初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí) 專(zhuān)題50+咨詢(xún)建議類(lèi)-三年（2020-2022）中考真題英語(yǔ)分項(xiàng)匯編（全國(guó)通用）

這是一份初中英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí) 專(zhuān)題50+咨詢(xún)建議類(lèi)-三年（2020-2022）中考真題英語(yǔ)分項(xiàng)匯編（全國(guó)通用），共103頁(yè)。
?專(zhuān)題50 書(shū)面表達(dá)—咨詢(xún)建議類(lèi)

【2022年】

（一）（2022·浙江金華·中考真題）
假如你是Li Hua，你的外國(guó)好友Frank來(lái)信告知他將成為你校七年級(jí)新生。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中的內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己初中階段學(xué)習(xí)、生活等方面的經(jīng)歷，回一封郵件，供他參考。
注意：1. 文中必須包含所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；參考詞匯供選擇使用；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；
3. 詞數(shù)：80~100；
4. 郵件的格式及正文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；正文首句僅供選擇使用。
正文首句： I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)
參考詞匯
Things needed
notebook, dictionary,…
Attitude（態(tài)度）to take
hard-working, active, happy,…
Relationship to develop
respect, get along with,…
Others
…

Dear Frank,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school. Here is something I’d like to share.
To begin with, you need to prepare some notebooks and dictionaries, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard. But whatever happens, stay active, even when you fail.
And respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful.
I hope my advice will work. Looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文要求根據(jù)題干表格中的內(nèi)容給Frank寫(xiě)封郵件，告知他在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)的一些注意事項(xiàng)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)以第二人稱(chēng)為主。第一段引入話題；第二段和第三段根據(jù)表格中的提示詳細(xì)告知他在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)需要注意的事項(xiàng)；第四段表達(dá)自己的希望。寫(xiě)作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語(yǔ)使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。




（二）（2022·四川南充·中考真題）
假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Tracy的學(xué)校即將開(kāi)設(shè)特色選修課程，她正在考慮是否選修漢語(yǔ)，來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示給她寫(xiě)封回信。
要點(diǎn)：
（1）給出你的建議；
（2）談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的重要性；
（3）結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，介紹至少2種學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的方法。
要求：
1.必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；
4.詞數(shù)100左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese for many years. I have much experience to share with you. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文。針對(duì)Tracy是否選修漢語(yǔ)給出建議，談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的重要性并給出學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的方法。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第一和第二人稱(chēng)來(lái)行文，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。作文可分為三段，第一段給出建議，是否應(yīng)該選修漢語(yǔ)以及學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的重要性；第二段結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，介紹學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的方法；第三段收尾。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。



（三）（2022·浙江紹興·中考真題）
假設(shè)你是劉軍，在上周末的鄉(xiāng)村旅游中，你發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些游客的不文明行為。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息給某英文報(bào)VOICE欄目的編輯寫(xiě)一封郵件，反映這些問(wèn)題并提出建議。
Uncivilized behaviors
Suggestions
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flowers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish into bins
● …

注意：
（1）郵件內(nèi)容必須包括上表所有信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
（2）你的建議至少兩條；
（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；
（4）郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：不文明行為uncivilized behavior；編輯editor
Dear editor,I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Liu Jun
【答案】例文

Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked flowers without permission to take photos so that they could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun, which might result in serious accidents.
I think it wrong to enjoy oneself at the cost of others. Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. And they should be careful not to cause trouble to the locals and keep away from danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and more civilized new village will be there for us all to enjoy.
Yours sincerely
Liu Jun
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文主要以題干表格中的內(nèi)容講述一些游客的不文明行為并提出相關(guān)的建議，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主。第一段主要描述自己發(fā)現(xiàn)的游客的一些不文明行為；第二段提出自己的建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語(yǔ)使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。


（四）（2022·浙江溫州·中考真題）
假如你是陳華，你的英國(guó)朋友Tracy在她學(xué)校成立了中國(guó)音樂(lè)社，她在為社團(tuán)成員安排下學(xué)期的活動(dòng)，寫(xiě)郵件征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)她設(shè)計(jì)的活動(dòng)（見(jiàn)下表）回復(fù)郵件，提出你對(duì)這些活動(dòng)的看法和理由，并為她補(bǔ)充至少一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。
Activities for the Chinese music club?Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music.
?Share stories of Chinese singers.

注意：(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；
(2)詞數(shù)：110詞左右；開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tracy,Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Chen Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tracy,
Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.
Listening to traditional and modern Chinese music is a good way for the club members to know more about Chinese music, because they can experience the beauty of Chinese music personally. Sharing stories of Chinese singers can help them better understand the background of the songs, so it’s surely a meaningful activity.
Besides, you can introduce various Chinese instruments to the club members in different ways. There are many traditional musical instruments in China different from those in western countries. They can learn about Chinese culture through these instruments.
Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.
Yours,
Chen Hua
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)Tracy為中國(guó)音樂(lè)社所設(shè)計(jì)的活動(dòng)來(lái)回復(fù)郵件，要提出你對(duì)這些活動(dòng)的看法及理由，并補(bǔ)充一項(xiàng)適合該社團(tuán)的活動(dòng)。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第三人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。郵件正文可采用四段式：第一段用已給出開(kāi)頭引出話題；第二段給出自己對(duì)Tracy設(shè)計(jì)的活動(dòng)的看法及理由；第三段補(bǔ)充合適的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)；第四段用已給出的結(jié)尾收尾。要做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。


（五）（2022·湖北隨州·中考真題）
“雙減”之后，為了引導(dǎo)學(xué)生合理利用周末時(shí)間，最近你校開(kāi)展了“如何讓周末生活更有意義”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你從體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、家務(wù)勞動(dòng)和社會(huì)活動(dòng)三方面，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，提出你的建議和看法。
寫(xiě)作要求：1.短文必須包含以上三方面的內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；（文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。
Nowadays, we students have some free time on weekends, but how can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are my suggestions.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, let’s try to plan free time well and make our weekends more meaningful.
【答案】[例文]
Nowadays, we students have some free time on weekends, but how can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, we can take part in many sports activities. Boys can play basketball, football and so on. Girls can go swimming, skating, or mountain climbing. These sports are good for our health. Secondly, when we are at home on weekends, we can help our parents do housework, such as sweeping the floor, washing dishes. Finally, we can also join in some useful social activities. For example, we can go to the nursing home to help the old do things and clean the park.
In a word, let’s try to plan free time well and make our weekends more meaningful.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，從體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、家務(wù)勞動(dòng)和社會(huì)活動(dòng)三方面寫(xiě)一篇作文關(guān)于如何讓周末生活更有意義。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)行文。人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可用過(guò)渡詞Firstly，Secondly，F(xiàn)inally連接三個(gè)要點(diǎn)。最后確保行文連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。


（六）（2022·江蘇連云港·中考真題）
“雙減”之后，如何讓我們的暑假生活過(guò)得快樂(lè)而有意義？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖片及文字提示，以“Happy Summer Vacation”為題給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄寫(xiě)一篇短文，為同學(xué)們提供一些建議并說(shuō)明理由。

注意：
（1）詞數(shù)90左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（2）文中應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；
（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.
First, we can do some sports. We can go running every morning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can do some housework at home. It’s necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves. What’s more, we need to read some books. Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new world to us. We can also join some clubs, such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club. It can help us develop our hobbies.
I hope you can have a colourful vacation.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Happy Summer Vacation”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段從運(yùn)動(dòng)，做家務(wù)，閱讀和參加俱樂(lè)部四方面給出建議；第三段收尾。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。

（七）（2022·安徽·中考真題）
假定你是李輝。你的英國(guó)朋友Mike想閱讀中國(guó)經(jīng)典名著。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封郵件，向他推薦《西游記》。要點(diǎn)如下：
1.風(fēng)趣幽默，深受喜愛(ài)；
2.團(tuán)隊(duì)合作，歷險(xiǎn)克難；
3.追逐夢(mèng)想，永不言棄。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)80～100；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book, the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally, they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up.
You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇郵件作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，向Mike介紹《西游記》這本書(shū)。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)介紹這本書(shū)的內(nèi)容以及想表達(dá)的哲理；第三段收尾。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。


（八）（2022·湖北武漢·中考真題）
假如你是李欣，你與Bob叔叔及其家人約定了一起去北京旅行。請(qǐng)你給Bob叔叔寫(xiě)一封英文電子郵件，告知你的旅行安排。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 6月30日下午2:00機(jī)場(chǎng)見(jiàn)；
2. 酒店已預(yù)訂好，直接前往；
3. 第二天觀看升旗儀式；
4. 游長(zhǎng)城，吃北京烤鴨；
5. 補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)與旅行有關(guān)的信息或想法。
注意：文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校；詞數(shù)60—80；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：book v. 預(yù)訂?????directly adv. 直接地?????flag-raising ceremony 升旗儀式

【答案】例文：
Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan. We’ll meet at the airport at 2 p.m. on June 30th. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. The next day we’ll watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square early in the morning. It must be amazing! What about the Great Wall? It’s worth visiting and you’ll be impressed. As for dinner, we’ll have the delicious food, Beijing duck. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.
Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.
Li Xin
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及參考詞匯給Bob叔叔回一封郵件，告知Bob叔叔自己對(duì)旅行的安排。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要補(bǔ)全正文內(nèi)容，要以第一人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)多用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。郵件可分為兩段式：第一段介紹具體的計(jì)劃；第二段表達(dá)自己的期待。要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。





（九）（2022·江蘇宿遷·中考真題）
實(shí)施“雙減”政策，推行“陽(yáng)光作業(yè)”，我們同學(xué)可以從繁重的課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)中解放出來(lái)，有更多的時(shí)間培養(yǎng)興趣愛(ài)好，陪伴家人、朋友。學(xué)校請(qǐng)你與學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹們分享如何合理安排課余生活，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示完成一篇題為“Enjoy study, enjoy life”的英語(yǔ)短文。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
校園
1.參加各種活動(dòng)，如：繪畫(huà)、舞蹈等；
2.多做運(yùn)動(dòng)，有益健康；
3.……（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）
家庭
1.暢說(shuō)夢(mèng)想，傾訴煩惱；
2.幫做家務(wù)，學(xué)會(huì)一些生活技能；
3.……（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）

注意事項(xiàng)：
1.詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
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In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【答案】例文
Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
In school, we should actively participate in various activities, such as painting, dancing, football, etc. Through these sports, we can make our bodies healthier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also actively help them.
At home, we should live in peace with our parents. We should talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and learn some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like.
In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文以“Enjoy study, enjoy life”為題介紹如何合理安排課余生活，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主。第一段已給出；第二段介紹在學(xué)校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。寫(xiě)作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語(yǔ)使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。


