
好作文是“仿”出來(lái)的。針對(duì)全國(guó)卷近幾年一直穩(wěn)定考查書信文體這一命題實(shí)際,我們對(duì)每一體裁精心架構(gòu)寫作模板,循模板寫作,確保像模像樣、文正體范;迅速打開思路,縮短考場(chǎng)構(gòu)思時(shí)間。
寫作模板(一) 良藥“甜”口,忠言“順”耳——建議信
[題型技法]
建議信是作者就有關(guān)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并針對(duì)這些問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和建議,以便讓對(duì)方接受自己的想法、主張并解決有關(guān)問(wèn)題。建議信可以寫給個(gè)人,就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法或觀點(diǎn);也可以寫給某個(gè)組織或者機(jī)構(gòu),就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)等提出建議或忠告。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為:
[典例悟法]
(2018·北京高考書面表達(dá))假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)文化感興趣,計(jì)劃明年來(lái)北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)給他回郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1.表示歡迎;
2.推薦他上哪所大學(xué);
3.建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。
注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50;
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分范文
Dear Jim,
I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like A Dream of Red Mansions while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it's my pleasure to show you around Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文賞析
(1)范文首段交代寫信目的并表示歡迎;第二段闡述建議他上北京大學(xué)的原因及需要做的準(zhǔn)備工作;最后一段表達(dá)了自己的愿望。整篇文章一氣呵成、要點(diǎn)齊全且銜接流暢自然。
(2)文中運(yùn)用了如“unforgettable, be soaked in, profound, as for”等高級(jí)詞匯;句式方面的高級(jí)表達(dá)有:I would like to express my warmest welcome ...恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了不定式作賓語(yǔ);Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ);one of the best universities in China作同位語(yǔ);where you can be completely soaked in恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句; it's my pleasure to show ...中it用作形式主語(yǔ)。
[增分佳句]
1.表達(dá)建議信寫信目的常用語(yǔ)
①I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我寫信給你一些建議/忠告。
②I am writing to express my views concerning ...
我寫信是要表達(dá)我關(guān)于……的看法。
③You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
關(guān)于……你向我征求意見,在此我盡力提出一些有用的建議。
2.表達(dá)建議常用語(yǔ)
①I think the most suitable ...for you is ...
我認(rèn)為對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)最適合的……是……
②I would like to suggest that ...
我想建議……
③You'd better .../It's better to ...
你最好……/最好是……
④As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看來(lái),采取如下行動(dòng)是明智的。
⑤For one thing ...; for another ...
一方面……,另一方面……
⑥If I were you, I would ...
如果我是你,我會(huì)……
⑦I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
我認(rèn)為如果你能……將會(huì)更有益。
3.表達(dá)希望常用語(yǔ)
①I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。
②I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這些建議實(shí)用/有用/有幫助。
③I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.看到你在這一方面取得進(jìn)步我會(huì)非常高興。
[熱點(diǎn)押題]
(2019·長(zhǎng)沙模擬)假定你是李華,你的好友王芳喜歡打排球,但老師和家長(zhǎng)都極力勸她放棄打排球,全身心投入高考。為此,她非常糾結(jié)和郁悶。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封建議信,幫她解決這個(gè)困擾。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考范文:
Dear Wang Fang,
I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. As you said in your letter, your teachers and parents suggest you give up playing volleyball because of the College Entrance Examination. But you don't want to do that. I think you don't need to worry a lot for this. Here are my suggestions.
