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專題10書面表達(dá)之應(yīng)用文
【母題來(lái)源一】
【母題題文】
2021·北京·高考真題)【北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國(guó)好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1.表達(dá)歉意并說(shuō)明原因;
2.提出建議并給出理由。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生給英國(guó)好友Jim寫一封電子郵件,就因故不能赴約而致歉并建議再約。
1.詞匯積累
通知:tell→inform
麻煩:problem→trouble
怎么樣:what about→how about
適合:fit→suit
2.句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:I should be available anytime next weekend.
拓展句:I should be available anytime next weekend so that I can go out with you and have a good time.
【母題來(lái)源二】
【母題題文】
(2021·天津)假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris家,他母親Nancy通過(guò)電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè),并詢問(wèn)你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù),內(nèi)容包括:
(1) 表示感謝并問(wèn)候;
(2) 計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情;
(3) 你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè),為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。
注意:
(1) 詞數(shù)不少于100;
(2) 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;
(3) 開頭和結(jié)尾巳給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris家,他母 親Nancy通過(guò)電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè),并詢問(wèn)你將如何安排高中最后一 個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù),內(nèi)容包括:表示感謝并問(wèn)候;計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情;你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè),為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。
1.詞匯積累
照顧:take care of→look after
另外,此外:in addition→besides→what’s more
雇傭:employ→hire
既然:now that→since
2.句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
拓展句:As the Internet industry develops rapidly,the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
【母題來(lái)源三】
【母題題文】
(2022·浙江)假定你是李華,在“中國(guó)-愛爾蘭文化節(jié)”活動(dòng)中結(jié)識(shí)了愛爾蘭朋友Chris,現(xiàn)在他已回國(guó),請(qǐng)你給他 寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 回憶活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷;2. 分享個(gè)人收獲;3. 希望保持聯(lián)系。
注意:
1 . 詞數(shù)80左右;
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.?????
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案與解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給在文化節(jié)上結(jié)識(shí)的外國(guó)朋友寫一封信敘舊。
1.詞匯積累
返回:come back to → return to
思念:miss→ yearn
分享:share → exchange
玩得開心:enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun
開心的:pleased→ happy →delight→ content
過(guò)著快樂(lè)的生活:lead a happy life→ live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并簡(jiǎn)單句
原句: It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.???
拓展句: It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.
【課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀】
應(yīng)用文屬實(shí)用文體,有嚴(yán)格的語(yǔ)境限制,比如確定的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn),確定的對(duì)象、范圍,確定的行文目的等。因此,應(yīng)用文寫作應(yīng)力求主旨鮮明,格式正確,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練,語(yǔ)氣因人因事而異。
書信、電子郵件是常見的應(yīng)用文寫作考查題型,主要包括詢問(wèn)信、致歉信、致謝信、慰問(wèn)信、投訴信、邀請(qǐng)信、介紹信、求職信等,其次應(yīng)用文還有:通知、發(fā)言稿、便條、日記、通知、調(diào)查報(bào)告扥。寫作時(shí)要注意格式正確,包含稱呼語(yǔ)(salutation),正文(body),結(jié)束語(yǔ)(complimentary close),簽名(signature)。
