?建議信
1．假如你是李華，你澳大利亞的網(wǎng)友Jack最近想學(xué)漢語(yǔ)，但是經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的學(xué)習(xí)后，覺得沒有進(jìn)步, 特地給你發(fā)郵件向你征求建議。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給Jack寫封回信：
要點(diǎn)：1.你的建議；2.樂意幫助。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。
2．假定你叫李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack來信，說他寒假期間要來中國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)，他學(xué)了兩年中文，但是仍然擔(dān)心用中文交流時(shí)會(huì)到困難。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給Jack封回信，提幾點(diǎn)建議， 要點(diǎn)如下：
1.大膽自信;
2.放慢語(yǔ)速；
3.借助圖畫或肢體語(yǔ)言等表達(dá)方式。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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3．假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友 Peter發(fā)來郵件，提到他們學(xué)校將開展與中國(guó)文化有關(guān)的興趣活動(dòng)，目前有中國(guó)國(guó)畫和中華烹飪兩門課程，但是他無法決定學(xué)習(xí)哪門課程，希望能聽聽你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括:
1.推薦一門課程
2.說明理由。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
4．假定你是李華，你校要舉辦一次漢服 (Hanfu) 表演。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)?jiān)谀闶凶鼋粨Q生的英國(guó)好友Peter觀看演出。內(nèi)容包括：1．告知演出的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2．建議他上網(wǎng)搜索，簡(jiǎn)要了解漢服。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李華，你校的留學(xué)生Peter將在校元旦晚會(huì)上朗誦一首唐詩(shī)，但是他現(xiàn)在很緊張。請(qǐng)你就此給他寫一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 給出建議；
3. 給予鼓勵(lì)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：元旦晚會(huì)New Year’s Eve Gala
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6．對(duì)于高三的學(xué)生來說，時(shí)間管理無疑是至關(guān)重要的。但是事實(shí)上不是每位同學(xué)都足夠重視，做事拖延。假定你是某中學(xué)高三的學(xué)生李華請(qǐng)?jiān)谀阈Ｓ⒄Z(yǔ)校報(bào)上寫一封倡議書，呼吁同學(xué)們恰當(dāng)?shù)毓芾頃r(shí)間。
表達(dá)要點(diǎn)：1. 拖延的弊端；2. 你的建議；3. 發(fā)起倡議。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開篇和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear fellow students,
Time management is without doubt of vital significance, especially for us Senior Three students. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
7．假定你是李華，你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)社就“高中生是否應(yīng)該去KTV慶祝生日”進(jìn)行校園調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫封信給該報(bào)社編輯，談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕?。?nèi)容包括：
1.簡(jiǎn)述該現(xiàn)象；
2.你的觀點(diǎn)和建議。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李華。你的英國(guó)朋友Jack在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)的三峽感興趣，計(jì)劃明年來三峽旅行。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下列要點(diǎn)，給他回復(fù)郵件。
1.表示歡迎；
2. 介紹三峽及大壩；
3. 建議游覽方式等。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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9．假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華，寫信建議你的美國(guó)朋友Tom參加21世紀(jì)學(xué)生英文報(bào)（21st Century Teens）專門為外國(guó)人舉辦的2018“最美中國(guó)（Amazing China）”手機(jī)攝影大賽。信的內(nèi)容包括：
1.作品內(nèi)容要求；
2.提交時(shí)間和方式；
3.表示愿意提供幫助。
注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
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10．假設(shè)你是李華，你校的英國(guó)交換生Chris暑假要回國(guó)。他想要給他的好朋友買些有中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化特色的禮物，希望你能給他些建議。請(qǐng)給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 表示榮幸；
2. 你的建議及理由；
3. 購(gòu)物安排。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫；
3.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
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Best regards,
Li Hua










1．Dear Jack,
I’m Li Hua, your friend from China. Having learnt that you are now learning Chinese and having trouble with it, I’d like to share my suggestions about how to improve it with you.
To begin with, in my opinion, you’ better watch some Chinese TV programs, for example, the CCTV News, which will help you correct your pronunciation errors. Besides, you need to take advantage of every chance to practice speaking it. Moreover, you can communicate with some tourists from China face to face. In addition, I can help you with it every Sunday afternoon when I am available.