First of all, you should understand your teachers and parents,who just want the best for you.Second,I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up.Third,you should arrange your time properly.As long as you can make a balance between your study and hobby,your teachers and parents will surely not object to it.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作模板(二) 自信申請(qǐng),心誠(chéng)則靈——申請(qǐng)信
[題型技法]
申請(qǐng)信有很多種,比如求職申請(qǐng)、加入某組織或活動(dòng)的申請(qǐng)、報(bào)考申請(qǐng)、留學(xué)申請(qǐng)等。寫申請(qǐng)信的目的在于讓對(duì)方了解自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)、能力、成就、愿望等,所以個(gè)人情況的介紹應(yīng)該是申請(qǐng)信的核心內(nèi)容,應(yīng)盡可能向?qū)Ψ秸f(shuō)明本人的長(zhǎng)處,以便留下好印象,獲得面談的機(jī)會(huì)。由于此類題目常有較多的文字提示,寫作時(shí)除應(yīng)注意格式上的要求外,也應(yīng)注意審題全面,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),并要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的變化,避免出現(xiàn)邏輯混亂。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為:
[典例悟法]
(2018·浙江高考應(yīng)用文寫作)假定你是李華,你校英語(yǔ)協(xié)會(huì)招聘志愿者,接待來(lái)訪的國(guó)外中學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你寫信應(yīng)聘,內(nèi)容包括:
1.口語(yǔ)能力;
2.相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn);
3.應(yīng)聘目的。
注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
滿分范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to meet the visiting foreign students and I want to apply for the position. Firstly, I can speak fluent English and I have little difficulty communicating with foreigners. Secondly, I helped receive some visiting foreigners to our school last year. This experience is sure to enable me to do better this year. I also want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
I would be grateful if you could give me the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文賞析
(1)文章開門見山說(shuō)明自己寫信的目的;然后詳述自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)以及目的,簡(jiǎn)潔明了,不拖泥帶水;最后表達(dá)感謝和期盼。
(2)運(yùn)用了firstly ...secondly 等語(yǔ)序標(biāo)志詞,運(yùn)用了一些較為地道的搭配,in need of, have difficulty doing sth.; enable sb.to do sth....; have a better understanding of ...等,這些都使得這篇短文讀起來(lái)層次分明、連貫、順暢。
[增分佳句]
1.表達(dá)申請(qǐng)信寫信目的常用語(yǔ)
①I'm writing to apply for the position of ...
我寫信申請(qǐng)……的職位。
②I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for ...
我寫信推薦自己為……的合格人選。
③I am interested in ...and wish to enter this significant program.
我對(duì)……感興趣,希望加入到這個(gè)重要項(xiàng)目中。
④I learned on your website that ...
我從你們的網(wǎng)站上得知……
2.表達(dá)個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)的常用語(yǔ)
①I won the first prize in ...competition.
我獲得了……比賽的一等獎(jiǎng)。
②As an outgoing ...I get along well with my classmates.
作為一名外向的……我和同學(xué)們相處得很好。
③For one thing, I can help ...For another thing, I can improve ...一方面,我能幫助……另一方面,我能提高……
④My main specialty is ...
我的特長(zhǎng)是……
3.表達(dá)感謝,期盼回復(fù)的常用語(yǔ)
①If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at ...
如果你們認(rèn)為我適合這份工作,請(qǐng)致電……
②I will be grateful/I'd appreciate it if you could ...
如果你能……我將感激不盡。
③Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
感謝你考慮我的申請(qǐng),期待與你見面。
[熱點(diǎn)押題]
假定你是李華,是一名高三學(xué)生。最近,你校將接待一批來(lái)自美國(guó)的交換生,學(xué)?,F(xiàn)在征集寄宿家庭。你想申請(qǐng)成為寄宿家庭,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的寫作提綱,寫一封申請(qǐng)信。內(nèi)容包括:
1.個(gè)人情況(年齡、性別、性格和愛(ài)好);
2.英語(yǔ)水平;
3.家庭條件;
4.相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考范文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, an 18-year-old girl from Senior Three.I hear some American students are coming to study in our school for two weeks.I am writing to apply for the opportunity to become a host family.
The following are my advantages.First, I'm open-minded and like to make new friends.Second, my parents speak English so fluently that they have no difficulty communicating with native speakers.Third, we have a large apartment where there is an extra room for a guest.More importantly, last month we received two American students, through which we gained a lot of experience.
