江蘇省徐州市2021-2023年中考英語(yǔ)一模試題分類匯編書(shū)面表達(dá)2023年江蘇省徐州市中考一模英語(yǔ)試題六、書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿分20分)“能吃苦, 肯奮斗, 有擔(dān)當(dāng), 似一葉扁舟在激湍中逆流而上, 如一株小樹(shù)在萬(wàn)木前迎來(lái)春光。”這就是陸鴻, 《感動(dòng)中國(guó)》2022年度人物之一。雖幼時(shí)高燒導(dǎo)致身體殘疾, 但他仍堅(jiān)持學(xué)習(xí)。畢業(yè)后, 由于身體殘疾, 陸鴻沒(méi)有找到工作, 他開(kāi)始自主創(chuàng)業(yè), 從賣水、修自行車到最后成功開(kāi)相冊(cè)廠, 他幫助許多殘疾人就業(yè), 實(shí)現(xiàn)人生價(jià)值……請(qǐng)以“永不言棄”為話題, 結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷, 寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文, 講述陸鴻的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷以及他身上值得我們學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。參考詞匯:相冊(cè)album:堅(jiān)持persistence注意:1. 短文條理清晰, 行文連貫, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 短文中不得泄露個(gè)人信息;3. 詞數(shù)90左右(開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left adeep impression on me. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2022年江蘇省徐州市中考一模英語(yǔ)試卷八、話題作文71．親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，初中三年，我們學(xué)習(xí)了很多科目，在所有的學(xué)科中，哪一科是你學(xué)得最好的?請(qǐng)以“I am best at                      ”為題，并根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。1、要點(diǎn)：1)你是如何學(xué)習(xí)該學(xué)科的？2)在該學(xué)科遇到困難時(shí)，你是如何克服的？3)困難得到解決后，你的感受是什么？2、要求：1)請(qǐng)補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題，如 maths，Chinese，PE 等；2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3)詞數(shù) 100 左右。I am best at                                                     2021年江蘇省徐州市中考一模英語(yǔ)試卷八、話題作文71．研究表明從小愛(ài)做家務(wù)的孩子長(zhǎng)大更容易成功。你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)發(fā)起了“A Helper of My Family”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的英文短文，介紹你曾經(jīng)做的一次家務(wù)勞動(dòng)及感悟。要點(diǎn)如下：1. What housework do you often do?2. When and how did you do it?3. What have you learned from it?注意：1．短文需包含以上要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2．短文中已給出的部分，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息。A Helper of My FamilyI am a good helper of my family. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：2023年江蘇省徐州市中考一模英語(yǔ)試題【答案】Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left a deep impression on me.Lu Hong comes from Jiangsu. A high fever caused physical disability when he was young, but he still persisted in studying. After graduation, due to his physical disability, Lu Hong couldn't find a job. He is not complaining, not depressed, and unwilling to become a burden to his family. He started his own business, from selling water and repairing bicycles to successfully opening a photo album factory. He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life.Lu Hong is not afraid of hardship. willing to strive. responsible, and never gives up. He is a model for all of us. Compared to LuHong, there is nothing that cannot be overcome about the difficulties we face in life or study.【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，講述陸鴻的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷及他的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的提示要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。【詳解】【寫(xiě)作步驟】第一步，總寫(xiě)，陸鴻給我留下了深刻印象，引出介紹的內(nèi)容（文章已給出）；第二步，具體講述陸鴻的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷。第三步，最后寫(xiě)陸鴻值得我們學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，結(jié)束全文。【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①leave a deep impression on sb.給某人留下深刻印象②come from來(lái)自③be unwilling to do sth.不愿意做某事④become a burden to成為...的負(fù)擔(dān)⑤be not afraid of hardship不怕吃苦⑥compared to與……相比，比起⑦due to由于高分句型①A high fever caused physical disability when he was young，but he still persisted in studying.（時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、but連接的并列句）②Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year...（定語(yǔ)從句）③Compared to Lu Hong，there is nothing that cannot be overcomeabout the difficulties we face in life or study.（there be句型和定語(yǔ)從句）④ He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life.（動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)） 2022年江蘇省徐州市中考一模英語(yǔ)試卷71．例文:I am best at EnglishI still remember three years ago, I had difficulties in learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English and written English were poor, too. Luckily, with the help of my English teacher, I made great progress in it. I managed to do everything she suggested. I watched English movies and sang classic English songs. It is actually an effective way to improve my listening. While reading, I tried not to read word by word but by word groups and guess the meaning when meeting new words. I wrote down useful words and phrases, in this way, I increased the number of words and understood the articles better, besides, it was also helpful to my written English. Step by step, little by little, I made progress, and now I am best at English. When we face the trouble, never give up. As long as we stick to the right methods, we are sure to do things faster and better.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文要求以用第一人稱介紹自己學(xué)得最好的學(xué)科，內(nèi)容包括如何克服自己在學(xué)科學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的困難，并談?wù)効朔щy后的感受；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要圍繞題干提示點(diǎn)展開(kāi)，文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文有條理地介紹自己學(xué)得最好的學(xué)科英語(yǔ)，介紹了自己在最初學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)碰到的問(wèn)題，陳述自己在老師的幫助下找到正確的方法、克服困難并取得進(jìn)步；層次分明，布局合理。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：have difficulties in；with the help；make great progress in；manage to；stick to；faster and better；句型：it固定句型It was difficult for me to …；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句When we face the trouble, never give up；條件狀語(yǔ)從句As long as we stick to the right methods, we are sure to do things faster and better.【點(diǎn)睛】本篇是話題作文，首先要按要求確立中心話題，填補(bǔ)題目，然后根據(jù)題干的3個(gè)提示問(wèn)題展開(kāi)話題。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意，陳述過(guò)去學(xué)習(xí)遇到的困難及解決困難用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，文句之間要邏輯清晰，條理清楚。 2021年江蘇省徐州市中考一模英語(yǔ)試卷71．[例文]A Helper of My FamilyI am a helper of my family. I often do housework at home. Every day I make the bed and wash the dishes. Sometimes I do the washing and look after my pet dog. Last Sunday, it was dark, but my parents didn’t come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework and decided to cook a meal for my family instead of just waiting. It was my first cooking. I surfed the Internet on how to do home style dishes. With the step-by-step directions, I managed to make my first dish. When my parents came back, they couldn’t believe their eyes. They were so satisfied with me.I think it is necessary for every family member to share housework. The more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為話題作文，要求以“A Helper of My Family”為題，寫(xiě)自己曾做過(guò)的一次家務(wù)及其感想。寫(xiě)作思路已由三個(gè)問(wèn)題給出，學(xué)生需按此思路行文。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)根據(jù)事情發(fā)生時(shí)間確定，敘述過(guò)往經(jīng)歷時(shí)應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)。題目中所給要點(diǎn)提示必須包括，可適當(dāng)拓展，文章層次要分明，條理清晰，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。 

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