初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí) 專題40 書面表達(dá)說明介紹類-2020年中考英語(yǔ)母題題源解密（解析版）-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

【母題來源1】【2020 ?貴州省黔西南州】
【母題原題】
61. 假如你叫李華，你們學(xué)校剛剛開學(xué)，正在開展 “Happy Mnth”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以 “Learn t BeHappy”為題，給學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站寫一篇廣播稿，號(hào)召同學(xué)們返校后快樂生活。
內(nèi)容包括:
1.新冠疫情使學(xué)校延遲開學(xué);
2.通過上網(wǎng)課學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)文、數(shù)學(xué)和英語(yǔ)等課程;
3.“Happy, Mnth”活動(dòng)和你的心情:
4.如何快樂生活(至少2點(diǎn))。
寫作要求:
1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書寫清晰;
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名和學(xué)校名稱等信息；
3.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：新型冠狀病毒COVID—19
Learn t Be Happy
Gd mrning, everyne! We’re very happy t be back t schl.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe all f us can live happily in this schl. Thank yu fr yur listening!
【寫作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，假如你是李華，學(xué)校剛剛開學(xué)，正在開展 “Happy Mnth”活動(dòng)，要求你以 “Learn t Be Happy”為題，題干內(nèi)容提示，給學(xué)校英語(yǔ)廣播站寫一篇廣播稿，號(hào)召同學(xué)們返校后快樂生活。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。
【參考范文】
Learn t Be Happy
Gd mrning ,everyne! I'm very happy t be back t schl.
T prevent the Crid-19, ur schl has delayed (put ff) the pening f this term. But we didn't stp studying. Our schl gave us nline curses such as Chinese, Math, English and s n. We were very happy.
Nw ur schl is carrying ut the plan“happy Mnth”. Hw t be happy? First, I think we shuld have life aims ,with life aims, we can live a happy and meaningful life. Then, we must keep healthy. What’s mre, we shuld be ready t help thers.
I hpe all f us can live happily in this schl. Thank yu fr yur listening!
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。
2.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：put ff，such as，s n，keep healthy，be ready t。
句型：I think we shuld have life aims. 我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該有生活目標(biāo)。I think后接賓語(yǔ)從句。
What’s mre, we shuld be ready t help thers. 更重要的是，我們應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)備好幫助別人。be ready t d sth.準(zhǔn)備好做某事。
【母題來源2】【2020 ?黑龍江哈爾濱】
【母題原題】
80.假如你是中學(xué)生李平，曾經(jīng)在你們班學(xué)習(xí)的交換生Peter看了你發(fā)布的朋友圈，他對(duì)你們班上周舉行的主題班會(huì)很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息給他寫一封信，向他介紹班會(huì)的情況并和他交流一下中學(xué)生如何才能實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1.班會(huì)的主題：我的理想
2.介紹你和幾名同學(xué)的理想：
（1）趙勇：想成為一名勇敢的警察；
（2）張紅：想做一名志愿者；
（3）你：想成為一名優(yōu)秀的醫(yī)生。
3.說說中學(xué)生如何才能實(shí)現(xiàn)（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。
寫作要求：
1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。
2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。
3.字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。
4.至少80詞。
Dear peter,
I'm writing t tell yu smething abut the class meeting held last week. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【寫作思路】
這是一篇話題作文，介紹班會(huì)情況，班會(huì)的主題是談?wù)摾硐?，通過分析可知，除了短文開頭介紹上周班會(huì)情況，我們應(yīng)該使用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，其他內(nèi)容可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要隨著時(shí)態(tài)和人稱的變化而改變。
【參考范文】
Dear peter,
I'm writing t tell yu smething abut the class meeting held last week. The theme f it was “My Ideal”. Our mnitr hsted the meeting. During it, all f us tk an active part in the discussin and shared ur pinins with each ther.
Zha Yng is ging t be a brave pliceman. He hpes t help peple in danger. Zhang Hng wants t be a vlunteer, she will help peple in need especially the disabled and the hmeless. My dream is t be an excellent dctr, I think it’s a meaningful jb, because I can save peple’s lives and help them ut f danger.