I think it is a chance to improve my English and learn about new culture.Please give me a chance.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作模板(三) 以誠(chéng)相邀,以禮相約——邀請(qǐng)信
[題型技法]
邀請(qǐng)信是邀請(qǐng)收信人參加某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的書信。在寫作時(shí),要注意邀請(qǐng)信的交際性,語(yǔ)氣要真摯,避免帶有不禮貌或強(qiáng)人所難的字眼。根據(jù)邀請(qǐng)信的性質(zhì)可將其分為普通邀請(qǐng)信和正式邀請(qǐng)信。普通邀請(qǐng)信對(duì)內(nèi)容和格式的要求都不高,只要說(shuō)明活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等即可。正式邀請(qǐng)信的措辭要正式、語(yǔ)氣要熱情有禮,態(tài)度要誠(chéng)懇。邀請(qǐng)信的末尾都要表達(dá)希望對(duì)方參加或出席的愿望。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為:
[典例悟法]
(2018·天津高考書面表達(dá))假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機(jī)器人興趣小組組長(zhǎng)李津,你的美國(guó)朋友Chris就讀于天津某國(guó)際學(xué)校,他曾在機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。你打算邀請(qǐng)他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì),參加即將于7月底在天津舉行的世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。
(1)比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);
(2)邀請(qǐng)他的原因;
(3)訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱,請(qǐng)他提出建議。
注意:
(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;
(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;
(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:
世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
滿分范文
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is to be held in Tianjin at the end of this July, which interests me greatly.
On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once participated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it. We are desperately in need of your help. So as the group leader, I sincerely invite you to join us. I am convinced that with our joint efforts we can undoubtedly get good results. What's more, I will email you our training plan soon, hoping you can offer some constructive suggestions regarding it.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
范文賞析
(1)文章開門見山交代比賽的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn),隨后說(shuō)明自己和同學(xué)組成團(tuán)隊(duì)參賽并邀請(qǐng)Chris加入,并希望Chris對(duì)計(jì)劃提出建議,言簡(jiǎn)意賅。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)詞匯,如interest作動(dòng)詞, form a group, participate in, accumulate, desperately in need of, joint efforts, undoubtedly等。在句式方面,既有which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句又有名詞性從句I am convinced that ...和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ) hoping you ...等。
[增分佳句]
1.發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)常用語(yǔ)
①I am writing to invite you to .../I'm writing to tell you that there will be a ...
我寫信邀請(qǐng)你……/我寫信告訴你有一個(gè)(場(chǎng))……
②I am very pleased to invite you to participate in ...to be held in ...
我很高興邀請(qǐng)你參加在……舉行的……
③I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in ...
我想你要是能來(lái)參加……那就太好了。
2.表達(dá)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容常用語(yǔ)
①Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
本次活動(dòng)的一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容如下。
②During the ...we will have lots of activities which you will be interested in.First ...Second ...In addition ...
在……期間我們將有很多你會(huì)感興趣的活動(dòng)。第一……第二……另外……
③I am sure that you must be very interested in the activities at the party.For one thing ...For another ...
我相信你一定對(duì)聚會(huì)上的活動(dòng)很感興趣。一方面……另一方面……
3.結(jié)尾部分常用語(yǔ)
①Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can come to ...?
請(qǐng)寫信告訴我是否你能來(lái)……好嗎?
②If you are interested in it, please let me know and I'll send you more information.
如果你感興趣,請(qǐng)告訴我,我給你發(fā)送更多的信息。
③My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能來(lái),我和我的家人將會(huì)感到非常榮幸。
④I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
我想在那里見到你,請(qǐng)盡快告訴我你的決定。
[熱點(diǎn)押題]
假定你是李華,是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部的負(fù)責(zé)人。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給學(xué)校的外教Steve寫一封邀請(qǐng)信。
1.邀請(qǐng)Steve參加于周一晚上7點(diǎn)鐘在學(xué)校禮堂舉行的英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng);
2.請(qǐng)Steve介紹“美國(guó)夢(mèng)(American Dream)”;
3.請(qǐng)Steve根據(jù)自己學(xué)漢語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)談?wù)勅绾翁岣哂⒄Z(yǔ)口語(yǔ)。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考范文:
Dear Steve,
On behalf of the English Club, I am writing to invite you to join our English Corner next Monday.It will begin at seven o'clock in the evening at the school hall.
