Part 1題型總覽
【題型綜述】
概要寫作是一種“閱讀+寫作”的復(fù)合型任務(wù),測試學(xué)生的閱讀理解、概括歸納和書面表達方面的綜合能力。選材上，提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，一般以說明文、議論文和記敘文為主，要求考生寫出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要（注意：少于40或多于80詞扣兩分），而新寫的語篇，既要做到在結(jié)構(gòu)、銜接和連貫性等方面與原文保持一致，又要做到簡明扼要、意義完整、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴密和語句通順。
【答題策略】
1.讀懂原文，明確篇章結(jié)構(gòu)
寫概要之前，一定要先通讀原文， 確定文章的體裁和主題。在正確把握文章主旨和段落大意后，明確原文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。 根據(jù)意義劃分文中的自然段，意義段的數(shù)量對應(yīng)的就是要點的數(shù)量。
注意一個自然段不一定是一個要點，有時幾個自然段說明一個要點，有時一個自然段包含數(shù)個要點。
2.去次留精，提煉關(guān)鍵信息
·明確全文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)后， 就要處理原文的內(nèi)容，目的是保留主要內(nèi)容，刪除次要內(nèi)容。
·先找出主題句，同時標注與主題相關(guān)的關(guān)鍵詞，最后歸納的要點往往是這些詞句的同義轉(zhuǎn)述。
·原文描述性的語言、細節(jié)性的信息如列舉數(shù)字和列舉的事例等無須在概要中一一列出。
3.歸納要點 合理表達
明確每個意義段的關(guān)鍵信息后，接下來應(yīng)用自己的語言準確地表達各意義段的要點。 為避免和原文的句子重復(fù)， 可利用同義轉(zhuǎn)述和句式轉(zhuǎn)換這兩種形式歸納要點。各要點的詞數(shù)應(yīng)根據(jù)文中對應(yīng)內(nèi)容的篇幅來定，分清主次。
句式多樣 注意過渡
在概要中合理使用非謂語、從句和特殊句式等使句式豐富多樣，但句子結(jié)構(gòu)不可過長，也不要用太復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)。同時選用適當?shù)倪^渡銜接詞銜接上下文，保證概要部分內(nèi)容的連貫性。
Part 2真題感悟
Passage 1
【真題詳解】
【2019·浙江卷】
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。
It’s a really gd idea t visit clleges befre yu apply because their websites can all start t lk and sund the same. Nthing will give yu the sense f what it will actually be like t live n a cllege campus(校園) like visiting and seeing fr yurself the drms, classrms and athletic equipment and, f curse, the students. It seems a little crazy nce senir year hits t find the time t visit cllege campuses, and it can als be pricey if the schls yu are applying t happen t be mre than a car ride away. But keep in mind that yu are making a decisin abut the next fur years f yur life, and d all the research yu can t make sure yu are making the right ne.
There’s n excuse nt t visit the schls in yur lcal area. In fact, a lt f cllege applicatins even ask if yu have visited campus, and bviusly, if yu live acrss the cuntry that wn’t be as much f a pssibility, but if yu live nearby, g check it ut!
If campus visits aren’t ging t happen befre yu apply, at the very least yu shuld find sme time between applying and getting yur acceptance letters t visit the schls yu’d like t attend. It can save yu a lt f heartache if yu rule ut nw the things that yu dn’t like abut certain campuses, things that yu wuldn’t knw unless yu actually visit.
Nw, if time and mney are making it impssible, then check ut the nline cllege fairs at CllegeWeekLive. It’s a chance t chat nline with admissins fficers, students, and cllege cunselrs (顧問), and it wn’t cst yu a penny! Yu can register fr its nline cllege fair at cllegeweeklive.cm. While visiting an nline cllege fair can’t take the place f an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tl that alng with all yur ther research will help yu make an infrmed decisin abut which clleges r universities yu’d like t attend.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
It’s really wrthwhile t pay a visit t their desired clleges persnally befre applying. Undubtedly, students shuld visit their lcal clleges, which may be included in applicatins. At least, they shuld visit the schl and figure ut its real cnditins in advance. Fr students wh are shrt f mney and time, registering fr the nline cllege fair is a gd alternative t help them better understand schls.
【分析】
本文要求閱讀短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要，即用盡可能少的詞匯集中展現(xiàn)原材料的主要思想和觀點。這主要是考查學(xué)生把握文章主旨大意和段落大意的能力以及總結(jié)概括能力，熟練掌握從句、非謂語動詞等語法知識和遣詞造句的能力。
【詳解】
1. 要先讀懂、讀透原作。這是準確再現(xiàn)原文、寫好概要的前提。動筆前多讀兩遍原文，直至弄懂讀透。
