第一絕招：環(huán)境描寫（惡劣）
——波濤洶涌：1.As I flated n, a huge wave (一個巨浪) whistled (呼嘯而來)and apprached us.2. The big wind rared thrugh ur ears (在耳邊咆哮), and we were pushed away frm the shre farther and farther.3. All my senses tld me that a big wave was abut t cme.(即將來臨)4. A pwerful-lking(看似猛烈的)wave was cming twards us.? (靠近我們)
——鯊魚的可怕：It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming arund, nt far away frm her.The shark’s jaws pened wide, shwing rws f sharp teeth.
——陸地上的水：Splashing raindrps hit the windshield frantically and the skies were verhung with a blanket f grey,.雨滴瘋狂地打在擋風(fēng)玻璃上，天空籠罩在一片灰色之中。The water kept rising, as if it wuld?engulf?me alive.水不停地漲，仿佛要把我活吞下去。Unfrtunately, the water pured in and crept upn my waist.?在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）
——推薦句型：1. The wind blws/whistles/hwls/picks up/whips thrugh sth/sweeps acrss sth.風(fēng)刮/颼颼的刮/呼嘯而過/愈刮愈大/刮過……/掠過……2. They were getting?drenched by icy water.他們被冰冷的水澆透了。3. The heavy rain was vilently?beating?against the windw.大雨瘋狂地擊打窗戶。4. The rain?drummed?n the rf f the building.雨不停地擊打著房預(yù)。5. The furius strm is?grumbling?utside.狂風(fēng)暴雨在室外呼嘯著。6. The icy wind started?hwling,?stinging?my face.寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。
——推薦句型：7.?A flash f?lightning?lit up?the whle sky.一道閃電點亮了整個天空。8. The sharp?claps?f thunder?pierced?the quiet night.聲聲清脆的雷聲劃破了寧靜的夜晚。9. The blt f lightning?stabs?the earth. 一道閃電劃過天空。10. 天空和海洋融為一體| the sky and the cean?melt int?each ther?
第二絕招：情緒描寫（絕望、恐懼+掙扎）
——疲倦/寒冷1. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I culd hardly tell hw lng I culd hld n.2. Time passing us, tiredness?engulfed?(包圍了) us with my feet?stiff/numb?(僵硬/麻木)and? as we were?(盡管很累), we didn’t stp. Gritting ur teeth, we kept swimming.?4.?After what seemed a century, I felt?extremely fatigued?(非常累) while swimming hard t?keep?myself?aflat(漂浮著的).
——疲倦/寒冷5. He was?huddled?int his cat, his face?blue with cld.他縮進大衣里，冷得臉都發(fā)紫了。6.?Fingers?numbed?by the?chilly?water, thrat chked by icy wind, I felt n the verge f cllapsing.7. She clasped the baby t her bsm in the?biting/cutting/piercing/sharp?wind.在刺骨的寒風(fēng)里，她把孩子緊緊地抱在胸前。8. The icy wind started hwling,?cutting my face like a sharp knife/needles.寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，像鋒利的小刀/針一樣刺痛了我的臉。9. Her teeth were?chattering?with cld.她冷得牙齒直打顫。
——害怕1. I tk a deep breath and?swallwed hard?(害怕地咽了口吐沫).2. A chill feeling crept up her spine.3.?Exhausted and cld, the thught that we might die here flashed acrss my mind, which made me?quiver with an uncntrllable terrr/hrrr/fright?(難以控制地發(fā)抖).4. Lking at the?vast?sea, I felt a sense f fear?surging thrugh my whle bdy.(在身體涌動)
——害怕5. As time ticked by, fear?crept upn my heart(爬上我心頭) and I culd hardly tell hw lng I culd?plugh n?(前行).6.? The thught f hpelessness?sent shivers dwn my spine(讓我后脊背發(fā)涼).7.? I was?flded with a sense f hrrr(被恐懼感淹沒).8. Seeing this, I felt my fear?grwing/increasing(劇增) inside.9. I felt?a wave f anxiety(一陣焦慮)?swept ver my bdy?(襲來).10. Tears f frustratin and hrrr gushing frm my eyes, I felt I had sunk int hpelessness.11. A sense f terrr sweeping thrugh my bdy, I shuted in panic, “Help! Help!”
