申請信1．假設(shè)你是李華。你在居住的小區(qū)看到一則啟示：隨著新型冠狀病毒疫情的發(fā)展，小區(qū)正在招募社區(qū)志愿者，請你寫一封申請信，申請加入社區(qū)的志愿者工作。要求：1. 樂于助人。2. 善于交流。3. 知道一些基礎(chǔ)防護(hù)措施。注意: 1.字?jǐn)?shù)在80-100詞左右。2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。提示詞：新型冠狀病毒：2019-nCoV；基礎(chǔ)防護(hù)措施：measures of protectionDear Sir/madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua2．假定你是李華，你校的廣播站正在招收英文編輯（editor），你對此很感興趣。請給校相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)人Chris寫封郵件申請?jiān)撀毼?。?nèi)容包括：1. 寫郵件目的；2. 陳述個人優(yōu)勢；3. 表達(dá)期望。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是李華，在英國某中學(xué)就讀。你校準(zhǔn)備舉辦以”多彩世界文化”為主題的活動周。請給學(xué)生會主席Tom寫封信，申請成為志愿者。信的內(nèi)容如下:1.個人優(yōu)勢:英語、性格等;2.參加目的:1): 宣傳中國、了解世界;2)鍛煉自我。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。Dear Tom,I am glad to know that the activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua4．假定你是李華，得知2019青少年模擬聯(lián)合國大會（ Model United Nations）現(xiàn)面向高中生征集志愿者，請根據(jù)要求寫一封申請信。要求如下：1. 組織能力、溝通能力強(qiáng)；2. 英語基礎(chǔ)好；3. 有責(zé)任感，對國際事務(wù)懷有熱情。注意：80詞左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Sir or Madam,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,Li Hua5．假定你是李華，你校將要接待一個英國中學(xué)生交流團(tuán)，現(xiàn)在正招聘志愿者，請根據(jù) 以下題示寫信應(yīng)聘，內(nèi)容包括:1. 英語表達(dá)能力；  2.相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；   3. 應(yīng)聘目的。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；  2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李華，一名高中生，你校校園網(wǎng)需要招收英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)編輯（the Web editor），請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語向外教主編Chris申請這一職位。1.關(guān)心時事(current affairs)，對新聞工作(journalism)感興趣；2.有做?？浾叩墓ぷ鹘?jīng)歷；3.擅長英語，曾獲英語寫作大賽一等獎；注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；Dear Chris,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李華，你對《紐約時報》(New York Times)上一則某外語培訓(xùn)中心招聘中文教師的廣告非常感興趣，請你給該培訓(xùn)中心寫一封自薦信。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:雇用，聘任hire申請:apply for普通話:Mandarin外語培訓(xùn)中心:Foreign Language Learning CenterDear Sir or Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá)61. 假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信：● 對此活動的認(rèn)識（如對本人、學(xué)生級社會的益處等）●個人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語言能力等）●你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等）注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學(xué) Chenxi Hope SchoolDear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two._______________________________________________________________________________-_______________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,Li Hua9．假如你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個國際中學(xué)生組織將在張家口舉辦一個以滑雪為主題的冬令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請寫一封郵件申請參加，內(nèi)容須包括：1.自我介紹（包括英語能力，興趣愛好等）2.參加意圖（介紹中國，了解其他國家）3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。要求：1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。Dear Sir or Madam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regards,Li Hua10．假定你是李華，2020年奧運(yùn)會將要在日本東京舉辦，現(xiàn)在正在全球招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示用英語給組委會寫一封申請信。要點(diǎn)提示：1.個人情況：年齡、性別、學(xué)歷（高中）；2.個人條件：英語好、愛好運(yùn)動、善于交往、樂于助人、熟悉當(dāng)?shù)厍闆r；3.承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.Dear Sir./Madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to apply to work as a volunteer for the Tokyo Olympic Games._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua            1．Dear Sir/madam,I'm Li Hua.In my community, I saw an inspiration: with the development of novel coronavirus outbreak, the community is recruiting community volunteers.I want to apply for volunteer work in the community.Firstly, I am loving and helpful.Secondly, I am outgoing and good at communicating with others.Last but not least, I know some basic precautions that will go a long way in getting the job done.In short, I meet all the requirements of volunteer work, and I really want to help control the epidemic.I sincerely hope that my dream will come true.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。【詳解】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信：假設(shè)你是李華。你在居住的小區(qū)看到一則啟示：隨著新型冠狀病毒疫情的發(fā)展，小區(qū)正在招募社區(qū)志愿者，請你寫一封申請信，申請加入社區(qū)的志愿者工作。要求：1. 樂于助人。2. 善于交流。3. 知道一些基礎(chǔ)防護(hù)措施。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：with the development of（隨著……的發(fā)展）；novel coronavirus outbreak（新冠狀病毒爆發(fā)）；recruiting community volunteers（招募社區(qū)志愿者）；good at communicating with others（善于與人溝通）；等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。同時文中使用高級句子。I want to apply for volunteer work in the community.句中動詞不定式作賓語；I know some basic precautions that will go a long way in getting the job done.定語從句用在句中；I sincerely hope that my dream will come true.句中使用that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；另外，Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least, In short,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。2．