In many films “American Dream” is mentioned, but we still don't have any knowledge about it.So would you please give us a lecture on American Dream? By the way, you have made great progress in your Chinese.Could you share with us some experience on how to improve our oral English?
We are all looking forward to seeing you then.Please inform us in advance if you cannot come.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
寫作模板(四) 真誠(chéng)道謝,友誼長(zhǎng)存——感謝信
[題型技法]
感謝信是向幫助、關(guān)心和支持過(guò)自己的集體或個(gè)人表示感謝的信件。在收到別人的邀請(qǐng)、受到別人的表?yè)P(yáng)或幫助后,被邀請(qǐng)者、被表?yè)P(yáng)者或被幫助者往往需要寫一封感謝信。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為:
[典例悟法]
假定你是李華。最近,你剛結(jié)束在英國(guó)為期一個(gè)月的交流學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)習(xí)期間,你和房東Mr.Wilson結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的寫作提綱,給Mr.Wilson寫一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括:
1.表示感謝;
2.回顧他對(duì)你的照顧和幫助;
3.邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)中國(guó)游覽。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
滿分范文
Dear Mr.Wilson,
How is everything going? I've been back home now.I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness.
While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable.How I miss the days we spent together! Thanks to your help, I got used to the lifestyle there soon.I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me.Besides, I really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me.By practising speaking with you every day, I gradually improved my spoken English.
I hope we can keep in touch with and communicate with each other in the future.It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文賞析
(1)文章開篇問(wèn)候,真誠(chéng)地表達(dá)感謝。隨后說(shuō)明感謝的原因以及對(duì)方給予的具體幫助。最后表達(dá)希望,并邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)中國(guó)旅游。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)詞匯和句型,如gratitude是高級(jí)詞匯,體現(xiàn)了作者扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。句中使用了感嘆句和定語(yǔ)從句,大大提高了表達(dá)難度和寫作檔次。高級(jí)短語(yǔ)keep in touch with和communicate with的正確使用為文章錦上添花;在It would be a great honor ...句中it作形式主語(yǔ),so that ...引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句,都顯示了作者對(duì)復(fù)雜句式的運(yùn)用能力,增加了文章得分的亮點(diǎn)。
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1.感謝信開頭部分常用語(yǔ)
①I am writing to express my thanks for ...
我寫信是為了表達(dá)我對(duì)……的謝意。
②I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ...在信中我要為……向你表達(dá)我誠(chéng)摯的謝意。
③On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for ...
我謹(jǐn)代表我全家對(duì)……表示真誠(chéng)的感激。
④I am extremely grateful to you for ...
我非常感謝你……
⑤Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to ...非常感謝您為幫助我們……所做的一切。
2.感謝信結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.
沒(méi)什么能抹掉我們美好的記憶,我們會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)牢記在心。
②Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!/Thanks again for your kind help.我再次對(duì)你表示衷心的感謝。/對(duì)你的熱心幫助再次表示感謝。
③I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by ...
如果我有機(jī)會(huì)通過(guò)……報(bào)答你的好意,我會(huì)非常高興。
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假設(shè)你是李華,上周日不慎把書包遺失在操場(chǎng)上,里面有學(xué)生證、手機(jī)、錢包等物品,本校外教Mr. Smith撿到后上交給學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封感謝信。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考范文:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I'm writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.
Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.