2. 抓住文中的關(guān)鍵句，確定寫作主題。開頭It's a really gd idea t visit clleges befre yu apply點明了本文主題；But keep in mind that yu are making a decisin abut the next fur years f yur life, and d all the research yu can t make sure yu are making the right ne. There’s n excuse nt t visit the schls in yur lcal area.說明了去大學(xué)看看的必要性和可行性；If campus visits aren’t ging t happen befre yu apply, at the very least yu shuld find sme time between applying and getting yur acceptance letters t visit the schls yu’d like t attend.在時間上提供了更多選擇；if time and mney are making it impssible, then check ut the nline cllege fairs at CllegeWeekLive.為不能親自去大學(xué)看的學(xué)生提供了另外一種方法。
3.擬好提綱。有了提綱，寫概要時就會有章法，也不會遺漏原作中的要點。
4.快速成文，反復(fù)推敲。按照文章要求和擬好的提綱一氣呵成，寫完初稿。
5.對照修改潤色，再讀原文，查看是否漏掉了重要信息或主要內(nèi)容。用詞是否恰當，可有可無的刪掉。注意詞類、時態(tài)、語態(tài)的適當調(diào)整。
【點睛】
范文觀點明確，重點突出，語言簡練，詞數(shù)適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如定語從句which may be included in applicatins.和wh are shrt f mney and time.動名詞registering nline作主語，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。
【提分詞匯】
undubtedly adv. 確實地，毋庸置疑地
applicatins n.申請
figure ut 算出
【亮點句型】
It’s really wrthwhile t pay a visit t their desired clleges persnally befre applying. 在申請之前親自參觀一下自己心儀的大學(xué)是非常值得的。
Fr students wh are shrt f mney and time, registering fr the nline cllege fair is a gd alternative t help them better understand schls.對于那些缺乏資金和時間的學(xué)生來說，報名參加網(wǎng)上高校招聘會是一個很好的選擇，可以幫助他們更好地了解學(xué)校。
Passage 2
【真題詳解】
【2019·上海卷】
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Where are the bees?
Bees are essential t the prductin f fd we eat. Bees make hney, but they als pllinate large areas f crps, such as straw berries, apples and nins. Abut a third f the fd we eat is a result f pllinatin f the bees. Unfrtunately, bees have been disappearing at an alarming rate.
In 2006, bee keepers started reprting abut smething called Clny Cllapse Disaster (CCD).The main sign f CCD is the lss f adult hney bees frm a hive. In Octber f 2006, sme beekeepers reprted that they had lst between 30 and 90 percent f their hives.
There were many theries fr the disappearance f the bees. But the mst cnvincing ne has t d with pesticides and lifestyles f bees tday. Nwadays, beekeeper get mst f their incme nt frm prducing hney but frm renting bees t pllinate plants. This means that the life f the typical bee nw cnsists f travelling all arund the cuntry t pllinate crps as the seasns change. That means a lt f traveling n trucks, which is very stressful t bees. It is nt unusual fr up t 30% f the hive t die during transprt due t stress. In additin, bees that spend mst f their time lcked up n trucks are nt expsed t what they usually live n. Instead, they live n a sweet liquid frm crn, usually plluted with pesticides.
The exact reasn fr the disappearance f bees is nt sure, but lsing bees is very cstly t the ecnmy. The bee pllinatin services are wrth ver $8 billin a year. With n bees, pllinatin will have t be dne by hand, which wuld have effects n the quality f fd and increased fd priced. We hear a lt abut big envirnmental disasters almst every day. But ne f the biggest may just be the less f that tiny flying insect.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Bees nt nly prvide us with hney, but als help pllinate crps. Hwever, they are disappearing at an alarming rate fr unknw reasn, which will be disastrus t us and ecnmy. Sme peple think it is the pesticide while thers think it is due t transprt.
【分析】
本文屬于環(huán)保文章，介紹蜜蜂正以驚人的速度消失，這可能和運輸、農(nóng)作物使用殺蟲劑以及環(huán)境有關(guān)，但是沒人知道確切原因。要求考生閱讀完總結(jié)論點，不能超過60個詞。
【詳解】
第一步，歸納各個段落的段落大意，第一段講述蜜蜂對我們很重要，但是卻以驚人的速度消失，第二段講述蜜蜂出現(xiàn)這種狀況的情形，第三段講述可能造成此現(xiàn)象的原因；第四段講述這種現(xiàn)象對我們和經(jīng)濟的影響。
第二步，可以擇出重要的信息，蜜蜂對我們很重要，但是卻以驚人的速度消失，可能造成此現(xiàn)象的原因，以及影響。
第三步，得出答案，注意過渡與銜接，字數(shù)控制在60字以內(nèi)。
【點睛】
概要寫作做題技巧。概要寫作不是對段落大意的簡單堆積，需要學(xué)生讀懂文章的大概意思和文章結(jié)構(gòu)，還需要一定寫作替換技巧，且注意語言的簡潔性。第一步，確定文章的話題和各段的段落大意，比如本文話題為蜜蜂的消失，第一段講述蜜蜂對我們很重要，但是卻以驚人的速度消失，第二段講述蜜蜂出現(xiàn)這種狀況的情形，第三段講述可能造成此現(xiàn)象的原因；第四段講述這種現(xiàn)象對我們和經(jīng)濟的影響；第二步，分析各個段落的邏輯關(guān)系，確定主觀點和次要觀點；第三步，注意一定的寫作技巧，比如同義詞、近義詞的替換，句型和結(jié)構(gòu)的轉(zhuǎn)換；第四步，檢查單詞拼寫，語法規(guī)則，字數(shù)問題等。