（十）（2022·四川自貢·中考真題）
假定你是李華。你的英國(guó)朋友Mike來(lái)信說(shuō)他在人際交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的幫助。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 表示理解和安慰；
2. 建議：正確認(rèn)識(shí)自己的不足；處理好和父母的關(guān)系；處理好與同學(xué)、朋友之間的關(guān)系；
3. 表達(dá)祝愿。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)80左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty getting along with others. It’s common to have the feeling. Take it easy. I’ll give you some advice.
???????First, you should get a thorough understanding of yourself: aware of your strength and shortage. Second, you should communicate with your parents. Tell them your feelings so that they will understand you better. Third, you can take part in some activities with your classmates. It will help you find more about your classmates and they can learn more about you too. Then you can become friends.
???????I hope these suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文。針對(duì)Mike交友方面的問(wèn)題提出合理的建議。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)以第二人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)為主。分為三段式：第一段表達(dá)安慰和理解；第二段根據(jù)提示材料提出合理的建議；最后一段表達(dá)祝愿。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。




【2021年】
A
（2021·湖北宜昌市·中考真題）
假如你是國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華，學(xué)校正在為一年一度的藝術(shù)節(jié)招募表演者和志愿服務(wù)者。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己的意愿，給負(fù)責(zé)人Mr. Smith寫(xiě)一封郵件推薦自己，并為學(xué)校藝術(shù)節(jié)提出 1～2 條合理建議。內(nèi)容包括：
● 意愿及理由
● 具體打算
● 合理建議
要求∶
1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名;
2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to tell you what I want to do for the art festival. ________________________________________
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Look forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to tell you what I want to do for the art festival.
First, I want to recommend myself to take part in the activity. I want to be a volunteer. I am kind and outgoing. I often volunteer to join in some activities like talent shows. Second, I want to share my plans with you. I will keep order, and clean the school hall after the activity. Finally, I want to give my suggestions about the activity. At the beginning of the activity, we should decorate the school hall. At the end of the activity, we volunteers and players should take photos together.
Look forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。給藝術(shù)節(jié)的負(fù)責(zé)人Mr. Smith寫(xiě)一封郵件推薦自己。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。分為三段式：第一段引出出題；第二段描述自薦的理由；具體打算以及合理建議；第三段表達(dá)期待對(duì)方的回信。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
B
（2021·四川廣安市·中考真題）
習(xí)近平主席在全國(guó)教育大會(huì)上強(qiáng)調(diào), 中學(xué)生要做德智體美勞全面發(fā)展的社會(huì)主義建設(shè)者和接班人。某中學(xué)正在開(kāi)展“做一名新時(shí)代的合格中學(xué)生”活動(dòng)。假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)的李揚(yáng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，向全校同學(xué)寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)。
要點(diǎn)提示∶
1. 愛(ài)國(guó)，愛(ài)家，誠(chéng)信，友好；
2. 努力學(xué)習(xí)，實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想；
3. 參加體育鍛煉，保持身心健康；
4. 熱愛(ài)大自然，護(hù)環(huán)境，與動(dòng)物和諧相處；
5. 積極參加各種活動(dòng)，如打掃教室，幫助父母做家務(wù)等。
要求∶
1. 字跡工整，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，含全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校、班級(jí)名稱(chēng)；
3. 80 詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4. 請(qǐng)將書(shū)面表達(dá)內(nèi)容寫(xiě)在答題卡上的相應(yīng)位置。
參考詞匯∶ keep one’s promise（守信）, nature（自然）, environment（環(huán)境）, get on well with（和諧相處）, take an active part in（積極參加）
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student. ________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Dear schoolmates.
I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student. First of all, we must love our country and home. We should be honest and keep our promise. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. Secondly, it’s our duty to study hard, and we should try our best to achieve our dreams. Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy. After that, we are supposed to show love to nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them. What’s more, we should get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities, such as tidying up the classroom and helping our parents with housework.
Come on! I believe we can make it.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示圍繞“如何做一名新時(shí)代的合格中學(xué)生”寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱(chēng)。第一段根據(jù)所給的提示要點(diǎn)，告訴學(xué)生們?nèi)绾巫鲆幻细竦闹袑W(xué)生，給出建議，；第二段呼吁同學(xué)們趕快行動(dòng)起來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
C
（2021·四川達(dá)州市·中考真題）
親愛(ài)的同學(xué)：本堂英語(yǔ)測(cè)試完之后，三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就結(jié)束了。請(qǐng)你以“How to learn English”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，把你三年來(lái)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)介紹給下一屆的初一同學(xué)，說(shuō)說(shuō)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的重要性、談?wù)勀闶侨绾螌W(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的、以及你對(duì)他們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的建議。
參考詞語(yǔ)：important, as much as possible, write down
提示問(wèn)題：●Why do you learn English?
● How do you learn English?
● What is your advice to them?
要求：
1、卷面整潔（無(wú)污跡），書(shū)寫(xiě)工整（有美感）。
2、條理清楚，句式規(guī)范。全文詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3、內(nèi)容盡量包括提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)信息。
How to learn English
Dear younger sisters and brothers, as we all know, English is used very widely in the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How to learn English
Dear younger sisters and brothers, as we all know, English is used very widely in the world. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We’d better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【詳解】
1.?題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語(yǔ)和問(wèn)題，寫(xiě)出自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法以及建議等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。
2.?寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要與已給出的開(kāi)頭融合起來(lái)，用第一人稱(chēng)和其他人稱(chēng)相結(jié)合來(lái)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，提出建議可以多用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
D
（2021·山東泰安市·中考真題）
暑假將近，很多人已經(jīng)開(kāi)始計(jì)劃外出旅游了。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖示，以“To Be a Good Traveler”為題，給校報(bào)專(zhuān)欄寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，倡導(dǎo)“綠色旅游”和“公益旅游”，呼吁同學(xué)們做有環(huán)保意識(shí)和社會(huì)責(zé)任感的旅行者。

要求:語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù):80~100；文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名,校名,地名等與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息。
To Be a Good Traveler
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
To Be a Good Traveler
The summer holiday is coming. To make everyone have a good trip, I want to talk about how to be a good traveler. First, you should ride your bike to travel as much as possible. It’s good for the environment. Second, it’s not good to write or draw on any things in the sights. And it’s impolite to spit in public places. Third, please protect the environment. You shouldn’t pick up the flowers or walk on the grass. Fourth, you should take part in volunteer activities. What’s more, don’t waste food. You’d better eat up the food you order.
If you follow the tips above, you can become a good traveler.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作，但寫(xiě)作時(shí)要根據(jù)圖示提示的內(nèi)容，倡導(dǎo)“綠色旅游”和“公益旅游”，內(nèi)容包括綠色出行、愛(ài)護(hù)環(huán)境、公益隨行和適當(dāng)消費(fèi)等。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)用第二人稱(chēng)為主來(lái)介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容全面，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。
E
（2021·重慶中考真題）
新冠疫情提醒人們更加重視健康。越來(lái)越多的人通過(guò)運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)保持健康，但是運(yùn)動(dòng)安全也不容小覷。請(qǐng)你給校報(bào)的英語(yǔ)欄目English Corner投稿，號(hào)召同學(xué)們重視運(yùn)動(dòng)安全。
要求：
1.80-120詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。
參考信息：
1.運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的現(xiàn)狀和重要性；
2.運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的建議（著裝、熱身、規(guī)則……）；
3.…….
參考詞匯：熱身運(yùn)動(dòng) warming-up exercise
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health________________________________________
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【答案】
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. Today I want to talk about sports safety.
Sports safety is of great importance in our daily life. Nowadays, students pay less attention to sports safety. So there are all kinds of accidents that happen at schools. We do exercise because it can improve our physical fitness and health. To keep safe can ensure that we can better achieve the goals of sports.
When we exercise, we should do enough warming-up activities. We should wear comfortable and suitable clothes. We should adopt the right way of rest, pay attention to the reasonable diet and health care.
We should exercise to keep healthy, and we should also pay attention to sports safety.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的相關(guān)問(wèn)題。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為四段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的現(xiàn)狀和重要性；第三段給出運(yùn)動(dòng)安全的建議；第四段收尾。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。
F
（2021·重慶中考真題）
教育部近日印發(fā)通知，要求控制中小學(xué)生的書(shū)面作業(yè)總量，合理布置不同類(lèi)型的作業(yè)。為此，某英文雜志社正在開(kāi)展以 “My Creative English Homework”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇征文，講述自身經(jīng)歷，提出合理建議。
要求：1. 80-120詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。
參考信息：1. 做過(guò)的最有創(chuàng)意的英語(yǔ)作業(yè)（內(nèi)容、收獲……）；
2. 更多有創(chuàng)意的英語(yǔ)作業(yè)建議（形式、理由……）；
3. ……

My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develop.
I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)所給的參考信息以 “My Creative English Homework”為題寫(xiě)一篇征文，從自身經(jīng)歷來(lái)談?wù)勛约旱挠袆?chuàng)意的英語(yǔ)作業(yè)，并提出合理的建議。注意要點(diǎn)齊全。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，本文寫(xiě)自身經(jīng)歷時(shí)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，提建議時(shí)可采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要以第一、三人稱(chēng)交替使用。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，第一段點(diǎn)題；第二段寫(xiě)自身經(jīng)歷，第三段提出建議；第四段總結(jié)。寫(xiě)作中可使用亮點(diǎn)詞匯和句型為文章增添色彩，如：not only...but also...，It固定句型等。注意保證上下文語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，文中無(wú)單詞和語(yǔ)法上的錯(cuò)誤。
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（2021·山東德州市·中考真題）
世界衛(wèi)生組織和聯(lián)合國(guó)兒童基金會(huì)將生活技能（life skills）作為全球青少年兒童發(fā)展的重要主題之一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖中提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，描述作為青少年, 你們應(yīng)提高哪些及如何提高自己的生活技能。除了提示中的內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)你至少再補(bǔ)充一條。
要求：
1. 語(yǔ)言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
3. 80~100詞，文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Life skills are necessary for us. What life skills should we teenagers develop? And how? Here is my opinion.
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All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life.
【答案】
Life skills are necessary for us. What life skills should we teenagers develop? And how? Here is my opinion.
First, we should try our best to keep healthy. It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and take daily exercise. And be happy every day.
Second, working with others is important. Sometimes, we need to work as a team. When we communicate with others, try to understand them.
Third, solve problems in different ways. We are able to find out the problem, find solutions alone or with others and then solve it.
Besides, learn to manage time. We can make a list of things to do every morning. Get up early and never be late for school.
Finally, learn some basic skills, such as cooking. We can ask family for help or search the Internet. Then practice making some dishes.
All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇看圖作文。圍繞青少年應(yīng)提高哪些生活技能來(lái)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第一段引出主題；第二段至第六段描述青少年應(yīng)提高哪些生活技能，以及如何提高這些生活技能；最后一段總結(jié)概括。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
【2020年】
2020年中考真題英語(yǔ)分項(xiàng)匯編
專(zhuān)題21 書(shū)面表達(dá)
考點(diǎn)3 咨詢(xún)建議類(lèi)
（一）【2020?山東省泰安市】
52.新冠肺炎疫情期間，很多年輕人喜歡上了網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐服務(wù)。這種訂餐方式使人們的生活更加方便快捷，豐富多彩，但同時(shí)也存在著不少的弊端。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖及要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐的利與弊，并闡述你的看法和建議。

