Eastn retired(退休) as a schl teacher, and he didn’t have enugh savings. What’s wrse, his wife, Cassandra, had heart disease that needed expensive treatment.
T save his wife’s life, Eastn didn’t have a chice but t take up a jb, and he fund ne as a pizza delivery(遞送) man at Rster’s Pizza. On his first day n the jb, his c-wrkers judged him because the sight f an 84-year-ld pizza delivery man was undubtedly a rare ne. But Eastn didn’t care.
After delivering the first tw rders that day, Eastn was n his way t deliver the third ne, when he realized his car was lw n gas. He stpped at a gas statin, wrried he wuld be late fr his next delivery. Determined t make it n time, Eastn grabbed the steering wheel and drve as fast as he culd. Hwever, as he reached ne f the main rads, a plice car stpped him.
When Officer Jenkins and Officer Matthew walked up t Eastn’s car, they were shcked t see an 84-year-ld behind the wheel f a pizzeria car. Mrever, they didn’t expect an ld man t be speeding.
“Yu see,” Eastn said nervusly, “I am running late fr pizza delivery. We have a plicy f delivering pizza within 45 minutes, r I’ll have t pay fr it ut f my pcket, and I need mney fr my wife’s treatment. I hpe yu understand…”
Officer Matthew lked at Eastn’s teary eyes and trembling hands and felt deeply sad fr him. Hwever, he culdn’t g against his line f duty. They had t give him a ticket anyway. Eastn was late fr the delivery that day, prmpting his manager t deduct(扣除) it frm his salary. He was als warned that he wuld have t leave if he repeated the mistake.
Nt lsing heart, Eastn set ut fr his deliveries the fllwing day. “Rster’s Pizza!” he shuted as he rang the drbell f ne f the huses n his list.
注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
When the dr pened, Eastn recgnized his custmer was Officer Matthew!
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Eastn culdn’t believe what had just happened and was surprised by what Officer Matthew did fr him.
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【答案】One pssible versin:
When the dr pened, Eastn recgnized his custmer was Officer Matthew! He handed the pizza and was abut t leave when Officer Matthew stpped him and apprached him with an envelpe. “We were able t raise a mdest sum fr yur wife’s treatment, sir. It’s nly $2,340，but I’m hping it’ll help. Last night, I thught abut hw I was unwilling t give the ticket t yu, but that’s ur line f duty, sir. I spke t yur bss, and he agreed that yur pay wuldn’t be deducted. Take care f yur wife, and I appreciate the pizza!” Officer Matthew smiled and went inside.
Eastn culdn’t believe what had just happened and was surprised by what Officer Matthew did fr him. With trembling hands, he pened the envelpe and fund several dllar bills and a nte that read: “Our duty is t prtect and serve, but we are still humans at the end f the day. Have a wnderful day!” His eyes filled with tears, Eastn rang the drbell and thanked Officer Matthew again. Then he gt int his car and drve away.
【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了已經(jīng)84歲的Eastn為了妻子的治療費用不得不重新工作，而他能做的就是從事披薩配送員的工作。一次配送途中，由于車子就快沒油了，而他為了準時送到不被罰錢，他選擇超速行駛，最后被開了罰單，配送被延誤，受到了老板的警告。第二天的一次配送居然是送到給他開罰單的Matthew家里，原來Matthew他們?yōu)樗钠拮踊I集了資金，并告訴他，作為警察，他們必須履行職責，但作為活生生的人，他們還是具有同理心的。
【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“When the dr pened, Eastn recgnized his custmer was Officer Matthew!(當門打開時，伊斯頓認出他的顧客是警官Matthew!)”可知，該段應(yīng)描寫警官Matthew對Eastn所說的話，講到職業(yè)職責和私下里為Eastn所作的事情。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Eastn culdn’t believe what had just happened and was surprised by what Officer Matthew did fr him.(Eastn不敢相信剛剛發(fā)生的一切，警官Matthew為他所做的一切讓他感到驚訝。)”可知，第二段可描寫Eastn聽到Matthew的話后的感動和接受幫助后的舉動。
2.續(xù)寫線索：送披薩——發(fā)現(xiàn)是Matthew警官——Matthew警官講述如何幫助Eastn——Eastn的感動——Eastn發(fā)現(xiàn)信封里的字條——Eastn再次當面感謝
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①交給/遞給：hand/give sth t sb./pass/ffer
②靠近/走近：apprach/cme up t/walk up t
③交談：speak t/talk t/cmmunicate with/talk with
④充滿：be filled with/be full f
情緒類
①不樂意：be unwilling t/ be reluctant t
②驚訝的：surprised/shcked/amazed
【點睛】[高分句型1]. He handed the pizza and was abut t leave when Officer Matthew stpped him and apprached him with an envelpe. （由when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）
[高分句型2]. I spke t yur bss, and he agreed that yur pay wuldn’t be deducted.（由that引導(dǎo)從句作動詞“agreed”的賓語從句）
[高分句型3]. His eyes filled with tears, Eastn rang the drbell and thanked Officer Matthew again.（“His eyes filled with tears”為獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)作伴隨狀語）
2．（2023秋·山東臨沂·高一?？计谥校╅喿x下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。
That night, I quarreled with my mther, then strmed ut f the huse. While n the rad, I remembered that I did nt have any mney in my pcket, I did nt even take my cell phne with me t make a call hme.