It's such a great kindness that I'm extremely grateful to you. You did set a good example to us.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作模板(五) 誠(chéng)懇致歉,你我歡顏——道歉信
[題型技法]
道歉信通常是在因自己的過(guò)失或疏忽給別人帶來(lái)了麻煩或損失并發(fā)覺(jué)的情況下,為了向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢舛鴮懙男偶>唧w寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下:
[典例悟法]
(2016·全國(guó)卷Ⅲ書面表達(dá))假定你是李華,與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店,因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.說(shuō)明原因;
3.另約時(shí)間。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
滿分范文
Dear Bob,
I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文賞析
(1)文章開篇表明寫作意圖,表達(dá)歉意。隨后說(shuō)明道歉的原因并解釋不能赴約的原因?!霸俅蜗嗉s”部分,情節(jié)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,情真意切。
(2)范文中使用了convenient, available等高級(jí)詞匯,并運(yùn)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu),如賓語(yǔ)從句that I cannot go to the bookstore ...和that I have to attend ...; so that ...引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句; If it's convenient for you ...為if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句; If not ...狀語(yǔ)從句的省略等。這展示了作者對(duì)復(fù)雜句式較強(qiáng)的運(yùn)用能力,增加了文章得分的亮點(diǎn)。
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1.道歉信開頭常用語(yǔ)
①I am writing this letter to apologize to you for ...
我寫這封信是因……向你道歉。
②I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to/my failing ...
因?yàn)闆](méi)能……我向你表達(dá)最真誠(chéng)的歉意/悔意。
③I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.為此事可能給你帶來(lái)的任何不便,我深表歉意。
④I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for ...
我必須為……真誠(chéng)地向你道歉。
⑤I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to ...
我遺憾地告知你我不能……
2.道歉信結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①Please allow me to say sorry again.
請(qǐng)?jiān)试S我再次道歉。
②Will you please accept my apology?
請(qǐng)你接受我的道歉,好嗎?
③Please accept my sincere apology for ...once more.
請(qǐng)?jiān)俅螢椤邮芪艺嬲\(chéng)的道歉。
④I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能寬容地接受我的道歉。
⑤Once again, I'm sorry for my inconvenience caused.
對(duì)于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
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假定你是李華,你從朋友Mike處借的一本書不慎遺失。現(xiàn)在,請(qǐng)用英文給他寫一封道歉信,請(qǐng)求原諒。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.開頭與結(jié)束語(yǔ)已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mike,
Yours,
Li Hua
參考范文:
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to tell you that I've lost your book that I borrowed from you.Now I'm expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.
Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday.But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home.I tried to get it back but failed.How angry and guilty I felt! This morning, I went to buy another book in some bookstores but it was very expensive.However, I promise that I'll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month.
Please forgive me and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作模板(六) 禮貌求助,成功首步——求助信
[題型技法]
寫英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困難,需要請(qǐng)求對(duì)方幫助。因此整篇文章應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表達(dá)文意,當(dāng)描述自己得到幫助后的進(jìn)步時(shí)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下:
[典例悟法]
(2016·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá))假定你是李華,暑假想去一家外資公司兼職,已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷(resume)。給外教Ms Jenkins寫信,請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
滿分范文
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua and I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I'm not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. I'd be most grateful if you could do me the favor.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文賞析
(1)文章開篇自我介紹并表明寫信意圖。隨后說(shuō)明求助的具體內(nèi)容(請(qǐng)對(duì)方幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式)。最后表達(dá)希望和感激。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)詞匯和句型,如therefore關(guān)系明確,因果適當(dāng),不但使上下文融會(huì)貫通,而且突出了寫信目的。Would you please do ...?是請(qǐng)求別人幫助的句型,用得恰到好處,符合說(shuō)話者的身份;過(guò)去分詞attached作定語(yǔ),使句子更加簡(jiǎn)練地道,增加了文章的可讀性。Would you mind doing ...?不同的句式表達(dá)了相同的意思,避免了表達(dá)形式的單一化,語(yǔ)氣委婉。這是文章提檔次的句子。most grateful道出了作者希望得到幫助的迫切和感激之情,也展示了作者較高的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。
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1.求助信開頭常用語(yǔ)
①M(fèi)y name is ...I'm writing to you for some help.
我叫……,我寫信是向你尋求一些幫助。
②I'm writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.