【提分詞匯】
prvide ... with 給...提供…
【亮點句型】
Hwever, they are disappearing at an alarming rate fr unknwn reasn, which will be disastrus t us and ecnmy. 然而，由于未知的原因，它們正在以驚人的速度消失，這對美國和經(jīng)濟將是災(zāi)難性的。
Sme peple think it is the pesticide while thers think it is due t transprt.一些人認為是殺蟲劑，而另一些人認為是由于運輸。
Part 3專題強化
Passage 1【真題自測】
【2020·上海卷】
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint( s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
It's undeniable: Being amng the first t try ut a new piece f technlgy is cl. There's the excitement f ding what has never been dne befre-the feeling that yu're living in the future. And when yu're the sle member f yur scial circle with the latest ht gadget, peple stare in fascinatin. They ask yu questins. They see yu as the hlder f pwerful, secret knwledge-fr a little while, until the next big thing cmes alng. Peple tend t underestimate the csts f this temprary clness, which they pay in mre ways than ne. Dn't fall int the early adpter trap. Dn't jin the first wave f cnsumers wh invest in the latest media-hyped hardware; instead, wait and see.
T put it frankly, early adptin is a bad investment. First, the earliest versins f devices are nt nly expensive, they are als the mst expensive that thse devices will ever be. Cmpanies are presumably attempting t recver the cst f prductin as fast as they can, and they knw that there are serius tech-lvers wh will pay a great deal t be first. Once the revenues frm early adpters' purchases are safely in their hands, they can cut the price and shift t the next marketing phase: selling the prduct t everyne else. This is why the cst f the riginal iPhne drpped abut U. S. $200 nly eight mnths after its release. Plus, electrnics hardly ever becme mre expensive because intense cmpetitin in the industry puts dwnward pressure n prices ver time. Prices f gadgets will fall shrtly after release, and they will likely keep falling. Many new TV mdels drp significantly in price as little as ten days after hitting the market. Further, electrnics rapidly depreciate because they becme bslete (廢棄的)s quickly. This means that early adpters pay the maximum price fr an item that des nt hld nt its value. The resale price f a cell phne r laptp can drp by fifty percent within just a few mnths.
Speaking f becming bslete, thse wh are first t leap int a new technlgy risk (三野志) wasting mney and time n smething that will never catch n. Anther gd reasn t resist the early-adptin temptatin is that the first versin f a prduct typically has defects that cst a lt in time and frustratin. Such prblems are s cmmn with new technlgy that early adpters are basically unpaid beta testers and trubleshters. Unless this sunds t yu like a fun way t spend yur time, dn't be amng the first users. If yu wait t learn what the prblems are with a new electrnic gadget, yu can lk frward t a smther experience—r chse a less trublesme prduct.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dn't be the first users f the latest electrnic equipment. Firstly, the earliest versins f devices are the mst expensive. Secndly, the electrnics will be ut f date rapidly. Thirdly ,the first versins f a prduct are with sme defects generally. Therefre, dn't be the first t try ut the latest electrnic prducts.
【分析】
本文是一篇議論文。文章主要論述了雖然成為購買最新的電子產(chǎn)品的第一批人是很酷的，但是考慮到價格昂貴、產(chǎn)品易過時且新品通常有缺陷等因素，購買最新的電子產(chǎn)品是一項糟糕的投資。
【詳解】
1. 要點摘錄
①Dn't jin the first wave f cnsumers wh invest in the latest media-hyped hardware; instead, wait and see.
②First, the earliest versins f devices are nt nly expensive, they are als the mst expensive that thse devices will ever be.
③Speaking f becming bslete, thse wh are first t leap int a new technlgy risk wasting mney and time n smething that will never catch n.
