One possible version: Dear Lisa,How is everything going? My school is going to hold a traditional Chinese art festival next week. Knowing that you are quite interested in Chinese art Im writing to invite you to attend it.The art festival will be held from 8 a.m to 5 p.m.next Friday in the school hall which will cover a wide range of appealing activities. You can enjoy beautiful Chinese paintings and calligraphy works in the festival.There are also some hands-on activities like paper cutting and painting Peking Opera facial masks.Im sure youll like it.Will you be available that day? Looking forward to your early replyYours, Li Hua英語試題讀后續(xù)寫評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及流程一、寫作思路1. 基本情節(jié) 前文大意   退伍軍官Tim Robinson 獨(dú)自在海邊散步,不小心踩到水草滑倒在地,摔傷了腿。不幸的是,他既沒有帶手機(jī),也無人可以求救。他利用之前的部隊(duì)知識(shí)進(jìn)行自救,經(jīng)過多次不懈的嘗試只能選擇爬行,并利用手電筒發(fā)出求救信號(hào),終于得到遠(yuǎn)方的回應(yīng)。續(xù)寫思路結(jié)合原文,由續(xù)寫第一段首句 Tim finally got a response from the distance可以預(yù)測(cè)續(xù)寫第一段主要內(nèi)容:是誰給Tim做出回應(yīng)?是如何回應(yīng)的?又是如何救助Tim的?(此處可以有對(duì)話——詢問狀況,動(dòng)作——實(shí)施first aid以及情感描述)。由第二段首句Tims condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought. 可以預(yù)測(cè):Tim的妻子發(fā)現(xiàn)了他發(fā)出的求救信號(hào),并做出反應(yīng)(用手電筒回應(yīng)或者大喊,打急救電話,實(shí)施急救)。結(jié)合原文及續(xù)寫第二段首句Tims condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought. 可以預(yù)測(cè)續(xù)寫第二段主要內(nèi)容: 妻子發(fā)現(xiàn)Tim傷情嚴(yán)重,(此處需要對(duì)傷情展開適度描述——身體狀況糟糕)。幸運(yùn)的是,救護(hù)車及時(shí)趕到,Tim得到了及時(shí)的救助。故事結(jié)尾突出主題:Tim把部隊(duì)所學(xué)生存技巧應(yīng)用于實(shí)踐中以及Tim面對(duì)困難時(shí)的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志。2. 續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)(建議):第一段:關(guān)鍵字:是誰給Tim做出回應(yīng)?是如何回應(yīng)的?又是如何救助Tim的?建議:注意兩人之間的互動(dòng),情感、對(duì)話等細(xì)節(jié)描寫第二段:關(guān)鍵字:傷情嚴(yán)重,救助及時(shí),意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。建議:對(duì)傷情展開適度描述,強(qiáng)調(diào)自救知識(shí)或生存技巧的重要性,突出故事主題。3. 參考范文 One possible version:Tim finally got a response from the distance. He was excited to see a torch flashing back. It was his wife shining the torch in response to his signal. Thankfully his wife knew something must have been wrong and went looking for her husband. She kept moving toward her husband, shining her light. All the while, Mrs. Robinson called for help. As they got closer to each other she waited anxiously for help to arrive. She had no idea how hurt her husband actually was. Tims condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought. Tims broken leg hurt increasingly worse and was at risk of infection. He needed medical care immediately. Luckily, the ambulance finally showed up. After checking his leg, the medical workers couldnt believe what he had put himself through. This man had crawled such a long distance after suffering such a wound. If it hadnt been for his training in the army, he might not have made it. Hell carry his cell phone with him at all times now.  

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