I hope my suggestions will help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封信給學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)一段時(shí)間卻沒有進(jìn)步的澳大利亞的網(wǎng)友Jack，向他提出一些學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
????總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：1. 你的建議；
2. 樂意幫助。
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
have trouble with sth.；take advantage of sth.；practice doing sth.；communicate with sb.；face to face；help sb. with sth.
第三步：連詞成句
1. Having learnt that you are now learning Chinese and having trouble with it, I’d like to share my suggestions about how to improve it with you.
2. you need to take advantage of every chance to practice speaking it.
3. you can communicate with some tourists from China face to face.
4. I can help you with it every Sunday afternoon when I am available.
(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。）
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá)：In other words, that is to say,
6.表進(jìn)行舉例說明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陳述事實(shí)：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表選擇：either…or…，or
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。
第五步：潤(rùn)色修改
【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了主從復(fù)合句，如Having learnt that you are now learning Chinese and having trouble with it這句話中用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，如To begin with, in my opinion, you’ better watch some Chinese TV programs, for example, the CCTV News, which will help you correct your pronunciation errors.這句話中用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，如have trouble with sth.，take advantage of sth.，communicate with sb.等，為文章增色不少；并注意了句子的銜接，如To begin with，Besides，Moreover，In addition。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。
2．One possible version:
Dear Jack,
???　 How is everything going? I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. You said you are worried about having difficulty in communicating in Chinese. Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese well.
???　 First, you should be brave and confident to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. We Chinese are very friendly, so do not be afraid to make mistakes. Second, speak Chinese slowly and clearly when you talk to others. Only in this way can you make yourself understood easily. Finally, you can use drawings and body languages to communicate with others. As you know, body language of different cultures has a lot in common in the world.
???　 I hope my suggestions above can help you.
??　 Best wishes!

Yours,
LiHua.
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封信，給外國(guó)朋友回復(fù)關(guān)于正確有效使用中文的建議。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
要求：在回復(fù)中向Jack表達(dá)以下關(guān)于正確有效使用中文的要點(diǎn)
1.大膽自信;
2.放慢語(yǔ)速；
3.借助圖畫或肢體語(yǔ)言等表達(dá)方式。
第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）
be worried about；have difficulty in doing sth；brave ；confident；be afraid to do；communicate with；drawings ；body languages；have sth in common。
第三步：連詞成句
1. I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.
2. You said you are worried about having difficulties in communicating in Chinese.
3. First, you should be brave and confident to speak Chinese when you communicate with others.
4. We Chinese are very friendly, so do not be afraid to make mistakes.
5. Second, speak Chinese slowly and clearly when you talk to others.
6. Finally, you can use drawings and body languages to communicate with others.
7. As you know, body language of different cultures has a lot in common in the world.
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition ;including,
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), On the one hand…
4.表因果關(guān)系：Consequently , Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰
第五步：潤(rùn)色修改。
【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.這句話運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句；First, you should be brave and confident to speak Chinese when you communicate with others.這句話運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。使用了一些固定詞組，如be worried about；have difficulty in doing sth；be afraid to do；communicate with；have sth in common。等。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Peter,
You said you don't know whether to learn Chinese painting or Chinese cuisine and wish to ask my advice on it. In my opinion, cooking may be a better choice for you.
First, you love Chinese dishes. As the old saying goes, "Interest is the best teacher." Your love for Chinese dishes will surely direct you to a higher level of cooking. Besides, it's a time-saving option because your efforts will soon pay off while it takes a long time to master the techniques of painting.
I hope you will find my advice helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封回復(fù)建議信。你的英國(guó)朋友 Peter發(fā)來郵件，提到他們學(xué)校將開展與中國(guó)文化有關(guān)的興趣活動(dòng)，目前有中國(guó)國(guó)畫和中華烹飪兩門課程，但是他無法決定學(xué)習(xí)哪門課程，希望能聽聽你的建議。寫作時(shí)先選擇建議的課程，詳細(xì)說明建議的理由。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
要求：
1.推薦一門課程
2.說明理由。
第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）
Chinese painting ； Chinese cuisine；In my opinion；As the old saying goes；direct ；higher level；time-saving； option；pay off；master ；techniques 。