④Anther gd reasn t resist the early-adptin temptatin is that the first versin f a prduct typically has defects that cst a lt in time and frustratin.
⑤Unless this sunds t yu like a fun way t spend yur time, dn't be amng the first users.
2.縝密構(gòu)思
將第1、2兩個要點進行重組，將第3、4、5三個要點進行整合。
3.遣詞造句
Dn't be the first users f the new electrnic equipment．
The reasns are as fllwing: Firstly, the earliest versins f devices are nt nly expensive, but als the mst expensive that thse devices will ever be.
Secndly, electrnics will be ut f date rapidly.
Thirdly, the first versins f a prduct are with sme defects generally. Therefre, dn't be the first t try ut the new prducts.
【點睛】
[高分句型1] Secndly， electrnics will be ut f date rapidly．句子里，固定短語 ut f date 表示“過時”，表達比較高級。
[高分句型2] Therefre, dn't be the first t try ut the latest electrnic prducts.運用了不定式作后置定語。
Passage 2【真題自測】
【2019·浙江】
閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, authr f The A t Z Guide t Raising Happy and Cnfident Kids, says, “We’ve gne t the ppsite extreme f a few decades ag when parents tended t be mre strict.” By giving kids a lt f praise, parents think they’re building their children’s cnfidence, when, in fact, it may be just the ppsite. T much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid t try new things r take a risk fr fear f nt being able t stay n tp where their parents’ praise has put them.
Still, dn’t g t far in the ther directin. Nt giving enugh praise can be just as damaging as giving t much. Kids will feel like they’re nt gd enugh r that yu dn’t care and, as a result, may see n pint in trying hard fr their accmplishments.
S what is the right amunt f praise? Experts say that the quality f praise is mre imprtant than the quantity. If praise is sincere and fcused n the effrt nt the utcme, yu can give it as ften as yur child des smething that deserves a verbal reward. “We shuld especially recgnize ur children’s effrts t push themselves and wrk hard t achieve a gal,” says Dnahue, authr f Parenting Withut Fear: Letting G f Wrry and Fcusing n What Really Matters. “One thing t remember is that it’s the prcess nt the end prduct that matters.”
Yur sn may nt be the best basketball player n his team. But if he’s ut there every day and playing hard, yu shuld praise his effrt regardless f whether his team wins r lses. Praising the effrt and nt the utcme can als mean recgnizing yur child when she has wrked hard t clean the yard, ck dinner, r finish a bk reprt. But whatever it is, praise shuld be given n a case-by-case basis and be prprtinate(相稱的) t the amunt f effrt yur child has put int it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Parents tend t g t extremes when it cmes t praising their kids. (要點一) Yet, bth t much and t little praise can be equally damaging. (要點二) When giving praise, parents shuld be sincere and cncentrate n the prcess instead f the result. (要點三) Similarly, they ught t give praise fr hw much effrt their kids have invested in the wrk they’re invlved in. (要點四)
【分析】
本次浙江高考書面表達采用了概要寫作題型。概要寫作是閱讀理解和書面表達的溝通橋梁，考查的是學(xué)生在實現(xiàn)自由的思維表達之前，對他人的信息在理解的基礎(chǔ)上進行概括表達的能力。選材上，提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，題材不限，要求考生寫出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。
【詳解】
完成一篇概要寫作，需要經(jīng)過三個步驟，
1. 讀懂原文，抓住段落主題句。在閱讀過程中，需要準確把握文章的段落大意，學(xué)會剔除非重要信息，弄清楚不同體裁的文章的內(nèi)部邏輯關(guān)系以及文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。
2. 組織語言，轉(zhuǎn)換表達。在找到主題句明確全文中心的基礎(chǔ)上，組織好語言，注重語言表達的獨立性和準確性以及高級性，不全盤照抄原文句子，盡量用自己的語言轉(zhuǎn)換表達，同時要注意篇幅的比例安排，用較多的文字去表達重要的內(nèi)容。
3. 通讀全文，邏輯連貫。要牢記各段落要點之間的邏輯關(guān)系和自然銜接，用恰當?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞去連貫全文。
Passage 3【模擬自測】
（2021·上海靜安區(qū)·高三一模）Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