要求：
（1）語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，可根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）詞數(shù)：80~100（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校姓名、地名等與考生本人相關(guān)的任何信息。
參考詞匯：網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐order food online；減少外出reduce going out；規(guī)避風(fēng)險(xiǎn)avoid risks；塑料包裝plastic packages
With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，新冠肺炎疫情期間，很多年輕人喜歡上了網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐服務(wù)。這種訂餐方式使人們的生活更加方便快捷，豐富多彩，但同時(shí)也存在著不少的弊端。要求根據(jù)所給出思維導(dǎo)圖及要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐的利與弊，并闡述自己的看法和建議。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。
【參考范文】
With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online.
It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. First of all, it is convenient and can save time. Besides, we can get all kinds of delicious food by shopping online. We can reduce going out. The most important thing is that the food online is always cheaper. However, there are some problems with ordering food online. The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. The plastic packages will pollute the environment. In the way, eating habits are not healthy. In addition, it is not good to improve our independence.
In my opinion, ordering food online should only be used when needed. That’s to say, you may buy things you can’t find in local markets. Besides, people should never rely too much on the Internet.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容完整，表述準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言的表述符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。而且還使用了一些較好的句式，為文章增添了不少色彩。
2.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：First of all，all kinds of，not as…as，in local，too?much，on?the?Internet。
句型：It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. 的確，網(wǎng)上訂餐有很多優(yōu)勢(shì)。that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句。
The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. 這食物的質(zhì)量似乎沒(méi)有它所承諾的那么好。not?as…as…不如……，是原級(jí)比較。
（二）【2020?四川省達(dá)州市】

76.
近年來(lái)，全球自然災(zāi)害頻發(fā)，極端天氣頻頻出現(xiàn)，2020年新冠肺炎幾乎在全球爆發(fā)，環(huán)境惡化給全球帶來(lái)的危害正日益凸顯。盡管我國(guó)政府出臺(tái)了一系列環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的政策，采取了很多措施，成效也很顯著，但是，我們還需要付出更多的努力。地球是人類(lèi)共同的家園，時(shí)代的一?；遥?落在個(gè)人頭上就是一座山，沒(méi)有人能獨(dú)善其身。假如你叫李華，作為達(dá)州的學(xué)生，應(yīng)該為環(huán)境保護(hù)做出哪些貢獻(xiàn)呢?請(qǐng)以 “Let’s try our best to protect the environment”為題，向達(dá)州的學(xué)生發(fā)出倡議，呼吁大家從小事做起，盡最大的努力保護(hù)環(huán)境!
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):
（1）了解并讓更多的人知道環(huán)境保護(hù)的重要性；
（2）在日常生活中節(jié)約用水，節(jié)約能源；
（3）為了減少空氣污染，最好乘坐公交車(chē)、騎自行車(chē)或步行上學(xué)；
（4）學(xué)會(huì)垃圾分類(lèi):少用塑料袋。
（5）保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物，不食用野生動(dòng)物。
寫(xiě)作要求:
（1）要點(diǎn)齊全并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
（2）全文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于90詞。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
（3）條理清楚，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)使用正確。
（4）卷面整潔。
參考詞匯；（1） reduce v.減少 （2） sort garbage 垃圾分類(lèi) （3） four categories （四類(lèi)垃圾）: recyclable, harmful ,dry and wet waste （4） No business, no killing.沒(méi)有買(mǎi)賣(mài)就沒(méi)有殺害。
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’ m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do?
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If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇話題作文。要求根據(jù)題目“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”和提示的內(nèi)容完成作文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，緊扣要點(diǎn)，注意句子之間的連接與過(guò)渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。
【參考范文】
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do?
First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection. Second, we should save water and energy in our daily life. Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it is better to go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars. Fourth, there are four categories of waste: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. We should learn how to sort garbage and use few plastic bags. Fifth, we should protect wild animals and do not eat them.
If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；時(shí)態(tài)選用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；將題目要求的要點(diǎn)都很好地融入到文章當(dāng)中，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮部分也很好地展示了對(duì)文章主題的理解，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：all over the world；in our daily life；instead of；better and better等。
句型：First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection.
Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it is better to go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars.
（三）【2020?四川涼山州】
81.2020年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此變得有些艱難。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息，以Live in a Healthier Way為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談一談怎樣以更健康的生活方式度過(guò)這段特殊時(shí)期。
保持健康
遠(yuǎn)離疾病
多鍛煉 多喝水
日常習(xí)慣 保障安全
勤洗手 戴口罩 不聚集
無(wú)論多難
笑對(duì)生活
培養(yǎng)愛(ài)好 關(guān)心他人 分享喜憂
做得好 過(guò)得好 生活更易更快樂(lè)


要求：1. 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順。
2. 短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯。
3. 詞數(shù)80左右。文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
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In 2020, people around the world suffer from a kind of serious illness named COVID-19. We have to face more difficulties in our life because of it. ________________________________________________________________
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Thanks to the special period, we have learned that if we live in a healthier way, we can win.
【寫(xiě)作思路】
閱讀題干可知是結(jié)合2020年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此變得有些艱難的情況。以Live in a Healthier Way為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談一談怎樣以更健康的生活方式度過(guò)這段特殊時(shí)期。這是一篇建議類(lèi)作文，寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括日常生活方式和生活態(tài)度等等。
【參考范文】
Live in a Healthier Way
In 2020, people around the world suffer from a kind of serious illness named COVID-19. We have to face more difficulties in our life because of it.
As we all know, health is importance to us. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life. So how should we spend this special period in a healthier lifestyle? Keep exercising and drink more water can make us healthier. In order to stay away from disease, we should wash our hands frequently, wear masks and do not get together. It is also important to have a good attitude towards life. No matter how difficult life is, we should face it with a smile. We can develop hobbies, share joys and sorrows with friends and family, and learn to care about others. The better you do, the happier your life will be.
Thanks to the special period, we have learned that if we live in a healthier way, we can win.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的例文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確的運(yùn)用的時(shí)態(tài)，例文中運(yùn)用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)為主，主謂一致。例文采取三段式的寫(xiě)作手法，第一段是題干給出的，點(diǎn)明了目前的情況；第二段開(kāi)始強(qiáng)調(diào)健康的重要性，引出話題保持健康的重要性及一些保持健康的方法，從生活方式和生活態(tài)度兩方面出發(fā)；最后一段也是題干給出，表達(dá)了積極的態(tài)度。例文同時(shí)使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：As we all know眾所周知；healthy lifestyle健康生活方式；keep doing sth一直做某事；In order to為了；get together一起；have a good attitude towards對(duì)……有良好的態(tài)度。
句型：（1）Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life. 只有當(dāng)我們身體健康時(shí)，我們才能好好學(xué)習(xí)，享受生活。Only位于句首的倒裝句。
（2）The better you do, the happier your life will be. 你做得越好，你的生活就會(huì)越幸福。The+比較級(jí)…，the+比較級(jí)… 越……,就越……。
（四）【2020?浙江省湖州市】
53.假定你是李雷，請(qǐng)你對(duì)英國(guó)朋友Bruce的郵件進(jìn)行同復(fù)。你可以根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；詞數(shù)：80-100；短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
To
LiLei@mail.com
Subject
Exchange Visit!
Hi there, Li Lei!
I'm really excited about going to be at your school for the exchange visit later this year—hope you are too!
But the thing is, I really don't want to do the wrong thing while I'm there and especially at the school, so I'm wondering if you could tell me a bit about the rules, about phones, clothes, food...
Could you send me a quick email? I'd love to hear from you.
Love,
Bruce

To
Bruce@mail.com
Subject
Re:Exchange Visit!
Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!



Love,
Li Lei
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇書(shū)信作文。要求根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容完成作文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，緊扣要點(diǎn)，注意句子之間的連接與過(guò)渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。
【參考范文】
Hi, Bruce!
Thanks for your email. I'm looking forward to the exchange too!
You really don't have to worry a lot about the school rules here. But there are a few things you need to know.
We usually wear uniforms on school days, but you can wear what is suitable. And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
We are not allowed to use mobile phones at school. Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
Hope this helps. Tell me if there's anything else you want to know.
Love,
Li Lei
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用五段式；時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；將題目要求的要點(diǎn)都很好地融入到文章當(dāng)中，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮部分也很好地展示了對(duì)文章主題的理解，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：look forward to；worry about；need to do sth；kind of；be allowed to do sth等。
句型：And it'll be kind of cold when you are here so you'd better bring some warm clothes.
Besides, if we bring food to school, we must eat it outside during the break.
（五）【2020?重慶市B卷】

62.某中學(xué)對(duì)高一新生進(jìn)行了英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)能力問(wèn)卷調(diào)查, 以下是其中兩個(gè)問(wèn)題的調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)。假如你是該校高一新生, 請(qǐng)結(jié)合下圖數(shù)據(jù)和自身口語(yǔ)情況, 給你的英語(yǔ)老師寫(xiě)一篇短文。