我給你寫信想請(qǐng)你幫我一個(gè)忙。
③I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做……方面有困難,這很困擾我。所以我別無(wú)選擇只能向你求助。
④Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to ask you for help.面對(duì)如此多的困難,我不得不向你求助。
2.尋求幫助常用語(yǔ)
①I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想讓你給我介紹一些學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)法的好方法。
②I wonder how to deal with the problem.
我想知道如何解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。
3.求助信結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)
①I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
我相信在你的幫助下我會(huì)取得很大的進(jìn)步。
②I will appreciate any of your help.
我將非常感謝你的一切幫助。
③I would greatly appreciate your timely help.
我將非常感激你及時(shí)的幫助。
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假定你是高中生李華,你們學(xué)校要在3月10日舉辦英語(yǔ)配音比賽(dubbing contest)。你想?yún)①悾遣恢涝撨x什么電影。你給筆友Peter寫一封郵件,請(qǐng)他給你推薦一部電影。內(nèi)容包括:
1.主題是關(guān)于友誼;
2.時(shí)間限定在4到5分鐘;
3.每個(gè)節(jié)目最多6個(gè)角色。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考范文:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?I am writing to you, hoping to seek for help.
Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th.I am eager to have a try.However, I don't know which film is suitable.As a movie fan, would you be so kind as to give me some recommendations? According to the requirements, the theme should be about friendship.And each video may last 4 to 5 minutes.What's more, there should not be more than six characters in each video.
I would really appreciate it if you could do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作模板(七) 書信往來(lái),快樂(lè)分享——普通書信與電子郵件
[題型技法]
英文e-mail和普通書信的寫法和格式大體相同,其開頭和結(jié)尾常常都會(huì)給出,正文根據(jù)作文要求分段把內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚即可。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下:
[典例悟法]
(2017·全國(guó)卷Ⅰ書面表達(dá))假定你是李華,正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括:
1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn);
2.內(nèi)容:學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī);
3.課前準(zhǔn)備:簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
滿分范文
Dear Leslie,
I am delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.Now I'm writing to tell you the plan for the next class.
Actually I am very fond of Tang poems.I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People's Park, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.We will learn from 8:00 am to 10:00 am.Besides, I advise you to go to the library to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.
If you have any questions, please let me know.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文賞析
(1)文章開門見山告知寫郵件的目的,隨后表述具體內(nèi)容(學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī);提前了解唐朝的歷史),最后表達(dá)希望并期盼回復(fù)。
(2)范文中使用了較高級(jí)的詞匯,如be fond of, are to meet, in advance等,增加了文章的得分點(diǎn)。另外,范文中也應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu),如where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,提高了文章的寫作檔次,也顯示了作者較高的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。
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1.開頭部分常用語(yǔ)
①Thank you for your letter of December 15th.
謝謝你12月15號(hào)的來(lái)信。
②I'm very glad/pleased to tell you that ...
我很高興告訴你……
③I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
我非常高興收到你兩周前寄給我的信。
④Thanks for your invitation to the Christmas party.
謝謝你邀請(qǐng)我參加圣誕晚會(huì)。
⑤How are you getting along with your study?
你近來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)展怎樣?
2.話題引入常用語(yǔ)
①I'm very glad to tell you something about ...
我很高興告訴你一些關(guān)于……的事情。
②As far as I know/am concerned/can see ...
據(jù)我所知……
3.結(jié)尾部分常用語(yǔ)
①Please write to me soon and tell me about your ...
請(qǐng)馬上寫信給我,告訴我關(guān)于你的……
②I'm looking forward to your reply.
我盼望著你的回復(fù)。
③If so, please e-mail me in response ...
如果這樣,請(qǐng)給我回復(fù)郵件……
④With kind/best regards/wishes!
最美好的問(wèn)候/祝福!
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假定你是李華,上周你的外教Peter給你來(lái)信說(shuō)他開始對(duì)中國(guó)古詩(shī)詞感興趣,希望你能教他幾首中國(guó)古詩(shī)詞。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封信,內(nèi)容包括:
1.樂(lè)于幫助;
2.確定見面相關(guān)事宜(如時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等等)。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going on with you recently?