【命題意圖】
應(yīng)用文寫作是通過(guò)要點(diǎn)提示、圖畫、表格等限定內(nèi)容、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、字?jǐn)?shù)和文體的一種寫作類型,而且大多數(shù)應(yīng)用文已經(jīng)形成了穩(wěn)定的通用格式和體例,所以考生在寫作中所受限制較多,自由發(fā)揮的空間不大。在考場(chǎng)答題時(shí),考生應(yīng)遵循"準(zhǔn)確審題"、"遣詞造句"、"形成篇章"、"檢查謄寫"的答題步驟。
【得分要點(diǎn)】
寫好應(yīng)用文的第一步是準(zhǔn)確審題。審題并不僅僅指讀題,而是一個(gè)思維過(guò)程。審題可以從以下幾個(gè)方面入手:
1、判斷體裁
應(yīng)用文的種類繁多,按其性質(zhì)可分為一般性應(yīng)用文和公務(wù)文書。一般性應(yīng)用文包括書信、便條、請(qǐng)?zhí)?、聘書、海?bào)、啟事、證明、電報(bào)、便函等;公務(wù)文書包括布告、通告、指示、命令、請(qǐng)示等。
本試題創(chuàng)設(shè)了一個(gè)語(yǔ)言情境,讓考生以李華的身份給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫一封電子郵件,邀請(qǐng)他參加郊游。也就是說(shuō),試題要求考生寫一封邀請(qǐng)信,這屬于一般性應(yīng)用文中最常見的類型:書信。
2、確定格式
不同類型的應(yīng)用文其格式和結(jié)構(gòu)是不同的。本試題的格式是書信,要求寫明寫信的對(duì)象(即稱呼)和寫信人(即署名),正文前可適當(dāng)添加問(wèn)候語(yǔ),如"How are you doing?"或"Long time no see。"等。考生必須熟知書信類應(yīng)用文的格式,準(zhǔn)確寫出稱呼語(yǔ)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、結(jié)尾語(yǔ)和署名,以符合英語(yǔ)的寫作習(xí)慣。
3、理清要點(diǎn)
邀請(qǐng)信中需要包括三個(gè)要點(diǎn):告知參加者、郊游的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容——登山和野餐。當(dāng)然考生可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),如組織郊游的目的、登山中可以做什么、除登山和野餐外是否有其他的活動(dòng)、參加郊游的意義等等。在整理要點(diǎn)時(shí),考生應(yīng)該特別注意以下3點(diǎn):
●這是一次郊游,而不是到外地或到國(guó)外去游玩的長(zhǎng)途旅行。
●郊游的時(shí)間應(yīng)該具體到某一天,不要籠統(tǒng)地說(shuō)下周,最好告知幾點(diǎn)鐘集合出發(fā)。
●既要介紹郊游的地點(diǎn),又要盡量避免透露考生信息。例如:若考生寫到Y(jié)andang Mountain表明該考生可能來(lái)自溫州地區(qū),若考生寫到the West Lake表明該考生可能來(lái)自杭州地區(qū)。那么怎樣巧妙地避免這個(gè)問(wèn)題呢?考生可以將地點(diǎn)模糊化,如使用Green Mountain, the Central Park等。
4、明確對(duì)象
寫作對(duì)象決定了考生該使用的語(yǔ)言和語(yǔ)氣、寫信人和收信人之間的關(guān)系、書信用語(yǔ)的正式度和委婉程度等。本試題中,考生的身份是學(xué)生,寫作的對(duì)象是考生的外籍朋友。既然是朋友,兩者是平輩的關(guān)系,就不適合使用過(guò)度的敬辭或謙辭,如 "I would appreciate it if you could come。";朋友之間一般會(huì)用"Hope to see you there。"或"Hope you can make it。"。既然是朋友,彼此應(yīng)該熟知對(duì)方的email地址,看到寄信人的地址就應(yīng)該知道是誰(shuí)的來(lái)信,所以在郵件的開頭根本沒(méi)有必要介紹自己的身份。如有些考生寫道:"I’m Li Hua, your friend。"明顯就不符合邏輯和常識(shí)。
5、分析語(yǔ)言[來(lái)源:學(xué)§科§網(wǎng)Z§X§X§K]
應(yīng)用文作為一種實(shí)用性文體,是用來(lái)說(shuō)明事實(shí)、解決實(shí)際問(wèn)題的,側(cè)重于"以事告人"。所以語(yǔ)言要求自然得體、樸實(shí)無(wú)華、開門見山、清晰流暢。本試題是邀請(qǐng)信,首先要掌握的是常用套語(yǔ),例如在書信的開頭常用:"I’m writing to invite you to …"信件的結(jié)尾常用:"Looking forward to your early reply。"或"I really hope you can come。"等。其次,邀請(qǐng)信中的書面用語(yǔ)要符合朋友關(guān)系的身份設(shè)定,切忌使用過(guò)度的敬辭或謙辭。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)為主。
1.(2022·江蘇·新沂市第一中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測(cè))假如你是李華,你校為了增強(qiáng)學(xué)生體質(zhì),提升鍛煉意識(shí),將邀請(qǐng)歌手兼健身教練劉畊宏(Jay Chou)開展一次關(guān)于他非常受歡迎的健身操(fitness routines)《本草綱目》(A Herbalist’s Manual)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)講座,請(qǐng)你寫封電子郵件給美國(guó)的交換生Betty,內(nèi)容包括:
1、邀請(qǐng)她參加講座。
2、告知講座的時(shí)間及登錄方式。
3、講座內(nèi)容。
注意:1、寫作詞數(shù)在80詞左右;
2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文流暢。
Dear Betty,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1.Dear Betty,
I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students’ bodies and raising health awareness.
