(mào)易；人人盡責(zé)保護(hù)以野生動(dòng)物。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句，關(guān)鍵詞為be killed without mercy、feel terribly sorry and ashamed of 、attach great importance to 、some endangered species、keep the balance of nature、shoulder our responsibility 等。同時(shí)注意書(shū)信的慣用語(yǔ)和習(xí)慣表達(dá)。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)完美，條理清晰。時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容全面無(wú)遺漏，所提及的要點(diǎn)和建議十分合理。范文中考生運(yùn)用了多樣式的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，整篇文章富有變化并不死板。尤其是使用了較多的高級(jí)詞匯，如without mercy、shoulder our responsibility 等；盡量運(yùn)用高級(jí)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，如with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)In October, 2014, a wild Asian elephant was killed without mercy in Xishuangbanna, with its tusks taken away；賓語(yǔ)從句I feel terribly sorry and ashamed of what people did to the animal等；定語(yǔ)從句Anyone who hunts or kills wildlife should be fined and punished severely.以上寫(xiě)作技巧的運(yùn)用提升了文章的層次，顯示了考生具有很強(qiáng)的駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力。4．Dear Ms King,It has been a long time since we separated. I know that you’re teaching Chinese in a Confucius Institute in America. How are you going this period? Have you adapted to the lifestyle there? I hope everything is going well.I never forget the days when you were my English teacher, because what you taught me benefited me a great deal. Now, at senior high, I’ve pushed myself to participate in various kinds of activities, enjoying my time to the fullest extent. By actively involving myself in the campus life, I’ve learned more about myself and tapped many unknown potentials. I have even made a huge progress in my English study. Without your teachings and encouragement, I couldn’t have made such an advancement. In the English class, I learned that American high school life is drastically different from ours. If it is convenient, can you share with me some information in that regard? Thanks in advance and look forward to your reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。【詳解】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知, 本篇為一封求助信；假定你是高一新生李華，在高中學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的過(guò)程中遇到了困難，請(qǐng)你給“21st Century”報(bào)寫(xiě)一封信求助。內(nèi)容包括：1.自我介紹；2.遇到的困難；3.希望得到對(duì)方的建議。第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求, 確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）, 如：separate（分開(kāi)）；Confucius Institute（孔子學(xué)院）；adapt to（適應(yīng)）；a great deal（許多）；drastically（徹底的）；等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句, 注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第4步：連句成文, 注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡, 書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰, 保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整, 語(yǔ)言規(guī)范, 語(yǔ)篇連貫, 詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式, 如I never forget the days when you were my English teacher, because what you taught me benefited me a great deal.運(yùn)用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和原因狀語(yǔ)從句；In the English class, I learned that American high school life is drastically different from ours.運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式, 顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、層次分明, 上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然, 為文章增色添彩。5．Dear Mom and Dad,"Anxious but passionate, I am moving into the final academic year of my high school. As you know, I have been yearning to be admitted to a top university, so I promise I will spare no efforts to make it happen. I also want you to know there are not enough words to describe how grateful I am to both of you for your endless love and everlasting support.Your support means a lot to me, especially in the last year. Since it is so vital, you may consider the following suggestions to back me up better. First, please don`t overreact to grades I get. It is said that there will be twelve formal exams during this year. It is common that I get ups and downs. Second, please give me some more personal space. This year will be a hard one and sometimes I just need to be alone. Third, please arrange a balanced diet, which is energy-giving, rich in vitamin and high in protein.Thank you again for everything! I do have faith in achieving my ambition and I will make you proud.Best regards,Your LoveLi Hua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。【詳解】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知, 本篇為一封信；假定你是高二學(xué)生李華。緊張的高三生活即將來(lái)臨，你的父母對(duì)你最后一年的學(xué)習(xí)充滿(mǎn)著期望。請(qǐng)你給你的父母寫(xiě)一封信。內(nèi)容包括：1. 表達(dá)你努力學(xué)習(xí)的決心，對(duì)他們的關(guān)心表示感謝；2. 向他們提出2-3個(gè)建議，以更好地支持你高三拼搏。第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求, 確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）, 如：passionate（熱情的）；be yearn to（渴望）；be admitted to（錄?。?