Surveys indicate that a third f Britns regularly eat n their wn. OpenTable, an nline restaurant bking app, fund that sl dining in New Yrk increased by 80% during the past 5 years. And in Japan, the wrld capital f sl dining, a trend fr "lw interactin dining11 has taken ff. Restaurants are pening which facilitate the ultimate sl dining experience: passing bwls f ndles thrugh black curtains int individual bths.
Is this a wrrying trend? We think s. Research is revealing the negative impacts f eating alne, which has been fund t be linked t a variety f mental and physical health cnditins, frm depressin and diabetes t high bld pressure.
S it's cheering that hundreds f fd sharing initiatives have sprung up arund the wrld. There's Lndn's Casserle Club, fr example, whse vlunteers share prtins f hme-cked fd with peple in their area wh aren't always able t ck fr themselves, in which case they put an end t fd waste. Or there is Suth Africa's Fd Jams, scial gatherings in which participants are paired up, preferably with strangers, and given a prtin f the meal t prepare. Many participants interviewed mentined that their lneliness was greatly relieved. Such initiatives ffer lessns f all kinds t thse thinking abut hw ur fd systems need t change. They als smewhat cmpensate fr the undesirable utcmes sle eating brings.
S why d peple stp eating tgether? There are a variety f reasns. Authrs such as Michael Pllan argue that it is due t the fact that peple attach less value t hme-based labr, including cking. The widening f the wrkfrce, which brught many wmen ut f the kitchen and int the wrkplace during the 20th century, als cntributed. Meanwhile, the grwth in insecure and incnsistent wrking patterns amng a grwing prprtin f the ppulatin als discurages meals eaten cmmunally.
【答案】
The trend f sle dining is catching n in majr cuntries. Hwever, it des harm physically and mentally. Frtunately fd-sharing prgrams make up fr its bad effects by aviding fd waste and cmbating lneliness. Eating tgether has declined because f peple’s undervaluing f cking at hme, mre wmen’s entry int the wrkfrce and weakening wrk relatinships.
【分析】
本文是一篇說明文。單人用餐的趨勢正在主要國家流行起來。然而，它確實會傷害身體和精神。幸運的是，食物共享計劃通過避免食物浪費和對抗孤獨來彌補它的不良影響。由于人們低估了在家做飯的價值，更多的女性進入職場，以及工作關(guān)系的弱化，在一起吃飯的人數(shù)有所下降。
【詳解】
1 要點摘錄①.Surveys indicate that a third f Britns regularly eat n their wn. OpenTable, an nline restaurant bking app, fund that sl dining in New Yrk increased by 80% during the past 5 years.
②.Research is revealing the negative impacts f eating alne, which has been fund t be linked t a variety f mental and physical health cnditins, frm depressin and diabetes t high bld pressure.
③.There's Lndn's Casserle Club, fr example, whse vlunteers share prtins f hme-cked fd with peple in their area wh aren't always able t ck fr themselves, in which case they put an end t fd waste.
④.The widening f the wrkfrce, which brught many wmen ut f the kitchen and int the wrkplace during the 20th century, als cntributed.
2.縝密構(gòu)思將第1、2兩個要點進行重組，將第3、4兩個要點進行整合。
3.遣詞造句The trend f sle dining is catching n in majr cuntries. Hwever, it des harm physically and mentally. Frtunately fd-sharing prgrams make up fr its bad effects by aviding fd waste and cmbating lneliness.Because f peple’s undervaluing f cking at hme, mre wmen’s entry int the wrkfrce and weakening wrk relatinships, they ften chse t eat alne.
【點睛】
[高分句型1] Hwever, it des harm physically and mentally. (使用hwever對前文內(nèi)容表達轉(zhuǎn)折，physically和mentally副詞作狀語修飾動作des harm。)
[高分句型2]Frtunately fd-sharing prgrams make up fr its bad effects by aviding fd waste and cmbating lneliness.(運用介詞by+ding作方式狀語，表達比較高級。)
[高分句型3]Eating tgether has declined because f peple’s undervaluing f cking at hme, mre wmen’s entry int the wrkfrce and weakening wrk relatinships.(使用動名詞eating作主語，because f后接名詞短語和動名詞作并列賓語，充分使用了非謂語動詞里的高級表達。)
Passage 4【模擬自測】
（2020·浙江寧波市·高三月考）概要寫作