$At the same time, I went thrugh a ndle shp, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished fr a bwl f ndles, but I had n mney!
The seller saw me standing befre the cunter and asked, “Hey little girl, yu want t eat a bwl?”
“But … but I d nt carry mney …” I shyly replied.
“Okay, I’ll treat yu.” the seller said, “cme in, I will ck yu a bwl.”
A few minutes later the wner brught me a steaming bwl f ndles. After eating sme pieces, I cried.
“What is it?” He asked.
“Nthing. I am just tuched by yur kindness!” I said as I wiped my tears. “Even a stranger n the street gives me a bwl f ndles, and my mther, after a quarrel, chased me ut f the huse. She is cruel (殘忍的)!!”
The seller sighed, “Girl, why did yu think s? Think again. I nly gave yu a bwl f ndles and yu felt that way. Yur mther has been taking care f yu since yu were little, why were yu nt grateful and why did yu hurt yur mm?”
I was really surprised after hearing that.
Why did I nt think f that? A bwl f ndles frm a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mther has raised me since I was little and I have never felt s, nt even a little.
注意：1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
Paragraph 1:
Just at that mment, many memries came back int my mind.
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Paragraph 2:
When arriving hme, I saw my mther sitting at the dinner table, wrried and tired.
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【答案】Just at that mment, many memries came back int my mind. When I was ill, she was always the ne taking care f me. When I had truble with my study, she never lst faith in me and encuraged me t keep ging. When I arrived hme during the weekend, she always prepared my favurite fd. All her kindness came back t me. I shuld be grateful fr all she had dne fr me. I realized that I shuld return hme immediately and say srry t my mther.
When arriving hme, I saw my mther sitting at the dinner table, wrried and tired. She must have been lking fr me everywhere. I was ready fr her anger and shuts. Hwever, befre I culd aplgize, my mther saw me and gently said :“h, hney, thank Gd, yu’re back! Cme inside. Yu are prbably very hungry? I cked yur favrite ndles, cme and eat while they are still ht...” N lnger able t cntrl myself, I cried in her arms. “I ’m srry, mm, please frgive me.” I whispered t her thrugh tears, extremely ashamed f myself.
【分析】本文是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。
【詳解】本篇書面表達是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者因為和媽媽吵架跑了出去。之后他餓了，但是沒帶錢，幸運的是好心的店主給了她一碗面條，她因為感動而落淚。而店主知道后對她說，自己就給了你一碗面就讓你這么感激，而你小時候母親一直在照顧你，為什么你不感恩，為什么？你傷害了你媽媽嗎？店主的話讓作者開始反思自己。
續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：就那一瞬間，很多回憶涌入腦?！?，所以這一段應(yīng)該寫我的回憶。要詳細描寫媽媽是如何照顧我支持我的。第二段開頭是：回到家之后，我看見媽媽坐在餐桌邊，擔憂又疲憊。本段應(yīng)該寫我回到家之后媽媽的反應(yīng)，媽媽沒有責怪我，反而在關(guān)心我。我因為愧疚向媽媽道歉，希望能得到她的原諒。
續(xù)寫時要求使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當?shù)臅r候加以運用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。
【點睛】文章思路清晰，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級的句式: when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句When I had truble with my study, she never lst faith in me and encuraged me t keep ging. that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句I realized that I shuld return hme immediately and say srry t my mther.高級句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達能力。

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