要求∶
1. 80-120詞, 開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。
參考信息:
1. 描述問(wèn)卷調(diào)查結(jié)果（頻率、方法）;
2. 介紹自身口語(yǔ)情況（水平、打算·…）;
3. ….
The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一個(gè)看圖作文，圖中列出了某中學(xué)對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)能力的調(diào)查問(wèn)卷，包括兩個(gè)問(wèn)題，一個(gè)是“你多久練習(xí)說(shuō)一次英語(yǔ)”；另一個(gè)是“你怎樣練習(xí)說(shuō)英語(yǔ)”。學(xué)生們應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖表中的信息，將這兩個(gè)問(wèn)題的調(diào)查結(jié)果表達(dá)出來(lái)。短文中還應(yīng)包括另外一個(gè)內(nèi)容，即介紹自己口語(yǔ)的情況，并對(duì)如何提高口語(yǔ)能力，提出自己的建議。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要選擇適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q(chēng)。
【參考范文】
The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. 45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes. How do you practise speaking English? Most students speak more only in class. Some of the students talk with friends in English. Some students practise speking English in other ways.
In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can. Also, we should often listen to English stories in order to improve our understanding about English. Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others! This is quite important. Over and above, we should learn more English words. Only in this way, can we be good English speaker!
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，敘述條理，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章采取兩段式結(jié)構(gòu)，第一段主要介紹該問(wèn)卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果，包含了圖表中的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)，且各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次；第二段是自己的口語(yǔ)情況，以及對(duì)如何提高口語(yǔ)能力的建議。其次短文語(yǔ)法正確，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，還使用了祈使句、賓語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)流暢，意思連貫。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：talk with；in other ways；in one’s opinion；be afraid of；in this way。
句型：45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes.；In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can.；Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others!；Only in this way, can we be good English speaker!
（六）【2020?重慶市A卷】
62.國(guó)家提出了將勞動(dòng)教育(Labor Education)納入中小學(xué)國(guó)家課程的方案。為此，你校校報(bào)英語(yǔ)欄目English World就開(kāi)展勞動(dòng)教育的意義，以及如何在校園內(nèi)開(kāi)展勞動(dòng)教育，發(fā)起征文。請(qǐng)你以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文參賽。
要求:
1. 80-120詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。
參考信息：
1. 勞動(dòng)教育的意義(學(xué)習(xí)生活技能、養(yǎng)成良好習(xí)慣……)；
2. 校內(nèi)勞動(dòng)教育建議(開(kāi)設(shè)種植課、組織做蛋糕比賽……)；
3. ……
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，國(guó)家提出了將勞動(dòng)教育(Labor Education)納入中小學(xué)國(guó)家課程的方案。為此，學(xué)校校報(bào)英語(yǔ)欄目English World就開(kāi)展勞動(dòng)教育的意義，以及如何在校園內(nèi)開(kāi)展勞動(dòng)教育，發(fā)起征文。要求以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文參賽。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。
【參考范文】
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it's important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future.
As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What's more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.
【解析】
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
1.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一、第三人稱(chēng)。文章緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容完整，表述準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言的表述符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
2.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：a lot，in the future，what's more，set up，such as，look forward to，do well in。
句型：I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. 我期待著在新學(xué)期上這門(mén)課。look forward to doing sth期待做某事，固定搭配。
I believe I will do well in it. 我相信我會(huì)做得很好。I believe后接賓語(yǔ)從句；do well in在……方面做得好。
2020年中考真題英語(yǔ)分項(xiàng)匯編
專(zhuān)題22 書(shū)面表達(dá)
考點(diǎn)3 咨詢(xún)建議類(lèi)
【2020?吉林省】
76.假如你是李華，你所在的學(xué)校即將開(kāi)展以“文明禮貌伴我行爭(zhēng)做文明中學(xué)生”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)完成下面的演講稿。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 列舉生活中至少兩種不文明現(xiàn)象并寫(xiě)出各自產(chǎn)生的影響；
2. 提出至少三條爭(zhēng)做文明中學(xué)生的建議；
3. 發(fā)出爭(zhēng)做文明中學(xué)生的號(hào)召。
寫(xiě)作要求：
1. 詞數(shù)80—100詞，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱(chēng)和姓名；
3. 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【寫(xiě)作思路】
該題目屬于演講稿寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)緊接開(kāi)頭繼續(xù)寫(xiě)作，根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示列舉生活中至少兩種不文明現(xiàn)象并寫(xiě)出各自產(chǎn)生的影響，提出至少三條爭(zhēng)做文明中學(xué)生的建議并發(fā)出爭(zhēng)做文明中學(xué)生的號(hào)召。
【參考范文】
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, some bad behavior can be seen around us. For example, some students throw rubbish everywhere, which makes the environment worse and worse. Some students are always shouting back angrily to their parents gradually the relations between them have become difficult.
How can we behave well? First, I think we should be polite and kind to others. Be ready to help others in need. Second, try to be honest and keep promises. The most important thing is to follow the rules at school or in public.
Let's pull together and take action from now on.
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all Thanks for listening!

例文二：
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, we can hear some students talk loudly on the bus. What's worse, some students smoke in public places. These may make others uncomfortable and smoking is harmful to people's health to be better students.
We should think of others and keep the voice down in public. And we should follow the traffic rules to make sure we are safe. Besides, we should try to be honest students and we shouldn't lie to others.
Let's pull together and take action from now on.
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文主要用第三人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)作。講述爭(zhēng)做文明中學(xué)生的建議分成三點(diǎn)來(lái)寫(xiě)，敘述完整且條理清晰。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：care more about; in fact; for example; throw rubbish; shouting back; behave well; in need; try to; keep promises; follow the rules; pull together; take action; from now on；what's worse; is harmful to; think of; keep the voice down; in public; make sure; lie to。
句型：I think… 賓語(yǔ)從句；which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；as long as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；we should do表示建議的句子。
【2020?東營(yíng)市】
八、書(shū)面表達(dá)
66.在你的成長(zhǎng)歷程中, 收到過(guò)很多建議吧？有的建議幫你解決了生活中的煩惱，有的幫你解決了學(xué)習(xí)上的困難。好的建議能幫助我們解決難題，受益終生。某英語(yǔ)雜志以“The best advice I ever got”為題舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文參加此次活動(dòng)。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 你遇到了什么問(wèn)題？
2. 你收到的最好的解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題的建議是什么？
3. 這個(gè)建議對(duì)你有什么幫助？
要求：
1. 100 詞左右；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。
The best advice I ever got
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【寫(xiě)作思路】
該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示講述自己遇到的問(wèn)題，收到的最好的解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題的建議以及此建議對(duì)自己的幫助。

【參考范文】
The best advice I ever got
Once I lost my wallet, and worried for days. I was afraid to tell my parents about it. I even walked three miles to school each day because I didn't have any money. I just kept thinking, "If I tell my parents, they'll be angry!"
My English teacher, Ms. Li found I was so upset, and talked to me. “It is best not to run away from our problems. We should always try to solve them” she said. She thought that my parents have more experience, and are always there to help me. She advised me to communicate with my parents. In the end, I talked to my parents and they were really understanding. My dad said he sometimes made careless mistakes himself. They got me a new wallet and asked me to be more careful.
From then on, when I’m in trouble, I always remember to find someone I trust to talk to. Talking is the first step to solve problems. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So I’m halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about it.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文主要用第一人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，講述經(jīng)歷主要采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)作。講述自己遇到的問(wèn)題以及收到的最好的解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題的建議敘述完整且條理清晰。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：be afraid to; kept thinking；run away from；communicate with；in the end; from then on; in trouble; cutting it in half; solving a problem。
句型：if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句；and表示并列的句子；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。
【2020?山東日照】
八、寫(xiě)作
71.假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter因要參加高中入學(xué)考試(SSAT)而感到焦慮，來(lái)信向你傾訴。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封郵件，提出建議。
1. 考試態(tài)度(放松心情、無(wú)需焦慮……)；
2. 功課準(zhǔn)備(用心做功課、學(xué)習(xí)方法恰當(dāng)……)；
3. 減壓方式(……)；
4. 表達(dá)祝愿。
要求：
1. 根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，不要逐字翻譯；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
3. 詞數(shù)90左右。
Dear Peter,
I have learnt you are worried about the coming SSAT. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作思路】
該題目是書(shū)信類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)，根據(jù)彼得的來(lái)信，結(jié)合題目要求，向彼得提出建議。
【參考范文】
Dear Peter,
I have learnt you are worried about the coming SSAT. Here are some suggestions that help you.
It’s very important for you to be in a good mood. Don’t be much nervous and you should relax yourself, which can give you enough courage to face the exam. Finsh your schoolwork carefully and listen to your teachers in class carefully. You can make a plan to help you study well and choose the suitable way to study. When you have difficulty leaning your subjects, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help. Besides, you can listen to some music or do some sports to relieve stress.
I hope that you can pass the exam.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，第一段講述得知彼得擔(dān)心即將到來(lái)的考試；第二段提出具體的建議，可以幫助彼得；第三段向彼得表示祝愿；整篇文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰條理；人稱(chēng)主要是第二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：be worried about；have difficulty doing sth.；ask sb. for help；listen to music；do some sports。
句型：that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句；it’s+形容詞+for sb. to do sth.；which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。
【2020?綿陽(yáng)市】
51.假定你是李華，請(qǐng)回復(fù)筆友Mike的郵件，給他至少3條建議并說(shuō)明理由。詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Hi, Li Hua. Is everything going well? Summer holiday is coming. I planned a graduation trip to China with my best friend. But we are not allowed to travel abroad. I am so disappointed. Would you please give me some advice?
All the best,
Mike

To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Hi, Mike.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文是一篇書(shū)信作文，假如你是李華，要求你根據(jù)筆友Mike的郵件，給他寫(xiě)一封回信，至少給出3條建議并說(shuō)明理由。首先要注意郵件的格式，然后認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。

【參考范文】
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Hi, Mike.
I'm glad to hear from you. And congratulations on completing your studies. But I know you are not allowed to travel abroad.I'm so disappointed.
However, there are things you can do at home to prepare for future trips to China. Firstly, you can learn about Chinese places of interest and customs through the Internet or TV. Secondly, I can send you pictures of some famous tourist attractions in China by email, such as the Great Wall in Beijing, the Summer Palace and so on. Thirdly, you can talk with local Chinese to help you better understand China and its culture. Finally, I hope you have a good time in the summer vacation.
I am looking forward to your early trip to China .
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一、第二人稱(chēng)。文章緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容完整，表述準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言的表述符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：hear from，learn about，places of interest，by email，such as，so on，talk with，have a good time，look forward to。
句型：I hope you have a good time in the summer vacation. 我希望你在暑假過(guò)得愉快。I hope后接賓語(yǔ)從句。
I am looking forward to your early trip to China.我期待著你早日來(lái)中國(guó)旅行。look forward to期待……，固定詞組。
【2020?廣東省深圳市】
56． 深圳市正在爭(zhēng)創(chuàng)全國(guó)文明城市、假定你是鵬城中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席，希望同學(xué)們?yōu)?創(chuàng)文'做出自己的貢獻(xiàn)。請(qǐng)你按照所提示的要點(diǎn)，代表學(xué)生會(huì)寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)。
環(huán)境保護(hù)
①垃圾分類(lèi)；②綠色出行
公益慈善
①志愿服務(wù)；②……
人際交往
①誠(chéng)信友善；②……

