www.ks5u.com1講 添加合理的細(xì)節(jié)根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)的提示完成下列句子。 1However, it seems that people are not aware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication between people. For example, more and more people are not paying attention to face-to-face communication(比如,很多人越來(lái)越不重視面對(duì)面的交流)2At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class and I was full of great pride and confidence(我充滿了自豪和自信)3I suggest that the teacher select proper English films for us, thus making English learning more interesting(這樣就使得我們的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)更加有趣)4If possible(如果可能的話), I'll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about today's society(以便我能更多地了解當(dāng)今社會(huì))5I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. To my joy, they made rapid progress and their parents thought highly of me(令我高興的是他們進(jìn)步很快而且他們的父母對(duì)我評(píng)價(jià)很高)6Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributions to the protection of the environment(盡力為環(huán)境保護(hù)做出更多貢獻(xiàn))在高考試題的書(shū)面表達(dá)的注意中明確要求:可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)的方法具體如下:1列舉具體的實(shí)例進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明我要花一些時(shí)間和父母在一起。I'll spend some time staying with my parents.I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them besides doing some housework.我看到了一些不良行為。I found some bad behaviour.I found some bad behaviour. Some people scribbled on the wall; some played on the lawn and some threw rubbish everywhere.我是一個(gè)充滿活力的健康男孩,我非常喜歡體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much.I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much. Whenever I have time, I'll go hiking with my classmates.2增添相關(guān)的神態(tài)、動(dòng)作、心理描寫(xiě)以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容過(guò)去我有時(shí)去村西的小河里游泳。I went swimming in the river to the west of the village now and then.Weather permitting, I went swimming in the river to the west of the village now and then, in which the water was very clear. 旅行了一周后,他回到了家。After a week's trip, he returned home.After a week's trip, he returned home, tired but happy.3增添相關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容我需要好好休息,我要做些閱讀。I need a good rest. I'll do some reading.I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. I'll do some reading for fun, as well as for knowledge.慈善拍賣會(huì)募集的錢將送給急需的人。The money collected at the charity sale will be sent to those in great need. The money collected at the charity sale will be sent to those in great need. This will not only help them out of difficulties, but also give them warmth and happiness.演講時(shí)要面帶微笑。要講慢些,講清楚。You should wear a smile when you make a speech. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly.You should wear a smile when you make a speech, which will make you relaxed. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good impression on the audience and judges.4結(jié)尾適當(dāng)發(fā)揮寫(xiě)出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)、愿望、倡議等Although I was very tired during this summer holidays, I felt very happy for what I did.(個(gè)人感受)盡管我這個(gè)暑假很累,但是我為我做的感到高興。I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(評(píng)價(jià))我認(rèn)為這樣的活動(dòng)很有必要也很有意義。I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. (愿望)我衷心希望我的建議能夠?qū)δ阌兴鶐椭?/span>,你能夠享受你在新學(xué)校的生活。As students, it's our duty to protect our school environment.(倡議)作為學(xué)生,保護(hù)我們的校園環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)。根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示,給短文增添合理恰當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)。Dear PeterIn your letter you asked how to win the favor of Chinese universities. I think there are three main aspects to be considered.Firstly, mastering Chinese is a basic need to live in China. 1With this ability, you can communicate with native speakers easily and have access to many resources(了這種能力,你與當(dāng)?shù)厝私涣骶蜁?huì)很容易,而且還可以獲得很多資源). Besides, it is important to adapt to the new environment quickly. 2The sooner you get used to it, the more beneficial it will become to you(你熟悉新環(huán)境越早,好處就越多). Finally, personal interests and hobbies are also highly valued. 3You are supposed to choose a major that you like(你應(yīng)該選擇一個(gè)你喜歡的專業(yè)). With all the strengths I mentioned above, 4I believe you can overcome all the difficulties and make great progress in China(我相信在中國(guó)你能夠克服所有困難,取得大的進(jìn)步)Best wishes.Yours, Li Hua 

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