Scheduled at 9:30 a.m., the lecture is mainly about how to exercise and dance to upbeat songs and to show their moves. The fitness routines are set to A Herbalist’s Manual from Jay Chou, a singer and fitness trainer. Liu will teach how to keep fit and develop a good lifestyle as he did on TikTok.
Looking forward to your participation!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給美國(guó)的交換生Betty寫封電子郵件,邀請(qǐng)他參加歌手兼健身教練劉畊宏(Jay Chou)開展的一次關(guān)于他非常受歡迎的健身操(fitness routines)《本草綱目》(A Herbalist’s Manual)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)講座。
【詳解】
1.詞匯積累
誠(chéng)摯地:sincerely→genuinely
健身:fitness→bodybuilding
增強(qiáng):strengthen→build up
保持健康:keep fit→keep healthy
2.句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students’ bodies and raising health awareness.
拓展句:I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, whose aim is to strengthen students’ bodies and raise health awareness.
【點(diǎn)睛】
【高分句型1】I sincerely invite you to attend an on-site lecture concerning one of the most-watched fitness routines to be held next Saturday, aimed at strengthening students’ bodies and raising health awareness. (運(yùn)用了動(dòng)詞不定式作后置定語(yǔ))
【高分句型2】Liu will teach how to keep fit and develop a good lifestyle as he did on TikTok. (運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的方式狀語(yǔ)從句)
2.(2022·湖南岳陽(yáng)·三模)假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Tom因疫情隔離返校后無(wú)法融入到同學(xué)之中,感到很孤獨(dú)。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件,給他提出一些建議。內(nèi)容包括:
1. 表達(dá)關(guān)切和鼓勵(lì);
2. 給出具體建議;
3. 表達(dá)祝愿。
注意:
1. 寫作字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)為80左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for telling me what’s been upsetting you. _______________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.Dear Mike,
Thank you for telling me what’s been upsetting you. I can relate to how you feel. I know you’re lonely, but don’t be discouraged! All you need to do is make some small changes.
First, don’t distance yourself from your classmates. You should take the initiative to talk to them. Keep in mind that good communication is essential to forming good relationships with people. Second, show a genuine interest in what your classmates do, which is a good way to start interacting with them. Last, always wear a smile when you see them. It may take a lot of effort, but the reward will be amazing.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件給因疫情隔離返校后無(wú)法融入到同學(xué)之中,感到很孤獨(dú)的英國(guó)朋友Tom表達(dá)關(guān)切和鼓勵(lì),并提出一些建議。
【詳解】
1.詞匯積累
氣餒的:discouraged→ unnerved
遠(yuǎn)離:distance→ keep away from
重要的:essential→ significant
驚人的:amazing→ marvelous
2.句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:First, don’t distance yourself from your classmates. You should take the initiative to talk to them.
拓展句:You should take the initiative to talk to them so that you won’t distance yourself from your classmates.
【點(diǎn)睛】
【高分句型1】Keep in mind that good communication is essential to forming good relationships with people. (運(yùn)用that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句)
【高分句型2】 Second, show a genuine interest in what your classmates do, which is a good way to start interacting with them. (運(yùn)用which引導(dǎo)非限定性定語(yǔ)從句)
3.(2022·浙江紹興·二模)假定你是李華,你的藝術(shù)老師Mr. Wang將舉辦在線講座,介紹剪紙的歷史和剪紙的創(chuàng)作技巧。請(qǐng)給你的新西蘭朋友Peter寫一封郵件,邀請(qǐng)他觀看。
內(nèi)容包括:1.講座內(nèi)容; 2.邀請(qǐng)理由;3.時(shí)間和觀看方式。
注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
3.Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are thrilled about Chinese paper-cutting, I am more than delighted to invite you to get engaged in the online lecture delivered by my art teacher Mr. Wang.