要求：
1、詞數(shù)80左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；
2、要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3、條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，意義連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
4、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。
參考詞匯：分類(lèi) sort out 志愿者volunteer 貢獻(xiàn) contribution
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.
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All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
【寫(xiě)作思路】
該題目屬于倡議書(shū)寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開(kāi)頭；第一段引出話題；第二段寫(xiě)倡議緣由；第三段具體介紹如何做；第四段進(jìn)行展望；第五段號(hào)召大家行動(dòng)起來(lái)。
寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，緊扣要點(diǎn)，注意句子之間的連接與過(guò)渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。
【參考范文】
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.(引出話題)
It's well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.(倡議緣由)
Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made to protect the city environment. What's more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.【高分句型一】 Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. We'd better avoid talking about others' privacy if we want to show our respect.(具體介紹如何做)
I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.(展望)
All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.【高分句型二】(號(hào)召)
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
【2020?陜西省】
61． 某英文網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展關(guān)于“美麗校園, 健康生活”的征稿活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示內(nèi)容積極投稿, 倡導(dǎo)同學(xué)們“愛(ài)護(hù)校園環(huán)境, 健康快樂(lè)生活”。

keep the school clean

do sports

look after yourself

other


1.參考提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2.語(yǔ)句通順, 意思連貫, 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整;
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.詞數(shù):不少于70詞。(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。)
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容提示講述學(xué)生健康校園生活的一些建議。
【參考范文】
Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here I’ve got some ideas to share with you.
First, it’s important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day, because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, it’s good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, we’d better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well with each other and keep happy, we’ll enjoy a happy and healthy school life.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文主要用第一人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)作。介紹自學(xué)生健康校園生活的一些建議分成四點(diǎn)來(lái)寫(xiě)，敘述完整且條理清晰。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：need to; make it; share with; for example; do some sports；and so on；look after；such as；get on well with。
句型：because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句；it做形式主語(yǔ)的句子；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。
【2020?揚(yáng)州市】
81.為倡導(dǎo)綠色環(huán)保新時(shí)尚，學(xué)校將開(kāi)展以創(chuàng)建“綠色校園”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以“Go green at school”為題, 根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一份英語(yǔ)演講稿, 號(hào)召全體同學(xué)行動(dòng)起來(lái), 共建美好校園。
Purposes
develop a green lifestyle
Actions
save resources
1. save paper: reuse the textbooks; use both sides of the paper
2. save ... : two examples
3. save ... : two examples
reduce pollution
1. take care of the trees and flowers
2. ...
Hopes
...

要求：
（1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
（2）必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
（3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）;
（4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。
Go green at school
Hi, guys,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【寫(xiě)作思路】
要求寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，輪廓已經(jīng)給出，學(xué)生需要將內(nèi)容填充進(jìn)去，合理有據(jù)即可。全文人稱(chēng)應(yīng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【參考范文】
Go green at school
Hi, guys,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways.
On one hand, we should save resources. First, we should save paper. we can reuse the textbooks and use both sides of the paper. Second, we should save water. We can take short showers and reuse water. Third, we are supposed to save electricity. We can turn off the light when we leave from the classroom. Also, we needn't turn on all the lights if enough. On the other hand, we should reduce pollution. We can take care of the trees and flowers, choose the public transport and use the cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should develop a green lifestyle, we can do more exercise and watch less TV. If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow.
That’s all. Thank you!
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文分為三段。第一段直接點(diǎn)題；第二段從兩個(gè)部分說(shuō)明了如何行動(dòng)，分別是節(jié)約資源和減少污染；第三部分禮貌結(jié)尾。內(nèi)容詳實(shí)完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：On one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……；另一方面……；both sides of...……的兩面；take showers洗澡；be supposed to do sth.應(yīng)該做某事；turn off 關(guān)閉；turn on 打開(kāi)；take care of 照料；instead of 代替，而不是；do exercise 鍛煉。
句型：when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。

【2020?湖北省黃石市】
76．我市某英文雜志社正面向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文，請(qǐng)從以下要點(diǎn)中選擇兩到三點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇題為“How to keep healthy”的短文，參加此次活動(dòng)。
要點(diǎn)：
1.運(yùn)動(dòng)有益身心健康。多鍛煉，如跑步、爬山、騎車(chē)等；
2.養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣, 如多喝水和牛奶，多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品和快餐；
3.學(xué)習(xí)有計(jì)劃，早睡早起不熬夜，勞逸結(jié)合；
4.樂(lè)觀、積極、友好，與同學(xué)和睦相處。
要求：
1.可結(jié)合自身事例、適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫
2.80詞左右。（無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
參考詞匯：keep healthy physically and mentally保持身心健康
regularly有規(guī)律地 optimistic樂(lè)觀的
Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life.
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
本題為材料作文，要求就“How to keep healthy”為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文。時(shí)態(tài)用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)或第二人稱(chēng)。

【參考范文】
Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life. What should we do to keep healthy?
First, exercise is good for keeping healthy physically and mentally. We can participate in regular exercise, such as cycling, mountain climbing, running and so on. Second, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. We should drink more water and milk, and eat more vegetables and fruits. And we should avoid eating too much junk food and fast food. Third, we should be optimistic, positive and friendly. We should also get along well with classmates.
If we try to do that, we’ll be a healthier person.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
例文分三段，首段用于引出文章主題，第二段則詳細(xì)敘述了應(yīng)該如何健康生活，第三段做結(jié)尾，倡議人們按照上面的建議去做，去健康生活。例文層次分明，思路清晰，敘述流暢，是一篇合格的例文。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：be good for，participate in，such as，and so on，get along well with。
句型：
（1）Second, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.（it作形式主語(yǔ)）
（2）If we try to do that, we’ll be a healthier person.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句）
（2020 ?湘西土家族苗族自治州）

56.初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示，為學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，給七年級(jí)新生在學(xué)習(xí)生活上提幾點(diǎn)建議，并祝福他們?cè)谖磥?lái)的學(xué)習(xí)生活中過(guò)的愉快。

注意：1. 文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2. 詞數(shù)：80左右；
3. 短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
Welcome to our school! In junior high school, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇給材料作文，自己即將畢業(yè)，給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。結(jié)合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，以第二人稱(chēng)為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫(xiě)的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來(lái)寫(xiě)。
【參考范文】
Welcome to our school! In junior high school, life will be different from before. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you.
Firstly, you'll have more subjects to learn, it is important to find good learning methods. Secondly, in order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Thirdly, you can join some clubs to make the school life more colorful in your spare time. Fourthly, you'd better get on well with your classmates and help each other. In addition, it is a good choice to read more books and make more friends. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示給七年級(jí)新生提了一些關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)和生活的建議，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。第一段點(diǎn)明主旨，第二段給出建議和自己的祝福。例文簡(jiǎn)明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)到位。
高分亮點(diǎn)：
單詞和短語(yǔ)：be different from；good leaning methods；in order to do sth.；be good at；do exercise；in your spare time；get on well with；help each other；in addition；at last；be there for sb.。
句型：祈使句；倒裝句；it固定句型；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；賓語(yǔ)從句。
【2019年】
2019年中考真題英語(yǔ)分項(xiàng)匯編
專(zhuān)題21 書(shū)面表達(dá)
考點(diǎn)3 咨詢(xún)建議類(lèi)
（一）【2019 ?哈爾濱市】
假如你是英語(yǔ)校報(bào)的編輯李平，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以信息，給新入學(xué)的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們寫(xiě)一封信，歡迎他們來(lái)到新學(xué)校，并對(duì)他們?cè)趯W(xué)校如何做合格的中學(xué)生提出建議。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1. 歡迎他們來(lái)到新學(xué)校。
2. 介紹學(xué)校：
(1) 課程有趣；
(2) 有多名外教；
(3) 活動(dòng)豐富。
3. 請(qǐng)對(duì)他們?cè)趯W(xué)校如何做合格的(qualified)中學(xué)生提出具體建議。
寫(xiě)作要求：
1. 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。
2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。
3. 字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。
4. 至少80詞。
Dear new friends,
It’s my pleasure to write you this letter.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇書(shū)信作文，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于學(xué)校生活的。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；提示內(nèi)容就是本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫(xiě)作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象提出自己的建議。不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。
【參考范文】
Dear new friends,
It's my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am good at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like.
Now you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. It's also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class.I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and help each other.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
（二）【2019 ?江蘇省蘇州市】
假定你是蘇華，最近你的澳大利亞筆友Nathan犯了一些錯(cuò)誤，倍感懊惱，寫(xiě)了一封郵件向你訴說(shuō)，為幫助他排解困感，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的郵件內(nèi)容并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷．用英語(yǔ)回信開(kāi)導(dǎo)他。
To：subua@china.com
From：nathan.australia.com
Subjects： Learning from mistakes
Dear Su Hue,
I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me?
Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?
Can you tell me one of your mistakes?
How did you deal with your problem?
What have you learned from the mistake?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Nathan
注意：
l. 詞數(shù)90左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞量；
2. 回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；
3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. _____________________________________________
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I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes
Su Hua
【寫(xiě)作思路】
書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。
【參考范文】
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes.
Su Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和It's true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。
（三）【2019 ?浙江省衢州市】
假設(shè)你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非筆友Seb發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Seb回一封郵件。

要求：1. 考生需按電子郵件格式完成整封郵件；
2. 郵件中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息；
3. 詞數(shù)：90~100。