T realize ur ideals, I have sme pinins. Firstly, we must try t wrk harder frm nw n and learn as much knwledge as pssible. Secndly, we shuld believe urselves, because cnfidence is the key t success. Besides, it’s als imprtant t find ut hw successfully peple did it s that we can learn frm them.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用分段式，文中銜接流暢，在寫作的時(shí)候選擇了一些相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也運(yùn)用多種句型，句式豐富多彩，避免單一化，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)，潤(rùn)色了文章的內(nèi)容。
2.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：hst the meeting；take an active part in；in danger；a meaningful jb；frm nw n；learn frm。
句型：① I think it’s a meaningful jb, because I can save peple’s lives and help them ut f danger.
②Secndly, we shuld believe urselves, because cnfidence is the key t success.
③Besides, it’s als imprtant t find ut hw successfully peple did it s that we can learn frm them.
【母題來源3】【2020 ?黑龍江龍東地區(qū)】
【母題原題】
81.為加強(qiáng)機(jī)場(chǎng)服務(wù)工作，現(xiàn)面向社會(huì)招募志愿者，若你具備以下條件，請(qǐng)致電：63688881。
1）身體健康；2）性格善良、有耐心；3）擅長(zhǎng)與人溝通；4）會(huì)講漢語(yǔ)和英語(yǔ)。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息，用5-6句話寫一份招聘廣告。
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【參考范文】
Vlunteers wanted
We need vlunteers at the airprt. Are yu in gd health? Are yu kind and patient? Are yu gd at cmmunicating with peple? Can yu speak bth Chinese and English? Please call us at 63688881.
【母題來源4】【2020 ?黑龍江龍東地區(qū)】
【母題原題】
83.仔細(xì)觀察圖片描述，展開合理想象，然后寫一篇短文。
12 3.45.
提示詞：mask（口罩）；keep a certain distance（保持一定距離）
要求：1. 話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。
2. 詞數(shù)：80-100之間。
3. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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【寫作思路】
本題屬于圖畫作文。要求觀察圖片，展開合理想象來寫一篇作文。觀察圖片及提示詞可知這里是五條關(guān)于預(yù)防新型冠狀病毒肺炎的建議。寫作時(shí)要緊扣圖片內(nèi)容并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點(diǎn)。寫好時(shí)，再閱讀一遍，減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯(cuò)誤。
【參考范文】
Nvel crnavirus is spreading arund the wrld and many cuntries are fighting against it. We shuld d smething t avid it.
Here is my advice fr everyne. Firstly, if we have t g ut, we must wear masks t prtect urselves. Secndly, we shuld always wash hands t keep germs away. Thirdly, we need t pen the windws very ften t let the fresh air in. Futhly, we shuld take ur temperature ften and if we have a fever we shuld g t the dctr in time. Finally, keeping a certain distance with thers is als very imprtant.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，從圖片內(nèi)容延伸出5條預(yù)防新型冠狀病毒肺炎的建議，用上了所給提示詞并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。例文簡(jiǎn)明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)到位。
2. 高分亮點(diǎn)：
單詞和短語(yǔ)：spread；arund the wrld；fight against；avid；wear masks；keep germs away；take ne's temperature；have a fever；in time；keep a certain distance。
句型：and連接的并列句；以here開頭的倒裝句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。
【母題來源5】【2020 ?湖南省常德市】
【母題原題】
61.假設(shè)你是Angelica的朋友Alan，請(qǐng)根據(jù)第二節(jié)（回答問題）材料并按照提示給Angelica回信：1. 恭喜喬遷并簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)述其新居。2. 回復(fù)能否參加聚會(huì)。3. 若能參加聚會(huì)，你會(huì)準(zhǔn)備什么節(jié)目，對(duì)整個(gè)活動(dòng)有什么建議等；若不能參會(huì)，說明原因，表達(dá)自己的心情等。注意：1. 80詞以上，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 不得出現(xiàn)人名和校名等真實(shí)信息。
Dear Angelica,
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Alan
【寫作思路】
這是一篇書信作文。本文要求按照提示要點(diǎn)寫一封回信，寫作中注意要包含所有的提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱是第一人稱。
【參考范文】
Dear Angelica,
I’m glad t receive yur letter last time. First f all, cngratulatins n yur settlement t the new huse，which is s warm and cmfrtable that I’d like t have a lk at nce. The small independent garden is the best design in the huse, and als a gd place t relax. Secndly, I really appreciate yur invitatin f the husewarming party. I’d lve t, but I can’t. As yu knw, the Natinal Pian Grading Test is cming, my curse schedule n these days is already full. I have t devte myself t the preparatin until the end f the test. At last, it’s a great pity that I can’t cme t yur party. But I’ve prepared a gift fr yu and I hpe yu will like it.