Dear Chris,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. I happened to see the advertisement that our broadcasting station is looking for an English editor. I’m writing to apply for this position.First of all, I’m confident that I’m qualified. I am so keen on the events of our school that I will update the news regularly. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I have no difficulty in editing articles in English. Furthermore, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better..If chosen, I’ll be devoted to the job. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本文書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求以李華的身份寫一封申請郵件。【詳解】根據(jù)所提供材料，我們可以從以下幾步來完成此書面表達(dá)。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一封申請信：假定你是李華，你校的廣播站正在招收英文編輯（editor），你對此很感興趣。請給校相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)人Chris寫封郵件申請?jiān)撀毼?。?nèi)容包括：1. 寫郵件目的；2. 陳述個人優(yōu)勢；3. 表達(dá)期望。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：see the advertisement that our broadcasting station is looking for an English editor.（看到廣播站正在招收英文編輯的廣告）；have a good command of English（有良好的英語能力）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運(yùn)用高級句子。如名詞性從句的使用：I happened to see the advertisement that our broadcasting station is looking for an English editor. 定語從句的使用：Furthermore, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better.3．Dear David,I am glad to know that the activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.I am eager to be a member of it.To begin with, as an outgoing boy, I am good at communicating with others. Secondly, I can speak fluent English and express myself clearly. What’s more，through the activity, not only can I make more friends but build up my character. I think it’s my duty to be able to introduce China to other friends and my honor to understand other cultures at the same time. Hopefully, I can take part in the activity.Looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文體裁的提綱類寫作，要求考生寫一封書信，在信中寫明：成為志愿者的個人優(yōu)勢：英語、性格等；參加“多彩世界文化”活動周目的1)宣傳中國、了解世界；2)鍛煉自我。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文——書信。要點(diǎn)：1.想做“多彩世界文化”活動周的志愿者；2.成為志愿者的個人優(yōu)勢：英語、性格等；3.參加“多彩世界文化”活動周目的：宣傳中國、了解世界；鍛煉自我。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總。第二步：列提綱一、框架1、信件一開始就開宗明義，說明知道學(xué)校的“多彩世界文化”活動周就要開始了，想當(dāng)活動的志愿者。2、詳細(xì)談成為志愿者的優(yōu)勢：1）性格外向，善于和人交流；2）英語水平較高，口語流利；。3、參加“多彩世界文化”活動周的目的：1）宣傳中國，2）了解世界，3）交朋友，鍛煉自己。4、總結(jié)：希望能夠成為志愿者。二、段落主題句The activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.I hope to be a member of it.I have many advantages .I want to make more friends and build up my character. I am able to introduce China to other friends and understand other cultures . I can take part in the activity.第三步：展開用說明法將主題句展開。第四步： 潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文格式正確，完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，應(yīng)用了很多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯：倒裝句：What’s more，through the activity, not only can I make more friends but build up my character.，賓語從句：I am glad to know that the activity about Colorful World Cultures will be held in our school.，非謂語動詞：To begin with, as an outgoing boy, I am good at communicating with others.和I am eager to be a member of it.等，這篇范文的另一亮點(diǎn)是：句子間的承接詞，Secondly，What’s more，它們的使用使整篇文章的層次分明，條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)流暢。形式主語I think it’s my duty to be able to introduce China to other friends and my honor to understand other cultures at the same time.的應(yīng)用使句法結(jié)構(gòu)具有變化，介詞短語as an outgoing boy, through the activity等的使用也給文章增色，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。4．Dear Sir or Madam,I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer in Model United Nations.Being monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer and improves my communication skills. Having been learning English for years, I hope I can get the job to put it into practice. Besides, I’m responsible and enthusiastic about international affairs, which will help me cooperate well in a team.I’d appreciate it if you could give me a chance. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，按照要求寫一封申請信。【詳解】第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。假定你是李華，得知2019青少年模擬聯(lián)合國大會（ Model United Nations）現(xiàn)面向高中生征集志愿者，請根據(jù)要求寫一封申請信。要求如下：1. 組織能力、溝通能力強(qiáng)；2. 英語基礎(chǔ)好；3. 有責(zé)任感，對國際事務(wù)懷有熱情。人稱為第一人稱。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，點(diǎn)明寫信的目的。第二段，文章的三大要點(diǎn)。第三段，表達(dá)期望。第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語: responsible負(fù)責(zé)的；enthusiastic熱心的；cooperate合作；apply to do申請；put… into practice把…付諸實(shí)踐等。第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過渡銜接；注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。【點(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了一些亮點(diǎn)短語：responsible；enthusiastic；cooperate；apply to do；put… into practice；look forward to等。以及一些較為高級的句式: Being monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer and improves my communication skills.