第三步：連詞成句
1. You said you don't know whether to learn Chinese painting or Chinese cuisine and wish to ask my advice on it.
2. In my opinion, cooking may be a better choice for you.
3. As the old saying goes, "Interest is the best teacher."
4. Your love for Chinese dishes will surely direct you to a higher level of cooking.
5. Besides, it's a time-saving option because your efforts will soon pay off
6. It takes a long time to master the techniques of painting.
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition ;including,
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), On the one hand…
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰
第五步：潤(rùn)色修改。
【點(diǎn)睛】文章條理清晰，理由描述恰當(dāng)，行文流暢；準(zhǔn)確地使用了高級(jí)句式，如：Besides, it's a time-saving option because your efforts will soon pay off這句使用了because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句； while it takes a long time to master the techniques of painting.使用while引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。同時(shí)運(yùn)用高檔詞匯，例如 higher level；time-saving； option；pay off；master ；techniques等。引用名言：As the old saying goes, "Interest is the best teacher."范文的語(yǔ)言合乎英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，是一篇值得參考的作文。
4．Dear Peter,
Have you fitted in the new environment in our city? I’m writing to invite you to enjoy a show which will be hosted by our school. And the detailed information is as follows.
In order to enrich our school life and promote Chinese traditional culture, a Hanfu performance will be held in the hall of our school on 25th July. It will be a great show played by many students dressed in Hanfu, which will certainly be a visual feast. It’s a good idea for you to surf the Internet for the introduction of Hanfu, especially those in the Tang Dynasty, which will help you appreciate the show.
Are you available on that day? I’m sure you will have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)來自英國(guó)的交換生好友Peter觀看學(xué)校舉辦的漢服演出。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
???總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：1. 演出相關(guān)信息
??????1）演出時(shí)間
??????2）演出地點(diǎn)
??????2. 建議了解漢服
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
invite；Hanfu show；detail；in order to；traditional culture；performance；the Internet；search for；appreciate；enjoy
第三步：連詞成句
1. I’m writing to invite you to enjoy a Hanfu show.
2. Here is some information in detail.
3. Hanfu is a kind of expression of Chinese traditional culture.
4. It will be held in the hall of our school on 25th July.
5. You’d better search for some information about Hanfu on the Internet.
6. Hope you have a good time on the occasion.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，
第五步：潤(rùn)色修改
【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：It will be a great show played by many students dressed in Hanfu, which will certainly be a visual feast.和It’s a good idea for you to surf the Internet for the introduction of Hanfu, especially those in the Tang Dynasty, which will help you appreciate the show.這兩句話都運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。另外，文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you are nervous about the Tang poem recital at the New Year’s Eve Gala to be held in our school hall. I know how you are feeling and it is normal for you to get nervous.
Anyway, you should adjust yourself to be at your best. First, you should practice more and get fully prepared, so that you won’t worry about your performance failure. Second, remind yourself that participation matters most. Last but not least, listen to music or take a walk to relieve your anxiety.
All in all, believe yourself and try your best. I’m sure you will perform excellently on the stage.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】這是一篇提綱類寫作。
【詳解】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華，你校的留學(xué)生Peter將在校元旦晚會(huì)上朗誦一首唐詩(shī)，但是他現(xiàn)在很緊張。請(qǐng)你就此給他寫一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1. 表示理解；2. 給出建議；3. 給予鼓勵(lì)。
第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：be nervous about (緊張)；New Year’s Eve Gala (元旦晚會(huì))；normal (正常的)；adjust oneself to (使自己適應(yīng)于……)；get fully prepared (做好充分準(zhǔn)備)；worry about (擔(dān)心)；performance failure(表演失敗)；participation(參與)；All in all(總而言之)等。
第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。
【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如I’m sorry to hear that you are nervous about the Tang poem recital at the New Year’s Eve Gala to be held in our school hall.運(yùn)用賓語(yǔ)從句；First, you should practice more and get fully prepared, so that you won’t worry about your performance failure.運(yùn)用目的狀語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。
6．Dear fellow students,
Time is without doubt of vital significance, especially for us Senior Three students. But the truth is that not everyone is attaching adequate importance to it.
If we are in the habit of leaving things undone and putting them off until the last minute, there is no doubt that, rushing to meet the deadline, nothing will turn out satisfactory. We will lose many a precious opportunity with the help of our parents and teachers should be a good choice. Besides, remember lo combine work with play. Just as the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.