An allergy, als knwn as an allergic disease, is an immune system reactin t nrmally harmless things, such as dust，plants, animals r certain fds. Symptms vary depending n the allergy. Cmmn cld symptms such as lw fever, sneezing, and a sre thrat may all indicate allergies.
What causes an allergic reactin is a questin still puzzling scientists. Types f allergies have greatly increase since the mid-20th century， leading sme experts t suggest the increased envirnmental pllutin is held respnsible. Sme experts suggest that allergies are related with genes with twins being particularly likely t share the same prblems. Often，an allergic reactin will develp in childhds but since many reactins are likely t wrsen with repeated expsure, symptms can start t appear at any age. Hwever，sme peple may vercme childhd allergies with age grwing.
Testing fr an allergy can be a tricky prcess，particularly if an allergic reactin culd threaten the victim's life. Dctrs ften use a skin test methd fr a variety f pssible allergic reactins. In skin testing, a tiny amunt f an allergen (過敏原) is sht int a marked place f skin t see if the skin reacts negatively. If serius reactins are a cncern , dctrs can als use a bld test， althugh this takes mre time and may be less accurate than skin testing.
Treatment may depend n the type and severe degree f the patient allergic respnse. In sme mild cases， such as sneezing caused by animal expsure， patients are tld t avid expsure when pssible. Aviding the fd is als key with many fd allergies, particularly thse that can cause severe respnses. When aviding is impssible,sme dctrs may recmmend shts. This intends t build up tlerance in the immune system by expsing the patient t increasing small amunts f the allergen ver time.
【答案】
An allergy is a reactin perfrmed by the immune system t cmmn things with varius symptms. As is suggested, it is cnnected with envirnmental pllutin r genes, while its real causes are still unclear. Besides，mst allergies will develp with repeated expsure, but sme may be vercme. T test fr an allergy, a skin test is ften available, and a bld test is als applied if necessary. Mrever，in case f the actual cnditins，with aviding expsure being mst imprtant, different treatments are used accrdingly.
【分析】
本文是一篇說明文。文章介紹過敏。過敏可能表現(xiàn)出各種癥狀。過敏的測試過程是很困難的，只有避免接觸過敏原才能避免過敏。
【詳解】
1 要點摘錄
①An allergy, als knwn as an allergic disease, is an immune system reactin t nrmally harmless things.
②What causes an allergic reactin is a questin still puzzling scientists.
③Sme experts suggest the increased envirnmental pllutin is held respnsible.
④Sme experts suggest that allergies are related with genes with twins being particularly likely t share the same prblems.
⑤Testing fr an allergy can be a tricky prcess.
⑥D(zhuǎn)ctrs ften use a skin test methd fr a variety f pssible allergic reactins.If serius reactins are a cncern, dctrs can als use a bld test.
⑦Treatment may depend n the type and severe degree f the patient allergic respnse.
2.縝密構(gòu)思
將第1個要點進行簡寫；第2、3、4三個要點進行重組；將第5、6兩個要點進行整合；將第7個要點進行重寫。
3.遣詞造句
An allergy is a reactin perfrmed by the immune system t cmmn things with varius symptms.
As is suggested, it is cnnected with envirnmental pllutin r genes, while its real causes are still unclear.
T test fr an allergy, a skin test is ften available, and a bld test is als applied if necessary.
In case f the actual cnditins，with aviding expsure being mst imprtant different treatments are used accrdingly.
【點睛】
[高分句型1]
As is suggested, it is cnnected with envirnmental pllutin r genes, while its real causes are still unclear. 運用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，把要點3、4進行了重組，while表示對比，對第二個要點進行了闡述。
[高分句型2]
T test fr an allergy, a skin test is ften available, and a bld test is als applied if necessary.運用了不定式做目的狀語，引出第5個要點，同時其后使用了and的并列句，對第6個要點進行了壓縮。
序號
內(nèi)容
Part 1
題型總覽
題型綜述 答題策略
Part 2
真題感悟
品讀范文 提分詞匯 亮點句型
Part 3
專題強化
真題自測 自測模擬

