08直擊2022高考熱點(diǎn)作文--環(huán)保、節(jié)約篇讓水更清,讓天更藍(lán),讓花更艷,讓我們的地球更美麗……【預(yù)測題目】(一)假定你是李華,為加強(qiáng)學(xué)生們的環(huán)保意識,你校打算開展以“抵制地球變暖,從我做起”為主題的環(huán)?;顒?,請你以學(xué)生會的名義,寫一封英語倡議書,張貼在學(xué)校的信息欄。主要內(nèi)容:1. 活動的宗旨;2. 活動的主要內(nèi)容;3. 呼吁大家積極參加。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右(格式已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Dear fellow students,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear fellow students,Since global warming has become a serious issue, I’m writing to appeal to you to make joint efforts to protect the environment.As we all know, it is human activity that has caused global warming, which has many negative effects on us humans. This is why we should do something to reduce greenhouse gas emissions. As students, we can walk, ride a bike or take a bus to school instead of taking a car. Besides, we should save water and electricity, dispose of waste properly and learn to recycle and reuse items. What’s more, tell the people around you to join us in protecting the environment.Let’s work together and take action now.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以學(xué)生會的名義寫一封英語倡議書,呼吁大家積極參加“抵制地球變暖,從我做起”為主題的環(huán)?;顒?。【詳解】1.詞匯積累因?yàn)椋?/span>since → because導(dǎo)致:cause → lead to此外:besides → in addition/moreover保護(hù):protect → preserve2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句:What’s more, tell the people around you to join us in protecting the environment.拓展句:What’s more, tell the people around you to join us so that we can protect the environment together.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] Since global warming has become a serious issue, I’m writing to appeal to you to make joint efforts to protect the environment. (運(yùn)用了since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)[高分句型2] As we all know, it is human activity that has caused global warming, which has many negative effects on us humans. (運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)(二)假定你是某重點(diǎn)高中學(xué)生會主席李津,你市正在迎接創(chuàng)建全國文明城市檢查,請你以學(xué)生會名義寫一篇倡議書,倡議大家積極為創(chuàng)建文明城市做準(zhǔn)備,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:1. 愛護(hù)公共環(huán)境,保持校內(nèi)外衛(wèi)生清潔。2. 遵守交通規(guī)則,文明騎車。3. 提倡志愿服務(wù)精神,奉獻(xiàn)他人。4. 其他............注意:1詞數(shù)120左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;全國文明城市 a National civilized city 志愿服務(wù)精神 volunteerismDear fellow students:It is known to all that our city is trying to build a national civilized city to create a better living environment for us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear fellow students:It is known to all that our city is trying to build a national civilized city to create a better living environment for us. I am writing to call on all of you to make joint efforts towards this goal.As students, we can do many things to help. First of all, it's important to care for the public environment and keep our school clean. For example, we mustn't drop litter or make loud noise. Second, we are supposed to always obey the traffic rules. Third, it would be helpful to have the volunteerism and volunteer in our spare time encouraging other citizens to behave properly. More importantly, improving ourselves is a good way to make us more civilized.Dear fellow students, let's work together to make our city a better place!Yours,Li Jin【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生以學(xué)生會名義寫一篇倡議書,倡議大家積極為創(chuàng)建文明城市做準(zhǔn)備,以迎接創(chuàng)建全國文明城市檢查。【詳解】詞匯積累建立:build→set up號召:call on→appeal to垃圾:litter→garbage恰當(dāng)?shù)兀?/span>properly →appropriately2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句:As students, we can do many things to help.拓展句:As students, we can do many things to help, which can make a great difference.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] It is known to all that our city is trying to build a national civilized city to create a better living environment for us. (運(yùn)用了it作形式主語)[高分句型2] More importantly, improving ourselves is a good way to make us more civilized. (運(yùn)用了動名詞作主語)(三).假定你是李華,你校最近發(fā)起了針對全球污染問題的宣傳活動。請你在校報(bào)的英語專欄寫一封公開信,給同學(xué)們提出建議,內(nèi)容包括:1.海洋里的垃圾越來越多;2.空氣污染嚴(yán)重;;3.解決方法及建議。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear friends,As we can see, there will be more and more rubbish in the ocean. Besides, air pollution is still serious.In my view, we should take action to reduce pollution. Firstly, laws must be made to forbid people from throwing rub-bish at will, which may help the ocean become clean soon. What's more, we should plant more trees to get more fresh air. Last but not least, we should increase the awareness of protecting the environment. Only by doing so can pollution problems be paid enough attention to.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生寫一封公開信,針對全球污染問題給同學(xué)們提出建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累嚴(yán)重的:serious→severe禁止:forbid→ban隨意地:at will=at liberty保護(hù):protect→preserve2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句:As we can see, there will be more and more rubbish in the ocean. Besides, air pollution is still serious.拓展句:As we can see, there will be more and more rubbish in the ocean, with air pollution still serious.