Why not take action now to manage our precious time effectively, thus producing better results?
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向校英語(yǔ)校報(bào)寫一封倡議書，呼吁同學(xué)們恰當(dāng)?shù)毓芾頃r(shí)間。
【詳解】第一步：審題
體裁：應(yīng)用文
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
????總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：1. 拖延的弊端；
2. 你的建議；
3. 發(fā)起倡議。
第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）
attach importance to…；in the habit of…；put…off；with the help of…；combine …with…；take action to do sth.
第三步：連詞成句
1. But the truth is that not everyone is attaching adequate importance to it.
2. If we are in the habit of leaving things undone and putting them off until the last minute,
3. We will lose many a precious opportunity with the help of our parents and teachers should be a good choice.
4. remember lo combine work with play.
5. Why not take action now to manage our precious time effectively, thus producing better results?
(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。）
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá)：In other words, that is to say,
6.表進(jìn)行舉例說明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陳述事實(shí)：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表選擇：either…or…，or
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。
第五步：潤(rùn)色修改
【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了主從復(fù)合句，如But the truth is that not everyone is attaching adequate importance to it這句話中用了that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，如there is no doubt that, rushing to meet the deadline, nothing will turn out satisfactory這句話中用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句（nothing will turn out satisfactory）；使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，如attach importance to…，in the habit of…，combine …with…，take action to do sth.等，為文章增色不少。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。
7．Dear editor,
I’m writing to discuss the phenomenon with you. Calling some friends, singing some songs and even drinking some wine, some high school students prefer to celebrate their birthdays in the KTV.
As you know, everything we students have is provided by our parents. So I think we shouldn’t spend too much on something unworthy. There are some suggestions I want to share with the students.
Firstly, we can celebrate our birthdays by accompanying parents at home, cooking some nice dishes and doing housework. Secondly, we can do something meaningful, such as going to an exhibition with friends, or helping the old in the nursing home. In a word, I expect teenagers to celebrate birthdays wisely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。就“高中生是否應(yīng)該去KTV慶祝生日”表達(dá)自己的看法。
【詳解】第一步：審題
時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)
結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法
???總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。
要求：1. 簡(jiǎn)述該現(xiàn)象
?????????????2. 說明觀點(diǎn)和建議
?????????????3. 表達(dá)希望青少年理性地慶祝生日
第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ)）
discuss sth with；prefer to do…；celebrate birthday；invite friends；sing songs；drink wine；be against；spend too much on；share… with；accompany；have dinner；chat with；bring up；meaningful；go to an exhibition；expect sb to do sth.
第三步：連詞成句
(1) I'm writing to discuss the phenomenon with you.
(2) More and more high school students prefer to celebrate their birthdays in the KTV.
(3) They invite some friends, sing some songs and even drink some wine.
(4) I am against it.
(5) We shouldn't spend too much on birthdays.
(6) There are some suggestions.
(7) I want to share these suggestions with the students.
(8) We can celebrate our birthdays.
(9) We can accompany parents at home, have dinner and chat with them.
(10) We should thank our parents for bringing us up.
(11) We can do something meaningful.
(12) We can go to an exhibition and going cycling with friends.
(13) I expect teenagers to celebrate birthdays wisely.
根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句，適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問題。
第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，
第五步：潤(rùn)色修改
【點(diǎn)睛】
范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：There are some suggestions I want to share with the students.這句話運(yùn)用了省略that的定語(yǔ)從句；使用了一些固定詞組，如chat with ，bring up，expect sb to do sth.等。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Jack,
I am so glad to receive your letter and know your interest in the Three Gorges. You are perfectly welcome to come and tour in this fascinating place.
The Three Gorges area, with its steep cliffs, crystal-clear water and rich history and culture, is the real highlight of the Yangtze River. Every year millions of tourists are attracted here partly because of its gorgeous scenery and unique historical sites and partly because of the world-famous dam, which has been built to control flooding and provide power for the central region of China.