It is scheduled to elaborate the history of the paper-cutting in detail, ranging from its initial stage to its highlight at present. What’s more, Mr. Wang, as an expert in this field, will describe the typical techniques involved.
If you are available at 6:00 p. m. (Beijing Time), May 10, log onto the website of my school. I am sure you will gain a new insight into this form of Chinese art.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是應(yīng)用文。要求考生給新西蘭朋友Peter寫一封郵件,邀請(qǐng)他觀看介紹剪紙歷史和剪紙創(chuàng)作技巧的在線講座。
【詳解】
1.詞匯積累
激動(dòng)的:thrilled→excited
非常:more than→very
高興的:delighted→glad
參加:get engaged in→take part in
2.句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:It is scheduled to elaborate the history of the paper-cutting in detail, ranging from its initial stage to its highlight at present.
拓展句:It is scheduled to elaborate the history of the paper-cutting in detail, which ranges from its initial stage to its highlight at present.
【點(diǎn)睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing that you are thrilled about Chinese paper-cutting, I am more than delighted to invite you to get engaged in the online lecture delivered by my art teacher Mr. Wang.(運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)和that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
【高分句型2】If you are available at 6:00 p. m. (Beijing Time), May 10, log onto the website of my school.(運(yùn)用了If引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)
【高分句型3】I am sure you will gain a new insight into this form of Chinese art.(運(yùn)用了省略連詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
4.(2022·福建泉州·模擬預(yù)測(cè))假定你是李華,你的新西蘭筆友Terry在廈門中學(xué)生助手微信公眾號(hào)里發(fā)郵件詢問(wèn)你今年暑假的安排,請(qǐng)你在公眾號(hào)中回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 當(dāng)社區(qū)志愿者;
2. 為大學(xué)生活做準(zhǔn)備。
注意:1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Terry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.Dear Terry,
Learning that you want to know my plan in summer holiday, I am writing to tell you what I will do.
First, I will be a community volunteer, because I want to help people in my community. I can do some cleaning, talk with the old, and teach them how to surf the Internet. Besides, since I will enter college, I will make full use of the holiday to do some preparations for my college life, which can make me better adapt to the new life.
Best wishes!
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours,???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Li Hua
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生給新西蘭筆友Terry回復(fù)郵件,告訴他你今年暑假的安排,內(nèi)容包括:當(dāng)社區(qū)志愿者;為大學(xué)生活做準(zhǔn)備。
【詳解】
1.詞匯積累
①暑假:summer holiday→summer vocation
②大學(xué):college→university
③此外:Besides→In addition
④充分利用:make full use of→take full advantage of
2.句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:I can do some cleaning, talk with the old, and teach them how to surf the Internet.
拓展句:I can do many meaningful things, which include doing the cleaning, talking with the old, and teaching them how to surf the Internet.
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1] Learning that you want to know my plan in summer holiday, I am writing to tell you what I will do. (運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)和what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型2] Besides, since I will enter college, I will make full use of the holiday to do some preparations for my college life, which can make me better adapt to the new life. (運(yùn)用了since引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
5.(2022·湖北省羅田縣第一中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測(cè))假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Peter得知你校開設(shè)了名為“心靈小屋(Soul House)”的心理咨詢室,來(lái)信詢問(wèn)其具體情況。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 開設(shè)原因和目的;
2. 具體實(shí)施情況;
3. 效果及反饋。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5.范文
Dear Peter,
Delighted to know that you show an interest in the Soul House in our school, I’m honored to inform you of the relevant details.
With a growing number of students feeling stressed out, our school set up the Soul House, aiming at relieving students’ pressure and ensuring their health. It opens from 5:40 p.m. to 6:40 p.m. on weekdays. A psychologist is on duty in the room and he provides psychological expertise and guidance for students and helps resolve their mental health issues and concerns. As its name suggests, “Soul House” has become a place of peace for our souls and played an important role in our mental health.