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, laws must be made to forbid people from throwing rubbish at will, which may help the ocean become clean soon. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2] Only by doing so can pollution problems be paid enough attention to. (運(yùn)用了部分倒裝)(四)假定你是李華,請代表學(xué)生會寫一封電子郵件,邀請英國交換生 Jim 來參加本周四晚關(guān)于如何開展校園垃圾分類(garbage classification)的會議,并分享英國垃圾分類的做法。內(nèi)容包括:1.會議時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);2.會議主題;3.期待對方參加。注意:詞數(shù)80左右;可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Jim,On behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m writing to invite you to our meeting on how to carry out garbage classification at school.The meeting will be held at 6:30 p.m., this Thursday evening, in the school meeting room. We will focus on how to get every student involved in garbage classification. We hope you can share some of the practices of garbage classification back in the UK and shed some light on how to do it on an individual level.We would appreciate it if you could join us.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給交換生Jim寫封郵件,邀請他參加本周四晚關(guān)于如何開展校園垃圾分類的會議,并分享英國垃圾分類的做法。【詳解】第一步:審題體裁:應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu):總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說,把支持句作為分說,并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求:1. 說清楚.會議時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);2. 介紹會議主題;3. 期待對方參加。第二步:列提綱 (重點(diǎn)詞組)on behalf of,writing to invite,carry out ,garbage classification,be held ,focus on,share some of the practices,looking forward to…第三步:連詞成句1. On behalf of the Students’ Union, I’m writing to invite you to our meeting on how to carry out garbage classification at school.2. The meeting will be held at 6:30 p.m., this Thursday evening, in the school meeting room.3. We will focus on how to get every student involved in garbage classification.4. We hope you can share some of the practices of garbage classification back in the UK and shed some light on how to do it on an individual level.5. We would appreciate it if you could join us. /Looking forward to your reply.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last (供參考)2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition (供參考)3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系:However (供參考)4.表因果關(guān)系:Because, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供參考)連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] We hope you can share some of the practices of garbage classification back in the UK and shed some light on how to do it on an individual level.(省略了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2] We would appreciate it if you could join us.( 條件狀語從句的運(yùn)用)(五)假定你是李華,David是你的美國筆友。他對中國鼓勵使用環(huán)保購物袋很感興趣,來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信。主要內(nèi)容如下:◇感謝他的關(guān)注。◇簡要介紹相關(guān)情況。◇談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/span>注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。【答案】Dear David,I'm glad that you've noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use environmentally-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to take to make our country an even cleaner place.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生給對中國鼓勵使用環(huán)保購物袋很感興趣的美國筆友David封回信,向他介紹中國使用環(huán)保購物袋的情況。【詳解】第一步:審題體裁:應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),少量現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu):總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說,把支持句作為分說,并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求:1. 感謝他的關(guān)注;2. 簡要介紹相關(guān)情況;3. 談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/span>第二步:列提綱 (重點(diǎn)詞組)encourage sb. to do sth.; environmentally-friendly shopping bags; be made of; a variety of; take steps; make sth. adj.第三步:連詞成句1. As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags.2. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish.3. This is one of the many steps we are to take to make our country an even cleaner place.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)1.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系:Besides2.表因果關(guān)系:As連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. 用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句。[高分句型2] I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. 用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。(六)假定你是李華,你和同學(xué)們參加了班級在植樹節(jié)(3月12日)組織的植樹活動,請根據(jù)以下提示給你的新西蘭筆友Tom 寫一封信,告訴他你的經(jīng)歷,并希望所有人都能為保護(hù)環(huán)境做貢獻(xiàn)。寫作要點(diǎn):1. 活動的相關(guān)信息2. 集合時(shí)間和地點(diǎn):上午9點(diǎn),學(xué)校門口3. 植樹地點(diǎn):在南溪河附近4. 活動內(nèi)容:植樹150棵(2)你的感受和今后(在環(huán)保方面)打算。 注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Tom,Our class held a tree planting activity which aimed to get close tonature and beautify the environment on March 12. We gathered at the school gate at 9 in the morning, then took a bus to the Nanxi River nearby, which is 5 kilometers away from our school. On arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. Finally we planted 150 trees.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it's our duty to protect our environment. We will contribute more to environmental protection.