——描寫掙扎努力1. Tm lked thughtful (若有所思)2. “We need t think ut a way!” I?muttered?(喃喃自語), scratching my head(絞盡腦汁)3. ...,We swam tth and nail(全力以赴地).4. We spared n effrt t(不遺余力地) t swim twards the shre.5. We exchanged a determined lk(互換了堅定的神情) , then plughed n (繼續(xù)前行) at an incredible speed(難以置信的速度).
第三絕招：轉(zhuǎn)機描寫描寫聲音傳來或看見了什么
1. A?distant?sund?reached ur ears.(傳入耳朵)2. Just then, my mind raced – why nt call 911 and Je?3. The sund f the bat?eched in ur ears.(在我們耳內(nèi)回響)4. At that mment, a?shrill whistle(汽笛聲)ripped?the air (劃破天空).5. When we were at a lss f what t d, there were?rasping?(刺耳的)?shuts(喊叫聲)rising frm the distance?(從遠處升起).
6. Jasn saw smething flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jasn shuted ut.7. In sheer desperatin(在絕望中), I finally caught sight f sme bats with lifeguards n them heading twards us?in the distance.8. After a lng time, a light spt appeared in the distance! We waved ur hands and yelled ut fr help.
第四絕招：情緒描寫（希望+努力）
——描寫如釋重負1.?As if clutching at straws,?I dialed the number again and again.2. Hearing the?cmfrting?news, I?culdn't help restraining my excitement.(情難自抑)3.?His wrds reignited the flame f hpe in my heart4. On hearing the gd news, Tm and I?sighed in great relief(如釋重負地嘆了口氣),?grinning merrily at?each ther.
——描寫如釋重負5.Smiling in relief?(如釋重負地微笑), I?felt a rush f pride(感到一陣自豪).6.?Overjyed(狂喜) t see a bat cming t ur rescue, Tm and I?breathed a sigh f relief(如釋重負地松了口氣)7. Stiff frm keeping in ne psitin fr hurs, they slwly unflded their bdies.
1.The bat finally reached us and tk all f us back t the shre.船終于到達了我們身邊，把我們所有人都帶回了岸邊。2.Yelling?at the tp f his lung, Je tried t sthe me and cnvince me that it was the best way t escape the danger.喬大聲大叫，試圖安慰我，讓我相信這是逃離危險的最好方法。
第六絕招：情緒描寫（感恩+高興）
1.When we pictured what the merry scene wuld be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was written n my face.當(dāng)我們想象歡樂的場景是什么時，我心中有解脫，幸福寫在我的臉上。2.Sighing in relief, I culdn’t stp thinking abut the whle event. I knew they wuld have died if they had been in the sea fr any lnger.我如釋重負，不停地想整個事件。我知道如果他們再在海里，就會死了。
1. It ccurred t me that helping thers was priceless and everyne shuld be a lifeguard.我突然想到，幫助別人是無價的，每個人都應(yīng)該是一個救生員。2. Fr the first time since…, ne’s emtins gt the best f him and tears trickled dwn his cheeks.這是...，的情緒第一次充分利用他，眼淚從他的臉頰上滴下來。3. Only then did I realize that it was Je wh had been caring fr me thrugh thick and thin.直到那時，我才意識到是喬一直在照顧我。
4.?Sbbing in relief,?I?was verwhelmed by waves f guilt and remrse. I murmured srry, reflecting that I shuld have taken his warning seriusly.我如釋重負，被內(nèi)疚和悔恨所淹沒。我喃喃地說，想著我應(yīng)該認真對待他的警告。5. All this tk nly a few minutes, but Betty wuld never frget the frightening experience.這一切只花了幾分鐘，但貝蒂永遠不會忘記那段可怕的經(jīng)歷。

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