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【寫(xiě)作思路】
本題是書(shū)信作文。假設(shè)你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非筆友Seb發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Seb回一封郵件。注意電子郵件格式。時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)Seb的電子郵件，列出提綱。表達(dá)要條理清楚，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。
【參考范文】
From: LiMing
To: Seb
Subject: Learning Chinese in Quzhou
Hi, Seb,
I’m so glad that you’ll come to live in my city.
To improve Your Chinese quickly. You can go and take a course in a Chinese Language School. It can always help you to speak better and learn more.
Then, try to experience life here in Quzhou. Of course. I’ll take you around Quzhou. We can visit the Confucius Temple. It’s the best way to understand our culture. And you can practice speaking Chinese at the same time. It’s very helpful.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
書(shū)面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。寫(xiě)作六步法：1.審題：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)。2.抓住要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。3.擴(kuò)充句子：通過(guò)增加狀語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)，連詞，使句子意思飽滿(mǎn)充實(shí)。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.改正錯(cuò)誤：拼寫(xiě)是否錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?.謄寫(xiě)作文：注意書(shū)寫(xiě)工整美觀整潔。
（四）【2019 ?山東省濟(jì)寧市】
假如你是Wang Hong, 你的美國(guó)筆友Kevin下學(xué)期將作為名交換生來(lái)你們學(xué)校。下面是他發(fā)給你的一封e-mail.請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給予恰當(dāng)?shù)幕貜?fù)。
注意:
1.文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息.
2.100詞左右(開(kāi)頭,結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù))。
Dear Wang Hong,
How are you doing?
You might not believe it, but I’m going to your school as one of five exchange students next term. And I’m so excited! However, I’m worried about communicating with the teachers and students. As you know, I can speak only a little Chinese. What should I do? Besides, I want to learn to play pin-pong. Can you find a good player to help me? If you can, tell me something about him or her.
Looking forward to your reply
Best wishes!
Yours,
Kevin
參考詞語(yǔ)talk in English, help sb. with, be friendly and helpful, practice... with, play well, win a good prize.
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料注意不同的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear Kevin
I’m glad to hear from you. You said you were worried about communicating with the teachers and students because you could speak only a little Chinese. You don’t be worried about it. You can talk with them in English. They can also help you with Chinese. They are very friendly and helpful. You also said you wanted to learn to play ping-pong. You can practice it with Li Lei. He is my best friend. He plays it very well. He won a good prize last week. He is ready to do others. With his help, you will be good at it.
Welcome to our school.
Best wishes.
Yours
Wang Hong
（五）【2019 ?廣安市】
當(dāng)前，許多學(xué)生在課外沉溺于智能手機(jī)(smart phones)。針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，學(xué)校將組織開(kāi)展一次“拒絕手機(jī)誘惑，健康學(xué)習(xí)生活”的演講活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容
1.花大量時(shí)間玩游戲，上課睡覺(jué)，不按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。
2.傷害眼睛，不利健康。
建議
1.遠(yuǎn)離智能手機(jī)，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)。
2.多花時(shí)間與家人、朋友交流。
3.積極參加各種活動(dòng)，如打籃球、唱歌……
要求：1. 字跡工整，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，包含全部要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校、班級(jí)名稱(chēng)；
3. 80詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4. 請(qǐng)將書(shū)面表達(dá)內(nèi)容寫(xiě)在答題卡上相應(yīng)的位置。
參考詞匯：eyesight(視力)；disadvantage(不利條件)；keep away from(遠(yuǎn)離)；take an active part in(積極參加)
Girls and boys,
With the develop of the Internet, many students have smart phones. _________________________________
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That's all Thank you!
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文是一篇給材料作文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。
【參考范文】
Girls and boys,
With the development of the Internet, many students have smart phones. The students often spend so much time in playing games with them that they feel very tired. Someone doesn’t finish their homework on time. Someone even sleeps in class. Besides, smart phones do harm to our health, some students’ eyesight is becoming poorer and poorer.
To avoid these disadvantages, I think we should make some changes.
First, we should keep away from smart phones and work hard.
Second, stay with our family or friends if we are free and talk with them about our daily life, feelings and so on.
Third, take an active part in all kinds of activities, such as playing basketball, singing songs.
That’s all. Thank you!
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。
（六）【2019 ?湖南長(zhǎng)沙】
假如你是李華，你們班輸了上周的籃球賽。Henry認(rèn)為是他未能投進(jìn)最后一球所造成的，有的隊(duì)友也因此而責(zé)怪他。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封英文郵件安慰他，談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法，并就如何取得隊(duì)友的理解提出建議。
要求：
（1）80詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。
Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. ____________________
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇給材料的書(shū)信作文。假如你是李華，就輸球事件安慰Henry，談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法，并就如何取得隊(duì)友的理解提出建議。人稱(chēng)為第二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，但不要逐句翻譯，補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)并提出建議。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，多種句式交叉使用來(lái)豐富文章的文采。
【參考范文】
Dear Henry,
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.
You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.
As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
高分句型一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的是你應(yīng)該從比賽中吸取教訓(xùn)，也要從錯(cuò)誤中吸取教訓(xùn)。What matters is that重要的是，that引導(dǎo)的是表語(yǔ)從句。as well as常用來(lái)連接兩個(gè)并列的成分，作“也，還”講。
高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可以保證你會(huì)不遺余力地提高你的技能。that引導(dǎo)的是賓語(yǔ)從句，spare no efforts to do sth.不遺余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one. 如果大家齊心協(xié)力，你們一定會(huì)贏得下一場(chǎng)比賽。此句是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；be sure to do sth.必定做某事。
（七）【2019 ?江蘇省南京市】
假如你是李華，在網(wǎng)上看到英國(guó)B公司為正在開(kāi)發(fā)的一款提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力的應(yīng)用軟件（app）征集網(wǎng)友建議．請(qǐng)根據(jù)網(wǎng)上的征集信息，用英語(yǔ)給該公司寫(xiě)一封電子郵件．
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing． The app is to help learners explore ideas， organize them and write them down． Your ideas are needed！
Here' s what to do：
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative！
Please let us know：
● What's the name of the app？
● What problem does the app solve？
● What does the app do？
Contact us at appdesign@Britech com
注意:
1．內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開(kāi)頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
3．文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for designing an app for English writing．_______________________________________________
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
這是一篇根據(jù)英國(guó)Britech公司為正在開(kāi)發(fā)的一款提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力的應(yīng)用軟件（app）征集網(wǎng)友建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)網(wǎng)上的征集信息，用英語(yǔ)給該公司寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for doing an APP for English writing． I'd like to share my ideas here． Could its name be "right made easy"？【APP的名字】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．【高分句型一】We don't know how to organize ideas，use proper words，and so on． I hope it can solve these problems．【APP要解決的問(wèn)題】
Here is my advice on what the APP does． First， it should provide some reading materials． The more we read， the better we write． Second． The APP should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills． Third， there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions．【APP能做什么】
I hope my advice is worth taking．【高分句型二】
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
【高分句型一】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．我們中的許多人寫(xiě)作困難．
have difficulty doing干某事有困難．
【高分句型二】
I hope my advice is worth taking． 我希望我的建議值得采納．
be worth doing 值得干某事．
（八）【2019 ?湖南省衡陽(yáng)市】
根據(jù)一項(xiàng)新的調(diào)查，學(xué)生安全已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)大的問(wèn)題。假設(shè)你是一名老師，對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行以“自我保護(hù)”為主題的消防安全教育，請(qǐng)以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”為題，提出你的建議。
要求：
1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名。
2. 書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，語(yǔ)句通順，連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80.
參考詞匯： cover v. 遮蓋 take the lift 乘坐電梯 exit n. 出口 towel n. 毛巾shut off 切斷
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
根據(jù)一項(xiàng)新的調(diào)查，學(xué)生安全已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)大的問(wèn)題。假設(shè)你是一名老師，對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行以“自我保護(hù)”為主題的消防安全教育，請(qǐng)以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”為題，提出你的建議。考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【參考范文】
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
According to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. You should know some ways to protect yourself .It will help to keep you safe in the fire. First, you should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel. You mustn't take the lift or jump off a window, you should find the exit. The most important thing is to keep calm. If you can't go in the house, the safest place is close to water, like washroom .If the fire is serious, you should call 119 for help. These may help us.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如First, You should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。
2019年中考真題英語(yǔ)分項(xiàng)匯編
專(zhuān)題21 書(shū)面表達(dá)
考點(diǎn)3 咨詢(xún)建議類(lèi)
（一）【2019 ?四川省成都市】
假如你叫Ann，你的中國(guó)朋友小華發(fā)來(lái)email請(qǐng)教如何利用詞典學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)參考截圖及注釋?zhuān)鶕?jù)提示回一封email。要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 根據(jù)示例，概括介紹詞條構(gòu)成；
2. 如何用詞典解決詞匯學(xué)習(xí)中的問(wèn)題（至少兩點(diǎn)）；
3. 介紹詞典對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的好處（至少兩點(diǎn)）。