The best way to get to know this wonderful area is a river cruise. Once you get aboard, you will find yourself completely immersed in this awesome spot. Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對(duì)英國(guó)朋友Jack咨詢?nèi)龒{旅游的事寫一封回信。
【詳解】第一步：明確要求。本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生對(duì)英國(guó)朋友Jack咨詢?nèi)龒{旅游的事寫一封回信。題目要求寫作內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下三條要點(diǎn)：1.表示歡迎；2. 介紹三峽及大壩；3. 建議游覽方式等。因此，可將寫作分成三段。第一段：表示歡迎。第二段：介紹三峽及大壩。第三段：建議游覽方式并表示祝福。
第二步：列關(guān)鍵詞。如：welcome to，steep cliffs，the real highlight of，The best way to do sth.，river cruise，immerse等。
第三步：連詞成句。根據(jù)列出的關(guān)鍵詞造句，注意主謂一致，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)等語(yǔ)法。
第四步：連句成文。注意句子之間的邏輯上的銜接與過渡。書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。
【點(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰，層次分明，語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美，內(nèi)容全面。值得學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)秀句子有：非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。Every year millions of tourists are attracted here partly because of its gorgeous scenery and unique historical sites and partly because of the world-famous dam, which has been built to control flooding and provide power for the central region of China. 條件狀語(yǔ)從句。Once you get aboard, you will find yourself completely immersed in this awesome spot. 本篇范文詞匯十分豐富，顯示了作者扎實(shí)的英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)。
9．Dear Tom,
How is it going? I have some exciting news for you! 21st Century Teens will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China”, only open to foreigners. I know you love photography, so why not give it a try?
The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, famous places or historical sites, local customs of China and so forth. And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation of time, place, name of the work, and stories behind. Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Each participant can turn in three photos at most to Photography@ 21st Century Teens. com. Deadline for entries is Dec. 15, 2018.
For more information, you can refer to 21st Century Teens’ official website.
Well, I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do. If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。
【詳解】第1步:根據(jù)提示可知,本篇為一封信; 寫信建議你的美國(guó)朋友Tom參加21世紀(jì)學(xué)生英文報(bào)（21st Century Teens）專門為外國(guó)人舉辦的2018“最美中國(guó)（Amazing China）”手機(jī)攝影大賽。信的內(nèi)容包括：1.作品內(nèi)容要求；2.提交時(shí)間和方式；3.表示愿意提供幫助。
第2步:根據(jù)寫作要求,確定關(guān)鍵詞(組) , 如: hold a mobile photo contest舉辦手機(jī)攝影大賽; be accompanied with 伴隨著；turn in 上交; refer to 查閱；等。
第3步:根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。該篇文章需要使用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫作。
第4步:連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。
本文內(nèi)容完整,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,語(yǔ)篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式,如原因狀語(yǔ)從句I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do. 條件狀語(yǔ)從句If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式,顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然,為文章增色添彩。
10．Hi Chris,
I’m very delighted to see you are interested in Chinese culture and traditions, and of course, I’ m willing to help.
When it comes to choosing a traditional gift for your friends, first I think you should know the meanings behind. For example, paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses. And Chinese knots can also make a good present, for they are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.
Since we both will be free next Sunday, why don’t you let me accompany you to have a look at Hong Qiao Market on that day? We can meet at 9 in the morning at the school gate and go there by subway. Does it sound okay for you? Write to me before this Friday, will you?
Best regards,
Li Hua
【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封建議信，幫助其挑選中國(guó)禮物。
【詳解】第一步：審題
??體裁：應(yīng)用文
??時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。
??結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式
????????首段：點(diǎn)明主題；
????????中心段：提建議；
????????尾段：提供幫助。
第二步：列提綱
Be delighted to; be interested in;be willing to; when it comes to; express your best wishes;
the symbol of family reunion; in the eyes of us Chinese.
第三步：連詞成句
I’m very delighted to see you are interested in Chinese culture and traditions.
I’ m willing to help.
When it comes to choosing a traditional gift for your friends.
I think you should know the meanings behind.
Paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses.
Chinese knots can also make a good present.
They are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.
根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。
第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)
1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，
第五步: 潤(rùn)色修改
【點(diǎn)睛】本范文思路清晰，條理明確。運(yùn)用了較豐富的句式，如paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses, 此句運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句； for引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句And Chinese knots can also make a good present, for they are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.Write to me before this Friday, will you? 運(yùn)用了反義疑問句。全篇沒有中式英語(yǔ)，行筆流暢，足以見考生的英語(yǔ)功底。

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