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生給新西蘭筆友Tom 寫一封信,介紹你和同學(xué)們參加的班級在植樹節(jié)(3月12日)組織的植樹活動。【詳解】詞匯積累乘公共汽車:take a bus →by bus開始:begin → start立即:immediately → at once最終:finally →eventually/at last/in the end2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句:On arrival, we began to work immediately.拓展句:As soon as we arrived, we began to work immediately.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Our class held a tree planting activity which aimed to get close tonature and beautify the environment on March 12.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)[高分句型2] Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. (運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)(七)近年來全球極端氣候和重大自然災(zāi)害越來越頻繁,其中很大一部分原因是由于人類活動所造成的。China Daily舉行征文活動,警示人們要保護(hù)環(huán)境。請你寫一篇短文,參加征文活動。注意:1. 要列舉極端氣候或自然災(zāi)害及其造成的影響;2. 分析原因;3. 呼吁人們關(guān)愛地球,保護(hù)環(huán)境。詞數(shù):100—120個(gè)左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Over the past years, there have been frequent extreme weather and natural disasters, such as floods, droughts, snowstorms, earthquakes and so on. These have killed millions of people and destroyed countless homes.Improper human activities contribute a lot to those disasters. We have cut down too many trees, badly polluted the environment, and wasted plenty of resources. What we do is threatening human survival and development.So it is high time that we protected our environment. We should plant more trees, reduce the use of vehicles, and save resources like water and electricity. Everyone can make a difference to the environment. Only if we stop damaging the earth and do our best to protect it can we make world a pleasant place to live in.【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生寫一篇短文,參加警示人們要保護(hù)環(huán)境的征文活動。【詳解】1.詞匯積累活動:movement→activity破壞:damage→destroy頻繁的:continual→frequent導(dǎo)致:lead to=contribute to2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句:Over the past years, there have been frequent extreme weather and natural disasters, such as floods, droughts, snowstorms, earthquakes and so on. These have killed millions of people and destroyed countless homes.拓展句:Over the past years, there have been frequent extreme weather and natural disasters, such as floods, droughts, snowstorms, earthquakes and so on, which have killed millions of people and destroyed countless homes.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1] What we do is threatening human survival and development. (運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)主語從句)[高分句型2] So it is high time that we protected our environment. (運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣)(八)你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請你以“Reduce Your Carbon Footprint”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽,內(nèi)容包括:1. 具體做法;2. 提出倡議。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Reduce Your Carbon FootprintWith the development of science and technology, our life is becoming more and more convenient and comfortable.But at the same time,our actions have appeared great harmful to the earth. So we must take measures to change it. For example, reduce our carbon footprint.First, we should control the release of greenhouse gases. We can cycle or walk to work, if possible. And it is also good to take a bus or train, instead of driving. Besides, when we are out, swithing off all the electric machines can not only save electricity but also our money. What’s the most important is that we should recycle whatever can be, such as paper used double faces, cloth bags in shopping,and garbage sorting.As long as we do all that we can to reduce our carbon footprint, greenhouse gases will be given out less and our earth will also be better to live on. So, everybody, start from ourselves!【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生寫一篇發(fā)言稿,號召大家減少碳排放。【詳解】1.詞匯積累隨著……的發(fā)展:with the development of…/as…develop(s)對……有害:be harmful to/do harm to采取措施:take measures/take steps/take action坐公交車或者火車:take a bus or train/travel by bus or train盡力:do all that we can/ do whatever we can2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句簡單句:With the development of science and technology, our life is becoming more and more convenient and comfortable.拓展句:As science and technology develops, our life is becoming more and more convenient and comfortable.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】We can cycle or walk to work,if possible.(由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的省略)【高分句型2】Besides, when we are out,swithing off all the electric machines can not only save electricity but also our money.(由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)【高分句型3】What’s the most important is that we should recycle whatever can be,such as paper used double faces, cloth bags in shopping,and garbage sorting.(由what引導(dǎo)的主語從句、that引導(dǎo)的表語從句和whatever引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)【高分句型4】As long as we do all that we can to reduce our carbon footprint, greenhouse gases will be given out less and our earth will also be better to live on.(由as long as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)