(taken from an English- Chinese dictionary
注意：l. 截圖內(nèi)容僅供參考，可以引用，不能照抄；
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校和姓名；
3. 詞數(shù)：100左右。
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【參考范文】
Dear Xiaohua,
Glad to receive your letter. You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English. Here are some of my thoughts.
Words in a dictionary are called entries. Each entry has five sections, such as pronunciation, part of speech, definition, usage and word group. Of course, sometimes the same word has different parts of speech and definitions.
Using dictionaries can solve problems in vocabulary learning. When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning. A dictionary is of great benefit to English learning. First of all, it can help us understand the meaning of words accurately. Secondly, it can enrich our knowledge and exercise our thinking. Finally, it can help us learn to express our ideas.
I hope it's helpful to you.
Yours,
Ann
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如how to use a dictionary, such as, to learn English, part of speech, word family, of course, different parts of, with the help of a dictionary, not only... but also, find out, first of all, help sb. do, learn to do等。而You asked me how to use a dictionary to learn English./ When we meet a new word, with the help of a dictionary, we can not only find out its pronunciation, but also know its meaning./ I hope it's helpful to you等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。
（二）【2019 ?安徽省】
假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Mike最近因視力減退而感到不安，請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)封電子郵件，談?wù)勀阍诒Ｗo(hù)視力方面的一些做法。要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 經(jīng)常做戶(hù)外活動(dòng)；
2. 很少用電子產(chǎn)品；
3. 堅(jiān)持做眼保健操；
4. ……
注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；
4.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ____________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作思路】
這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份，給自己的英國(guó)筆友Mike寫(xiě)信，給他介紹一下你在保護(hù)視力方面的做法。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在是，第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：首先講述題目中Mike的視力減退問(wèn)題，并引出文章的主題；然后具體介紹自己在保護(hù)視力方面的做法，這一部分是文章的主體可以按照題目中所列的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹，并對(duì)第四條進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：短文按內(nèi)容表達(dá)的需要，分成三段，每一段一個(gè)主題；內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括題目中的所有要點(diǎn)，不能遺漏；課根據(jù)表達(dá)需要，增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)、豐富。其次應(yīng)注意文章的表達(dá)，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，句式應(yīng)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞?，使行文連貫，表達(dá)流暢。
【參考范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，對(duì)Mike介紹了自己在保護(hù)視力方面的一些做法。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。短文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，共分成三段：第一段將題目中的寫(xiě)作背景進(jìn)行了介紹，并引出了文章的話題；第二段具體介紹了自己的做法，這一段是文章的中心，所占篇幅最大。作者按照題目的提示進(jìn)行表述，并對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行了拓展；第三段提出了自己的希望。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。句式結(jié)構(gòu)比較復(fù)雜，使用了很多較高級(jí)的表達(dá)方式，包括動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等。如I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.、In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. 等。
（三）【2019 ?湖南湘西州】
湘西自治州正在進(jìn)行“美麗湘西”建設(shè)，我們要積極參與“美麗湘西”建設(shè)活動(dòng)，從小事做起，讓我們家鄉(xiāng)變得更美。作為學(xué)生，請(qǐng)以“Start out small”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)。
要點(diǎn)提示：1. 多種植樹(shù)木和花草，不亂砍伐樹(shù)木。
2. 購(gòu)物時(shí)重復(fù)使用袋子。
3. 不亂扔垃圾，保持河流等干凈。
4. 遵守公共秩序，做文明學(xué)生。
要求：1. 80詞以上。文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 文章須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文意思通順、語(yǔ)氣連貫、過(guò)渡自然。不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
參考詞匯：protect the environment；reuse bags；plant；cut down；throw；wait in line；be wie；oboeysart outsnal
Start out small
Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown?
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【參考范文】
Hello，everyone．We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable．What can we do for our hometown？（點(diǎn)題）In order to make our hometown more beautiful，as students，I think we should start from small things．【高分句型一】（從小事做起）First of all，we should know the importance of protecting the environment．We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly．Second，we had better reuse the bag when shopping．【高分句型二】We can't throw rubbish about，and we should keep the rivers clean and so on．In addition，we must obey public rules and be civilized students．When we got on the bus，we should wait in line．（具體做法）
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書(shū)面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。
【高分句型一】
In order to make our hometown more beautiful， as students， I think we should start from small things．為了使我們的家鄉(xiāng)更美麗，作為學(xué)生，我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該從小事開(kāi)始。
in order to do sth為了做某事；I think+賓語(yǔ)從句。
【高分句型二】
Second， we had better reuse the bag when shopping．第二，我們最好重用當(dāng)購(gòu)物袋。
had better do sth 最好做某事。
（四）【2019 ?湖南省益陽(yáng)市】
最近，你美國(guó)的筆友Tony在與同學(xué)的交往中遇到了煩惱，他寫(xiě)郵件向你尋求幫助。請(qǐng)你以李華的身份給他寫(xiě)一封郵件——提出你的一些建議。
建議內(nèi)容包括：遇到問(wèn)題多傾訴，多與他人分享情緒，尊重他人，與人為善，誠(chéng)實(shí)守信……
要求：l．詞數(shù)60-80，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息。
參考詞匯：share solve respect friendly be honest to
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates: I'm glad to help you. ________________________
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I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【寫(xiě)作思路】
本文的寫(xiě)作要求是一封電子郵件。首先，對(duì)于朋友在交友過(guò)程中遇到難題表示歉意。用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞提建議，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。然后，分步驟給出另外四個(gè)建議處理和同學(xué)們的關(guān)系。最后希望一切會(huì)好起來(lái)。
【參考范文】
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I'm glad to help you. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them. They will help you solve the problem.
Second, when you get along with your friends, you are supposed to respect them.
Third, you should be friendly to people around you. You can help each other.
Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends.
I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文對(duì)于在和同學(xué)們交往中遇到的問(wèn)題提出建議，分四步給出合理建議，最后指出對(duì)朋友要誠(chéng)實(shí)，并希望能夠交到更多朋友。用到的短語(yǔ)有：share sth. with sb.；get along with和……相處；be supposed to do應(yīng)該做某事和Last but not least等，使得文章豐富多彩；長(zhǎng)短句搭配合理。
（五）【2019 ?貴州省黔南州】
每年的6月6日是我國(guó)的"愛(ài)眼日"，可見(jiàn)保護(hù)中小學(xué)生的視力非常重要，為此，學(xué)校將在英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)期間舉行一場(chǎng)"愛(ài)眼日"英語(yǔ)演講比賽．請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)視力重要性的認(rèn)識(shí)和建議．
內(nèi)容：1．保護(hù)視力的重要性（請(qǐng)寫(xiě)1點(diǎn)）
2．對(duì)保護(hù)視力的建議：
（1）閱讀時(shí)注意用眼衛(wèi)生；
（2）少用電子產(chǎn)品；
（3）?？淳G色植物；
（4）做眼保健操；
（5）多做戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)．
要求：1．結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名，學(xué)校名等信息；
3．詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：Sight Day "愛(ài)眼日"； electronic products 電子產(chǎn)品； eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country's Sight Day _____________________________________________________________
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Thank you!
【參考范文】
Dear friends,
June 6 is our country's Sight Day. As we know, "Eyes are the windows of the soul". Everyone understands the importance of the eyes.（保護(hù)視力的重要性）But now more and more students are getting near-sighted. So how can we protect our eyes? Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes.
First, we should be cautious on the health of using eyes. We should not keep your eyes working for a long time. While reading, we should keep the book about a foot away from us. After reading for an hour or two, we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance. Second, using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes.【高分句型一】 Besides, we should see green plants as often as possible. Finally, remember to do eye-protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight.【高分句型二】 （對(duì)保護(hù)視力的幾條建議）
（六）【2019 ?吉林省】
假如你是李華，想?yún)⒓覥hina Daily 舉辦的以"夢(mèng)想職業(yè)體驗(yàn)"為主題的2019年夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給主辦人Mr. Smith寫(xiě)一封介紹個(gè)人情況的申請(qǐng)郵件。
內(nèi)容包括：1. 個(gè)人信息與興趣愛(ài)好；
2. 夢(mèng)想職業(yè)與個(gè)人計(jì)劃。
寫(xiě)作要求：1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱(chēng)與姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. _____________________________________________________
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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)明題意）
My name is Li Hua. I like reading and writing. I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school （高分句型一）．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp ，I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience．If I have this kind of oppotunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance（高分句型二）．After work，I will spend more time making a summary．（從自己的個(gè)人信息和興趣愛(ài)好出發(fā)進(jìn)行介紹自己）
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．（結(jié)尾給出期望）
Best wishes!
2019年中考真題英語(yǔ)分項(xiàng)匯編
專(zhuān)題21 書(shū)面表達(dá)
考點(diǎn)3 咨詢(xún)建議類(lèi)
（一）【2019 ?貴陽(yáng)市】
假定你是李華，請(qǐng)你以初三畢業(yè)生的身份給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。要求如下：
1. 重點(diǎn)分享你在處理學(xué)習(xí)困難方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)以及你下一步學(xué)習(xí)或生活的打算；
2. 郵件不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)；
3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息。
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【寫(xiě)作思路】
考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【參考范文】
I'm going to graduate from junior high school. Looking back on three years of junior high school life, there are many gains and difficulties. I have many difficulties in learning English. At the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. I am about to start high school life, I will continue to work hard, I hope you bravely face junior high school life, have a happy junior high school life.
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ),如:So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.，這些文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
（二）【2019 ?山東省煙臺(tái)市】
假設(shè)你某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯Rina, 收到Li Wei 同學(xué)的來(lái)信，訴說(shuō)了因?yàn)榉逝殖Ｔ獾酵瑢W(xué)嘲笑的苦惱，并向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給Li Wei 回信。

要求：1. 須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和校名。
參考詞匯：laugh at; care about; high- fat food; the more... , the healthier...
Dear Li Wei,
I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. _______________________________________________
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Yours,
Rina
【寫(xiě)作思路】
假設(shè)你某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯Rina, 收到Li Wei 同學(xué)的來(lái)信，訴說(shuō)了因?yàn)榉逝殖Ｔ獾酵瑢W(xué)嘲笑的苦惱，并向你尋求建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給Li Wei 回信。本題給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear Li Wei,
I have received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you.
Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble.
Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.
Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You'd better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Rina
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇很好的文章，文中用到了一些好的句型：Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you.；Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.這些給文章增色不少。
（三）【2019 ?廣西省貴港市】
48．（10分）假如你是林濤，你的筆友Sam在學(xué)校和同學(xué)發(fā)生了一些矛盾．現(xiàn)在他來(lái)信，請(qǐng)你給他一些關(guān)于怎樣與他人相處和自我保護(hù)的建議．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格提示，用英文給他寫(xiě)一封回信
學(xué)會(huì)相處
學(xué)會(huì)傾聽(tīng)；
互相幫助；
不在網(wǎng)上交友；
……
自我保護(hù)
學(xué)會(huì)和同學(xué)溝通；及時(shí)求助老師和父母
對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)、生活的影響
……（不少于2點(diǎn)）
寫(xiě)作要求：1．短文內(nèi)容必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
2．語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名；
4. 詞數(shù)80左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯： respect尊重
Dear Sam，
How is it going？ I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves．
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Best wishes!
Yours，
Lin Tao
【寫(xiě)作思路】

【參考范文】
Dear Sam，
How's it going？ I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)明題意）
First，We should study how to listen to others．We could be quiet when others are talking with you．Just listen carefully，then you can describe your opinions．Second，We also should be ready to help each other（高分句型一）．Helping others will improve the relationships with your friends．Third，Please don't make friends via the Internet．It's not truthful and you can't judge the truth by yourself．Therefore，we can protect ourselves via communicating with classmates．Meanwhile，We can ask teachers and parents for help．（從如何與人相處和保護(hù)自己方面提出建議）
I understand why you are worried，since the friendship also plays an important role in studying， even sometimes in your daily life．Please take above advice，Hope you will deal with it soon．（高分句型二）（對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)，生活的影響以及給出期待）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Lin Tao
（四）【2019 ?廣西河池市】
"人生沒(méi)有彩排，生命沒(méi)有重來(lái)"，你平安、健康、快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)是父母最大的心愿．今年6月下旬學(xué)校將舉辦一場(chǎng)以" Keep away from the danger!"為主題的英文演講比賽．假如你是王雷同學(xué)，大家推選你參加這次比賽．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖提示，寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿．
寫(xiě)作提示：

寫(xiě)作要求：1．不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名；
2．所有的提示詞都須用上，包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；
3．字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清楚；
4．詞數(shù)100詞左右。（演講稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）
Hello! Everyone．I'm Wang Lei．The danger is around us． So we must learn how to keep away from the danger． First， we mustn't go swimming without our parents' or teachers' permission. ______________________
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In a word， we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That's all． Thank you for listening!
【參考范文】
Keep away from the danger！
Hello! Everyone．I'm Wang Lei．The danger is around us．So we must learn how to keep away from the danger． First， we mustn't go swimming without our parents' or teachers' permission．When we swim in the water，we must wear life jackets．（游泳安全） Second， it's important for us to follow the traffic rules．【高分句型一】We mustn't go across the street when the traffic light is red．While crossing the street， never use mobile phones．We must walk on the pavement．（交通安全）Third，we have to be careful when we make friends， especially online．We mustn't meet net friends alone．（交友安全）Fourth，we are supposed to eat healthily and safely． Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to out health．【高分句型二】Remember to wash hands before meals．（飲食安全）What's more，we have to follow the school rules．Don't run in the hallways，or we'll be hurt easily．We should get on well with our classmates．Don't fight with them．If we are threatened， we should call the police for help in time．（校園安全）Last but not least，we must say no to the drugs．Never try them．When you see someone sell drugs，remember to call 110．（遠(yuǎn)離毒品）
In a word， we must try our best to keep away from the danger!
That's all． Thank you for listening!
（五）【2019 ?貴州省黔南州】
每年的6月6日是我國(guó)的"愛(ài)眼日"，可見(jiàn)保護(hù)中小學(xué)生的視力非常重要，為此，學(xué)校將在英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)期間舉行一場(chǎng)"愛(ài)眼日"英語(yǔ)演講比賽．請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)視力重要性的認(rèn)識(shí)和建議．
內(nèi)容：1．保護(hù)視力的重要性（請(qǐng)寫(xiě)1點(diǎn)）
2．對(duì)保護(hù)視力的建議：
（1）閱讀時(shí)注意用眼衛(wèi)生；
（2）少用電子產(chǎn)品；
（3）常看綠色植物；
（4）做眼保健操；
（5）多做戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)．
要求：1．結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名，學(xué)校名等信息；
3．詞數(shù)80左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
Sight Day"愛(ài)眼日"； electronic products電子產(chǎn)品； eye﹣protecting exercises眼保健操
Dear friends．
June 6 is our country's Sight Day _____________________________________________________________
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Thank you！
【參考范文】
Dear friends．
June 6 is our country's Sight Day．As we know，"Eyes are the windows of the soul"． Everyone understands the importance of the eyes．（保護(hù)視力的重要性）But now more and more students are getting near﹣sighted．So how can we protect our eyes ？Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes．
First，we should be cautious on the health of using eyes．We should not keep your eyes working for a long time． While reading ，we should keep the book about a foot away from us．After reading for an hour or two，we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance．Second，using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes．【高分句型一】 Besides，we should see green plants as often as possible．Finally， remember to do eye﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports， which will help us keep good eyesight．【高分句型二】 （對(duì)保護(hù)視力的幾條建議）
（六）【2019 ?海南省】
據(jù)悉，我國(guó)青少年的近視率居全球第一，70%的學(xué)生有視力方面的問(wèn)題．為引起廣大青少年的重視，某英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊正在開(kāi)展以" Saving Our Eyesight"為題的征文活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下
提示寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護(hù)視力的合理建議．