使用了動名詞做主語；Having been learning English for years, I hope I can get the job to put it into practice.使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；I’m responsible and enthusiastic about international affairs, which will help me cooperate well in a team.使用了非限制性定語從句。高級句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達(dá)能力。5．Dear Sir/Madam,I’ve learned that a team of students from England will visit our school and you are looking for volunteers to receive them. I feel excited to write you for the job. To be honest, I can talk in English fluently. I have just won first prize in the Spoken English Contest, so there is no doubt that I have any problem communicating with them. What’s more, I’ve got some experience of serving foreigners. In order to practice my speaking skills and get more experience, I’m eager to be accepted. If you take my request into consideration, I’ll be more than grateful and happy.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】這是一封應(yīng)聘信。題干中給出了寫作時需要涵蓋的三個要點(diǎn)，但是每個要點(diǎn)還需要同學(xué)們根據(jù)自己的學(xué)習(xí)及生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。【詳解】第一步：審題：確定時態(tài)和人稱。這封信主要是你作為李華，申請英國中學(xué)生交流團(tuán)的志愿者，所以時態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）looking for volunteers to do sth.（尋找志愿者做某事）；feel excited to do sth.（很激動做某事）； the Spoken English Contest（英語演講比賽）；there is no doubt…（毫無疑問……）；have…problem (in) doing sth.（在……方面有問題）；some experience of serving foreigners（服務(wù)外國人的經(jīng)驗(yàn)）；eager to do sth.（渴望做某事）；take… into consideration（考慮……）等。第三步：遣詞造句：同學(xué)們在寫作時不能逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，同時要點(diǎn)表述要完整，文章要通順，準(zhǔn)確使用時態(tài)和語態(tài)。第四步：連句成文：寫作時要適當(dāng)使用連詞、過渡詞和插入語，使文章渾然一體。同時恰當(dāng)而合理地使用一些高級詞匯和句型，如定語從句等，以提高文章檔次。【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多句式，如：第一段第一句使用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句與and引導(dǎo)的并列句；第四句使用了so引導(dǎo)的并列句；第七句使用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。此外本文還使用了一些高級詞匯，如looking for volunteers to receive them；feel excited to write you for the job；the Spoken English Contest；there is no doubt that…；have any problem communicating with them；some experience of serving foreigners；eager to be accepted；take my request into consideration等。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。6．Dear Chris:I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. I happened to see the advertisement that our website is looking for an English editor. I’m writing to apply for this position.First of all, not only am I enthusiastic about current affairs, but also I take great interest in journalism. So I think I can do the job well due to my language skills. What’s more, I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better. More importantly, I have a good command of English. I got the first prize in the English Writing Competition in our school.In conclusion, I’m convinced that I am qualified for the job. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文中的求職信，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成高中生李華，用英語寫一封信，向外教主編Chris申請校園網(wǎng)中的英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)編輯的職位。【詳解】第1步：審題。根據(jù)文字提示可知本文是一封求職信，要求考生用英語向外教主編Chris申請校園網(wǎng)中的英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)編輯的職位。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時時和第一人稱為主。第2步：組織要點(diǎn)。1.關(guān)心時事(current affairs)，對新聞工作(journalism)感興趣；2.有做?？浾叩墓ぷ鹘?jīng)歷；3.擅長英語，曾獲英語寫作大賽一等獎；第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句。本文關(guān)鍵詞為look for an English editor、apply for this position、take great interest in journalism、work as a reporter for our school newspaper、have a good command of English、get the first prize in the English Writing Competition等。寫作時注意求職信的格式和慣用語。第4步：連句成文。注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，如first of all、what’s more、in conclusion 等；同時書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容涵蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)，使用了較多的高級詞匯，如：apply for this position、take great interest in journalism、have a good command of English；同時也使用了較多的高級句式。如部分倒裝句not only am I enthusiastic about current affairs.非限制性定語從句I worked as a reporter for our school newspaper last year, which will surely help me do the job better.同位語從句I happened to see the advertisement that our website is looking for an English editor.7．Dear Sir or Madam,In answer to your advertisement in the “New York Times”, I would like to apply for the position of Chinese teacher in your Foreign Language Learning Center.Initially, as a native speaker, I can speak standard Mandarin. Meanwhile, I also have a good command of English, for I have been learning English for so many years. Moreover, I like being a teacher, having previous experience of English teaching working in a language training center. Last but not least, I’m outgoing and warm-hearted and can easily make friends with others, which is extremely essential to become an excellent teacher.Once hired, I would be very happy and I would devote myself to the job. Your consideration about my application would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。