Hope my account can contribute to your understanding. If you have any other questions, don’t hesitate to turn to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生給英國(guó)朋友Peter寫封信,介紹你校開設(shè)的名為“心靈小屋(Soul House)”的心理咨詢室的相關(guān)情況,內(nèi)容包括:1. 開設(shè)原因和目的;2. 具體實(shí)施情況;3. 效果及反饋。
【詳解】
1. 詞匯積累
高興的:delighted→glad
榮幸的:honored→privileged
相關(guān)的:relevant→related
在……中起重要作用:play an important role in→play an important part in
2. 句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:With a growing number of students feeling stressed out, our school set up the Soul House, aiming at relieving students’ pressure and ensuring their health.
拓展句:With a growing number of students feeling stressed out, our school set up the Soul House, whose aim is to relieve students’ pressure and ensure their health.
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1] Delighted to know that you show an interest in the Soul House in our school, I’m honored to inform you of the relevant details. (運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型2] If you have any other questions, don’t hesitate to turn to me. (運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)
6.(2022·江蘇連云港·模擬預(yù)測(cè))你校英文報(bào)正在舉辦征文比賽,主題為弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)美德。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 介紹一種美德;
2. 你的理解;
3. 你的做法。
注意:1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Embrace Traditional Virtues
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6.
Embrace Traditional Virtues
As the saying goes, honesty is the best policy. Honesty means telling the truth and being fair in act, which can be of great benefit to us. Not only does it make us happy, but it also gains us solid friendship.
Practising honesty has been given priority in my life. I always observe regulations. Once I could have achieved higher marks if I had cheated in the exam, but I chose not to. I am proud of what I did.
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)美德”為主題,寫一篇征文。內(nèi)容包括:1. 介紹一種美德;2. 你的理解;3. 你的做法。
【詳解】
1. 詞匯積累
公平的:fair→equitable
真正的:solid→genuine/real
規(guī)則:regulation→rule
分?jǐn)?shù):mark→grade/score
2. 句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:I always observe regulations.
拓展句:That means I always observe regulations in any situation.
【點(diǎn)睛】
【高分句型1】Honesty means telling the truth and being fair in act, which can be of great benefit to us.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
【高分句型2】Practising honesty has been given priority in my life.(運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作主語(yǔ))
7.(2022·河北石家莊·二模)假定你是李華,你校四月份舉辦了“世界讀書日”系列活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給你的筆友Adam寫一封電子郵件,介紹相關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容包括:
1. 活動(dòng)目的;
2. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容;
3. 你的收獲。
注意:1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Adam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7. I’m Li Hua, writing to introduce a series of activities which were held in my school on World Reading Day.
Based on the theme of the Reading Day — Reading Chinese Classics and Inheriting Chinese Culture, all the activities are intended to raise our awareness of traditional Chinese culture. Diverse activities such as Reading Salon and Books Exchange took place on that day. I benefited a lot from the activities, which enriched my knowledge about traditional culture and helped me develop a good reading habit.
I hope we can share our reading experience some day. Looking forward to your reply.
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給筆友Adam寫一封電子郵件介紹你校四月份舉辦了“世界讀書日”系列活動(dòng)。
【詳解】
1.詞匯積累
一系列:a series of→a chain of
目的是: are intended to→???are aimed to
多樣的:diverse→various/a variety of
希望:hope→ wish/be eager to
2.句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:Diverse activities such as Reading Salon and Books Exchange took place on that day.
拓展句:Diverse activities which includes Reading Salon and Books Exchange took place on that day.
【點(diǎn)睛】
【高分句型1】Based on the theme of the Reading Day — Reading Chinese Classics and Inheriting Chinese Culture, all the activities are intended to raise our awareness of traditional Chinese culture.(運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ))
【高分句型2】I benefited a lot from the activities, which enriched my knowledge about traditional culture and helped me develop a good reading habit.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
8.(2022·浙江紹興·二模)假如你是李華,參加了專門研究中英文化差異的英國(guó)籍外教Mr. Smith的講座,感覺(jué)受益匪淺,現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你給他寫一郵件,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:
1. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)回顧:
2. 你的具體所得;
3. 期待更多講座。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)80左右:
2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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8.Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m lucky enough to have attended your lecture regarding cultural differences between China and Britain. It is so impressive, benefiting me a lot.