要求：1．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．
2．所有提示須全部用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名．
4. 80詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Saving Our Eyesight
As the saying goes， "Eyes are the window to the soul（心靈 ） "However， 70% of us have poor eyesight． What has caused this problem？ _______________________________________________________
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In a word， lets take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future．
【參考范文】
Saving Our Eyesight
As the saying goes， "Eyes are the window to the soul（心靈 ） "However， 70% of us have poor eyesight． What has caused this problem？ The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes．For example， many of us read in wrong positions，such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the book．Besides，taking less exercise can also cause poor eyesight． What's more， some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV． It's bad for our eyes． So how can we protect our eyes ？Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes．（造成青少年近視的原因）
First，we should be cautious on the health of using eyes．We should not keep our eyes working for a long time． While reading ，we should keep the book about a foot away from us．After reading for an hour or two，we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance．Second，using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes．【高分句型一】 Besides，we should see green plants as often as possible．Finally， remember to do eye﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports， which will help us keep good eyesight．【高分句型二】 （對(duì)保護(hù)視力的幾條建議）
In a word， let's take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future．
（七）【2019 ?湖南省邵陽(yáng)市】
每年三月的最后一個(gè)星期一是"全國(guó)中小學(xué)生安全教育日"．為了提高同學(xué)們的安全意識(shí)，學(xué)校決定在畢業(yè)前再舉行一次以安全教育為主題的班會(huì)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，就日常生活中需要注意的安全寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿．
提示：1．上學(xué)、放學(xué)途中的安全；
2．校園里的安全；
3．家里的安全．
要求：1． 80詞左右，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．語(yǔ)法正確，語(yǔ)句通順、流暢；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名．
Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should _____________________________________
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Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．
Thank you!
【參考范文】
Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should pay more attention to safety．To be safe，we must follow rules．
When we go to school or go home from school，we must follow the traffic rules．For example，we must walk on walk-side．When we cross zebra﹣crossing，stop and look right and left，then go across the road fast．【高分句型一】We mustn't run through red lights when crossing the road．Don't play football on the road．（上學(xué)、放學(xué)途中的安全）
At school，don't push when we go upstairs or downstairs，or we may hurt ourselves or others．Never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates．We should get on well with our classmates．Don't fight with them，or we'll be hurt．（上學(xué)、放學(xué)途中的安全）
At home，we should be careful when we use electricity．If there is a fire or a thief，we should call the police for help in time．（家里的安全．）Also，food satety is important．Never eat the food that goes bad．【高分句型二】
Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．
Thank you!
（八）【2019 ?青海省】
假如你是小明，你的筆友Sam給你發(fā)了電子郵件，請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容進(jìn)行回復(fù)．
要求：1．邏輯清晰，內(nèi)容完整，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．
2．詞數(shù)80左右．郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
chairman：主席 unique：特別的
Dear Xiao Ming
How are you doing？
I am writing to ask you something about the Chinese Culture Week that we are going to hold in September． As the chairman of the Chinese Learning Club at school， I am thinking about how we can organize a unique and amazing activity． Therefore， could you please give me some good suggestions on what theme might be better and what exactly we are going to do？Thanks．
Sam
Dear Sam，
It's a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school．_______________________________________

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Yours，
Xiao Ming
【參考范文】
Dear Sam，
It's a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school．It's a good opportunity for you to learn more about culture．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）First ，a paper﹣cutting exhibition is a good choice for you． As a traditional Chinese art， paper﹣cutting includes different themes like plants， animals， stories and so on． （剪紙展覽）Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people's interest， which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（書(shū)法比賽） What's more， lectures about Chinese history， poems， traditional festivals，or even food， are surely welcome．（歷史，詩(shī)歌，傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，食物等講座） And a Chinese painting show is always attractive．（中國(guó)畫(huà)展覽）I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you．【高分句型二】
Yours，
Xiao Ming
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
高分句型一：
Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people's interest， which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture．
第二，舉辦中國(guó)書(shū)法比賽也能激發(fā)人們的興趣，這對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)文化很有幫助．a(chǎn)rouse one's interest激發(fā)某人的興趣，which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture本句使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句
高分句型二：
I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you．
我希望我的建議對(duì)你有很大幫助．be of great help 有很大幫助
（九）【2019 ?山東省煙臺(tái)市】
假設(shè)你是某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯Rina，收到Li Wei同學(xué)的來(lái)信，訴說(shuō)了因?yàn)榉逝殖Ｔ獾酵瑢W(xué)嘲笑的苦惱，并向你尋求建議．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給Li Wei回信．

要求：1．須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；
2．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)入真實(shí)姓名和校名．
參考詞匯：laugh at；care about；high﹣fat food；the more…，the healthier…
Dear Li Wei，
I've received your letter and I can understand you．______________________________________________
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Yours,
Rina
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Dear Li Wei，
I've received your letter and I can understand you．After reading your letter，I can understand you，But don't worry，you're not alone，I am always on your side，Now，I want to share my experience with you． Here is some advice I want to give you．（引起下文）
To keep fit， it is necessary for you to have a healthy diet． You'd better have different foods， especially fruits and vegetables， and drink milk as often as possible．【高分句型一】 It's not a good idea to take weight﹣loss pills for a slim and attractive figure． It is not worth it．（均衡飲食） Having enough sleep together with regular exercise such as walking and riding is also beneficial to your health． Besides， you should take an active part in school sports．（適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)） In my opinion， it is not a good habit to spend too much time reading， watching TV or chatting on﹣line． 【高分句型二】 Always be active and keep optimistic and don't be discouraged （disappointed/frustrated/upset） whenever you meet with trouble．（保持自信）
If you follow the suggestions above， in no time you will look and feel much better．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Rina
（十）【2019 ?四川省達(dá)州市】
隨著我們不斷成長(zhǎng)，生活不僅給予了我們?cè)S多快樂(lè)時(shí)光，同時(shí)伴隨不少煩惱．仔細(xì)閱讀下面小華寫(xiě)給英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的信，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際，運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，請(qǐng)你以編輯的名義，就他的頻惱在回信中給出好的建議．
Dear sir，
I'm Xiaohua，15，a middle school student． I have some problems to tell you， my parents always say to me， "Study， study， do homework， do your homework． " when I come back． However，they don' t know how hard I study at school from 7：00 am to 8：30 p．m． every day．
And last Sunday， my 3﹣year﹣old brother troubled me again and again while I was studying for the coming exam． I really wanted to get better grades， so I couldn't stand him any more， I shouted at him in anger， thus he cried loudly． Then my mother came in， she blamed me without asking "why"．
My eyes were full of tears at that time． It was not my fault． Why did she treat me like that？Didn't mother love me？ After all． I'm also her birth child， My dear editor， what can I do？ Could you give me some suggestions？
Sincerely，
Xiaohua
要求：
（1）卷面整潔（無(wú)污跡），書(shū)寫(xiě)工整（有美感）．
（2）全文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于90詞．書(shū)信開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)．
（3）條理清楚，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)使用正確．
（4）內(nèi)容盡量就小華的煩惱給出好的建議，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名．
Dear Xiaohua，
I'm glad to receive your letter． I have ever had the same experience． I even had a fight with my parents．But now， I fully understand them． ________________________________________________________________
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I hope these help!
Tony
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Dear Xiaohua，
I'm glad to receive your letter． I have ever had the same experience． I even had a fight with my parents．But now， I fully understand them．（開(kāi)篇表明自己也碰到過(guò)）
First，As parents，their dream is that one day you can get good grades．So they put emphasis on homework every day．Why not talk with your parents？【高分句型一】 you can tell them that you finished your homework if you really did it．Or you can help them do some housework after school．Second，F(xiàn)or your little brother，He is just a baby．He is glad to see you after your coming back from school．So he wants to play with you．Why don't you play with him for a few minutes．And you also can tell him that you have something important to do．Maybe he will get your point．At last，Believe your parents．They all love you forever．All you need to do is communication．Then you will get on well with your parents and brother【高分句型一】．（針對(duì)對(duì)方的信提出三點(diǎn)建議）
I hope these help!（結(jié)尾給出期望）
Tony
（十一）【2019 ?四川省遂寧市】
在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，青少年面臨越來(lái)越多的煩惱，主要體現(xiàn)在精神壓力太大．請(qǐng)以此為話題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1． 導(dǎo)致青少年精神壓力大的主要原因：
（1）學(xué)業(yè) （2）與他人相處
2．減少壓力的措施：
（1）積極參加課外活動(dòng) （2）多與他人交流溝通
3．簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀銓?duì)壓力利弊的看法．（至少一點(diǎn)）
注意：1．文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．文章必須包含所給要點(diǎn)提示，要求語(yǔ)句通順，行文連貫．
3． 不可逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)有獨(dú)自的見(jiàn)解并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
4．文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名．
We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up．_____________________________________
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We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up．The main reason for pressure is schoolwork and getting along with others．Students have been competing with each other since they were very young， which brings them too much pressure． 【高分句型一】Some students don't know how to get along well with others． They feel loney． This can also bring them pressure and worries．（導(dǎo)致青少年精神壓力大的主要原因）I'll give you some ways to relieve pressure．
First of all，you need to take part in all kinds of class activities， such as sports meetings， football games and singing competitions．【高分句型二】In addition， you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas． Try to communicate with your classmates as often as possible．（減少壓力的措施）
In my opinion，pressure is not a bad thing．Proper pressure is beneficial to our growth and development．If a person doesn't have pressure， he will become lazy easily．We should learn to face pressure in our life．（對(duì)壓力利弊的看法）