專題18 書面表達(dá)02020-2021學(xué)年八年級英語下學(xué)期期末專項復(fù)習(xí)（人教新目標(biāo)）(28689381)-試卷下載-教習(xí)網(wǎng)

專題18 書面表達(dá) 第一部分題型解題技巧一、書面表達(dá)題型簡介英語書面表達(dá)試題屬綜合性運用試題，是考查學(xué)生運用各項語法知識、正確進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)的能力以及善于理解情景提示的內(nèi)容，抓住要點和中心思想的能力，是“壓軸題”，屬中考英語重大題型。能否把書面表達(dá)題型做好對于英語成績總成績能否考好非常重要。二、書面表達(dá)題型做題技巧書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語言要規(guī)范，時態(tài)運用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：1.審題：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。2.抓住要點：要點是否齊全，適當(dāng)補充。3.擴充句子：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.改正錯誤：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?/span>6.謄寫作文：注意書寫工整美觀整潔. 第二部分書面表達(dá)專項訓(xùn)練一、看圖作文1．書面表達(dá) （共15分）新學(xué)期開始，你就讀的國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生社團又開始招募了。假設(shè)你是社團負(fù)責(zé)人，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容和要求寫一篇英語短文，為新同學(xué)介紹下列社團的情況(包括名稱、活動內(nèi)容及其目的)。注意：1. 詞數(shù)70左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；2. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息。否則不予評分。Welcome to school clubsThe new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs.These are the most popular clubs in our school, and hope you can join us. 二、材料作文2．現(xiàn)如今許多野生動物瀕臨滅絕，它們的家園遭到破壞。WWF（The World Wild Fund for Nature）將舉辦一次演講比賽宣傳保護(hù)野生動物，假如你是李華，請以“We should protect wild animals!”為題，結(jié)合以下提示，寫一篇演講稿參賽。We should protect wild animals!描述野生動物的現(xiàn)狀與瀕危原因給出保護(hù)動物的相關(guān)措施或建議。1. 人類的捕殺2. …………1. 建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)2. …………注意：（1）內(nèi)容必須包含表格中所提供的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文本長度：100詞左右；（3）文中不能出現(xiàn)學(xué)生真實姓名和所在學(xué)校名稱。參考詞匯：自然保護(hù)區(qū)nature reserves 研究中心research centres________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三、話題作文3． 10月4日是世界動物日，你校舉辦了“Protecting animals”為主題的英語演講比賽。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)下面表格的提示，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語演講稿。內(nèi)容要點:現(xiàn)狀很多動物瀕臨滅絕原因人們侵占了它們的土地和森林；沒有足夠多的干凈水……意義我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)動物，動物是人類的朋友打算……Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 四、書信作文4．假如你是李明，你的美國朋友Martin現(xiàn)正受疫情影響，在家上網(wǎng)課。請你寫一封郵件告訴他你前段時間上網(wǎng)課的經(jīng)歷和感受，及提高網(wǎng)課學(xué)習(xí)效果的建議，供他參考。注意：1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：2. 90詞左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名或?qū)W校。提示詞：e-lessons網(wǎng)課, Ting Talk釘釘, video meeting視頻會議, upload上傳, download下載Dear Martin, How is it going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Love, Li Ming 五、日記5．上周六，英語老師帶領(lǐng)同學(xué)們到兒童醫(yī)院做志愿活動，并要求大家寫一篇日記描述此次志愿活動的過程。假如你是張娟，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，完成日記。寫作提示：1.為兒童醫(yī)院的兒童送禮物；2.幫助那里的兒童洗衣服，打掃房間；3.做一些有趣的活動，給那里的兒童帶去歡樂。寫作要求：1.語句通順，條理清晰，詳略得當(dāng)，書寫工整；2.100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。March13th　Saturday Sunny______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 六、講稿6．假設(shè)你叫張翔，是一名初二學(xué)生。你們英語老師讓同學(xué)們在課堂上準(zhǔn)備一個英語演講，主題是“How to deal with accidents”，請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語演講稿。意外事故處理辦法做飯燙傷手首先把手放在冷水中10分鐘；然后用干凈的手巾蓋上燙傷處；趕緊去看醫(yī)生遇到火災(zāi)用濕手巾捂住口和鼻子，貼近地面，盡快出去；絕不要回到著火的房子里拿東西；撥打119，……撥打120，……要求:1.包含所有給出的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 80詞左右開頭和結(jié)尾已給出.不計入總詞數(shù)。 Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 七、啟事類7．小作文：根據(jù)要求完成下面內(nèi)容，并將答案寫在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置“老吾老以及人之老，幼吾幼以及人之幼。”這句經(jīng)典名言鼓勵著我們友愛互助。幸福老人院（Happy Old People’s Home）需要數(shù)名志愿者，要求志愿者有特長，有愛好，有愛心，能和老人友好相處。請為老人院寫一則招聘廣告，聯(lián)系電話：8686000。詞數(shù)30~40。Volunteers Wanted______________________________________________________________________________ 參考答案1．書面表達(dá)參考范文Welcome to school clubsThe new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs.Cool Players is a good choice for sports lovers. Here you can do sports one hour a day to make you healthy and strong, and you can watch sports matches. If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice. Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes. Do you want to be a volunteer? If so, you can join Happy Volunteers and take part in shows or help needy people in the city.These are the most popular clubs in our school, and hope you can join us.【解析】試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以所提供內(nèi)容寫一篇作文，即介紹三個社團的情況(包括名稱、活動內(nèi)容及其目的)。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作要點，即：每個俱樂部的主要內(nèi)容。一是俱樂部名稱；二是俱樂部活動內(nèi)容；三是俱樂部的目的。樂善者俱樂部的活動內(nèi)容與目的需要我們自己補充。主要內(nèi)容雖然已經(jīng)列出，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者從三個方面介紹了每一個俱樂部，介紹了俱樂部的名稱、活動內(nèi)容和目的，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。如Do you want to be a volunteer? If so, you can join Happy Volunteers and take part in shows or help needy people in the city.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice.等。考點：提綱類作文。 2．書面表達(dá)參考范文We should protect wild animalsMany animals are in danger in the world today. The number of the wild animals is smaller and smaller. Tigers and pandas are examples of them. When people cut down trees, tigers have no place to live or hunt for food. Soon people kill tigers for their fur. Also, there are fewer and fewer places for pandas to live in. We are not alone in the world. We could not live without plants and animals around us, so it’s very important to protect them. And we must stop people from killing animals. We should set up nature reserves to protect wild animals. We should have some research centres to study the endangered species and do some effective work to protect them. If each of us can plant a tree and love the animals, the world will be more beautiful.【詳解】1. 題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和提示表格，寫出野生動物現(xiàn)在的現(xiàn)狀和原因以及要采取的措施和建議，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。