相關(guān)試卷

高中英語高考解密25 書面表達之概要寫作--2021年高考英語高頻考點解密（二輪復(fù)習(xí)）（原卷版）：

這是一份高中英語高考解密25 書面表達之概要寫作--2021年高考英語高頻考點解密（二輪復(fù)習(xí)）（原卷版），共17頁。

(新高考)高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)熱點02 書面表達概要寫作專練（2份打包，解析版+原卷版）：

這是一份(新高考)高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)熱點02 書面表達概要寫作專練（2份打包，解析版+原卷版），文件包含新高考高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)熱點02書面表達概要寫作專練解析版doc、新高考高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)熱點02書面表達概要寫作專練原卷板doc等2份試卷配套教學(xué)資源，其中試卷共28頁， 歡迎下載使用。

高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題21書面表達之介紹類1（活動介紹）（2份打包，解析版+原卷版）：

這是一份高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題21書面表達之介紹類1（活動介紹）（2份打包，解析版+原卷版），文件包含高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題21書面表達之介紹類1活動介紹解析版doc、高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題21書面表達之介紹類1活動介紹原卷版doc等2份試卷配套教學(xué)資源，其中試卷共13頁， 歡迎下載使用。

英語朗讀寶

相關(guān)試卷 更多

高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題20 書面表達之演講稿&通知（2份打包，解析版+原卷版）

高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題20 書面表達之演講稿&通知（2份打包，解析版+原卷版）
高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題24書面表達之讀后續(xù)寫（2份打包，解析版+原卷版）

高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題24書面表達之讀后續(xù)寫（2份打包，解析版+原卷版）
高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題23 書面表達之介紹類3（地點介紹）（2份打包，解析版+原卷版）

高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)題型專題23 書面表達之介紹類3（地點介紹）（2份打包，解析版+原卷版）
2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專項解密25書面表達之概要寫作含解析

2021屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專項解密25書面表達之概要寫作含解析
資料下載及使用幫助
版權(quán)申訴
版權(quán)申訴
若您為此資料的原創(chuàng)作者，認為該資料內(nèi)容侵犯了您的知識產(chǎn)權(quán)，請掃碼添加我們的相關(guān)工作人員，我們盡可能的保護您的合法權(quán)益。
入駐教習(xí)網(wǎng)，可獲得資源免費推廣曝光，還可獲得多重現(xiàn)金獎勵，申請 精品資源制作， 工作室入駐。
版權(quán)申訴二維碼
高考專區(qū)
歡迎來到教習(xí)網(wǎng)
  • 900萬優(yōu)選資源，讓備課更輕松
  • 600萬優(yōu)選試題，支持自由組卷
  • 高質(zhì)量可編輯，日均更新2000+
  • 百萬教師選擇，專業(yè)更值得信賴
微信掃碼注冊
qrcode
二維碼已過期
刷新

微信掃碼，快速注冊

手機號注冊
手機號碼

手機號格式錯誤

手機驗證碼 獲取驗證碼

手機驗證碼已經(jīng)成功發(fā)送，5分鐘內(nèi)有效

設(shè)置密碼

6-20個字符，數(shù)字、字母或符號

注冊即視為同意教習(xí)網(wǎng)「注冊協(xié)議」及「隱私條款」
QQ注冊
手機號注冊
微信注冊

注冊成功

返回
頂部