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
參考范文:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going on with you recently?I'm more than glad to receive your letter asking me for help.As a matter of fact, it is a great honor for me to introduce some Chinese ancient poems to you.The following are my arrangements for it.
Firstly, let's fix a time when both of us are available.What about this Saturday afternoon? In addition, there is no doubt that the People's Park is an excellent place to learn classical Chinese poetry, which is not far away from my home nor yours.If it is not convenient for you, please tell me to make necessary adjustments.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
寫作模板(八) 熱情洋溢,展現(xiàn)自我——演講稿
[題型技法]
演講稿包括發(fā)言稿、致辭、競(jìng)選稿等,是人們?cè)诠ぷ骱蛯W(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)常使用的一種文體,該文體語(yǔ)言通常極富感染力。演講稿寫作首先要明確發(fā)言的對(duì)象,對(duì)不同聽眾的發(fā)言,內(nèi)容自然就不一樣。演講稿的句子要求短小精悍,鏗鏘有力。立場(chǎng)要明確,觀點(diǎn)要鮮明。贊成什么、反對(duì)什么要旗幟鮮明,不能模棱兩可。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下:
[典例悟法]
(2016·天津高考書面表達(dá))假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津。一批來(lái)自英國(guó)的高中生與你校學(xué)生開展了為期兩周的交流活動(dòng)。現(xiàn)在,他們即將回國(guó),你將在歡送會(huì)上致辭。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
1.回顧雙方的交流活動(dòng)(如學(xué)習(xí)、生活、體育、文藝等方面);
2.談?wù)勈斋@或感想;
3.表達(dá)祝愿與期望。
注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于100;
2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;
3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear friends,
How time flies!
Thank you.
滿分范文
Dear friends,
How time flies!I am Li Jin, president of the Students' Union of Chenguang Middle School.It's my great privilege to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain.During the two-week activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, ways of life, PE and cultures.One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.
The past two weeks witnessed our growth and friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us.After the two-week exchange activities,we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level.And I sincerely hope our friendship lasts forever.Wish you all the best!
Thank you.
范文賞析
(1)文章開篇自我介紹并引入話題。隨后表述演講具體內(nèi)容(回顧雙方的交流活動(dòng);談?wù)勈斋@或感想)。最后感謝傾聽并表達(dá)希望。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)句型,如sharing this moment with ...是現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ); where we competed with each other ...是where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句; The past two weeks witnessed ...運(yùn)用了無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句; It is not only ... but also ...運(yùn)用了not only ... but also ...并列結(jié)構(gòu)等。這些都是提升文章檔次的句子,也顯示了作者較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力,增加了文章的采分點(diǎn)。
[增分佳句]
1.開頭部分常用語(yǔ)
①M(fèi)y name is ...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about ...
我是……今天很高興能有機(jī)會(huì)做這個(gè)演講。我演講的內(nèi)容是……
②Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on ...
大家上午好!很榮幸能和你們分享一下關(guān)于……我的看法。
③It's my great honor to be here/to have the opportunity to say something about ...
很榮幸能在這里/能有機(jī)會(huì)談?wù)撘幌玛P(guān)于……
2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)
①The topic of my speech is ...
我演講的主題是……
②I'll divide this topic into five main aspects.
我將分五個(gè)主要方面談?wù)撨@個(gè)主題。
③I would like to concentrate on the problem of ...
我想把重點(diǎn)集中在……問(wèn)題上。
3.結(jié)尾部分常用語(yǔ)
①I hope I have made myself understood.
希望我說(shuō)的大家都能理解。
②That's all I want to say about this point.
關(guān)于這一點(diǎn),我就講這些。
③By way of conclusion, I'd like to quote what Newton once said.