During the lecture, you mainly introduced to us what the specific differences are, why they came into being and how we can communicate properly on different occasions. Undoubtedly, such a lecture helps me gain a deeper insight into my own and your cultures and builds my confidence in cross-cultural communication.
Thank you so much! And I’m looking forward to more wonderful lectures concerning what you specialize in.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教教授寫一封信,回顧參加的教授專門研究中英文化差異的講座,內(nèi)容包括:1. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)回顧;2. 你的具體所得;3. 期待更多講座。
【詳解】
1. 詞匯積累
①幸運(yùn)的:lucky→fortunate
②令人難忘的:impressive →imposing
③具體的:specific→detailed
④毫無(wú)疑問(wèn):Undoubtedly→There is no doubt
2. 句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:Undoubtedly, such a lecture helps me gain a deeper insight into my own and your cultures and builds my confidence in cross-cultural communication.
拓展句:Undoubtedly, such a lecture helps me gain a deeper insight into my own and your cultures and builds my confidence in cross-cultural communication, which will truly have a lifelong influence on me.
【點(diǎn)睛】
【高分句型1】I’m lucky enough to have attended your lecture regarding cultural differences between China and Britain.(運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作定語(yǔ))
【高分句型2】And I’m looking forward to more wonderful lectures concerning what you specialize in.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句)
9.(2022·山東菏澤·二模)假定你是李華,你校外教Tom來(lái)信說(shuō)因疫情(the Covid-19 pandemic)不能按時(shí)返校參加讀書節(jié)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給他回封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 表示遺憾;
2. 做好防護(hù);
3. 表達(dá)愿望。
注意:1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
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9.Dear Tom,
? ??Extremely sorry to get the news that on account of the Covid-19 pandemic you failed to return to take part in the Reading Day, I’m writing to express my concern.
? ??Regretful as I am, I have no alternative but to accept it though we are all expecting your turning up. With the pandemic situation becoming more and more serious, I’d like to have you take care of yourself, doing a good job in protecting yourself from infecting it. At the same time, having a good rest at home and avoiding the crowds are also helpful. Of course, it is high time that you built your body up to guard yourself against the virus.
Finally, wish you safely go through the period, and looking forward to your coming back.
????????????Yours,
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Lihua
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)為一篇應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校外教Tom來(lái)信說(shuō)因疫情(the Covid-19 pandemic)不能按時(shí)返校參加讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),要求學(xué)生給外教寫一封信,表達(dá)遺憾和祝愿。
【詳解】
1.詞匯積累:
選擇:alternative→choice
極其,非常:extremely→fairly/very
因?yàn)?,由于:on account of→because of/owing to
有用的:helpful→beneficial/useful
2.句式拓展:
同義句轉(zhuǎn)化
原句:At the same time, having a good rest at home and avoiding the crowds are also helpful.
拓展句:In the meanwhile, it is also beneficial to have a good rest at home and avoid the crowds.
【點(diǎn)睛】
【高分句型1】
Of course, it is high time that you built your body up to guard yourself against the virus.(運(yùn)用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣。)
【高分句型2】
Regretful as I am, I have no alternative but to accept it though we are all expecting your turning up.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝。)
10.(2022·浙江·三模)假定你是星光中學(xué)的高中優(yōu)秀畢業(yè)生李華,母校英語(yǔ)供樂(lè)都將為高一新生舉辦主題為“How to expand your vocabulary?“的英語(yǔ)沙龍活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一份英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿,英語(yǔ)內(nèi)包括:
1. 具體建議,如:堅(jiān)持閱讀等:
2.自身經(jīng)歷:
3.期望和祝福.
注意,1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
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10.Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to expand your vocabulary.
As for me, reading regularly is the key. I suggest that you choose a proper reading material and keep reading it everyday. I remember booking English Weekly each term, which helped me quickly accumulate useful words. Besides, a small notebook for new words is highly recommended, enabling you to copy new words and recite then conveniently.