2. 寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要與題目中的提示緊密結(jié)合，用第一人稱和其他人稱相結(jié)合來寫作，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，要做到要點齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。 3．書面表達(dá)參考范文Protecting animalsHello, everyone. I’m Li Hua.Now many animals are on the verge of extinction. Because people have encroached on their land and forests. The water is no longer clean. Many of them don’t have enough clean water to drink. Besides, many people kill some wild animals for their fur, skin, teeth and meat.However, we all know that animals are human friends. We must protect animals. I will be kind to my pet dog and plan to feed the stray cats regularly on weekends.We should plant more trees to build homes for wild animals and prevent them from being killed. Let's protect wild animals together. Thank you!【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這篇作文要求我們以“Protecting animals”為題，根據(jù)寫作提示，談一談動物瀕臨滅絕的原因和保護(hù)動物的意義和打算。2. 寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以第三、第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，以一般將來時為輔來敘述；寫作時承接開頭，要寫出動物瀕臨滅絕的原因及保護(hù)動物的意義和打算，注意主謂一致，保證無語法和單詞拼寫錯誤。 4．書面表達(dá)參考范文Dear Martin, How is it going? Because of COVID-19, I had to take e-lessons. The e-lessons for middle school students are very wonderful. It includes all the lessons from the seventh to the ninth. I always read the schedule before I take the eighth lessons every time. The teachers used Ting Talk for video meetings. We all uploaded our homework and downloaded files by Ting Talk. However, it didn’t have the air of the classroom and sometimes it was very easy for me to feel bored and tired. In my view, we shouldn’t say no to new forms of online learning just because they are not perfect yet, and it is up to us to make the tools better in the future. You should hand in your homework on time. So if you want to improve yourself, please take the online course seriously.That’s all. I hope you can learn something from it.Love, Li Ming【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇書信作文。要求寫一封郵件給美國朋友Martin，告訴他你前段時間上網(wǎng)課的經(jīng)歷和感受, 以及對提高網(wǎng)課學(xué)習(xí)效果的建議。寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時主要用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱用第一人稱，例文可采用四段式；第一段是問候；第二段講前段時間上網(wǎng)課的經(jīng)歷和感受，把要點及提示詞融入到文章當(dāng)中；第三段說明自己對提高學(xué)習(xí)效果的建議；第四段提出希望。注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點，注意句子之間的連接與過渡。 5．書面表達(dá)參考范文March 13th　Saturday SunnyLast Saturday,our English teacher took our class to Children's Hospital to visit the sick kids. When we arrived there,we gave those sick kids the gifts that we prepared for them. They were very excited and liked the gifts very much. Then,we helped to wash clothes and clean the rooms. We also did some interesting activities with them,such as singing,dancing and telling stories.I'm glad to take part in such a volunteer activity. Seeing the look of joy on the sick kids' faces,we felt very happy.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇日記作文。假定你是張娟，根據(jù)提示寫志愿者活動，記錄過程。注意要點要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱來展開寫作，時態(tài)主要用一般過去時。寫作時要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)志愿活動的過程，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等；語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。 6．書面表達(dá)參考范文Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents.If you burn your hands when you cook, first keep your hands in cold water for ten minutes, and then cover the burn with a clean towel and go to see the doctor quickly. If your building is on fire, you should cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel. Stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible. Never go back into the burning building for anything. Don't try to put out the fire by yourself. Remember to call 119. If anyone is hurt in the fire, you should call 120.I hope my tips will be of some help to you.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇講稿作文。主題是“How to deal with accidents”，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語演講稿。注意要點要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第二人稱來展開寫作，時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。第一段引出主題；第二段分別敘述兩種意外事故下的處理辦法；第三段收尾。語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。 7．書面表達(dá)參考范文Volunteers Wanted．Happy Old People's Home need several volunteers．Requirements：1、Special skills are preferred：for example，singing，dancing，etc．2、Need love，can get along well with the old man．And you must be able to bear the hardship．If you meet these requirements，you can call 8686000．【解析】【詳解】本文是一則招聘廣告。要求為幸福老人院（Happy Old People’s Home）寫一則招聘數(shù)名志愿者的廣告，要求志愿者有特長，有愛好，有愛心，能和老人友好相處。在寫作時要明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢。同時注意語義要通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系；上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意描述的全面性；不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤；要使用自己有把握的句式、單詞，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。最后要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等，還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。

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