/span>spare no efforts（不遺余力）；endless（無(wú)盡的）；vital（重要的）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句, 注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文, 注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡, 書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰, 保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整, 語(yǔ)言規(guī)范, 語(yǔ)篇連貫, 詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式, 如I also want you to know there are not enough words to describe how grateful I am to both of you for your endless love and everlasting support.運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句；Since it is so vital, you may consider the following suggestions to back me up better.運(yùn)用了原因狀語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式, 顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、層次分明, 上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然, 為文章增色添彩。6．Dear Steve,I’m glad to know that you will come to visit China in the coming winter holiday. I sincerely invite you to pay a visit to my house and it’s my pleasure to travel with you if necessary.Because of the cold weather during winter vacation, here are some tips for you to pay attention before you come to China. First, warm clothes and anti-slip shoes must be taken, for I am afraid the temperature will be lower at that time and the snow is drawing near. Second, you can search the Internet for the places of interest where you prefer to go. Last but not the least, let me know your cellphone number so that I can keep in touch with you on your way to China.I am forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。Steve在寒假期間來(lái)中國(guó)旅游，要為其回信，邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)家里做客，或陪同一起旅行以及來(lái)中國(guó)旅游的建議。【詳解】第一步：首先審題，Steve在寒假期間來(lái)中國(guó)旅游，要為其回信，邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)家里做客，或陪同一起旅行以及來(lái)中國(guó)旅游的建議。第二步：確認(rèn)時(shí)態(tài)，選用正確的人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)，本文可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來(lái)時(shí)，第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。然后寫(xiě)出單個(gè)句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。第三步：文章可以分為三段，第一段提到邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方來(lái)家里做客的，并提出可以陪伴對(duì)方一起旅游；第二段寫(xiě)出來(lái)中國(guó)旅游需要注意的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)；第三段提出期望得到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。第四步：注意事項(xiàng)：①寫(xiě)這篇文章時(shí)，要注意文中給出的細(xì)節(jié)都要包括，不要遺漏；②這篇文章對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可；③寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題；④盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。【點(diǎn)睛】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯、復(fù)合句和高級(jí)語(yǔ)法。例如：并沒(méi)有大量使用“我”來(lái)做主語(yǔ)：…it’s my pleasure to travel with you if necessary.…warm clothes and anti-slip shoes must be taken,…for引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句：…warm clothes and anti-slip shoes must be taken, for I am afraid the temperature…where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句：the places of interest where you prefer to go.7．Hello, everyone! I’m glad to have this chance to share some ideas about garbage classification with you.To my understanding, the earth is home to every individual, and it’s our duty to protect the environment voluntarily. By sorting the waste, we can not only reduce pollution but also conserve energy, which will pave the way for recycling of valuable recourses.For the sake of our environment and life, we are expected to learn to sort the rubbish and make it a habit. Every individual can make a difference and let’s bring a brighter future for the planet!Thank you!【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。【詳解】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一篇演講稿；假如你是李華，學(xué)校最近要組織一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽，主題為“垃圾分類(lèi)益處多”。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)此話題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。要點(diǎn)如下:1.你的觀點(diǎn)；2.你的建議。第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：garbage classification（垃圾分類(lèi)成立），to my understanding scenic spots（根據(jù)我的理解），pave the way（為……做準(zhǔn)備）；for the sake of（為了），make a difference（有影響）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如By sorting the waste, we can not only reduce pollution but also conserve energy, which will pave the way for recycling of valuable recourses.運(yùn)用了非限定性定語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。8．Dear Eric,I’m glad to know you’re coming to China to travel in the winter vacation. Here re some tips for you during your stay here.You can take the plane if you travel to a faraway place. By the way, high-speed railway, which is fast and comfortable, is very popular in China today. While shopping, you can use your credit card or cash. But there’s a new and interesting way of paying called Alipay or WeChat pay. As for the weather, it’s cold in winter here. So do wear thick and warm clothes. Hotels are easy to find and the Chinese food is distinctive and delicious. I’m sure you will enjoy yourself here.Looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Li Hua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。