May yur party be a great success and enjy yurself that day!
Yurs,
Alan
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文采用兩段式，第一段：（1）恭喜對(duì)方喬遷之喜；（2）告訴對(duì)方因?yàn)橐獪?zhǔn)備鋼琴等級(jí)考試無(wú)法參加聚會(huì)；（3）表示很遺憾并準(zhǔn)備了禮物；第二段以祝福結(jié)尾。文章緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)到位。
2.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：be glad t；s…that…；wuld like (lve) t；have a lk；at nce；have t；devte myself t；prepare fr；the end f；enjy yurself。
句型：First f all…Secndly…At last…；which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；s…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；and并列句；but并列復(fù)合句；As yu knw…；it’s +名詞+ that從句。
【命題意圖】
考查學(xué)生的基礎(chǔ)英語(yǔ)和邏輯寫作能力。
【考試方向】
說明介紹類書面表達(dá)。
【得分要點(diǎn)】
寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：
認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。
構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。
初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。
修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。
【母題1】【來源】【2020 ? 山東省菏澤市曹縣二?！?br>減負(fù)之后，同學(xué)們有了更多的課余時(shí)間。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖提示，以"Hw T Make Our Spare Time Mre Meaningful?"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文(100詞左右)。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。

Hw T Make Our Spare Time Mre Meaningful?
Nwadays, we students have much mre spare time than ever befre, but hw t make ur spare time mre meaningful?
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Hw T Make Our Spare Time Mre Meaningful?
Nwadays, we students have much mre spare time than ever befre, but hw t make ur spare time mre meaningful?
In my pinin, it's gd t help ur parents d sme husewrk t shw ur lve fr them. Secnd, we will knw mre abut the wrld by reading. Third, it is a gd chance fr us t get clse t nature and relax urselves. I think sprts have becme mre and mre imprtant in peple's life. We can d sme sprts t make us strnger and healthier. What's mre, we can take an active part in sme scial activities as vlunteers t help thse wh are in need.
In a wrd, let's make full use f ur spare time and make it mre meaningful.
【解析】
【詳解】1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇話題作文。主要以“Hw T Make Our Spare Time Mre Meaningful”為主題展開的描寫，根據(jù)題目中給出的圖片提示具體的描寫，要包括每一個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)，同時(shí)還要有自己的意見，要注意文章的層次以及語(yǔ)言的邏輯性。
2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章分三段描寫。第一段總體拋出文章的主題“該如何利用業(yè)余時(shí)間”；第二段具體的從各個(gè)方面介紹業(yè)余時(shí)間要做的事情；第三段總結(jié)要充分利用業(yè)余時(shí)間。整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，思路清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，用詞恰當(dāng)合理，意思明確易懂。
3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：in my pinin；get clse t；d sprts；What’s mre；in a wrd；make full use f。
句型：I think+賓語(yǔ)從句；wh引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；let’s祈使句。
【母題2】【來源】【2020 ? 安徽省合肥市瑤海區(qū)二?！?br>一個(gè)人可以非常清貧、困頓、低微，但是不可以沒有夢(mèng)想。只要夢(mèng)想一天，只要夢(mèng)想存在一天，就可以改變自己的處境?！獖W普拉
初中三年，你一定遇到過很多困難，但最終夢(mèng)想給了你勇氣，幫助你戰(zhàn)勝了困難。某英文報(bào)社以“夢(mèng)想的力量”為話題展開征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英文寫篇短文給報(bào)社投稿，談?wù)勀阍趬?mèng)想的力量下戰(zhàn)勝困難的一次經(jīng)歷，以及你的收獲感受。
提示詞語(yǔ)： dream, pwer, remember, defeat, prud
提示問題：
●What was yur dream?
●Hw did yur dream help yu t vercme a difficulty?
●What have yu learnt frm the experience?
Everybdy has a big dream. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Everybdy has a big dream. A life withut a dream is a life withut a sun. Therefre, in n circumstances can we give up ur dream. Unquestinably, dreams are f great imprtance.
My dream is t be a reprter. T achieve my dream, I have t wrk hard t enter the best high schl in my twn. I still remember when I failed my math exam last mnth, I was s sad and upset that I was ready t give up my math. In my mind, I was a stupid girl wh wasn’t gd at it, it was s difficult fr me t wrk ut the prblems. Luckily, my dream encuraged me t walk further and cheered me up. It is like a gd friend and always gives me a lt f energy and pwer t defeat the failure.