Thank you! Looking forward to your progress in high school!
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇主題為“How to expand your vocabulary?”的發(fā)言稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 具體建議,如:堅(jiān)持閱讀等;2.自身經(jīng)歷;3.期望和祝福。
【詳解】
1. 詞匯積累
擴(kuò)大:expand→enlarge
關(guān)鍵:key→point
建議:suggest→advise
合適的:proper→appropriate
2. 句式拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:Besides, a small notebook for new words is highly recommended, enabling you to copy new words and recite then conveniently.
拓展句:Besides, a small notebook for new words is highly recommended, which enables you to copy new words and recite then conveniently.
【點(diǎn)睛】
【高分句型1】I suggest that you choose a proper reading material and keep reading it everyday.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句)
【高分句型2】I remember booking English Weekly each term, which helped me quickly accumulate useful words.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
11.(2022·遼寧·東北育才學(xué)校二模)假如你是李華,你校近期舉行了以The Power of Sports為主題的英文演講大賽,請(qǐng)你為學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一篇新聞報(bào)道,要點(diǎn)如下:
1.賽程回顧
2.賽后反響
注意:1.詞數(shù)80詞左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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11.???????Last Monday, our school held an English speaking contest. The theme of the contest is The Power of Sports. Many students in our school actively participated in the contest. During the contest, students expressed the advantages of sports by telling us their own experiences. When giving speeches, they were full of enthusiasm. At the end of the contest, our headmaster presented prizes to the top three students who had won the contest.
Every student enjoyed themselves in the contest. Not only did they practice their oral English, but they knew the power of sports.
【解析】
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生為學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一篇新聞報(bào)道,報(bào)道你校近期舉行的以The Power of Sports為主題的英文演講大賽,內(nèi)容包括:賽程回顧;賽后反響。
【詳解】
1.詞匯積累
比賽:contest→competition
參加:participate in→take part in
好處:advantage→benefit
充滿:be full of→be filled with
2.句式拓展
合并簡(jiǎn)單句
原句:Last Monday, our school held an English speaking contest. The theme of the contest is The Power of Sports.
拓展句:Last Monday, our school held an English speaking contest, the theme of which is The Power of Sports.
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1] When giving speeches, they were full of enthusiasm. (運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句的省略)
[高分句型2] At the end of the contest, our headmaster presented prizes to the top three students who had won the contest. (運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型3] Not only did they practice their oral English, but they knew the power of sports. (not only…but also連接句子時(shí),not only位于句首,該部分用部分倒裝)
12.(2022·河北·模擬預(yù)測(cè))假定你是李華,你們學(xué)校計(jì)劃下周五舉行關(guān)于中西文化的交流活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你寫郵件邀請(qǐng)你校交換生Tom參加。內(nèi)容包括:
1.發(fā)出邀請(qǐng);
2.介紹內(nèi)容;
3.期待到來(lái)。
注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12.Dear Tom,
I am writing to invite you to participate in the Sino-Western cultural exchange activity to be held in our school next Friday.
In order to promote understanding of each other’s cultures, we have designed two activities. First, a show of English classics, during which we can perform what we are interested in, like Shakespeare’s Hamlet. The other is the dumpling making competition. Making dumplings is fun, and tasting your own dumplings is a special experience.
Looking forward to your participation. If you have any questions, please contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給交換生Tom寫信,邀請(qǐng)他參加學(xué)校下周五舉行的中西文化交流活動(dòng)。
【詳解】
1.詞匯積累
參與:participate in→take part in
對(duì)……感興趣:be interested in→have insterest in
有趣的:fun→interesting
聯(lián)系:contact→get in touch with
2.句型拓展
簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句
原句:I am writing to invite you to participate in the Sino-Western cultural exchange activity to be held in our school next Friday.
拓展句:I am writing to invite you to participate in the Sino-Western cultural exchange activity which is be held in our school next Friday.
【點(diǎn)睛】
[高分句型1]First, a show of English classics, during which we can perform what we are interested in, like Shakespeare’s Hamlet.(運(yùn)用了介詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
[高分句型2]If you have any questions, please contact me.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)
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