【詳解】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，要求為寫(xiě)一封電子郵件；你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Eric打算寒假期間到中國(guó)來(lái)旅游。最近，他來(lái)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)來(lái)中國(guó)旅游時(shí)的注意事項(xiàng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1. 交通工具的選擇；2. 購(gòu)物付款方式；3. 天氣、飲食和住宿。第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：glad to（高興做某事），some tips （一些建議），By the way（順便說(shuō)一句），high-speed railway（高速鐵路），distinctive and delicious（獨(dú)特而美味）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如I’m glad to know you’re coming to China to travel in the winter vacation. 運(yùn)用賓語(yǔ)從句；By the way, high-speed railway, which is fast and comfortable, is very popular in China today.運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。9．Dear Kenton,I’ve received your letter. From your letter, I know that you are worried about your scores because you always make mistakes in exams. However, you should remember that even the best student can make mistakes sometimes, so don’t put too much pressure on yourself.As far as I am concerned, learning from your mistakes in past exams is a quick way to stop making the same mistakes next time. To begin with, if there are questions that can’t be solved by yourself, you should turn to your teachers or classmates for help. What’s more, during the exams you’d better make a good plan to distribute your time according to the questions. Besides, try to leave a few minutes at the end to check your answers.Enjoy the challenge that each new exam brings to you. I believe a good learning habit will finally help you gain success.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信寫(xiě)作。【詳解】題目要求假如你是李華。你的筆友Kenton寫(xiě)信告訴你，他自從上了高中之后成績(jī)不理想，每次考試總是犯很多錯(cuò)誤，他很焦慮。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回信，給他提一些建議。要點(diǎn)提示: 1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建議；3. 給予鼓勵(lì)。分析可知，應(yīng)該以第一人稱(chēng)為主，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，要求考生根據(jù)提綱自己發(fā)揮拓展，考生要先想好寫(xiě)哪幾點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】這篇書(shū)信類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)的拓展，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。From your letter, I know that you are worried about your scores because you always make mistakes in exams.賓語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用；Enjoy the challenge that each new exam brings to you.定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用。10．teacher and schoolmates, It’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share myexperience of learning English with you.I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally lt’s very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows,vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides ,I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources. Now, I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.  Finally，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals. Thank you for listening.【詳解】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要求根據(jù)圖表提示信息寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹自己的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況并且對(duì)學(xué)校今后的教學(xué)提出意見(jiàn)建議。首先我們要分析圖表得出準(zhǔn)確信息以合理安排篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。就此篇文章而言，因?yàn)橐笫莾刹糠炙栽诙温浒才派峡梢圆捎脙啥问椒謩e介紹。而且圖表提示信息較為簡(jiǎn)單，所以在內(nèi)容上要適當(dāng)加以發(fā)揮補(bǔ)充，以使文章內(nèi)容豐滿(mǎn)，上下文連貫。此外在寫(xiě)作時(shí)還要注意連接詞的恰當(dāng)使用以使文章條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】在本文中作者采用兩段式，分別介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況和提出意見(jiàn)建議，并且在文中使用了firstly、secondly、thirdly等副詞來(lái)陳述自己的建議，這樣使文章結(jié)構(gòu)和條理都異常清晰。在語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用上，長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合、短語(yǔ)like bricks in a building 的形象比喻使得文章內(nèi)容更加生動(dòng)。此外besides，naturally等副詞也使文章上下文銜接緊湊，語(yǔ)意連貫。考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文 

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高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作分類(lèi)訓(xùn)練：建議信

高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作分類(lèi)訓(xùn)練：建議信
重慶高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作分類(lèi)訓(xùn)練：建議信

重慶高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作分類(lèi)訓(xùn)練：建議信
高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作分類(lèi)訓(xùn)練：建議信

高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作分類(lèi)訓(xùn)練：建議信
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