I realize n matter hw difficult the rad is, I shuld try my best t keep walking t reach the end f the rad. And my dream is always guiding me crrectly.
【解析】
【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題屬于材料寫作。寫作時(shí)要注意問題信息要寫齊全。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式，第一大段說夢(mèng)想的重要性；第二大段陳述我的夢(mèng)想是什么，夢(mèng)想在一次經(jīng)歷中給我的力量；第三大段陳述從這次事件中的收獲，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，段落分明。用第一人稱來進(jìn)行寫作分析；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)為主。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：give up，wrk hard，be ready t，encurage sb. t d sth.，cheer me up，wrk ut。
句型：s ... that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，wh引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。
【母題3】【來源】【2020 ? 甘肅省張掖市一模】
2020年春節(jié)期間，“新型冠狀病毒肺炎”爆發(fā),全國(guó)展開了抗擊病毒的斗爭(zhēng)，你們班就此召開了一次主題班會(huì)討論如何預(yù)防“新型冠狀病毒肺炎”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹新型冠狀病毒肺炎的癥狀及預(yù)防方法。
要求：1.文中需包含參考詞匯中的主要內(nèi)容；
2.句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、連貫,書寫規(guī)范；
3.可做適量拓展；
4.文中不得提及考生個(gè)人的相關(guān)信息,如人名、校名或地名等；
5.詞數(shù):100詞左右。(開頭需抄寫在答題卡對(duì)應(yīng)作答區(qū)域,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
6. 參考詞匯：新型冠狀病毒 COVID19; 口罩mask; 疾病 disease; 感染 infect
be infected by COVID-19：have a sre thrat； have a high fever and cugh ；hard t breathe
prtect urselves：stay at hme；take temperature every day; wear a mask；wash ur hands; have a healthy diet; d mre exercise
During the Spring Festival f 2020, a very serius disease caused by COVID-19 spread arund China, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
During the Spring Festival f 2020, a very serius disease caused by COVID-19 spread arund China. If yu are infected by COVID-19, yu may have a sre thrat, have a high fever and cugh, r yu may feel hard t breathe. It’s urgent fr yu t seek medical attentin, and fllw the directins f yur lcal health fficial. Hw t keep urselves safe frm COVID19？ Here are sme ways.
First, dn’t g t places full f peple, such as hspitals, railway statins and airprts. Wear a mask if transprt r mvement is necessary. Secnd, wash ur hands frequently and prperly. It’s necessary t wash hands with sap and running water thrughly fr at least 15 secnds. Third, we’d better stay at hme and take temperature every day. Finally, we can have a healthy diet and d mre exercise. Regular exercise is ne f the mst imprtant ways t keep infectin at bay.
【解析】
【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)緊接開頭繼續(xù)寫作，根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示介紹新型冠狀病毒肺炎的癥狀及預(yù)防方法。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文主要用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫作。介紹預(yù)防方法分四點(diǎn)來寫，敘述完整且條理清晰。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：are infected by；have a sre thrat；have a high fever；seek medical attentin；keep urselves safe frm；full f；at least；stay at hme; take temperature; have a healthy diet; d mre exercise; keep infectin at bay。
句型：it做形式主語(yǔ)的句子；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；and表示并列的句子。
【母題4】【來源】【2020 ? 廣東省廣州大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)一?！?br>假如你即將在學(xué)校英語(yǔ)興趣小組的活動(dòng)中發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
要點(diǎn) 提示如下：
1.幾個(gè)月前，奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場(chǎng)舞。
2.從那時(shí)起，奶奶喜歡上了廣場(chǎng)舞。
3.現(xiàn)在，奶奶比以前更健康了，有很多朋友。
4.有些鄰居有意見，認(rèn)為音樂很吵，無(wú)法入睡。
5.你認(rèn)為人們可以跳廣場(chǎng)舞，但------
參考詞匯：
跳廣場(chǎng)舞 d square dancing （對(duì)某人）有意見 have a cmplaint (against sb.)
寫作要求：1.詞數(shù)：80-100 個(gè)
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3.要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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【答案】例文
Bys and girls
I'm very happy t speak here and I'd like t talk abut my grandma.
A few mnths ag, my grandma went t d square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in lve with square dancing. Nw, she is much healthier than befre. What's mre, she has a lt f friends. Hwever, sme neighbrs have a cmplaint against the peple wh d square dancing. They think that the music is s lud that they can't fall asleep at night.