我想借用牛頓曾經(jīng)說(shuō)過(guò)的話來(lái)結(jié)束我今天的發(fā)言。
④Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
我從心底感謝你們今天給了我這個(gè)演講的機(jī)會(huì)。
[熱點(diǎn)押題]
假定你是星光中學(xué)的高中畢業(yè)生李華,你的母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“What to learn in senior high school?”的英語(yǔ)沙龍活動(dòng),特邀請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)勛约旱捏w會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示準(zhǔn)備一份英語(yǔ)演講稿。
1.學(xué)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí):方法、習(xí)慣等;
2.學(xué)會(huì)做人:真誠(chéng)、友善等;
3.其他方面:考生自擬。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good morning,everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
Thank you!
參考范文:
Good morning,everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently.Developing a good habit is of great importance.It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others.In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently.They are really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains, no gains. I am sure that with great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
Thank you!
寫作模板(九) 及時(shí)通知,做好準(zhǔn)備——通知
[題型技法]
通知是應(yīng)用文中較為常見的一種形式,分為書面通知和口頭通知。英語(yǔ)書面通知主要由4部分組成:標(biāo)題、通知正文、發(fā)通知單位、發(fā)通知的日期等。標(biāo)題(NOTICE)寫在正文上方居中,發(fā)通知的單位一般寫在正文右下角,發(fā)通知的日期一般寫在正文右下角發(fā)通知單位的下方??陬^通知所使用的語(yǔ)言具有明顯的口語(yǔ)特征,通俗易懂。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)如下:
[典例悟法]
(2018·全國(guó)卷Ⅱ書面表達(dá))你受學(xué)生會(huì)委托為校宣傳欄“英語(yǔ)天地”寫一則通知,請(qǐng)大家觀看一部英文短片Growing Together,內(nèi)容包括:
1.短片內(nèi)容:學(xué)校的發(fā)展;
2.放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);
3.歡迎對(duì)短片提出意見。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
滿分范文
NOTICE
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us and enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, please note that it will be shown in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.What's more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time then.
The Students' Union
范文賞析
(1)文章開篇提醒并引入話題。隨后表述短片的內(nèi)容和放映的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn),并歡迎對(duì)短片提出意見。最后號(hào)召大家觀看短片。
(2)范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)句型,如...which is about ...是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句; ...enjoying the movie, having ... and giving your own comments運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ); Hopefully, you would make it to our activity.等。這些都是提升文章檔次的表達(dá),也展示了作者較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。
[增分佳句]
1.提醒和引入話題常用語(yǔ)
①M(fèi)ay I have/call your attention, please?
請(qǐng)大家注意一下,好嗎?
②Attention, please, everybody!
請(qǐng)大家注意!
③I have an announcement to make.
我有一件事情要宣布。
④I have something to tell you.
我要告訴大家一些事情。
2.通知具體事項(xiàng)部分常用語(yǔ)
①There will be a talk this afternoon.
今天下午將有一場(chǎng)討論會(huì)。
②The Student Union has decided that ...
學(xué)生會(huì)已決定……
③We shall have a lecture on ...
我們將舉行關(guān)于……的研討會(huì)。
④It has been decided that we'll pay a visit to ...
已經(jīng)決定我們將參觀……
3.結(jié)尾部分常用語(yǔ)
①Please attend it on time and don't be late.
請(qǐng)按時(shí)到場(chǎng),不要遲到。
②I hope you can have a good time.
我希望你們玩得開心。
③Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.
歡迎所有人參加。
④That's all.Thank you.
就這些,謝謝。
[熱點(diǎn)押題]
假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請(qǐng)你幫忙用英語(yǔ)以短文的形式寫一篇通知,將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)安排傳達(dá)給住戶。內(nèi)容包括:
時(shí)間:下周六上午8:00至11:00
內(nèi)容:采摘蘋果
報(bào)名:辦公室,下周四下午5:00前
提示:戴帽子、手套
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:社區(qū) community
參考范文:
NOTICE
Dear neighbors,
We are very happy to announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we are going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 a.m.at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we'll be back at about 11 o'clock.
If you are interested,please sign up at the office before 5:00 p.m.next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.
We are looking forward to your joining us.
The Community Committee
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