【詳解】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；你對《紐約時報》上一則某外語培訓(xùn)中心招聘中文教師的廣告非常感興趣，請你給該培訓(xùn)中心寫一封自薦信。 第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如： New York Times（《紐約時報》）； hire（雇用，聘任）；apply for（申請）；Mandarin（普通話）；Foreign Language Learning Center（外語培訓(xùn)中心）；native speaker（以說普通話為母語的人）；outgoing and warm-hearted （外向且熱心）；devote oneself to…（全身心投入…）第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。如：I’m outgoing and warm-hearted and can easily make friends with others, which is extremely essential to become an excellent teacher. 運(yùn)用了非限定性定語從句修飾前面整個句子，進(jìn)一步修飾補(bǔ)充，不僅完善了細(xì)節(jié)，也做到了高級句式的靈活轉(zhuǎn)換運(yùn)用。Your consideration about my application would be highly appreciated.運(yùn)用抽象名詞做主語，不僅更符合英語地道的表達(dá)，也做到了句式多樣化，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。8．Dear Sir or Madam，       I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．       I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．       My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，Li Hua【分析】本文是書信類作文。【詳解】本文要求用英語給學(xué)校寫一封申請信，申請用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第一人稱為主。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，但不是很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)全交代，不能有遺漏。而且要拓展內(nèi)容，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。重要短語：As far as I am concerned （據(jù)我所知），result in （導(dǎo)致），be qualified for （有資格，合格），be independent （獨(dú)立），instructive（有教育意義），stimulate interests in（激發(fā)…的興趣）等【點(diǎn)睛】所給范文語言簡潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子： As far as I am concerned據(jù)我所知，be qualified for 合格的。I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.這句話用了非限制性定語從句， That’s why I apply for the position.這句話用了表語從句， My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. 這句話用了不定式做表語。What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. 這句話用了主語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞。9．Dear Sir or Madam,I ‘m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I have read the announcement of the winter camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What’s more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your winter camp.Looking forward to your reply!Regards,Li Hua【分析】本文是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個國際中學(xué)生組織將在張家口舉辦一個以滑雪為主題的冬令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請寫一封郵件申請參加。本文要點(diǎn)均已給出，總體難度不大。【詳解】第1步：審題。根據(jù)文字提示可知本文是一封電子郵件，要求考生給國際中學(xué)生組織寫信，申請參加這個以滑雪為主題的冬令營。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時和第一人稱為主。第2步：組織要點(diǎn)。1.自我介紹（包括英語能力，興趣愛好等）；2.參加意圖（介紹中國，了解其他國家）；3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句，關(guān)鍵詞為be interested in、take part in 、speak fluent English、tell students from other countries about China等；寫作時要注意電子郵件的格式及慣用語。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)完美，條理清晰，時態(tài)和人稱運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋了文字提示要求的所有要點(diǎn)，且有適當(dāng)?shù)膫€人發(fā)揮?？忌\(yùn)用了多樣式的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，讓整篇文章富有變化并不死板。使用了較多的高級詞匯，如be interested in、take part in 、speak fluent English等；盡量運(yùn)用了豐富的句式，如定語從句J I have read the announcement of the winter camp that you have posted on the Internet；同時文章還運(yùn)用了一些串聯(lián)成分，如what’s more等，這些串聯(lián)詞讓各個要點(diǎn)更為緊密地結(jié)合在一起。以上寫作技巧的運(yùn)用提升了文章的層次，顯示了考生具有很強(qiáng)的駕馭語言的能力。10．Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to apply to work as a volunteer for the Tokyo Olympic Games.I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now. I am good at English and I can communicate with foreign tourists in English fluently.I believe I can do a good job in the Games. First, I like sports and I know the place very well. Second, I get along well with others, which is especially important for a volunteer. Third, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed. My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【分析】本書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類作文。要求以李華名義用英語給組委會寫一封申請信。【詳解】首先審題，這篇文章要求是假定你是李華，2020年奧運(yùn)會將要在日本東京舉辦，現(xiàn)在正在全球招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示用英語給組委會寫一封申請信。要點(diǎn)提示：1.個人情況：年齡、性別、學(xué)歷（高中）；2.個人條件：英語好、愛好運(yùn)動、善于交往、樂于助人、熟悉當(dāng)?shù)厍闆r；3.承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)。其次選用正確的時態(tài)，然后寫出單個句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時，要注意文中給出的細(xì)節(jié)都要包括，不要遺漏。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文章思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。【點(diǎn)睛】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一簡較好的范文。這簡短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如：communicate with，get along well with，look forward to。還使用了定語從句Second, I get along well with others, which is especially important for a volunteer.和名詞性從句Third, I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu) ，增加了文章的可讀性。 

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