In my pinin, peple can d square dancing because it is a gd way t keep healthy. But they shuld think abut the feelings f thers and they shuldn't make a lt f nise.
That's all. Thank yu!
【解析】
【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。內(nèi)容是根據(jù)下面提供的材料就“奶奶跳廣場(chǎng)舞”這一問題寫發(fā)言稿，在興趣活動(dòng)小組里發(fā)言。我們可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 先介紹奶奶喜歡廣場(chǎng)舞及跳舞后的變化。2. 然后寫跳廣場(chǎng)舞缺點(diǎn)。3. 發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。4. 注意一些過渡詞 since then, hwever, in my pinin, but等。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用四段式；時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱主要為第三人稱。第一段介紹奶奶喜歡廣場(chǎng)舞及跳舞后的變化。第二段介紹跳廣場(chǎng)舞缺點(diǎn)。第三段發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。最后致謝。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：be in lve with；What’s mre；have a cmplaint；a gd way t d…；keep healthy；make a lt f nise。
句型：1. Nw, she is much healthier than befre. 現(xiàn)在，她比以前健康多了。
由比較連詞than，可知這是一個(gè)含有比較級(jí)的句子。much+形容詞比較級(jí)+than+比較的對(duì)象。
2. They think that the music is s lud that they can't fall asleep at night.
他們認(rèn)為音樂如此大聲，他們不能在晚上入睡。
本句主要運(yùn)用了s…that…句型。表示：如此……以至于……，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。
3. they shuld think abut the feelings f thers and they shuldn't make a lt f nise.
他們應(yīng)該考慮別人的感受，他們不應(yīng)該制造太多的噪音。
and 連接兩個(gè)并列分句，分別敘述了應(yīng)該怎樣做，不應(yīng)該怎樣做。
【母題5】【來源】【2020 ? 湖南省長(zhǎng)沙市雙語(yǔ)實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)一?！?br>假如你是李華，你有一個(gè)出生成長(zhǎng)在美國(guó)的小堂弟李小華，他在上次的電子郵件中請(qǐng)求你給他講一個(gè)中國(guó)民間故事以幫助他完成一項(xiàng)作業(yè)，故請(qǐng)你給李小華回復(fù)一封電子郵件,郵件內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下內(nèi)容：
1、講述一個(gè)趣味中國(guó)民間故事:
2、告訴他你從這個(gè)故事中學(xué)到的東西;
3、鼓勵(lì)他學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)和傳播中華傳統(tǒng)文化。
要求:
1、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、句式多樣;
2、100 詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Dear cusin Xiahua,
Hw's it ging with yu in America? At yur request, I will tell yu an interesting Chinese flk stry.
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Yur sincere cusin,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear cusin Xiahua,
Hw's it ging with yu in America? At yur request, I will tell yu an interesting Chinese flk stry.
Thusands f years ag, there was a farmer in China. He did the farm wrk very hard every day. Hwever, he gained little. One day, when he was n the farm, suddenly, a rabbit ran int a tree nearby, then died. He gt a rabbit fr supper withut any wrk. S he decided t wait fr mre and mre rabbits t cme and run int the tree. Finally, he waited and waited and watched. His field lay waste, but he never gt a secnd rabbit. This stry tells us that n pains, n gains. One can’t wn frtune all the time, if yu want t get smething, yu must make yur effrts.
Our great traditinal culture makes a difference t the wrld, nwadays, ur cuntry is becming strnger and strnger. Yu shuld learn Chinese well and spread Chinese traditinal culture t the wrld. D yu think s? I’m lking frward t yur e-mail.
Yur sincere cusin,
Li Hua
【解析】1.題干解讀：這是一篇書信作文，要求回復(fù)一封電子郵件，根據(jù)題目要求內(nèi)容要包括三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，這樣寫作才能要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)通順。另外，講述故事部分應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，其余部分要根據(jù)寫作的內(nèi)容選用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q和時(shí)態(tài)。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文包含了所有要點(diǎn)，時(shí)態(tài)使用正確，表達(dá)有條理，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，使用了一些固定句式。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：thusands f years ag； n the farm；run int a tree；withut any wrk；wait fr；all the time；make a difference；lk frward t。
句型：①賓語(yǔ)從句 This stry tells us that n pains, n gains.
②條件狀語(yǔ)從句 One can’t wn frtune all the time, if yu want t get smething, yu must make yur effrts.

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